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1LectureofCET-4/6Writing2LectureArrangement大学英语六级作文评分原则及标准英语写作困境与对策六级写作中如何选词六级写作中如何造句六级作文常用句型六级写作如何组段历年作文题型分析写作小结3二、大学英语六级作文评分原则及标准首先,卷面一定要清晰、干净、整洁。不要乱涂乱画,若有删节,在文字的中间画道横线第二,段落按要求写,要求写几段就写几段。一般情况下,中间一段长,开首段和结尾段较短,让人第一感觉就是内容充实。第三,开好头,结好尾。第四,按要求的字数写,可以比要求的字数稍微多一点。字数少了给人的感觉是缺乏内容,字数太多了,文章显得繁琐,阅卷老师心理会烦,你的分数会受影响。4具体评分标准:2分――条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,但多数为严重错误。5分――基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分--基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。11分――切题。表达思想清楚、文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。14分――切题。表达思想清楚、文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错误。②只写一段者:0~4分;只写两段者:0~9分(按规定写三段的作文)5三、英语写作困境与对策一、滔滔不绝“意识流”有一部分考生在考试时一见到作文题,便感到很对自己的胃口,觉得有很多内容要写。于是乎千言万语涌上心头,写着前一句想着后一句。往往前句尚未写完便接上了后一句,辛辛苦苦写了一大堆(甚至有写11个自然段的)犹觉余意未尽。结果令判卷的老师头疼不己,无法继续往下看。意识流创作有两种表现:①自由分段
②语言杂乱7我们不妨把作文的要求量化到每一个段落:一篇150词左右的作文一般不会超过15句话,把这15句话根据题目要求分配到各段中去,每一段大约只说那么几句话,绝不多说。事实上往往是说得越多,错误越多。因此,跟着提纲走,每一段不要写得太多,点到为止,见好就收,这才是最稳妥的对策。对策:8二、真情流露没必要考试时,监考老师通常发现有的考生坐在那里根本就是在玩深沉,他在那里思考人生的伟大哲理;他在那里要想出一个观点,想出一个理由,想出一个措施,非要显得与众不同。陷入这种境地的考生,显然犯了一个根本性的错误。参考时间为40分钟的作文,一般应该在35分钟之内完成,再用几分钟的时间检查语言错误。不管原因也好,措施也好,某一考生想到的任何一点,很可能命题人早已料到,而且肯定会被成千上万的考生重复无数遍。因而曾经令自己激动一时的想法,在判卷的老师看来全无感觉。规定式作文的拓展空间本来就非常有限,所以“真情流露”是没有必要的。9对策:写作的三个角度:语言第一位;结构第二位;内容第三位要求:结构简单,语言卓越,内容只要相关即可10三、用词贫乏,句式单一
许多考生的作文错误倒不多,相当符合语法要求,但用词贫乏,过多使用如moreandmore,Ithink,asyouknow等表达,并且句子结构过于简单。统计结果表明,差的作文中简单句多,而好的作文简单句少;差的作文从句、连词、分词结构出现的频率大大低于好的作文;差的作文中关键词和同义表达出现的频率低于好的作文。用词的丰富和句式的多样应该主要通过多看好文章,仔细琢磨好文章中的用词和句子来提高。换句话说,也就是要从阅读中学习写作。11对策:少用垃圾词汇垃圾词汇1:help典型例句:I'llhelpyou.替代语accomodateE.g:I"llendeavourtoaccomodateyou.垃圾词汇2:helpful典型例句:Sthishelpful(tosb)替代语conducive有助于E.gSthisconducivetosb垃圾词汇3:show典型例句:asitshowsinthepicture替代语betray12垃圾词汇4:think典型例句:ithink--------替代语deem,harbortheideathat垃圾词汇5:because典型例句:xxxbecausexxx替代语inthat/inasmuchas垃圾词汇6:about典型例句:itisabout250timesofthat替代语itisapproximately---垃圾词汇7:if替代语provided,supposing13六级写作中如何选词14ComparetheFollowingSentencesWeshould
use
different
waystogettoknowthesociety.Weoughtto
makeuseof
various
methodstogettoknowthesociety.Wearesupposedto
takeadvantageof
diverse
meanstogettoknowthesociety.15选词的基本原则尽量用六级范围内的积极的,活跃的,常用的词或词组。尽量用表达最贴切,最生动,最有力的词或短语。尽量用最符合所写话题,所用文体的词或表达。16六级考生在措词方面存在的问题:1、可供“调遣”的词汇量贫乏,用词大部分局限于中学词汇。比如,我们一提到“重要的”,大多数同学首先会想到“important”这个单词,那么提升一下的话就可以想到它的如下同义词:significant,vital,crucial,critical,etc172、表达相近意义时,常重复用一个词,用词单调。Eg.Big
=great,large,huge,vast,titanic,enormousetc.18策略
1、调动大学期间学过的更生动,更丰富的词汇表达意思。Eg.引起、导致Cause,leadto,resultin,bringabout,giverise/birthto192、用具体,生动,有针对性的词语。Eg.利用Use,makeuseof,make(good,effective,wide,wise,full)useofsth,take(full)advantageof203、文中如需要多次表达同一词义时,以同义词,近义词等避免重复使用同一词。Eg.适应…Adaptto,adjustto,make…fit,getusedto,beaccustomedto21实例赏析22ComputerandIIneverforgettheveryexcitingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichinterestedmesothatIindulgedmyselfinsearchingalotofusefulinformationIhadexpected,andenjoyedalotofpleasingclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.23ComputerandIIneverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatIindulgedmyselfingoogling
anarmyofusefulinformationIhadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.
