高中英语一轮复习 短文改错讲练学习课件

高中短文改错专练高考短文改错的短文通常只有120个词左右，有10处错误，短文的难度也与考生的习作相当，考查学生对英语知识的综合运用能力。各种错误所占比例为

1：1：8：

多缺错一.短文改错的命题特点一．短文改错的测试特点1、词法的测试

词法的测试包括：1）定冠词和不定冠词的用法；2）名词的单复数和名词所有格；3）动词的时态、语态和非谓语动词；4）人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词的用法；5）介词的搭配；6）并列连词、从属连词的用法；7）形容词、副词的区别以及比较级和最高级的用法；8）固定搭配和习惯用法。2、句法的测试句法的测试包括：1）主、谓语在数上的一致；2）名词性从句；3）定语从句；4）强调句型；5）句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性及逻辑性。

3、语篇的测试语篇的测试包括：1）上下文中的时态是否一致；2）上下文中的代词是否一致；

3）上下文中的逻辑是否一致。三.短文改错的题型特点1.错词1.Workhard，butyou’llmakegreatprogress.Workhard,and

you’llmakegreatprogress.2.HisrulerislongerthanI，whichiscleartoeverybody.Hisrulerislongerthan

mine，whichiscleartoeverybody.3.Threefourofthebuildingwereruined.Threefourthsofthebuildingwereruined.2.缺词在短文中缺词的地方，要求考生按语法。搭配或上下文语义的需要找出所缺的词并补上所缺的词。1.Weinvitedaforeignteachergiveusaspeechyesterday.

Weinvitedaforeignteacher

togiveusaspeechyesterday.2.Becausethehelpyougavemethatsummer,mylifechanged.

Becauseof

thehelpyougavemethatsummer,mylifechanged.

3.Attention.please,everyone！Ihaveannoucementtomake.

Attention,please,everyone!Ihaveanannoucementtomake.3.多词在短文中有一词按照语法.搭配或上下文语义要求纯属多余,要求考生认定该多余的词并划去.1.MrBlackwillgototheUSbyaplane.

MrBlackwillgototheUSbyplane.2.AshockingincidentwashappenedinPengyangcountyonOctober14.AshockingincidenthappenedinPengyangcountyonOctober14.3.AlthoughI’m16yearsold,butmyfatherstilltreatsmeasacarelesschild.AlthoughI’m16yearsold,myfatherstilltreatsmeasacarelesschild.四、短文改错题的错误类型在高考英语试卷中，短文改错题属综合能力测试题型，要求考生全面地运用语言知识，根据语法结构。词汇意义。上下文关系等进行综合判断，找出错误，加以改正。错误大致可分为词汇错误。句法错误和上下文逻辑错误。(一).词法方面的错误主要有:1.冠词方面的错误

1.该使用冠词的地方没有使用冠词或不需要使用冠词的地方却使用了冠词.2.冠词的误用,该用定冠词的地方使用了不定冠,而该用不定冠词的地方却使用了定冠词.1.Twodaysisnotenoughformetofinishthework.Ineedthethirdday.

Twodaysisnotenoughformetofinishthework，Ineeda

thirdday.2.MrBlackwillgototheUSbyaplane.MrBlackwillgototheUSbyplane.2.名词方面的错误1.可数名词数的使用错误;2.可数名和不可数名的混淆;3.名词的所有格错误.4.名词做定语的用法.

