高考英语作文如何使用高级词汇和高级句子(1)讲课教案

高考英语作文如何使用高级词汇和高级句子(1)Whichcompositionfeelsmoreattractive,why?×Knwo×knwo书写规范要点齐全段落合理字数要齐

影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面Whichsentencedoyouthinkattractstheteachers?堵车真是糟糕透了。(1)Everyday,tohaveatrafficjamisverybadforme.(2)Everyday,trafficjamisadisasterforme.活学活用

当堂练习(凭长相发工资)这条消息让王老师喜上眉梢，让李老师瞬间崩溃。

ThisnewsisablessingforMr.Wangwhileitisadisaster

forMr.Li.√长峡托孤月。Thelongstraitsarelyingunderthelonelymoon.Lyingunderthelonelymoonarethelongstraits.Whichsentencedoyouthinkattractstheteachers?√影响给分的因素之二：

文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B.句型结构运用灵活多变;PracticeFindsomesimilarwordsorphrasesofthefollowings

good2.think3.like

perfect

excellentoutstandingpleasantwonderfulfavorablemagnificent

inone'sopinion/viewholdtheviewthat…itiswidelysharedthat…love,enjoy,adore,fancy,befondof,becrazyabout常用到的句型结构

请判断句子类型e.g.What

akindboyheis!

How

disappointedhewas!

感叹句强调句e.g.It

wasthisyoungboythat

helpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyou

solvethisproblem.There

comesthepolicecar.

Hardly

hadtheygottothestation

when

theymettheyoungman.e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreet

withahandbaginherhand.倒装句省略句with短语eg.Inmyview,bookstoreshouldbeaplacewherewecan

findmuchusefulinformation.

eg.Let’scometothemainteaching

building,atthebackofwhichstands

theschoollibrary.定语从句e.g.That’swhat

Ishoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoever

needshelpatpresent.各种名词性从句

e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.

Themoment

wereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.

Solongas

weworkharderatourlessons,

we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.各种状语从句1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。Astrong/bigearthquakehappenedinTangshaninthe1980s.TherewasastrongearthquakeinTangshaninthe1980s.Aterribleearthquakehit/struckTangShaninthe1980s.改变句子结构与众不同改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化1.Hegotexcitedwhenheheardthenews.→___thenews,hegotexcited.（doing作状语）2.Thegirlwenthome,becauseshewashungryandthirsty.→_________________,thegirlwenthome.（adj作状语）3.Itwasearlyinthemorning.

Mr.Smithwasinhisgarden.

Hewaswateringflowers.→_______________

,Mr

Smithwaswatering___________.

（把三个简单融合成一句话）HearingHungryandthirstyEarlyinthemorninginthegarden使用强势句式，增强语句表现力1.Weweregladtoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.

→_____________weweretoseecropsandvegetables

growingwell!(感叹句）

2.Radiobroadcastsdidn’tbeginuntil1920.→Itwas__________________________________.（强调句）3.Heneverspeaksabouthisownfamily.→Never_________________________________.(倒装句）4.Aboystoodoutsidetheclassroom.→Outsidetheclassroom_____________________.（倒装句）5.Thoughheisachild,heknowsalot.→___________________________________.（倒装句）Howgladnotuntil1920thatradiobroadcastsbegandoeshespeakabouthisownfamilystoodaboy.Childthough/asheis,heknowsalot影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅

正确而巧妙地使用好连接词正确使用有关连接词

first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhilebut,however,onthecontrary,neverthelessbecause,since,as,for,thanksto,owingto,asaresultofwhat’smore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehand…ontheotherhand,if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat…forinstance,take…forexample,That’stosay,inotherwords,asfollowsinshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,时间先后：转折关系：因果关系：让步关系：递进关系：条件关系：表列举：表总结：though,although,evenif,eventhoughThedeadlineforourpaperistomorrow.Everyminute,therefore,shouldbemadefulluseof.(2)Thedeadlineforourpaperistomorrow.Therefore,everyminuteshouldbemadefulluseof.√Goodafternoon,everyone!

Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.

Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife…

Thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollows._______,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._______,theywanttowinothers’admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool.AsfarasIamconcerned

,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._____,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool.______,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!A.FirstlyB.Lastbutnot

leastC.What’smore

D.SecondlyABCD小结：

1.作文的卷面-----卷面整洁要点齐全2.作文的语言-----词汇丰富句型多变

3.作文的流畅-----结构流畅一气呵成Thankyou!Reading

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