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英语写作手册PARTTHREE参考答案英语写作手册PARTTHREE参考答案英语写作手册PARTTHREE参考答案xxx公司英语写作手册PARTTHREE参考答案文件编号：文件日期：修订次数：第1.0次更改批准审核制定方案设计，管理制度《英语写作手册》PARTTHREE参考答案I.Readthefollowingandsaywhatkindofsentenceeachis(loose,periodic,balanced):p.721.P2.P3.P4.L 5.B6.P7.P8.P9.B 10.BII.Readthefollowing,pointoutthemistakesandmakenecessarycorrections:p.731.Ourhostentertaineduswithmanyinterestingstoriesofadventures,forhehadbeenamemberofanexplorationteamworkingintheArctic.2.WhenIwokeup,Isawhimasleepinbed.ButIhadnotheardhimwhenhecamebackbecauseIhadbeensleepingsoundly.3.Liualwaysdidhisworkalittlebetterthanhisfellowworkers,sohegothigherpaythanothers.4.Nostudentcouldanswerthatquestion,includingYao.Thoughhewasusuallyquickinansweringquestions,hewassilent.5.LinlookslikeLi;however,theyarenotrelated.6.Theoldmanhunchedforward,withhisheadtiltingatanangle,eyeshalfclosed,lookingverysleepy.7.Becausetheirworkwaswellplanned,everybodyworkedwithgreatenthusiasm,andtheyoverfulfilledtheirquota.8.MarkTwain’sexperienceasapilotonasteamboatwasnodoubtanimportantfactorthathelpedhimtobecomeafamouswriter.Ш.Rewritethefollowingbyputtingtheshortsentencesintocomplexsentences,orsentenceswithparticipial,prepositional,orotherphrases:(p.74-75)1.Xucomesfromaworking-classfamily,andheenrolledincollegelastfall.Xuwhoenrolledincollegelastfallcomesfromaworking-classfamily.Xu,whoenrolledincollegelastfall,comesfromaworking-classfamily.ThoughXucomesfromaworking-classfamily,heenrolledincollegelastfall.Xuwhocomesfromaworking-classfamilyenrolledincollegelastfall.Xu,whocomesfromaworking-classfamily,enrolledincollegelastfall.2.Thedeanissuedabulletinthatthelibrarywouldremainopenonweekends.3.Lastnightwasawildnight,thethunderroaring,thewindblowingagale,andtherainfallingintorrents.4.Thetemperaturemusthavefallenconsiderablyduringthenightbecausethereareiciclesonthetrees.5.Hereturnedtohishometownthathehadbeenawayfromfortwelveyearsandlookedinvainforthefamiliarlandmarks.Becausehehadbeenawayfortwelveyears,hereturnedtohishometownandlookedinvainforthefamiliarlandmarks.6.Wehavemadesomeprogress,butwestillhavealongwetogo.Thoughwehavemadesomeprogress,westillhavealongwetogo.7.Theskywascloudless,thesunshiningbrightly.8.Therewereovertwohundredpassengersonboardtheplane,aboutonethirdofwhomwereforeigners.9.Thegirlbegantolearntoplaythepianowhenshewasachildashermotherwasafamouspianist.10.Napoleonwasbornin1769whenCorsicahadjustbeenacquiredbyFrance.11.Astormyapplausebrokeforthassoonas/whensheappearedonthestage.12.Thegypsies,whowereoncethoughttobeEgyptiansmigratingintoEurope,arereallyanomadicpeoplefromIndia.13.Becausethenewworkersareyoungandinexperienced,theyareeagertolearnfromtheveteranworkers.14.Itwasapoorquarterwithalotofsmallhuts,dottingahillsidewithmudwallsandstrawroofs.15.Hearingthathisfatherwasill,hewasanxioustogohometoseehim,sohewenttothestationearlyinthemorningtobuyaticket.IV.Thefollowingsentencesarenotunifiedorcoherent.Trytoimprovethem.