1.Withoutsuchknowledges,onewouldnotbeabletounderstandwhatwasseenorheard.Withoutsuchknowledge,onewouldnotbeabletounderstandwhatwasseenorheard.2.Tomysurprise,hehasfinishedadaywork.Tomysurprise,hehasfinishedaday’swork.3.Inordertobuyanicepairofshoes,hewenttoseveralshoesstores.Inordertobuyanicepairofshoes,hewenttoseveralshoestores.3.情态动词方面的错误Need和dare可以用作实义动词,在回答由could和might引导的表请求的一般疑问句时,不能用could和might(应分别用和may)回答.1.“CouldIuseyourdictionary?”“Yes,ofcourseyoucould”.“CouldIuseyourdictionary?”“Yesofcourseyoucan”.2.“MustIleavehererightnow?”“Noyoumustn’t”.“MustIleavehererightnow?”“Noyouneedn’t”.4.代词的用法错误.代词误用是要求判别代词同它所指代的词在单复数.格或人称上是否一致;指代什么,用法是否正确;以及作为形式主语或形式宾语it的用法错误。1.You’dbetterbuyyousomefruitswhenyougoonatrip.

You‘dbetterbuyyourself

somefruitswhenyougoonatrip.2.Idon’tthinkthispossibletolearnaforeignlanguagewellwithouthardwork.Idon’tthinkitpossibletolearnaforeignlanguagewellwithouthardwork.5.形容词、副词的误用主要指该用形容词的地方用了副词,该用副词的地方用了形容词，还要分析该形容词或副词修饰什么,形式是否正确,是原级、比较级还是最高级。1.ThisTVsetisthecheaperofthethree.ThisTVsetisthecheapest

ofthethree2.Thejourneywaslongandtired.Thejourneywaslongandtiring.

6.有关连词方面的错误.连接词的误用主要有把握不住句式误用连词,混淆连词与关系副词,推断不出上下文逻辑关系误用连词等.1.I’mtryingtoimprovethesituationsinceitdoesn’tseemtowork.I’mtryingtoimprovethesituationbut

itdoesn’tseemtowork.2.Becareful,andyou’llfallintotheriver.Becareful,oryou’llfallintotheriver.7.非谓语动词的用法错误.非谓语动词包括动词不定式.动名词和分词.做题时要求判断是用不定式.动名词还是分词.一看到句子中有分词(现在分词或过去分词),就要判断这个分词是表示主动还是被动;是表示现在还是过去;是该用现在分词还是过去分词.Eg:1.Onseeingtheyoungchildtofallintothelake,Tomwenttotherescue.Onseeingtheyoungchild

fall

intothelake,Tomwenttotherescue.2.Theaudiencestoodup,lookedoutofthewindow.Theaudiencestoodup,lookingoutofthewindow.8.介词(固定搭配)方面的错误.介词的误用主要指介词与动词、形容词、名词的搭配，介词惯用词组等是否正确。1.TheyarrivedearlyinaTuesdaymorning。

Theyarrivedearlyon

aTuesdaymorning。2.Thetwoclassroomsarequitedifferentfromsize.Thetwoclassroomsarequitedifferentinsize.(二).句法方面的错误有:

名词性从句.定语从句.强调句和主胃一致方面的错误.1.Tomfelloffhischairbyaccidentgottheclassmateslaughing.That

felloffhischairbyaccidentgottheclassmateslaughing.2.Itisknowntoall,toomuchsmokingwillcauselungcancer.

As

isknowntoall,toomuchsmokingwillcauselungcancer.3.WhatIneedareabigfortunenow.WhatIneedis

abigfortunenow.4.ItwasattherailwaystationwhereImetLiMingyesterday.ItwasattherailwaystationthatImetLiMingyesterday.五.短文改错的解题要求

短文改错的目的是测试考生发现、判断、纠正词法、句法以及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面错误的能力。既能考查学生词汇和语法方面的能力，也能考查学生的阅读理解能力。如果发现错误，规规矩矩地按照要求改正。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。六.短文改错应注意的问题四不改：1.

单词拼写不改.2.

大小写不改.3.

词序不改.4.

