高中英语写作常见错误句子课件

书面表达常见错句分析Aims:1.Toknowthecommonmistakesthatyoualwaysmakeinyourwriting.2.Tofindthereasonwhyyoumakethemistakes.3.Tolearnhowtoavoidthesamemistakes

研究表明，多数同学在写作上的主要欠缺不是系统的写作理论和方法，而是最基本的单句写作能力。

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WrongSentences：Therealreasontoourfailureisnotfartoseek.Thereasonforthisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.forthatWriteashortparagraphabout:Lackofsleep(

睡眠不足的原因，危害）Wearebusyreviewingourlessonsanddoingexercisesallthetime.Everyeveningweworktillverylate.Wedon’t

haveenoughtimeforsleep.I’mafraidlackofsleepwilldoharmtoourhealth.随堂练习Summary正确连接分句避免误置修饰语注意逻辑主语避免指代不清尽量避免汉语干扰注意时态一致

THANKYOU!34文明的社会里关爱无处不在。以一只小猫照顾一只生病的小鸭为例。Thereareconcernandcareeverywhereinacivilizedsociety.Taketheexampleofacatlookingafterasickduck.Concernandcarecanbefoundeverywhereinaci