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议论文题型分类大全搞定这一步，稳稳上6.5分！2023/1/5TwoQuestions=Report原因分析+解决方案原因分析+有何影响原因分析+随机(鬼才知道会问什么)造成的问题+解决方案---特别注意你有可能遇到其中任何一种组合TwoQuestions=Report注意区分这两个问题，经常导致TR低分Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatproblemsdoesitcause?分析原因的原则1.不能只局限在中国；2.客观的出发点(要有证据，别感慨)；3.如果有比较级，要通过年代对比找到原因(至关重要)；2023/1/5用来写原因的topicsentences1.Thefirstreasonfortheshortageofyoungerteachersisthatateachingjobpayspoorly.2.Thefirstreasonwhybicycleridingisnolongerpopularisthatpeopletodayhavemuchmorechoicesfortransportation.3.Inaddition,theincreaseintheamountofrubbishisalsoaresultofpeopleusingmoredisposableproducts.4.Itistruethatpoorhealthofthegeneralpopulationisassociatedwithpeople’sbadeatinghabits.2023/1/5report类型的核心段(原因+解决方案版本)1.直接改写原题，不需要背景引出(考察改写能力)+承上启下(可以只预告第一个问题/也可以两个都预告)2.第一个原因分析。(idea--support)3.Anothercauseisthat……,第二个原因分析。(idea--support)4.(因为…很严重/因为…做某事很重要)~~~~someasuresshouldbetakento…….解决方案1+(sothat)结果解决方案2+(Inthisway,)结果5.总结重复原因/解决方案2023/1/5范文-12023/1/5Task2：Fewerandfewerpeoplechoosetoridebicycleswhengoingoutside.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatcanbedonetoencouragepeopletocycle?

范文-12023/1/5Owningabicycleandusingitfrequentlyseemstobemuchlesspopulartoday.Ibelievethatthegrowthinthesizeofcitiesandtheadvancedmoderntransportsystemarethemainreasonsforthis.Thegovernmentshouldtakestepstochangethissituation.

Thefirstreasonwhyridingbicyclesisnolongerpopularisthatcitieshavebeengrowingbigger.Thismeansthatthedistancebetweenhomeanddestinationshasemuchfarther.Ifpeoplekeepthehabitofcycling,thentheywillfinditreallytime-consumingandenergy-consuming.Whentheyfinallygettotheschooloroffice,theywillprobablyfeelexhaustedandcanhardlyconcentrateontheirworkorstudy.

范文-12023/1/5Anothercauseisthatagreatervarietyofmeansoftransportareavailabletodailycommuterstoday.Inthepast,ridingabicyclewasthemainchoiceformanypeopletogotoworkorforfun.Today,however,peoplelivingincitiesandtownscanhaveawiderrangeofchoices,includingmorebuslines,taxiesandeventheUberservice.Anyoftheseismoreefficientandcomfortablethancyclingandthereforethistraditionalwayoftransporthasbeenlosingpopularity.

Itisundeniablethatridingabikeisbeneficialforboththeindividualandsociety,someasuresshouldbetakentoenticeandencouragepeopletobemoreactiveinthischoice.Firstly,thegovernmentcouldbuildspeciallanesforcyclists,sothattheycanridesafelyandquickly.Inaddition,monetaryrewardsshouldbeprovidedtopeoplewhoridetheirbicyclesmoreoften.Inthisway,morepeoplewouldhavetheincentivetousethisold-fashionedwaytocommute.

范文-12023/1/5Inconclusion,thedevelopmentofmoderncitieshasledtoadecreasingnumberofpeopletravelingbybicycle.Ibelievethatmeasuresmentionedabovecouldeffectivelyreversethissituation.

范文2分析Alotofyoungpeopledonotknowhowtomanagetheirmoneywhengraduatingfromhighschool.Whatdoyouthinkarethereasons?Whatcanbedonetoteachthemthisimportantskill?2023/1/5范文2分析这篇文章的两个原因写成了一个段落，因为各自展开比较少。为了保持段落平衡，合成一段比分开写更合理。2023/1/5范文2分析Manyyoungpeopleareleavingschoolwithoutabasicandvitalunderstandingofhowpersonalfinancesoughttobemanagedintheadultworld.Thislackofknowledgeisduetoalackoflifeexperienceandlimitededucationwhichcanbesolvedintwosimpleways.