标点符号不改1浏览全文，掌握大意2分句阅读，逐行找错3检查核对，攻克难点4规范答题不留空白七.解题步骤八.短文改错口诀动词形，名词数。还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。九、综合训练Test1DearDad, Youareverybusyeverydaythatyouneverpayenoughattentiontoyourhealth.Iwasworriedaboutyourhealthallthetime.I’dliketogiveyousomeadvices.Ihearthatwalkingisthebestsport.Yourcompanyisn’tfarawayfromhome,isit?Whynottowalktotheoffice?__so__am____adviceYou’dbettertakeexerciseatmostonceaweek.Youcanplayabasketballinthegym.Goingtoswimisanicechoice,too.Tryingnottostayuptoolately.Havingenoughsleepcanhelpyourbrainworkbetter.Ofcourse,thisisveryimportanttohavehealthyfood. Dad,pleasereceivemyadvice.Ireallywishyouhealthy!__least___Try__late__it___acceptTest2 Onceamanaskedapaintertopaintingapictureforhim.Hewastoldtheartisthedidn’twantanyshadowsinthepicture,justsunshine,buttheartistdidso.Whenthemansawthefinishedpicture,hewasdisappointing.Withoutshadows,everythinginthepicturelooksflatandunreal.___paint__and_______disappointed___lookedThepointofthestoryisthatweneedbothshadowsandsunshinetohaveacompletelypicture,justasweneedbothrainandsuntohavelivingworld.People,too,needsbothsadnessandhappiness.Weoftenlearnimportantlessonduringsadtimes.Sowhenwefeelsad,weshouldtrytostopandthinkaboutthatwemightlearnfromtheexperience._____complete˄a___need____lessons__whatTest3 Asstudents,wehaveclassesforearlymorningtilllateafternoon.Therefore,takeaten-minutebreakbetweenclassisdefinitelyimportant,evennecessary.Otherwisewemayfeelbothphysicallyormentallytired.Duringtheten-minutebreakwedidsomethingtogetridoftiredness.__from___taking___classes__and__doWhatweneedistohaverealrest,insteadofgettingagaintired.Sodon’tdoanythingthatwillmakeyoutooexciting.Myten-minutebreakisalwayspleasant.Iusuallytakesomeexercise.SometimeIhaveafreechatwithmyclassmates.Whenthenewclassbegins,Ifeelfreshlyagain.˄a____excited_____Sometimes___freshTest4 Canadaissecondlargestcountrywiththelargestnumberoflakesintheworld.Ithasapopulationofabout35millionsandthemajorityofpeoplelivesinthecentralpartofthecountry.Canadaishighdevelopedineconomy.____million˄the___live___highlyFishingandforestryareofgreatimportantintheeasternpart.Incaseoffallingill,peopleusuallygotoaclinicinsteadofahospital,soit’sveryexpensivetoseeingadoctorthere.Thereforealmosteveryonebuyshealthyinsurance.Rightnowmostofinternationalstudentschoosetostudyintheeast,whichthetuitionisrelativelylow.______importance_because/since/as____see____health___whereTest5DearBritishfriends, WelcometoBeijing.I’mverypleasedtotellyousomearrangementsduringyourstayinBeijing. OurheadmasterMr.SmithweretomeetyouonMondaymorningandshewilltellyousomethingaboutourschool.Youwillbeshownoffthelabbuildingandthelibraryintheafternoon.OnTuesdaythestudentsofbothcountriesaretovisittheGreatWall,__is__he__around/over/roundaboutthatMr.Zhangwilltellsomeextremeinterestingstories.IntheeveningwearegoingtohaveapartyinRoom402.TheChineseandtheEnglishstudentswillgiveniceperformanceattheparty,showtheirculturesrespectively.At9:45a.m.onWednesdayyou’llleaveXi’anbythetrain. Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtimehere.Thanksyou.