(p.75-76)WaystoachieveunityandcoherenceToexpressasinglecompletethought/ideaToomitunnecessaryelementsToconnectrelatedwords/partsproperly1.Shebegantospeakatthemeetingatteno’clock.2.BernardShawwasoneofthebest-knownplaywrightsintheworld.3.Thehousesweremereshantieswithragsstuffedinthecracksandholes.4.ThenovelIreadonthetraindidn’tinterestmeatall.5.Thewell-dressedmanwhoadmittedustothehousewaslaterlearnedtobeathief.6.Ilostsomeimportantdocuments.Withthehelpofthepolice,Ifoundthemthreedayslater.7.Whenweenteredtheshop,asaleswomangreetedus.Wesawallkindsofshoresontheshelves.Becausethepriceswerequitereasonable,alotofcustomerswerebuyingthem.8.TellHelenIwillcometoseeherifsheisathome.9.Listeningattentively,Iheardafaultysound.10.Onenteringtheroom,Isawnoone.11.Fredissoenergeticandcapablethatyoucanrelyonhim.12.Thechildrenpromisedtobecarefulandreturnhomeearly.13.Dickens’snovelsoffernosolutiontothesocialinjusticesthatheexposes.Dickensoffersnosolutiontothesocialinjusticesthatheexposesinnovels.14.Eithermywatchisfast,oryoursisslow.15.Glancingoutofthewindow,Iwasattractedbyabeautifulview.16.Hefinishedreadingtenbooksduringthevacation.17.Ifinterestedinpainting,youcantakeacourseattheeveningschool.18.Shesaidthatshewouldcomeifshecould.Shealsotoldusnottowaitforherifshedidn’tcome.19.ItoldmyfriendthegoodnewsatonceafterIpostedtheletter.Itoldmyfriendthegoodnewsthattheletterwaspostedatonce.20.Ilikehispoems,soIwillgotohislecture.Iwillgotothelecturebecause/ifIlikehispoems.V.Revisethefollowingsentences.Trytomakethemconcise.(p.78-77)WaystoachieveconcisenessAvoidingrepetitionDeletingunrelated/unnecessarywordsorphrasesChangingthesentencestructure1.In1840,theOpiumWarbrokeout.2.Therearemorebooksintheirlibrarythaninours.3.Hereturnedhomeafterhegraduatedfromcollege.4.Weplannedtomeetjustbeforesunrise.5.Thefloodwasduetotheheavyraininlatespring.6.Hewasaskedtorepeatthesentence.7.Iplaybadmintonaswellasmybrother.8.Itseemedtohisfriendsthathisattitudewaspuzzling.9.Thesewatermelonsarelargeandsweet.10.Hedidnottellthetruth.11.Anumberofstudentswanttojointhedramaclub.12.Hewaskindenoughtoletmesharetheumbrella.13.Zhaowaselectedtherepresentativeoftheclassbythewholeclass.14.AtpresentIamtakingthecourseofWorldHistoryandacourseingeography.15.Theplanecircledtheairportforabouttenminutesandthendisappeared.16.Inmyopinion,hehasnotdonehisworkverywell.17.IwouldlikeyoutoconsiderwhetherornotyouwillpublishyourrecentarticleonwomenscientistsinChina18.Becausehehadmissedmanylectures,hewasawarethathewouldfailtheexam.19.Youmustfirstworkoutanoutlineforyourpaper,andthencollectallkindsofmaterialstosupportyourpointofview.20.Inthatcountryviolentdeathhasbecomeacommonplacething.21.Heisnotonlyagoodpianistbutalsoagoodsinger.22.ThisprettyactresskeepsappearinginTVserials.ThisprettyactressappearsinTVserialsrepeatedly.23.Asarule,studentsarenotallowedtotakebooksoutofthisreading-room.24.Accordingtothespeaker,itisobviousthattheresponsibilitysystemhashelpedtoincreaseproduction.25.Onereasonwhypeoplearewellinformedinthiscountryisthatmanynewspaperscaneasilybeboughtorsubscribedto.26.Statisticsshowthatfrom1980-1990enrollmentsatthisschooldoubled.27.Therearesomanyinexperiencedworkersthatproductionofthefactoryhasbeenaffected.28.About50patientsinthiswardarebeinggivenacupuncturetreatment.29.HisnameisJamesWilliams.30.Whateverhedoes,heworkswithgreatcare.VI.Rewritethefollowingsentences,emphasizingthemanideaineach.(p.78-79)Waystoachieveemphasis:InversionNegative-positivestatementsPlacing:beginning/endRepetitionSubordinationEmphaticwords/phrases/sentencesAlliteration1.Huangisovertwometerstall,andheisthetallestmanoftheteam.2.Afterhewentbankrupt,helostinterestinsocialposition,reputation,lifeitself,andevenfriends.3.Hedecidedtotakethejob,whichwassomethingunexpected.4.UndernocircumstanceswillChinabethefirsttousenuclearweapons.5.Yangalonecandothework,thoughtherearetwentystudentsintheclass.6.Asaresultofreformandtheopenpolicy,Chinahaschangedagreatdealduringthepast14years.7.Acco