2020届高考英语书面表达总复习：专题(5)(建议信)含参考范文+Word版含答案

好好努力梦想终会实现好好努力梦想终会实现高考英语写作专题（5）（建议信）含参考范文05建议信写作模板①Dear,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto,andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:（建议的内容）.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour（祝愿）.YoursSincerely,LiHua写作模板②Dear,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto（引出对方需要建议的主题）.Hereareafewsuggestion引出作者的建议）.First,Itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso（可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下）Asto,Isuggest（需要具体到某一方面）.Inaddition,（其他的建议）.I'msure（预测可能的结果，给对方以行为的信心和决心）.Ihope（表达愿望）。YoursSincerely,LiHua建议信写作注意事项建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先写作方法首段：简介自己，不要罗嗦；说明目的，注意语气。主体：a.提出具体建议；b.首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。写作流程图说明写信目的介绍详情、说明原因提出建议提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复必备佳句第一部分：说明写信的目的套语：I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。IhavereceivedyourlettersayingyouplantoplayavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。I'mwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoattractmoreclients(顾客).我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitinthenewschoollife.Hereareafewsuggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因套语：它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。Itwillbeginat2:00pmandlasttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeeches.我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。Wewillstartat8:00amandarrivethereat9:00.下午，我们会一起……Duringtheafternoon,we'll...together.记得带上水和午餐。Remembertotakewaterandlunchwithyou.顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。Bytheway,youmaytakeBusNo.322anditwilltakeyoudirectlytotheclub.我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。IknowyouareanativespeakerofEnglishandanEnglishteacher,andI,onbehalfofourschool,sincerelyinviteyoutobepartofthecontest.既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。SinceyouaresoeagertoimproveyourEnglish,itwillprovetobeagreatchance.

（8）我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。I'msurethatyouwillenjoyyourselfthere.第三部分：提出建议套语：我建议I'dliketosuggestthat…MayIsuggestthat…？Inmyopinion…Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…Iamwritingtoadvise…IfIwereyou,Iwould…第四部分：IfIwereyou,Iwould…第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复套语：1.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisa1.Ihopeway（有志者事竟成）.我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。2.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”（一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”）.我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。3.Bestwishes!（给你）最美好的祝愿!Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。5.Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwithyourstudies/work!我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。6.Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbesomehelpforyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。典例01（2017•北京卷）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括:你建议的线路你的理由；你的祝愿。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,Yours,LiHua【写作指导】试题分析：本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。【范文赏析】DearJim,I'mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou'recomingtoChina.OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,botharehighlyrecommended.Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtze,thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization.YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.That'swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.Hopeyou'llhaveagoodtimeinChina.Yours,LiHua典例02学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。【写作指导】这篇书面表达属于提纲类范畴，这篇作文要求就校英语报改版是事情给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由，根据自己的建议选定栏目的设置并以邮件方式表达自己的观点。考生在写作过程中要确定切题且符合英语写作逻辑的篇章结构。确立邮件文体之后，要弄清要点，围绕要点展开，条理要清晰，理由要充分，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，文章尽量简洁，在文章中尽可能多地使用高大上的词汇，遵循短语优先原则在配以特殊句型和复合句的应用，让文章更上档次。【范文赏析】DearEditor,I'velearnedthatourEnglishPostisbeingreformedandoneofthethreecolumnsistobe