24exceedingly替换verythrilling替换excitingsth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.google替换searchanarmyof替换alotof
25
Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.
Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.
26Forastart替换TobeginwithWecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动Additionally替换Inaddition/BesidesDeliver替换send
27
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,***,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.
28Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型,还有however作为插入语,functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmtoEmerging代替appearing(fading代替disappearing)Netcitizen网民,属于精彩用词
29
Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceof
unfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.
30Nogardenhasnoweeds替换EverycoinhastwosidesComputersdoplay,do强调Positive替换important/good等Asliceof替换apartofUnfavorable替换badImpacts替换effects/influencesWeshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象,merits/virtues)替换advantage(defects替换disadvantage)Facet替换aspect3129个最经典的替换词321.individuals,characters,folks代替(people,persons)2.positive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding代替good3.dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害的)代替bad如果bad做表语,可以有belessimpressive代替eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.334.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,many,ifnotmost)代替many.注:用many,ifnotmost一定要小心,many后一定要有词。Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,代替most.5:asliceof,quietafew,several代替some
346:harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替think(因为是书面语,所以要加that)7:affair,business,matter代替thing8:shared代common9.reaphugefruits代替getmuchbenefit10:formypart,frommyownperspective代替inmyopinion3511:Increasingly),growing代替moreandmore。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly(注意没有growingly这种形式.Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.12.littleifanything,或littleornothing代替hardly13..benefitialrewarding代替helpful14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer15.exceedingly,extremely代替very3616.hardlyunnecessary,hardlyinevitable...代替necessary,inevitable17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb代替sbtakeinterestin18.captureone‘sattention代替attractone'sattention.19.facet,dimension,sphere代aspect20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear3721.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger代替cause.22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth代替..reasonsforsth23.desire代替want.24.pourattentioninto代替payattentionto25.bearinmindthat代替remember3826.enjoy,possess代替have(注意process是过程的意思)27.interaction代替communication28.frownonsth代替beagainst,disagreewithsth29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample代替forexample
39六级写作中如何造句
40善用词组
如果我们能够在单词的基础上,进一步想到与之同义的词组,那么文章就会显得与众不同,更具有英语的味道。比如上面所说的“重要的”这个单词,当我们想到important的时候,如果从语法角度再稍加考虑一下,我们会想到“beofimportance”。因为,语法中规定:形容词等于of加这个形容词的名词形式。如果再提升一步,我们还学过一个常用的词组叫做“playanimportantrolein---”。41句型多样简单句,并列句和复合句交替使用,灵活使用各种句子结构如:插入语,倒装句,强调句,非谓语动词,疑问句等。若要写好作文,要写好句子,首先要掌握句子结构和句式变化及句子类型,可通过对泛读课文经典句子的背诵提高应用语言基本句型的能力。要善于模仿。Imitationisagoodwaytolearn.42适当用代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.
被动句Overthepastcoupleofyears,severalcasesofthefoodscandalhavebeendisclosedonvariousmedia.
Promptandstrictmeasuresshouldbetakentoturnbackthiseviltrend.