Onemainreasonwhysomanyyoungpeopleareunabletomanagetheirownfinancesuponfinishinghighschoolisthattheyhavebeenlivingalongwiththeirparentsforfree.Asaresult,theyhaveneverneededtoearnasalaryorsavetheirmoneyinordertopaybills.Anothercauseisthatschoolsdonotfactorpersonalfinancialmanagementintotheircurriculum.Schoolsfocusinsteadonclassicsubjects,suchasmaths,geography,historyandlanguages,whichmeansimportantlifeskillsarenotbeingtaught.Bothteachersandparentsarefailingtoprepareyoungpeoplefortherealworld.

2023/1/5范文2分析Therearetwooptionsforsolvingyoungpeople’sinabilitytomanagepersonalfinances.Firstly,parentsshouldspendtimewiththeirchildrenteachingthemhowmoneyisearned,budgetedandusedforeithersavingsorexpenses.Onesimplestepcouldbeforparentstostartbyteachingyoungchildrenhowtomanagetheirpocketmoneyand,astheirchildgrowsup,expandintomoreserioushouseholdexpenses.Secondly,schoolsshouldincorporatelifeskillsintotheircurriculumforfinalyearstudents.Inthisway,childrenwillbeabletolearninasupportiveenvironmenthowtheirfinancesneedtobebudgetedandmanagedtoavoiddebtproblemslaterinlife.

Inconclusion,youngpeoplelackfinancialmanagementskillsduetothenegligenceofparentsandschools,whichcanonlybesolvedifbothtakemoreresponsibilityforequippingschoolleaverswiththerightskills.2023/1/5解决方案--切实可行1.政府---至关重要(收税/花钱/颁布法律)；1).Thegovernmentcouldimposehighertaxeson……sothat…….2).Whatthegovernmentshoulddoistoinvestin…../financiallysupport…../spendmoneydoing……….3).Thegovernmentoughttorequire…..to…...2.家长3.学校4.公司5.authorities2023/1/5report类型的核心段(原因+有何影响版本)1.直接改写原题，不需要背景引出(扩充或者缩减原题)+承上启下(最好两个问题都预告)2.Oneofthereasonsisthat第一个原因分析。(idea--support)3.Inaddition,第二个原因分析。(idea--support)4.过渡句---Tomyknowledge,thereare完全取决于你自己(好/坏/虽然….但是…..)5.总结(重复原因/影响)2023/1/5Anincreasingnumberofpeoplearechangingcareersduringworkinglife.Whatdoyouthink

arethereasons?Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegative

developmentforsociety？

2023/1/5Inthepast,manypeopleusedtostayinthesamejobfortheirlifetime.Today,however,jobhoppinghasethenewnormal,which,frommypointofview,isduetoacombinationofreasonsandseemstohavesignificantnegativeeffectsonsociety.Onemainreasonformorepeoplechangingcareersistheincreaseintheirjobchoices.Withthedevelopmentofeconomyandtechnology,thereareagreatnumberofnewoccupationswhicharebelievedtobemoreappealingincreativityorflexibility.InChina,forexample,anincreasingnumberofwhite-collarswithrepetitivedailyroutineshaveswitchedfromworkingintheofficetostartingtheirownbusinessesontheinternet.2023/1/5Anothercauseofcareermoveisthecontinuouslyrisinglivingcostinmostcountriesaroundtheworld.Asthepriceforalmosteverythinghasbeensoaring,thereisenormousfinancialpressureimposedonadultswhowanttoprovidetheirfamilieswithhighqualityoflife,whichdrivesthemtoseekbetterpayingjobs.Oneofthemosteffectivewaystoachievetheirfinancialambitionisbelievedtohopfromonecompanytoanother.

Althoughitmayberewardingfortheindividualtochangejobs,therewillbeseveralundesirableesforsociety.Firstly,asmorepeopleconsiderswitchingtheircareers,thereislikelytobeawasteofmoneyandtimespentonthetrainingofnewemployees,whichasaresultwillnegativelyaffecttheprofitabilityandproductivityofcompanies.Inaddition,jobhoppingmayalsocauseaburdentothegovernment,becausepeoplebetweenjobsmaybedependentonthefinancialassistanceprovidedbypublicfunds,whichwillleadtoinsufficientinvestmentinmoreimportantservices,suchaseducationandhealthcare.2023/1/5试着自己写个结尾段2023/1/5report类型的核心段(问题+解决方案版本)1.直接改写原题，不需要背景引出(扩充或者缩减原题)+承上启下(我认为这会导致……的问题，他们能够被解决)2.第一个问题扩展(idea--support)3.Inaddition,第二个问题扩展。(idea--support)4.针对这两个问题提出解决方案5.总结(问题+解决)2023/1/5report类型的核心段(问题+解决方案版本)Ariseinthestandardoflivinginacountryoftenonlyseemstobenefitcitiesratherthanruralareas.Whatproblemsmightthisdifferencecause?Howmighttheseproblemsbereduced?

