2023年1月浙江高考英语读后续写试题讲解课件（原文解析+范文赏析）

2023年1月浙江首考读后续写真题解析人鸟情未了目录序号内容Step1阅读原题及梗概Step2语言风格与表达Step3续写情节预测Step4名师范文赏析占位符标题01Step1阅读原题、掌握故事梗概原文阅读Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.She

ceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?原文阅读AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(悬停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthe

window.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygood-bye.”占位符标题04

梗概

故事讲述了主人公“我”发现一个废弃房子里面有一只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了。“我”把蜂鸟救了出来。在“我”要离开时，这只蜂鸟停在了我的面前，似乎在和我告别。

主题：人与自然——讲述了人与动物之间的趣事，体现了人与自然和谐相处。

视角：第一人称两句段首句1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.占位符标题05故事线IwenttoafarmIfoundatrappedhummingbirdandsaveditItcamebacktomewanttosaygoodbyeIcamebacktothefarmThehummingbirdappearedclimaxrevesalresulotion占位符标题0Step2语言表达文章语言表达WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.蜂鸟表现出类似人类的情感：感谢野生鸟类盯着人类野生鸟类盯着人类，发出叫声文章语言表达Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygood-bye.”主人公对蜂鸟行为进行猜测话语：烹饪对蜂鸟的行为进行猜测占位符标题01Step3续写情节预测Para1：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain情节一：brokenwindowWhenpassingthefamiliardesertedmilkinghousewhereIlastmetmyhummingbird,Iinstantlynoticedthebrokenwindowhadbeenreplacedaspromised.Para1：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain情节二：thoughtaboutthehummingbirdIcouldnothelptofondlyrecallthelovelyhummingbirdthatcharmedeveryoneofuswithitsdeterminationtobidfarewell.Whatacuteandintelligentcreatureitwas!Para1：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain情节三：wanttoseethehummingbirdagain.Asamatteroffact,IsecretlymadeawishtoseeheronceagainsomehowandsomewhereinthisexpeditionthoughIknewdeepdowninmyheartitwasanextravagantidea.Thingswentasplannedandasusual,cheerfullybutnotsurprisingly.Para2：Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

主要预测：thehummingbirdexpressedhergratitude.Theamazinglittlebirdwithshockingmemoryuseditsuniquewaytoexpresshergratitudetoahumanfriend.Naturewassoadorableandmysteriousthatweallfeltawedandhumblewhenfacedwithit.占位符标题01Step4名师范文赏析段落一

Afewweekslater,Ivisitedthefarmagain.

Thesamedilapidatedhouse,thesamegiganticspiderweb,thesamegreenblackberrypath."Willthehummingbirdbethesame?Willthislovelyandhumanisticcreaturebetrappedinthewebagain?Notlikely,sincetheholeinthewindowhadbeenfixed."Thesequestionsandthoughtspoppedintomyheadlikestrandsofspiderthread.Withsmellofroastedfoodwaftingintheair,myfriendsandIchattedandlaughedmerrilyaroundthepicnictable.Itseemedthehummingbirdwastemporarilythrowntothebackofmymind.Soon,thesunbegantosetanditwastimeforhome.

段落二

Iwasabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

Itperchedonasmalltwigjustaninchbeforemeandstudiedmewiththesamesparklingandpleasanteyes.Inanecstasyofdelight,Iheldoutmyfingersforittorestandwecommunicatedwithourhalf-human,half-birdlanguage.Mytearyfr