Indeed,oneoutoffivestudentsisestimatedtobeinpossessionofatleastonecreditcard,andthefigureisexpectedtobeonthesteadyincrese,
44插入语一种是有两个逗号之间引起的成分称之为插入语第二种是有两个半破折号引起的成分称之为插入语。Jinan,theSpringCity,isafamoustouristcity.Otherpeoplemaygiveusinstrumentalsupport—financialaid,materialresources,andneededservices—thatreducesstressbyhelpingusresolveandcopewithourproblems.45比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语后、动词或者助动词前,两边分别加上逗号。如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词前,两边分别加上逗号。比如说:Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…
46倒装倒装是我们写作中需要用到的。虽然略显俗套,但是却是很能满足阅卷人的主观感受的。常用的倒装形式有以下几种:47Only+时间状语Ex:Onlywhenallofusjoinintheeffortsofeliminatingcheatingatalllevelscanweexpecttohaveacleanersocietyandamorebeautifulfuture.Only+介词词组Ex:Onlybyplanninghistimecarefullycanheimproveefficiencyandmakeachievements48否定词位于句首(hardlywhen;never;notonly---,butalso---;seldom,scarcely,rarely)在我一生当中很难遇到这样的人Ex:SeldominmylifehaveImetsuchakind-heartedman.地点方位名词位于句首
Ex:Innootherplaceintheworldcanonefindsuchenthusiasmforapplyingforhostingthe2008OlympicGames.49修辞
无论是汉语写作还是英语写作,修辞其实非常的重要。它是作者写作功底具体事例地展现。所谓修辞包括比喻、拟人、排比等等。这里仅举一个比喻例子,还是拿“重要的”来举例。当你用完词组之后,如果你用上下面比喻句子,则文章就会显得神采飞扬,试比较:50Thebicycleisimportantforus.Thebicycleisofimportanceforus.Thebicycleplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Thebicycle,environmentalfriendlyvehicle,playsanimportantroleinourlife.Thebicycleisliketheair,water,andsunshineandcannotbepartedwithamomentinourlife.51六级作文常用句型
52没有比…更…的Nothingis+more+形容词+thanto+V例句:没有比接受教育更重要的事。Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.53再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。~~~cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~~~toomuch.例句:我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.54不可否认的...Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...例句:不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.
55全世界都知道...Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~例句:全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.
56毫无疑问的...Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~例句:毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.
57...的原因是...Thereasonwhy+句子~~~isthat+句子例句:我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycansupplyfreshairforus.
58虽然...Adj+as+Subject(主词)+be,S+V~~~
例句:虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。Richasourcountryis,thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.
{bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一点也不}59愈...愈...The+~er+S+V,~~~the+~er+S+V~~~Moreandmore=anincreasingnumberof例句:你愈努力,你愈进步。Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake.
60我们绝对不能...Onnoaccountcanwe+V~~~
例句:我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.
61该是...的时候了Itistime+S+过去式例句:该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
Itistimetheauthoritiesconcernedtookproperstepstosolvethetrafficproblems.62没有人不...Thereisnoonebut~~~例句:没有人不渴望上大学。Thereisnoonebutlongstogotocollege.63不得不...be+forced/compelled/obliged+to+V例句:既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。Sincetheexaminationisaroundthecorner,Iamcompelledtogiveupdoingsports.
64可想而知的、明显的、显然的Itisconceivablethat+句子
Itisobviousthat+句子
Itisapparentthat+句子例句:可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。Itisconceivablethatknowledgeplaysanimportantroleinourlife.65过去...年来,...一直...Forthepast+时间,S+现在完成式...例句:过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。Forthepasttwoyears,Ihavebeenbusypreparingfortheexamination.
66...是值得的Itpaysto+V~~~例句:帮助别人是值得的。Itpaystohelpothers.
67不遗余力的Sparenoeffortto+V
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。Weshouldsparenoefforttobeautifyourenvironment.
68让...明白...事bringhometo+人+事例句:我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。Weshouldbringhometopeoplethevalueofworkinghard.
69与...息息相关becloselyrelatedto~~
例句:做运动与健康息息相关。Takingexerciseiscloselyrelatedtohealth.70养成...的习惯Getintothehabitof+Ving;makeitaruleto+V我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
Weshouldgetintothehabitofkeepinggoodhours.
71因为...Dueto/Owingto/Thanksto+N/Ving,~~~例句:因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。Thankstohisencouragement,Ifinallyrealizedmydream.