__which˄for____extremely______performances___showing___ThankTest6Hi,Janice, It’sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We’vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It’sbeenthree__told˄to___friends__singingSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact,Idon’tliketogoanymore,soI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace___much__but___What__were___themTest7 Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell._____something___best____decided__steps__goodMyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoyedthebiscuitswithhappylaughter!__when/while˄to_the____enjoyingTest8DearJohn, How’severything?Wehaven’tseeneachotherforalongtime.I’mveryexcitingtoreceiveane-mailfromyou.I’mgladyouhavemadesogreatprogressthatyoucanwriteyoure-mailwithgoodChinese.Ireadyoure-mailtomyparentandshowedthemthephotosyou’dsenttome.____excited_such__in___parentsWhattimeflies!Ourfriendshiplastedforseveralmonths.Wehavegottoknowandlearnedalotoffromeachother.Yes,it’sobviouslythatthelifeinAustraliaisquitedifferentfromoneinChina.I’mlookingforwardtohearfromyousoonandIhopeyouwillcometoChinainthenearfuture.Bestwishestoyou!Yours,ZhangYang___How˄has____obvious__that__hearingTest9 AyoungmancalledLow-CarbonBrotherbecomeahitontheInternetin2011.Hesuggestslivingalow-carbonlife,whichmeansusinglessenergyinourdailylifesothatwecanhelpreducingcarbondioxideintheair.Forexample,shealwayspicksupsomewastepaperonthestreetorusestheblanksidetowritesomething.WhileheiswatchingTV,healwaysturnsupthescreenbrightnesstotheminimumandturnsoffthelight.____became____reduce__he__and__downTherefore,hegoestoworkbybikeinsteadofdriving.Somepeoplethinkwhatheisdoingisjustashow.Noonecanlivesuchasimplylifewithsomanymoderninventionaroundus.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iamstronglyinsupporthisideaandhisbehavior.Althoughwhatheisdoinghasnohugeeffectonglobalwarming,butheatleastcanenjoyahealthylife._____Besides˄of___simple____inventionsTest10 Duringthesummervacationthisyear,IthoughtIshoulddoeverythingmeaningfulinsteadofstayathome.Therefore,IgotajobataKFCfastfoodrestaurantandworkedtherelikeacleaner.Iworkedeighthoursadayforthreeweek.Thejobwashardandbored,anditseemedendless,_____something___staying__as___weeks___boringwhatmademesotiredthatInearlygaveituphalfway.AndIstucktoitwithgreatdetermination.EverydayIstartoffforworkearlyinthemorningandgottohomelateintheevening.FinallyIfinishedthejobbeforethenewtermbegan. Now,Iunderstandwhatlabormeans.Ithinkitisreallygreatexperience.___which˄a___But___startedTest11 YesterdayIsteppedintoarestaurantforlunch.AsIwaswaitingmyordertocome,Inoticedtheoldmaninawheelchairrollhimselfovertoatable.Nooneandmeseemedtonoticehim.IgotupandgoovertohistableandaskedifthatIcouldgethimsomethingtodrink.˄for__an__but/excep__wentHesmiledandsaid,“Thankyou.Youaregenerously.I’dlikeanyorangejuice,please.”WhenIwasgettingreadytoleave,Iwalkedbytheoldman’stabletosayinggoodbye.HethankedmeagainandtoldmeIhadmadehisdays,comingoverandhelpinghimout.Igavehimahugandtoldhimhehadmademyday,either.______generous___some____say___day___toTest12 Thewinterholidayiscoming,whichmademeexcited.Ihavebeenlookingforwardatrelaxingmyself.I’dliketogoskating,climbmountainsandseeseveralmovie.IthinkIcanplaythebasketballwithmyclassmates.HowawonderfultimeI’llhaveduringthewinterholiday!