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OPEN-ENDINGCOMPOSITION开放性写作整理ppt开放性写作出题方式：1根据结果，解释原因

Whathappened?2根据事件，接续故事

Whathappenednext?Whatdidyoudowith...?Whatshouldyoudo...?Howwillyouintroduceyourschooltothem?3提出问题，给出建议整理ppt写作注意原则：1、认真审题，即：审语境、审人称、审时态2、要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应3、注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者的意识4、要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑5、要有主次之分，详略得当6、要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑7、要做到思想健康，积极向上整理ppt海淀二模：Whenyourmothercomeshomefromwork.,shefindsthelivingroominaterriblemess.Sheasksyouthereasons.Youtellherwhathappened.审题：人称--I,时态--过去时叙事---根据结果，解释原因。整理ppt切记：1审题要准；定位要清。2紧扣主题；首位呼应。3内容充实；详略得当。4合情合理；逻辑清晰。5语言简洁；交际得体。整理ppt

说明文整理ppt说明文出题形式：1。文字+表格2。图表3。图画整理ppt说明文的篇章结构主题句——引出全文的话题支持句——围绕话题展开讨论，用事实，理由，观点等来进行解释，说明或论证。结束句——对话题进行概括，总结归纳。整理ppt说明文的写作方法：列举法----用事例说明主题可用表示顺序的示意词来突出每个实例。如：

first,second,third,

first,secondly,finally,thefirstthing(point)is…,thesecondthing(point)is…,thethirdthing(point)is…,firstofall,also,finally,

one,another,thelast…整理ppt以事物的重要性来排列顺序，可使文章层次清楚，重点突出。如：

foronething,also,theworstthingis…,firstofall,apartfromthat,themostimportantis…,foronething,whatismore,themost…,oneimportant,moreimportantly,themostimportant…,整理pptoneproblem..,anotherproblem…,themostseriousproblem…,整理ppt比较对比法：比较通常是指对人或事物之间的相同点进行分析。对比通常是侧重分析两者之间的不同点，利与弊。

整理ppt写作方法通常有：1）相同点---不同点分析A,A,A,B,B,B,结构2）A,B,A,B,A,B,结构（如内容较多，可逐点分析。）整理pptTopicsentence

whetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparksSupportingsentence1

60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaoftheentrancefees.(A)tohavearestandenjoythemselvesinthepark(A)tobecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,(A)todoharmtotheappearanceofthecity.整理pptSupportingsentence2

40%thinkthatfeesshouldbecharged(B)needmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers(B)tobuyplantsandyoungtrees.(B)feesshouldbechargedlow.整理ppt请根据以下图表和提示写一篇关于我国手机拥有量变化的报导。并阐述手机给人们生活所带来的利与弊。1.方便 2.随时，随地联系3.许多设置满足不同要求4.发短信，电话记录5.接到打错的电话为之付费6.电磁污染整理ppt宣武一模：请你根据下面图表用英语写一篇短文，内容要包括以下两方面：1。概括说明中美大学生的主要收入来源。2。分析产生这种不同现象的可能原因。整理pptIncome*American*Chinesesources*students*students----------------------------------------------Parents*50%*90%-----------------------------------------------Part-timejobs*35%*5%-------------------------------------------------scholarships*15%*5%整理pptTheincomeoftheAmericanandtheChinesestudentscomesthroughalmostthesamechannels:parents,part-timejobsandscholarships,butthepercentageofeachisquitedifferent.

HalftheAmericanstudents’incomeisfromtheirparents,thirty-fivepercentfromfrompart-timejobs,andfifteenfromscholarships.Chinesestudents,ontheotherhand,getninetypercentoftheirincomefromtheirparents.整理pptInmyopinion,therearetwomainreasonsforthis.

OneisthatChineseparentscaresomuchfortheirchildrenthatitisalmostunthinkableforstudentstoliveontheirown.TheotheristhatChinesestudentshavefewerchancestofindpart-timejobs.整理ppt小结：1。确定主题；理清结构。2。信息归类；支撑论点。（相同；不同）3。上下连贯；逻辑清晰。（正确使用连接词）4。首位呼应；紧扣扣题。整理ppt写作常见错误：1动词与主语关系不清误：IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandwasabouttocrossParkRoad.正：IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandhewasabouttocrossParkRoad.整理ppt误：Butthecarranoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman.正：Butthedriverdroveoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman.整理ppt误：Theparkshouldchargetheentrancefee.正：Theentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.正：Peopleshouldpayfortheentrancefeeiftheygototheparks.整理ppt2句子之间的逻辑关系不清误：Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver,awoman,didn’tstophercar.Findingshehadcausedanaccident,thewomanspedhercartofleeaway.TheoldmanandIsawthecar’snumber.It’sAC864.Theoldmancouldn’tmove,Idecidedtohelphim.