replacedbyanewone.I'mwritingthise-mailtosharewithyoumyopinions.Needlesstosay,thecolumnswilldefinitelybedesignedaccordingtostudents'interestandhavepositiveeffectsontheirstudyandlife.Comparedtotheentertainment,Iholdtheviewthatthevalueofthecolumnsconcerninghealthandcultureismoreimportant.Themainfactoristhatitisofgreatsignificancetokeephealthywhilelossofhealthmeanskissinggoodbyetolife.Consequently,moreknowledgeofhowtokeepfitcanimprovethequalityoflife.Inaddition,theprogressinacquiringculturescontributestobroadeningone'shorizons,whichinturnisbeneficialtoone'sstudyandtheestablishmentofphilosophyoflife.Furthermore,thecareerplanningshouldbetakenintoaccountintheschoolEnglishPost.Ontheonehand,itcoversone'scareerdevelopmentagreatdeal.Ontheotherhand,itmakesagreatdifferencetoone'scareersuccessinthefuture.Whathasbeenmentionedaboveismypersonalideas.HereIaminthehopethatmyadvicewilladdabrillianttouchtotheimprovedversionofourschoolEnglishPost.Yourssincerely,ChengFei典例03为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了”HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：.1.2.3.提出建议并说明理由。词数120左右；信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：tempern.脾气，情绪HiWorried,I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.Yours,Jamie【写作指导】这是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求按照Worried写的求助信写一封回信，根据信中提到的困扰表示理解和安慰，提出建议并给出理由。所以考生在写作的时候，要围绕来信的问题一一给予解答。但是光翻译要点肯定不行，还要求考生自己拓展发挥，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句、倒装句等，让文章更上档次。也要注意人称、时态、语态和常见的语法问题，同时在列举建议和理由的时候要使用合适的连接词，如：First,Second,Besides,What'smore等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。【范文赏析】HiWorried,I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobewrong,soyoudon'thavetwoorrysomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.Herearethreeusefultips:First,talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriends,asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Andthird,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou'llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours,Jamie【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：agoodwayof的好方法，letout释放，getridof消除，carryon继续进行，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.这句话用了宾语从句，Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobewrong,soyoudon'thavetoworrysomuch.这句话用了表语从句和时间状语从句，Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.这句话用了不定式作表语和sothat引导的结果状语从句，talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel这句话用了定语从句。文章还使用了合适的连接词First,Second,Andthird使文章很连贯。典例04学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。匕写作指导】这篇书面表述属于提纲类范畴，这篇作文要求就較英语报改版是事19给狡报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括臥下內容：L你建仪去除的栏目及去除的理由‘Z你建议增加的栏目及増加的理由，根据自己的建议选定栏目的设蚤并获邮件方式表达自己的观点。考生在确立邮件文体之后，要弄清要点围绕要点展开，条理要清晰』理由要充分』关键的是在写作的过程中』要注意人称、时态、语态和常见的语法问题，文童尽量简洁，在文童中尽可能梦地使用高犬上的词汇，道循矩语优先原则，再配次特殊句型和真合句的应用，让文童更上档次。【范文赏析】DearEditor,I'velearnedthatourEnglishPostisbeingreformedandoneofthethreecolumnsistobereplacedbyanewone.I'mwritingthise-mailtosharewithyoumyopinions.Needlesstosay,thecolumnswilldefinitelybedesignedaccordingtostudents'interestandhavepositiveeffectsontheirstudyandlife.Comparedtotheentertainment,Iholdtheviewthatthevalueofthecolumnsconcerninghealthandcultureismoreimportant.Themainfactoristhatitisofgreatsignificancetokeephealthywhilelossofhealthmeanskissinggoodbyetolife.Consequently,moreknowledgeofhowtokeepfitcanimprovethequalityoflife.Inaddition,theprogressinacquiringculturescontributestobroadeningone'shorizons,whichinturnisbeneficialtoone'sstudyandtheestablishmentofphilosophyoflife.Furthermore,thecareerplanningshouldbetakenintoaccountintheschoolEnglishPost.Ontheonehand,itcoversone'scareerdevelopmentagreatdeal.Ontheotherhand,itmakesagreatdifferencetoone'scareersuccessinthefuture.Whathasbeenmentionedaboveismypersonalideas.HereIaminthehopethatmyadvicewilladdabrillianttouchtotheimprovedversionofourschoolEnglishPost.Yourssincerely,ChengFei【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：sharewith和分享，needlesstosay不必说，accordingto根据，havepositiveeffectson对有积极的影响，inturn反之，take…intoaccount将考虑在内，makesagreatdifferenceto对有很大的影响，inthehopethat希望，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：Comparedtotheentertainment,Iholdtheviewthatthevalueofthecolumnsconcerninghealthandcultureismoreimportant.这句话用了过去分词和同位语从句，Themainfactoristhatitisofgreatsignificancetokeephealthywhilelossofhealthmeanskissinggoodbyetolife.这句话用了表语从句和while表示对比的用法,theprogressinacquiringculturescontributestobroadeningone'shorizons,whichinturnisbeneficialtoone'sstudyandtheestablishmentofphilosophyoflife.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句，Whathasbeenmentionedaboveismypersonalideas.这句话用了主语从句。范文中还使用了Inaddition,Furthermore,Ontheonehand,Ontheotherhand这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。Writting1假定你是李华，你校在学生中征集意见，询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课堂(iPadclassrooms)。你支持开设iPad课堂；请给校长写一封建议信，要点如下：资源丰富；促进交流；利于环保；其他理由。词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯开头语已为你写好。DearHeadmaster,WehavebeenaskedaboutouropinionsonopeningiPadclassrooms.Yourssincerely,LiHua【范文】DearHeadmaster,WehavebeenaskedaboutouropinionsonopeningiPadclassrooms.Iaminfavorofthisplanforthefollowingreasons.Tobeginwith,everyonelearnsdifferently.StudentscancustomizetheiriPadwithmaterialsthatfittheirlevelandlearningstyle,andthustailorittodifferentneeds.Moreover,whenconnectedtotheInternet,studentscaninteractwithteachersandclassmatesaboutwhattheylearnmoreconveniently.Forthesakeofenvironmentalprotection,openingiPadclassroomsisagoodwaytosavetreesthatwehavebeencuttingdownforpaper.Mostimportantly.Ibelievestudentswilldeveloptheirinterestsinthesubjectsbyenjoyinganewwayoflearning.IhopeyouwouldtakemyideasintoconsiderationandwelookforwardtoattendinganiPaclass.Yourssincerely,LiHuaWriting2据报道，藏羚羊(Tibetanantelope)受非法捕杀而濒临灭绝，总数从1990年的100万只锐减到现在不足10万只。假设你是李华，现请用英文给中国野生动物保护协会CWCA(ChinaWildlifeConservationAssociation)的会长写一封建议信。内容应包括：•简述藏羚羊的现状；•陈述原因(取羊皮获利等)；•提出你的建议(加大宣传力度、增加资金、选派志愿者等)。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数（可根据内容需要适当增加细节）；词数100左右。DearPresident,I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstofurtherprotecttheTibetanantelope.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【范文】DearPresident,I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstofurtherprotecttheTibetanantelope.Asisoften

reported,toomanyTibetanantelopesarebeinghuntedandkilledillegallyfortheirfur.Bysellingthefur,theillegalhunterscanmakegreatprofits.Asaresult,thenumberoftheTibetanantelopesisdecreasingrapidlyfromabout1,000,000in1990tolessthan100,000atpresent.ofImmediatemeasuresmustbetakentoimprovethepresentsituation.First,theimportanceprotectingtheTibetanantelopesshouldbepromoted.Second,wouldyouprovidemoremoneyfortheconservationoftheTibetanantelopes?Lastbutnotleast,IsuggestthatsomevolunteersbesenttheretohelpprotecttheTibetanantelopes.ofThesearemysuggestionsandIhopetheycouldmeansomethingforabetterfutureoftheTibetanantelopes.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHuaWriting3你是张伟的好朋友John,张伟即将参加学校的英语朗诵比赛，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写封建议信。比赛之前：认真准备，