72令人不满意Leavemuchtobedesired
例句:我们的交通状况令人不满意。Theconditionofourtrafficleavesmuchtobedesired.73对...造成一大威胁Poseagreatthreatto~~例句:污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。Pollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistence.74尽全力去...doone‘sutmostto+V=doone‘sbest例句:我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。Weshoulddoourutmosttoachieveourgoalinlife.75六级写作如何组段76一篇完整的作文包括三部分:引言,正文和结论。又称:三段论。一个完整的段落包括三部分:主题句,推展句和结论句。因此,可以说,文章是段落的扩展,段落是文章的压缩。77第一段:[1.现象/现状说明段][2.图画/图表描述段]第二段:[3.对立观点陈诉段][4.利弊说明段]
[5.意义阐述段][6.原因列军段][7.举例段]第三段:[8.归纳结论段][9.趋势预测段][10建议措施段]10大功能段落—六级作文的三段式结构题型第一段第二段第三段现象解释型描述现象说明现象产生的原因表明个人观点态度或阐述个人做法对比选择型表明一方或双方观点表明一方的观点及理由,或指出双方观点的不足之处及理由表明个人的观点或阐述个人的做法问题解决型提出问题分析问题,给出解决方案表明个人的观点或阐述个人的做法应用文描述事实阐述事实表明观点或提出建议第一句话:现象宽泛的扣题第一句话通式状语引入主体时间、地点大家/越来越多的人sth.很怎样/越来越条件认为有一个现象1.状语:a时间+地点currently/previouslyinChina/inourhighlycivilizedandindustrializedsociety
b条件和伴随eg:随着社会的发展WiththedevelopmentofoursocietyWithoursocietydevelopingincreasinglyfaster2.引入:a大家都认为Itisgenerallyacknowledgedthat…b越来越多的人认为anincreasingnumberofpeoplemaintain/deem/reckonthat…有一个广泛的现象awide-spreadphenomenoninthecontemporarysocietyisthat…3.主体:a语法变难be+adj.=beof+n.isofgreat/increasingsignificance、necessity、popularity、help/use/valueb词变难用以下牛词进行修饰:adv.veryextremelyextraordinarilytremendouslysignificantlyadj.importantvitalessentialprevalentindispensable第二句话引入“由远及近”
1.描述身边事实可排比或细分至不同情况;2.过去对比现在(问题解决型文章专用)inthepast…however,now…;3.举个例;4.名人名言(可编造)myprofessoroncetoldusthat…asafamousproverbgoesthat…(3)第三句话中心简短、强调
1.关于这个问题,不同的人有不同的看法concerningthisquestion,people’sviewpointsdifferdramatically2.因此,如何解决这个问题成了大家关心的事therefore,howto…hasbecomeamatterofconcernformany3.为什么会有这个现象呢?大家都关心其原因whydoes/is…?Everyoneexpressesseriousconcernsforthereasons二段中心句(1)万能二段开头A.Thereareseveralpossiblesolutionsthatcanaddressthisdifficulty或reasonsthatcanbeaccountforthisphenomenon或factorsthatmaygiveriseto/contributetothisconsequenceB.The…acknowledgedbymostpeopleareasfollows(2)二段拓展法(虚实结合)eg:Tobeginwith,universitycanprovideuswithknowledgeA针对词的拓展:a主语名词->并列同功能主语aswellasother+主语的属性或类别eg:universityaswellassomeotheracademicinstitutions;parentsaswellassomeotherrelativesofus;airplaneaswellassomeotheradvancedtransportationsb谓语前加表示“极其、很”等程度深的adv.如considerably、dramatically等
c宾语前加双adj.如notonlyadj.butalsoadj.B插入句中的拓展:a主语后加同位语1.大家认为它是…eg:university,whichpeopleconsideras…2.属性+功能eg:university,theplaceforeducatethetalentedpeopleb实义动词前的万能插入语:toalargeextend(很大程度上);directlyorindirectly(直接或间接地);asamatteroffact(事实上)如:computers,toalargeextend,influenceourlifec宾语后用非限定性定语从句whichcan/may/willeg:knowledge,whichmayassistusinfindingasuitablejob.