___makes_to____movies___WhatHowever,myparentsthinkdifferent.Theydon’twantmegoout.TheyareafraidI’llbeknockeddownbyatruck,fallenoffatree,orfightwithothers.Beside,theyareafraidIwilllosemyway.Ihatebeingtreatedlikeabirdkeepinginacage.Togetmorefreedom,Iwilltrytoconvincethem._____differently˄to___fall____Besides____keptTest13 Thismorning,Igotothestorenearmyhometodosomeshopping. IwaswalkingdowntheTestwhileIgaveaviolentcough.Thewomanstandingnexttomewassoshockingthatsheconsequentlydroppedajarofoil.Forthatverymoment,agirlwaswalkingby.Sheslippedontheoil,fellontothebrokeglassandhitherheadonthefloor.__went___when____shocked__At___brokenAfterawhile,therewerebloodpoureddownherface.Ifeltreallyguiltyandsentthegirltothenearesthospitalwithoutthedelay.Adoctorexaminedherwoundcarefully.Tomyrelief,itwasnotserious.Thegirlhadalittlesmileonherfacebeforethedoctordressedwound.___was˄the/her___pouring____afterTest14 Maryisahighschoolstudent,whodevotedherselftoherlessonseveryday.LastSaturday,asusual,shewenttoseveralclass.Intheevening,shecontinuedtostudyuntildeeplyintonight.Shewastoosleepyandtiredthatshecouldn’tworkeffectively.OntheSundaymorning,shewasabouttodoherlessonswhileherfathercameupandadvisedhertotakeabreak.____devotes___classes____deep__so__whenSoontheycameupagoodidea.Wedecidedtogocyclinginthecountryside.Maryenjoyedherself,competingandchattingwithherfather,andfeltrelaxingintheopenair.OnMonday,Marywasenergeticbutactiveinclass.__They˄with____relaxed__andTest15全国高中英语教师群190624773，全国高中英语教师③群561903224全国高中班主任教师群819181319欢迎各位同仁加入交流指导！ Havingadreamisofgreatimportance.Yourdreamsareordinaryandrealistic.IhopeIwilladmittedintoatopuniversityandbecomeagooddoctorafterIwillgraduatefromuniversity.IhopedonedayIcanfindacureforcancer.__My˄be____hopeIhopethosewhomlovemeandthosewhomIlovewillbehealthyandlivehappyeveryday.Torealizemydreams,Iwilltakemoreexercisestobuildupmybody.Iwilltrymybesttofocustimeandenergytomystudy.Imustworkhardatmylessonsorbefullypreparingfortheentranceexam.___Who/that___happily_____exercise_on_and______preparedTest16 Inordertogethighschoolstudentstoattachimportancetotheenvironmentandraiseourawarenesstoprotecttheenvironment,andChinaDailyisplanningtoholdaninterestinglyknowledgecontest.AconteststartsonOctober14thandendon31st.Remember,youcantakethecontestinChinaDailynewspaper,______interesting__The__endsthatisverypopularamonghighschoolstudent.TheanswersheetmustcutfromthenewspaperandsenttoChinaDailyafterthedeadline. Pleasepaymoreattentiontotherelateinformationofthecontestandtakeanactivepartinthemontime.Students’Union__which˄be____students__before___related___itTest17 LastSaturday,ourschoolhadorganizedalloftheSenior1studentstovisitthechildrenatalocalorphanage.Wetookmanybooksthatwaspopularamongchildren,aswellasmanykindsofschoolsuppliesandtoys,tochildren.Theyweredelightedtoreceivethesegift.Weplayedsomegamestogetherandgiveperformances.__were˄the___gifts___gaveBeforeleavetheorphanagewetookphotoswiththemandgavethemourcontactdetailsbutwecouldkeepintouchwithoneanother. Thatday,eachoneofushadanenjoyabletime.Wegavethechildrentheircareandhelp;forreturn,theygaveustheirsmilesandlove.Thesevoluntaryactivitiesmadeadeeplyimpressiononus.___leaving__so__our__in___deepTest18 Iwasahonestchildindeed.Ididn’tdaretotellliesbecauseofmyeyesoftenletthesecretout.WhenItoldalietomyparents,Icouldhardfixmyeyesonmyfather’sface,letalonemymother’seyes.I