读后续写与概要写作微技能五-情绪与情感描写课件

在读后续写中，描写人物的情绪与情感是常用的描写方法，恰当的情绪与情感描写能够表现文中人物的性格，推动事件的发展。在描述人物情绪与情感时要突出文章的中心，与人物的性格吻合，符合事件发展的逻辑。要选用恰当的词句通过情绪与情感描写精确地刻画人物的内心世界。微技能五情绪与情感描写在读后续写中，描写人物的情绪与情感是常用的描写方法，恰当的情语言输入——素材积累，为续写奠基Ⅰ.词汇积累1．happyadj.愉快的，高兴的；美满的2．cheerfuladj.快乐的3．excitedadj.兴奋的4．joyfuladj.欢乐的5．pleasedadj.欣喜的，高兴的，满意的语言输入——素材积累，为续写奠基Ⅰ.词汇积累1．happy6．enjoyvt.喜爱7．brightenvt.使快活8．delightn.欢喜，愉快，高兴vt.使快乐，使喜欢9．pleasuren.愉快10．passionn.热情，激情11．befondofmusic爱好音乐12．asatisfiedlook满意的表情

13．brightenone’sheart使某人心情愉快6．enjoyvt.喜爱14．yellwithdelight乐得大叫15．setone’sheartatrest使某人安心16．bewildwithdelight欣喜若狂17．beinhighspirits精神高涨18．beexcitedwithjoyatthesuccess为成功而欣喜19．beonthetopoftheworld心满意足，非常幸福20．amixtureofexcitementandhappiness既兴奋又开心14．yellwithdelight乐得大叫Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.

她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。2．Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.

她激动得满脸通红。

3．TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan’scheeks.

幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。4．Hercheerfulspiritsandheartylaughterinfectedthewholeclass.

她那欢乐的情绪和爽朗的笑声感染了全班同学。5．Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.

她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．ThesmileonherfaceⅠ.词汇积累1．tearn．

[常用复]眼泪，泪珠2．sobv.啜泣，抽噎3．sorrown.悲痛；

忧伤4．desperateadj.绝望的；无望的5．sadnessn.悲伤，

忧愁6．painn.痛苦7．releasevt.释放8．griefn.悲痛Ⅰ.词汇积累1．tearn．[常用复]眼泪，泪珠9．abrokenspirit意志消沉10．cryone’sheartout悲痛欲绝11．withaheavyheart怀着沉重的心情12．withasinkingheart心情沉重地13．withasorrowfulheart怀着忧郁的心情14．beseizedwithpanic惊慌失措15．puthimintoasentimentalmood让他很伤感9．abrokenspirit意志消沉16．fallintodespair陷入绝望17．astrongsenseofloss强烈的失落感18．makeone’sheartbleed使某人悲痛19．bedowninspirits情绪低落20．loseone’sspirit垂头丧气16．fallintodespair陷入绝望Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.

他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。2．Inthosedayshewasinlowspirits.

那些日子里他情绪低落。3．Herhandswereshakingandshewasonthepointofcrying.

她的手在颤抖，快要哭出来了。4．Theywereimmersedinsorrow.

他们沉浸在悲痛之中。5．Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.

听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．Hestoodsilently,teaⅠ.词汇积累1．displeasuren．不高兴2．glarev.对……怒目而视3．frustratedadj.失意的；失望的4．annoyedadj.恼怒的，气恼的5．ragen.愤怒6．crossadj.生气的，不高兴的7．complainconstantly不断地抱怨8．flamewithanger气得满脸通红Ⅰ.词汇积累1．displeasuren．不高兴9．bedispleasedatone’sconduct对某人的行为感到不满10．beeasilyannoyedattrifles易为琐事而恼火11．getmad/crossatsb对某人勃然大怒12．haveaworriedlook愁眉苦脸13．ignoreacomplaint对抱怨不予理会14．express/voiceacomplaintabout对……表示不满15．runoutoftheroominaburstofanger怒气冲冲地跑出房间16．stampone’sfootinanger愤怒地跺脚17．feeldiscouraged感到泄气的18．feelpuzzled/confused感到困惑的9．bedispleasedatone’sconduⅡ.佳句背诵1．Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.

他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。2．Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.

他几乎控制不住怒火。3．Theystoppedarguingandglaredateachother.

