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假设你是李华，市学校科普俱乐部的负责人。你很想参加2022年4月在中国深圳举办的国际人工智能展览会（2022ChinaInternationalAIExhibition）.请你给大会组委会写一封信，内容包括：1.写信的目的；2.询问参会要求；3.想参会的原因。注意：1.词数80字左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearSir/Madam,Yours,LiHua科普俱乐部：PopularScienceClub单词拼写错误展览：exhibition组委会：committee要求：requirement邀请：invitationIamLihua,ahighschoolstudent.Withgreatexpectation,Iamwritingtoapplyforachancetoparticipateinthe2022ChinaInternationalAIExhibition,whichwillbeheldinShenzheninApril,2022.

Asakeenloverofscienceandtechnology,IshowgreatenthusiaminAI,dreamingtodevotemyselftothisfield.What’smore,asthepresidentofschoolscienceclub,thischancecanmakeme

dobetterinspreadingthefrontlineknowledgeofAItechnologyinourschool,raisingtheinterestofstudentsinthisadvancedfield.Sincerely,Ihopetolearnsomeabouttherequirementson

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IwonderwhetherIneedaninvitationletter.Inaddition,

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