2023/1/5report类型的核心段(问题+解决方案版本)Therehasbeenasignificantriseinlivingstandardsofpeopleinmanycountries,suchasbettereducationqualityandsmalleredisparity.However,itseemsthatsuchimprovementsaremostlyenjoyedbyurbandwellersratherthanthoselivinginthecountryside,which,inmyopinion,willresultinmanyundesirableesforbothcitiesandruralareas.

2023/1/5report类型的核心段(问题+解决方案版本)Asurbanliveskeepingincreasinglyappealing,alargenumberofpeoplewillbedrawntocitieseitherinsearchofmoreemploymentopportunitiesorseekingsuperiorhealthcare.Thiswilldefinitelyposetremendouspressureonbothlocalsandersofbigcities,suchasrisinglivingcosts,frustratingtrafficcongestion,andintensecompetitionforjobs.

2023/1/5report类型的核心段(问题+解决方案版本)Asforruralareas,theproblemscausedarealsosignificant.Tobespecific,therewillbeasevereshortageoflabourforceworkingintheagriculturalindustry,withtoomanypeoplemigratingfromvillagestotownsandcities.Asaresult,farminglandwouldbeleftuncultivatedandcropyieldswouldsignificantlydecline,possiblyfollowedbyariseinfoodpricesnationwide.

2023/1/5report类型的核心段(问题+解决方案版本)Ithink,therefore,thatmeasuresshouldbetakentonarrowthegapoflifequalitybetweenurbanandruralareas.Firstly,taxreductionandexemptioncouldbeapossiblesolutiontotheproblemoflabourdrain.Inotherwords,bothindividualsandbusinesseswillchoosetostayifthereissuchafavorable(preferential)policy.Secondly,thegovernmentcouldalsomakepeoplewillingtostaywheretheywerebornandgrewupbyimprovinglocallivingconditions,suchasbudgetingmoremoneytowardseducationandhealthservices.

Inconclusion,theproblemscausedbythedisparitybetweencitiesandvillagesareconcerningpeopleofbothplaces.Theycanonlybesolvedifthegovernmenttakesmoreresponsibilityforclosingthegap.

2023/1/5Report类型的第一段一般不需要背景句，题目中的现象本身就是背景，所以只需要直接开始改写的工作就可以了。2023/1/5report类型的介绍段(从原文里找到新的主语)1)Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudents’behavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?Poorstudentbehavior

seemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadprobleminmanycountries.Ithinkthatmodernlifestylesareprobablyresponsibleforthis.Parentsandschoolsshouldberesponsibleforsolvingthisproblem.（提前总结型过渡:预告了原因和解决）2023/1/5report类型的介绍段(从原文里找到新的主语)2).Childrenandteenagersarecommittingmorecrimesthanbefore.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Howshouldtheybepunished?Thenumberofcrimescommittedbychildrenandteenagershasbeenincreasing.Ithinkthattherecouldbe

severalreasonswhythisishappening

andthattheyoungercriminalsshouldbepunisheddependingonwhattheyhavedone.（空话型过渡）2023/1/5report类型的介绍段(从原文里找到新的主语)3).Someemployersthinkthatformalacademicqualificationsaremoreimportantthanlifeexperiencesandpersonalqualitieswhentheylookforanemployee.Whyisitthecase?Isitapositiveornegativedevelopment?Formaleducationalqualificationsarebelievedtobemoreimportantthanlifeexperiencesandpersonalitytraitswhenacompanyisrecruitingnewstaffs.Thiscriterionofchoosingemployeescanbeexplainedbythefollowingreasonsandfrommypointofview,itisapositivedevelopmentforbothjobseekersandcompanies.（空话型过渡）2023/1/5report类型的介绍段(基本句型的切换)4).Theaverageweightofcitizenshasbeenincreasinginmanycountr