他们停止了争论，相互怒视着对方。4．Hegavemealookofburninganger.

他愤怒地看了我一眼。5．Thisfailureleavesthechilddepressedandfrustrated.

这次失败使这个小孩灰心丧气。Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．HisvoicetrembledwitⅠ.词汇积累1．seriousadj.严肃的，庄重的2．shamen.羞愧；耻辱3．yawnv.打呵欠4．forgivevt.原谅5．kindlyadj.仁慈的；

和蔼的；

友好的，体贴的6．hopelessadj.没有希望的，绝望的7．anxietyn.焦虑Ⅰ.词汇积累1．seriousadj.严肃的，庄重的8．find...highlystimulating觉得……非常刺激9．aforgivingspirit宽容的精神10．withakindlyspirit以和蔼可亲的态度11．notintheleastisheinterestedin...他对……一点也不感兴趣12．mixedwiththeemotionofanxietyandhope混合着焦虑与希望的情绪13．setoffstrongfeelings引起强烈的情感14．behopelesslyaddictedto对……彻底上瘾15．underthedominationoftheseemotions在这些情绪的控制下8．find...highlystimulating觉Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．Helowered/bent/bowedhisheadinshame.

他羞愧地低下了头。2．Idecidedtogoforawalktoclearmyhead.

我决定去走走，清醒一下头脑。3．Hefelthischeeksburningwithshame.

他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。4．Shelookedatherfatherstraightintheeyeandansweredhisquestiontruthfully.

她直视父亲的眼睛，诚实地回答了他的问题。5．MyheartwasinmymouthwhenIwalkedintoheroffice.

我走进她的办公室时，紧张得心都到了喉咙口。Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．Helowered/bent/bowedⅠ.基础练习——补全句子1．Hersmile_____________________.

她的笑容照亮了整个房间。2．Thewoman__________________therecoveryofherstolenjewels.那位妇人对找回被盗的珠宝感到非常高兴。litupthewholeroomwasdelightedat语言输出——层级训练，让续写添彩Ⅰ.基础练习——补全句子1．Hersmile______3．Unforgettablewerehereyesthat___________________andlipsheld_______________.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。4．She________________andranoutoftheroom.

她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。5．Shesobbed，___________________________.

她掩面哭泣。shonelikediamondsinasteadysmileburstintotearshidingherfaceinherhands3．Unforgettablewerehereyes6．Hisattitude____________________________.

他的态度使我极为恼火。7．Don’t_________________．Ididitallforyourowngood.

别生我的气，我这样做完全是为了你好。8．Hisfacesuddenly____________________．

他的表情突然严肃起来。mademeextremelyannoyedgetmadatmegrewserious6．Hisattitude_______________Ⅱ.综合演练——完成读后续写，注意情感描写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Aliandhisyoungersister,Zahra,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks.Ⅱ.综合演练——完成读后续写，注意情感描写阅读下面材料，根据Oneday,AlitookZahra’sshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasn’tuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.ZahraagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareAli’srunningshoes．Zahra’sschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoAli.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Alioftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.Oneday,AlitookZahra’sshoeAliheardaboutalongdistanceracethatwasheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.Thedayofracearrived.Alihadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.GettingmoreandmoreexhaustedhethoughtonlyofZahraandhispromisetoher.Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrength,andhestayedrightbehindthetwofastestrunners,determinedtofinishthird．Suddenly,asthefinishlinedrewnear,anotherrunnercollided(碰撞)withAlifrombehindandhecrashedtotheground.Aliheardaboutalongdistanc【根据提示完成范文】Paragraph1：Ali

looked

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ahead.Refusingtogiveupatthispoint,hejumpedtohisfeetandranasfastashecould.Hedashedacrossthefinishlineandwonthefourthprize.Thinkinghewould①__________________(让她妹妹失望)，Ali②______________________

(情不自禁哭了起来)．JustthenhesuddenlyheardtheannouncementfromthebroadcastthathewonthethirdprizeastherunnerwhocollidedwithAliwasdisqualifiedforbreakingtherule.Holdingtheshoesclosetohischestduringtheawardceremony,Ali③__________________________(感到非常高兴，并如释重负)

asheeventuallywontheshoesforhissister.lethersisterdowncouldn’thelpsobbingfeltoverjoyedandrelieved【根据提示完成范文】lethersisterdowncParagraph2：Filled