整理ppt正：Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver,whowasawoman,didn’tstophercar.Findingshehadcausedanaccident,thewomanspedhercartofleeaway.

Fortunately,Isawthecar’snumber.It’sAC864.Noticingtheoldmancouldn’tmove,Idecidedtohelphim.整理ppt3画蛇添足、过多的长句使句子复杂化（语言不简洁）修改前：

Afamoussportsmanwasgivingaspeechwhichwasratherinteresting.修改后：Afamoussportsmanwasgivinganinterestingspeech.整理ppt修改前

Nowadays,somepeoplearestillcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermission.Theairpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreseriouswhichiscausedbybusesandcars.What’smore,somanyriversarepollutedbydirtywaterwhichisfromfactory.Inaddition,sandstormstruckusnowandthen,fromwhichwesufferedalot.整理ppt修改后

Nowadays,somepeoplearestillcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermission.Asaresult,peoplehavetosuffersandstormsnowandthen.What’smore,asbusesandcarsgiveoffalotofpoisonousgases,theairisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Moreover,therearemanyriverspollutedbydirtywaterfromfactories.Thesituationisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.整理ppt修改前：Assoonascamein,weheardsomevoicemadebyinstruments.Thereweresomestudentsplayingpianoviolinandsoon.修改后：

Assoonaswecamein,weheardapieceofbeautifulmusicplayedbythestudentsbydifferentinstruments,suchas,piano,violinandsoon.整理ppt4过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑性，可读性。修改前Yesterday,therewasapolicemaninthestreet.Hestoppedacar.Thecarwasatthecorner.ItlookedlikeaHonda.Therewasaboyonthesidewalk.Hewasridinghisbicycle.Thebicyclewasatwo-wheeler.Thecarnearlyknockeddowntheboy.整理ppt修改后Yesterday,apolicemanstoppedacar—Hondaatthecornerofthestreet,becauseitnearlyknockeddownaboywhowasridingatwo-wheelbicycleonthesidewalk.整理ppt修改前Suddenly,acarrunquicklyfromthethirdstreetandturnedtothewest.Thecardidn’tstopandhittheoldman.Thedriverdidn’tstopandhavealook.Thecarranawayquickly.Thecarwasyellowandthedriverwasawoman.整理ppt修改后Suddenly,acarturnedwestfromthe3rdStreettotheParkRoad.Ithittheoldman,butitdidn’tstopandranawayquickly.Inoticedthecarwasyellowandthedriverwasawoman.整理ppt整理ppt整理ppt9、静夜四无邻，荒居旧业贫。。2022/12/252022/12/25Sunday,December25,202210、雨中黄叶树，灯下白头人。。2022/12/252022/12/252022/12/2512/25/20227:08:00PM11、以我独沈久，愧君相见频。。2022/12/252022/12/252022/12/25Dec-2225-Dec-2212、故人江海别，几度隔山川。。2022/12/252022/12/252022/12/25Sunday,December25,202213、乍见翻疑梦，相悲各问年。。2022/12/252022/12/252022/12/252022/12/2512/25/202214、他乡生白发，旧国见青山。。25十二月20222022/12/252022/12/252022/12/2515、比不了得就不比，得不到的就不要。。。十二月222022/12/252022/12/252022/12/2512/25/202216、行动出成果，工作出财富。。2022/12/252022/12/2525December202217、做前，能够环视四周；做时，你只能或者最好沿着以脚为起点的射线向前。。2022/12/252022/12/252022/12/252022/12/259、没有失败，只有暂时停止成功！。2022/12/252022/12/25Sunday,December25,202210、很多事情努力了未必有结果，但是不努力却什么改变也没有。。2022/12/252022/12/252022/12/2512/25/20227:08:00PM11、成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。。2022/12/252022/12/252022/12/25Dec-2225-Dec-2212、世间成事，不求其绝对圆满，留一份不足，可得无限完美。。2022/12/252022/12/252022/12/25Sunday,December25,202213、不知香积寺，数里入云峰。。2022/12/252022/12/252022/12/252022/12/2512/25/202214、意志坚强的人能把世界放在手中像泥块一样任意揉捏。25十二月20222022/12/252022/12/252022/12/2515、楚塞三湘接，荆门九派通。。。十二月222022/12/252022/12/252022/12/2512/25/202216、少年十五二十时，步行夺得胡马骑。。2022/12/252022/12/2525December202217、空山新雨后，天气晚来秋。。2022/12/