结尾段:1.我的看法/总结2.双原因1)我的看法Ithink替换为inmypointofview;whenitcomestome;asfarasIamconcernedInconclusion替换为toconclude;towrapup2)双原因(要说出具体的、有说服力的原因)
1.notonly第一个原因butalso第二个原因;2….第一个原因,meanwhile,第二个原因,consequently,…3….thisislargelyduetothefactthat第一个原因…,butalsobecause第二个原因…87作文题型分析1999年:ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively
2000年:IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary?2001年:HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?2002年、StudentUseofComputers(图表作文)2003年、ItPaystoBeHonest2004年:ALetterinReplytoaFriend(书信)2005年、ACampaignSpeech(应用文)2006年:Anannouncementforavoluntaryprogram(应用文)2007年:WelcometoOurClub(应用文)2008年:TheProblemsofPlasticBags2009年:FreeAdmissionstoMuseums8905真题透析90ParentsandChildren
Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,anoldmaniscrouchingthere.Thefatherisinragswhilethefourchildrenwearexpensiveclothes.Allofhisfourchildrenregardhimasaballandwanttokickhimoff.Thefourchildrenareallgoodgoalkeepersandsuccessfullykeepthefatheroutsidetheirdoors.Thus,thefatherbecomeshomeless.91
Ascanbeobservedfromthepicture,inthecentreofafootballplaygroundiscrouchinganelderlyman,whoisdressed
inrags,while,instrikingcontrast,thefourchildrenwearexpensivenamebrand.Allofhisfourchildrenreckoningwithhimasaballandwanttokickhimoff.Thefourchildrenareallexcellentgoalkeepersandtriumphantlykeepthefatheroutsidetheirdoors.Thus,thefatherturnsouthomeless.
92论说文现象论说文正反观点论说文图表论说文93现象论说文94现象说明文
Nowadays,thenumberof[某种现象]in[某种场合]isontheincrease.Itisestimatedthat[相关数据].Whyhavetherebeensomany[某种现象]?Maybethereasonscanbelistedasfollows.Theforemostis[原因一].Besides,[原因二].What’smore,[原因三].Tosumup,themaincauseof[某种现象]isdueto[最主要原因].Itishightimethatsomethingweredoneuponit.Foronething,[解决办法一].Ontheotherhand,[解决办法二].Allthesemeasureswillcertainlyreducethenumberof[某种现象].
95正反观点论说文启始段
Recently,peopleinincreasingnumberstarttocastlightontheissuethat——.Whilemanypeople,ifnotthemost,takethepositiveviewtowardstheidea/phenomenon,otherpointsofviewcanalsobeheardfromallwalksoflife.Theyinsistthat….主体段
Astheproverbgoes,“Nogardenhasnoweeds”.Inthefirstplace,…Inthesecondplace,…Lastbutnottheleast,…解决段
Confrontingthesituation,itisimperativeforustotakeeffectivemeasuretotackleit.Ontheonehand,strictlawsshouldbemadetopunishthosewho__________.Onetheotherhand,thepublicshouldbeeducated(not)to_______.Onlyinthiswaycanwewitnesstheidealsceneinwhichallthepeoplecanenjoytheirlifetotheutmost.99图表作文的基本写作要求充分利用图表中的信息,把握文字和说明,找出图表所要表达的主题。仔细分析图表提供的信息加以比较和归纳,选出具有代表意义的信息。避免过多引用。通过对图表的分析,进行概括性的评论(变化趋势和造成原因)的说明,最后得出结论。100图表写作也属于说明文的类型,这种文章通常结构是:Paragraph1change(变化)Paragraph2reasonsorimplication(原因或意义)Paragraph3conclusion(effects;implication)(结论)101惯用表达和句型Fromthetable/graph,itisobvious/apparentthatthenumberofXXXXhasbeenonthedecline/increaseoverthepastfewyears.Thelastfewyearswitnessedadrastic/dramaticincrease/decreaseinthenumberofhoursthatcollegestudentsspendoncomputers.
102惯用词汇Table,diagram,graph,chartShow,demonstrate,indicateStatistics,rate,speed,ratio,percentage,figures,(statistical)dataIncrease,decrease,reduce,decline,godown,goup,riseBeontherise/increase,decrease/declineSharply,smoothly,drastically,dramatically,approximately103惯用表达和句型Afteracarefulanalysisofthedata,wecandrawthefollowingconclusion.Asaresultofcarefulobservationandanalysis,atentativeconclusionasfollowscanbereached.Therapidincreasegrowth/decline/changeofXXXXcanbeattributedtovariousfactors.104书信作文的格式1051称呼(salutation)
①正式称呼:
a.当写信的对象为某团体、组织、机构或不知对方姓名的时候,一般是这种写法:DearSiror(/)Madam,
b.当写信的对象为某领导、上司、老板或校长等上级的时候,一般是以下这种写法:
DearMr.***(***代表姓)
DearMs.***
DearMrs.***(针对已婚妇女)
②非正式称呼:
当写信的对象是朋友或熟人的时候,一般是这种写法:Dear***(***代表名字,即GivenName)1062主体(body)
要根据信件内容要求来进行细致划分——但都讲求开门见山、不绕弯子,大约写7-8句话即可。一般题目会要求写三个信息点,所以针对每个信息点可写两句话,最后写两句礼貌用语,即可完成整个信件写作。
1073落款(complimentaryclose)
根据写信的对象不同,也划分为两大类:
①正式称呼:
a.当写信的对象为某团体、组织、机构或不知对方姓名的时候,一般是这种写法:Yoursfaithfully,
b.当写信的对象为某领导、上司、老板或校长等上级的时候,一般是这种写法:Yourssincerely,
注意:在美国英语中习惯写为:Sincerelyyours,
但六级英语对此不做如此细致的区分,即写上述三种任一即可。
108②非正式称呼:当写信的对象是朋友或熟人的时候,一般是以下这种写法:
Kindregards,
Bestwishes,
当然还可以有更多的写法,如:Withbestwishes,或Allthebest,但常用的为以上两种。4签名(signature)
根据英语样题,一律要求写LiMing109书信作文
第一段只写两句:第一句:Iamwritingthislettertodayto…第二句:Mynameis…andIam…
第二段按照题目要求写:
第三段只写三句:第一句:Isincerelyhopeyoucantakemyletterseriously.第二句:Yourpromptresponsewillbehighlyappreciated.第三句:Thanksalotforyourtimeandconsideration.
110应用文万能模板111建议信
Dear
,
Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning
.Inthefirstplace,Iwouldliketosaythankyouforthehelpandeverythingelseyouhavebeenofferingtous.Meanwhile,Ialsowanttomakesomeadvicetobetter
.
Firstly,wehavefoundthat
.Secondly,wewantto
.Finally,wehopethat
.
Iamlookingforwardstoyourconsiderationaboutmyproposals.Thanksinadvanceforthat.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing112道歉信
Dear
,
Muchtomyregret/IamterriblysorrythatIamunableto
.ItismainlybecauseatthattimeIwillbefulloccupiedby
whichisquiteoutofmyexpectation,andthatconflictswithyour
.ThereforeIamforcedtoadjustmyscheduleandcannotmakemypresenceonyour
.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillenjoyagoodtime.Bytheway,canwehavedinnertogethersometimenextweek?Ihopetoseeyousoon.
IamreallysorryagainandItrustthatyouwillunderstand.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing113感谢信
Dear
,
Onbehalfof
,Iwouldliketoextendourmostsinceregratitudefor
.Weappreciategreatlyyouraidinnotonly
,butalso
.
Itissaidthatyour
thatwecouldenjoysuchawonderfultrip/arriveatsuchsplendidachievements,andwewillneverforgetyourpainstakinglaborandfullcooperation/warmhospitality.
Withthisletterwewouldalsoliketoformallyinviteyouto
,sothat
.WElookforwardstohostingyou
.
Withpersonalregards.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing114申请信
ToWhomItMayConcern,
Iwouldliketoapplyforthemaster’sprogramin
departmentofyouruniversity,anopportunitythatIhavedreamedsince
.
Tobrieflyintroducemyself,Iamaseniorstudentmajoringin
from
University.DuringmyundergraduatestudyIhavedemonstratedexcellentacademicability,whichisreflectedinmygradesandaccomplishment.Ihaveattachedtothislettermyresume,acompletetranscript,andthreerecommendationletters.
Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldkindlyconsidermyapplication.Ifyourequiremoreinformation,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeat
.
Lookingforwardstoyourreply.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing115投诉信ToWhomItMayConcern,
Iamwritingtocomplainaboutthepoorserviceofyour
Ireceivedwhen
.
Thereasonsformydissatisfactionlieuponthreepointsasfollows:1)
;2)
;3)
.Underthesecircumstances,Ifinditdifficultto
.
Iamsurethatyouareabletothoroughlyunderstandmydiscontent,whichyouareboundtoreplacewithasatisfactorysolution.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucould
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