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delight,Ali

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quickly.Hecouldnotwaittoseehissisterandsharethethrillingnews.Onhisarrival,AlifoundZahrawaswaitingoutside.She④_____________(非常紧张)whetherherbrotherwouldbringherwhatshewasexpecting.“Zahra,seewhatIhavegotforyou.”hetooktheprizeoutofhisbagwithhistremblinghands.TheinstantZahrasawtheshoes,herface⑤_______(高兴起来)．⑥___________________(她非常激动)thatshethrewherselfatAli.“Thankyou!Ali.”⑦_____________________________(高兴的眼泪流了出来)asthebrotherandsisterhuggedtightlytogether.wasreallynervouslitupSothrilledwassheTearsofjoywelleduptheireyesParagraph2：wasreallynervous读后续写与概要写作微技能五-情绪与情感描写课件在读后续写中，描写人物的情绪与情感是常用的描写方法，恰当的情绪与情感描写能够表现文中人物的性格，推动事件的发展。在描述人物情绪与情感时要突出文章的中心，与人物的性格吻合，符合事件发展的逻辑。要选用恰当的词句通过情绪与情感描写精确地刻画人物的内心世界。微技能五情绪与情感描写在读后续写中，描写人物的情绪与情感是常用的描写方法，恰当的情语言输入——素材积累，为续写奠基Ⅰ.词汇积累1．happyadj.愉快的，高兴的；美满的2．cheerfuladj.快乐的3．excitedadj.兴奋的4．joyfuladj.欢乐的5．pleasedadj.欣喜的，高兴的，满意的语言输入——素材积累，为续写奠基Ⅰ.词汇积累1．happy6．enjoyvt.喜爱7．brightenvt.使快活8．delightn.欢喜，愉快，高兴vt.使快乐，使喜欢9．pleasuren.愉快10．passionn.热情，激情11．befondofmusic爱好音乐12．asatisfiedlook满意的表情

13．brightenone’sheart使某人心情愉快6．enjoyvt.喜爱14．yellwithdelight乐得大叫15．setone’sheartatrest使某人安心16．bewildwithdelight欣喜若狂17．beinhighspirits精神高涨18．beexcitedwithjoyatthesuccess为成功而欣喜19．beonthetopoftheworld心满意足，非常幸福20．amixtureofexcitementandhappiness既兴奋又开心14．yellwithdelight乐得大叫Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.

她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。2．Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.

她激动得满脸通红。

3．TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan’scheeks.

幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。4．Hercheerfulspiritsandheartylaughterinfectedthewholeclass.

她那欢乐的情绪和爽朗的笑声感染了全班同学。5．Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.

她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．ThesmileonherfaceⅠ.词汇积累1．tearn．

[常用复]眼泪，泪珠2．sobv.啜泣，抽噎3．sorrown.悲痛；

忧伤4．desperateadj.绝望的；无望的5．sadnessn.悲伤，

忧愁6．painn.痛苦7．releasevt.释放8．griefn.悲痛Ⅰ.词汇积累1．tearn．[常用复]眼泪，泪珠9．abrokenspirit意志消沉10．cryone’sheartout悲痛欲绝11．withaheavyheart怀着沉重的心情12．withasinkingheart心情沉重地13．withasorrowfulheart怀着忧郁的心情14．beseizedwithpanic惊慌失措15．puthimintoasentimentalmood让他很伤感9．abrokenspirit意志消沉16．fallintodespair陷入绝望17．astrongsenseofloss强烈的失落感18．makeone’sheartbleed使某人悲痛19．bedowninspirits情绪低落20．loseone’sspirit垂头丧气16．fallintodespair陷入绝望Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.

他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。2．Inthosedayshewasinlowspirits.

那些日子里他情绪低落。3．Herhandswereshakingandshewasonthepointofcrying.

她的手在颤抖，快要哭出来了。4．Theywereimmersedinsorrow.

他们沉浸在悲痛之中。5．Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.

