高考英语作文复习 佳作诵读5 讲义

高考作文复习——佳作诵读5第一节应用文(满分15分)假设你是江阴市第一中学学生会主席李华。你从官网得知，青少年艺术节（YouthArtFestival）组委会正在招募今年英语戏剧比赛的承办学校。请你代表学校给组委会写一封邮件，申请承办该活动，内容包括：1.承办条件；2.初步计划。注意:1.词数80~100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【审题】1、本篇应用文是一封邮件(申请信)：要求考生代表学校给青少年艺术节(YouthArtFestival)组委会写一封邮件，申请承办今年的英语戏剧比赛。2、文章分三段。第一段：表明写信目的：代表学校申请承办英语戏剧比赛。第二段：承办条件和初步计划：本段首先介绍为什么有资格承办这项活动，列举出1-2个承办理由，例如：成功举办过相类似的活动、有相应的设施等。初步打算如何承办这项活动，例如：邀请专家评审、做好宣传策划等。第三段：衷心期盼组委会给予机会考虑我校申请。Possibleversion:Towhomitmayconcern,IamLiHua,presidentofthestudentunioninJiangyinNo.1HighSchool.Onbehalfofourschool,Iamwritingtoyoutoapplytobethehostschoolofthisyear’sEnglishDramaCompetition.Duetothefactthatinthepastthreeyears,ourschoolhassuccessfullyheldthreeEnglishdramacompetitions,eachofwhichiswellreceivedandappreciatedbyallteachersandstudents,I’mfirmlyconvincedthatourschooliswellqualifiedforhostingthisactivity.Asforourarrangement,notonlywillwemakethebestoftheEnglishcornertowarmupinadvanceandpublicizethisdramacompetition,butwearealsointendedtoinviteprofessionalteacherstojoinusandgiveusguidanceonEnglishskills.IdobelievetheEnglishdramacompetitionheldbyourschoolisboundtobringavisualfeasttothisyear’sYouthArtFestival.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua我是李华，江阴第一中学学生会主席。我代表我们学校写信给您，申请成为今年英语戏剧比赛的主办学校。由于在过去的三年里，我们学校成功举办了三场英语戏剧比赛，每一场比赛都受到了所有老师和学生的欢迎和赞赏，我坚信我们学校完全有资格举办这次活动。至于我们的安排，我们不仅会充分利用英语角提前热身，宣传这场戏剧比赛，而且我们还打算邀请专业教师加入我们，为我们提供英语技能指导。我相信我们学校举办的英语戏剧比赛一定会为今年的青年艺术节带来视觉盛宴。如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。期待您早日回复。第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Hereisasecretthateveryoneknows:Idon’tliketoaskforhelp.Ofcourse,mydisabilitymeansthatIneedassistancewhenIgetdressedandhavetobedriveneverywhere,butthatispreciselymypoint.Onenightafewyearsago,aftermycaregiverhelpedmetobed,Ienjoyedmyfavoritepartofmyroutine—playingwithmyservicedogMarshall.Whentherestoftheworldmademefeel“lacking”,Marshallmademefeellike“enough”.Asusual,hejumpedoffthebedafterafewminutes,butthepaininhiseyestoldmesomethingwaswrong.Afewdayslater,atriptothevetconfirmedmyworstfears.Dr.Tomsaid,“Imustperformanoperationtotreathim.”“Isheinpain?”Iheldmybreath.ThenIgottheanswer“Yes.”Ifeltheartbroken.Icouldn’tremembertalkingaboutthedetails.Ihadonehugequestion:“Howmuchwouldtheoperationcost?”“About$2,500.Itmightaswellhavebeenamillion.”Icouldn’taffordit.Eachday,Isearchedforwaystoraisemoneyforthisoperation.Abeautifulbiketrailwasclosetotheapartmentwherewelived.Onmostofthedaysofoureightyearstogether,MarshallandIusedit.Ilovedthetrees,thefreshairandbeingoutside.Overtheyears,manyoftheneighborsgotfamiliarwithus.EveryonelovedMarshall.Thenoneday,anideaoccurredtome.CouldIaskthesepeopletocontributetothecostofMarshall’soperation?IfIcouldpushmywheelchairacertainnumberoflaps(圈)andgetmoneyforeverylapthatIcompleted,mightIraiseenoughmoneyforMarshalltohavehisoperation?Ourregularroutewasamileandahalflong.Mygoalwastopushmywheelchairtenlaps,atotaloffifteenmiles.Next,feelingveryboldandalittlenervous,Isetadate.ThenImadepostersandpostedthemaroundmyapartmentandalloverthebiketrail.MyneighborswereconcernedforMarshall.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。【审题】1、本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了身患残疾的作者并不喜欢寻求帮助。然而当他的爱犬Marshall身患重病需要大笔钱做手术时，作者想到一个主意：推动轮椅15英里去筹钱。作者战胜身体的疼痛，刻苦训练，最终实现了自己的既定目标。在好心人的帮助下，成功筹到钱的故事。2、段落续写①由第一段首句内容“带着希望，我开始训练自己。”可知，第一段可描写作者战胜疼痛刻苦训练。艰难的开始~~信念的坚持~~最终成功。②由第二段首句内容“重要的一天终于来了，我在早上6:30出门。”可知，第二段可描写作者成功地推着轮椅，完成了15英里，为马歇尔的手术筹集了足够的资金。克服困难~~众人支持~~筹款成功~~爱的力量Withhope,Istartedtotrainmyself.Forthefirstfewdays,itwasevenharderthanIhadexpected.PushingmywheelchairtenlapswassuchaconsiderablechallengetomethatwhenIpracticedit,Ifeltgreatpaininmybackandshoulders,withmyheartpoundingrapidlyandhandstremblingterribly.EverytimeIwasonthevergeofgivingup,itwasmyloveforMarshallthatboostedmydetermination.Insteadofsurrenderingtomybody,Ifocusedonthevoiceinmyheart.“Marshallneedsyou.Onemorelap,andyouwillsucceed.”Afterweeksofpersistenttraining,Icouldfinishallfifteenmiles.ThebigdayfinallycameandIwentoutat6:30a.m.NervousasIwas,Icautiouslypushedmywheelchairforthefirstfewlaps,whichseemedtobelongandlonely.Afterwhatseemedtobeages,surprisingly,anincreasingnumberofneighborscametocheermeon,afeelingofwarmthemergingfromthebottomofmyheart.Witheverymile,morepeoplejoinedanddonationsfromtheneighborscontinued.Manyhourspassed,andIfinishedallfifteenmilesaswellassucceedinginraisingenoughmoneyforMarshall’soperation.Tearsofhappinesstrickleddownmycheeks.Icouldneverhavemadeitwithouttheselovelypeople’ssupport.Itistheirselflessnessandkindnessthatmademefeellike“enough”insteadof“lacking”andenabledmetosaveMarshall.怀着希望，我开始训练自己。在最初的几天里，这比我想象的还要难。推轮椅十圈对我来说是一个相当大的挑战，当我练习时，我感到背部和肩膀都很痛，我的心怦怦直跳，双手颤抖得厉害。每次我濒临放弃时，都是我对马歇尔的爱增强了我的决心。我没有屈服于自己的身体，而是专注于内心的声