听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．Hestoodsilently,teaⅠ.词汇积累1．displeasuren．不高兴2．glarev.对……怒目而视3．frustratedadj.失意的；失望的4．annoyedadj.恼怒的，气恼的5．ragen.愤怒6．crossadj.生气的，不高兴的7．complainconstantly不断地抱怨8．flamewithanger气得满脸通红Ⅰ.词汇积累1．displeasuren．不高兴9．bedispleasedatone’sconduct对某人的行为感到不满10．beeasilyannoyedattrifles易为琐事而恼火11．getmad/crossatsb对某人勃然大怒12．haveaworriedlook愁眉苦脸13．ignoreacomplaint对抱怨不予理会14．express/voiceacomplaintabout对……表示不满15．runoutoftheroominaburstofanger怒气冲冲地跑出房间16．stampone’sfootinanger愤怒地跺脚17．feeldiscouraged感到泄气的18．feelpuzzled/confused感到困惑的9．bedispleasedatone’sconduⅡ.佳句背诵1．Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.

他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。2．Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.

他几乎控制不住怒火。3．Theystoppedarguingandglaredateachother.

他们停止了争论，相互怒视着对方。4．Hegavemealookofburninganger.

他愤怒地看了我一眼。5．Thisfailureleavesthechilddepressedandfrustrated.

这次失败使这个小孩灰心丧气。Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．HisvoicetrembledwitⅠ.词汇积累1．seriousadj.严肃的，庄重的2．shamen.羞愧；耻辱3．yawnv.打呵欠4．forgivevt.原谅5．kindlyadj.仁慈的；

和蔼的；

友好的，体贴的6．hopelessadj.没有希望的，绝望的7．anxietyn.焦虑Ⅰ.词汇积累1．seriousadj.严肃的，庄重的8．find...highlystimulating觉得……非常刺激9．aforgivingspirit宽容的精神10．withakindlyspirit以和蔼可亲的态度11．notintheleastisheinterestedin...他对……一点也不感兴趣12．mixedwiththeemotionofanxietyandhope混合着焦虑与希望的情绪13．setoffstrongfeelings引起强烈的情感14．behopelesslyaddictedto对……彻底上瘾15．underthedominationoftheseemotions在这些情绪的控制下8．find...highlystimulating觉Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．Helowered/bent/bowedhisheadinshame.

他羞愧地低下了头。2．Idecidedtogoforawalktoclearmyhead.

我决定去走走，清醒一下头脑。3．Hefelthischeeksburningwithshame.

他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。4．Shelookedatherfatherstraightintheeyeandansweredhisquestiontruthfully.

她直视父亲的眼睛，诚实地回答了他的问题。5．MyheartwasinmymouthwhenIwalkedintoheroffice.

我走进她的办公室时，紧张得心都到了喉咙口。Ⅱ.佳句背诵1．Helowered/bent/bowedⅠ.基础练习——补全句子1．Hersmile_____________________.

她的笑容照亮了整个房间。2．Thewoman__________________therecoveryofherstolenjewels.那位妇人对找回被盗的珠宝感到非常高兴。litupthewholeroomwasdelightedat语言输出——层级训练，让续写添彩Ⅰ.基础练习——补全句子1．Hersmile______3．Unforgettablewerehereyesthat___________________andlipsheld_______________.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。4．She________________andranoutoftheroom.

她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。5．Shesobbed，___________________________.

她掩面哭泣。shonelikediamondsinasteadysmileburstintotearshidingherfaceinherhands3．Unforgettablewerehereyes6．Hisattitude____________________________.

他的态度使我极为恼火。7．Don’t_________________．Ididitallforyourowngood.

别生我的气，我这样做完全是为了你好。8．Hisfacesuddenly____________________．

他的表情突然严肃起来。mademeextremelyannoyedgetmadatmegrewserious6．Hisattitude_______________Ⅱ.综合演练——完成读后续写，注意情感描写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Aliandhisyoungersister,Zahra,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks.Ⅱ.综合演练——完成读后续写，注意情感描写阅读下面材料，根据Oneday,AlitookZahra’sshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasn’tuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.ZahraagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareAli’srunningshoes．Zahra’sschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoAli.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Alioftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.Oneday,AlitookZahra’sshoeAliheardaboutalongdistanceracethatwasheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.Thedayofracearrived.Alihadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.GettingmoreandmoreexhaustedhethoughtonlyofZahraandhispromisetoher.Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrengt