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专题七概要写作专题七概要写作概要写作实质上是对所给文章的简要概括。要求考生在阅读过程中,准确地把握文章大意,弄清不同体裁的文章内部之间的逻辑关系,提取文章要点和关键词语。英语概要写作的写作过程是建立在阅读原材料基础之上的,其写作过程要根据阅读时列出的提纲,清晰、准确、简洁地呈现原文的主旨。因此,概要写作的关键是:

1.读懂原文是关键在写概要之前,一定要对文章认真阅读,确保理解文章的主旨、文章的结构、各段的段意。在阅读文章的时候,要善于发现核心词和高频词。这些词汇是概要写作的基础和核心。概要写作实质上是对所给文章的简要概括。要求考生在阅读过程中,2.以自然段为概括的基础以自然段为基础概括会帮助我们不遗漏信息,也能帮助判断主要信息。当然,以自然段为基础概括并不是说一个自然段一定是一个要点。有时几个自然段说明一个要点。有时也有一个自然段包含数个要点。3.细节信息不需要过于详细细节性的信息如列举数字,举例,过渡句等信息不必一一列出。4.核心词不必替换核心词是文章的心脏,一般不宜换成其他词。2.以自然段为概括的基础以自然段为基础概括会帮助我们不遗漏信5.写作时句式多样化概要写作书面化程度比较高,因此可以酌情选择使用从句、非谓语等结构,但句子结构不可过长,也不要使用太过复杂的句子结构。6.使用多种句式转换如:主动被动的互换,反向转换(主语和宾语互换),从句和非谓语动词的转换等。5.写作时句式多样化概要写作书面化程度比较高,因此可以酌情选原题呈现(2018年11月·浙江高考)It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.原题呈现(2018年11月·浙江高考)There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon’tbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudon’tlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldn’tknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.There’snoexcusenottovisitNow,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.It’sachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecounselors(顾问),anditwon’tcostyouapenny!Youcanregisterforitsonlinecollegefairat.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircan’ttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyou’dliketoattend.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremaki写作指导►第一步审题1.审体裁:说明文2.审人称:第二人称3.审时态:一般现在时和一般将来时为主写作指导1.审体裁:说明文►第二步查找段落主题句和关键词,了解段落大意第一段:主题句为第一句:It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapply...关键词:visitcollegesbeforeyouapply,接下来的内容就是列举你要参观所申请的大学的各种理由。第二段:主题句为第一句:There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.关键词:visittheschoolsinyourlocalarea,接下来的内容就是解释你为什么要近水楼台先得月。►第二步查找段落主题句和关键词,了解段落大意第一段:主题句第三段:主题句为第一句:Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.关键词:findsometimetovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.接下来就是解释,如果不未雨绸缪,到真正报考的时候就会麻烦不断。第四段:主题句为第一句:Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.关键词:checkouttheonlinecollegefairs。本段主要讲述的是网上大学博览会也是一种了解大学从而帮你做出明智选择的有效工具。第三段:主题句为第一句:Ifcampusvisitsa►第三步草拟要点并连接紧紧围绕段落主题句和关键词进行要点提炼,然后把提炼后的要点进行汇总,最后再用适当的连接词加以连接,这样文章概要就完成了。►第四步检查誊写【名师点津】概要写作四项基本原则1.概要写作时,一定不要使用第一人称。2.概要写作时,一定不可加入自己的观点。3.概要写作时,一定不可对原文内容加以评论。4.概要写作时,一定不要引入与原文内容无关的信息。►第三步草拟要点并连接紧紧围绕段落主题句和关键词进行要点提【考场范文1】Itcanhelpyoumakearightdecisiontovisitthecollegethatyouaregoingtoattendbeforeyouapply.(要点1)Ifyouliveneartothecollege,youshouldfindachancetovisitittoreducemuchtroubleafterwards.(要点2)Ifyouhavenoenoughmoneyortimetogo,atleastyoushouldcommunicateonlinewiththosepeoplewhoarefamiliarwiththecollege.(要点3)【考场范文1】本概要写作对原文的内容进行了高度概括,并运用了三个复合句将文章浓缩成三个要点表达出来,从而形成了要点突出、中心明确、忠实原文的好文章

。语言上的最大特色就是高级词汇和句型的恰当使用,如高级语块communicatewith,befamiliarwith等;高级句型如要点1(it为形式主语,tovisit...为真正主语;that引导定语从句;before引导时间状语从句)。美中不足之处是两个if条件句略显表达单一,如果第二个if条件句用非谓语Havingno...来表达,语言会更优美。本概要写作对原文的内容进行了高度概括,并运用了三个复合句将文【考场范文2】Asasenioryearstudent,it’snecessarytovisitwould­-becollegeswhereyouareclosetobeforeattendingthemforseeingisbelieving.(要点1)Youshouldfindachanceforapersonalvisitevenatyourwaitingincaseyoufeeldisappointedafterwards.(要点2)Iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,youareadvisedtochatonlinewiththosepeoplewhoarefamiliarwiththecampusindetailforyourrightdecision.(要点3)【考场范文2】Asasenioryearstuden这篇概要写作的作者很好地理解了文章大意,将文章第一、二段整合并概括成一个要点、第三段概括成一个要点、第四段概括成一个要点,从而使得文章要点齐全、中心突出。在遣词造句方面,该范文也可圈可点,如:where引导定语从句、for引导并列复合句、incase引导目的状语从句、if引导条件状语从句,以及一些高级语块seeingisbelieving,apersonalvisit,indetail等的运用,不仅增强了文章的可读性,而且突显了作者高超的语言表达能力。美中不足之处是Iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible为原文原句,有照抄原文之嫌,如果转换成Withouttimeandmoney...,效果会更佳。这篇概要写作的作者很好地理解了文章大意,将文章第一、二段整合在概要写作中,哪些技能的运用可以为文章增色,从而成为文章亮点呢?下面收集整理了部分提高概要写作档次的各种微技能,请细细体会,熟记于心,多加运用,定会让你的文章脱颖而出。在概要写作中,哪些技能的运用可以为文章增色,从而成为文章亮点微技能一记叙文概要写作模板1.点明写作目的类:Thewritertellsus...(主题)byshowingusanexampleof...,who/which...(故事情节)2.作者经历类:Inthepassage,thewritermainlytellsushisexperienceofdoingsth,which...3.他人经历类:Thispassageismainlyaboutsb’sexperienceofdoingsth...微技能一记叙文概要写作模板1.点明写作目的类:Thewr微技能二说明文概要写作模板1.现象解释类:Thisarticlepointsoutthecommonphenomenon...(主题),which...(补充解释)2.利弊对比类:Thearticlecomparesthedisadvantages/benefitsofAandB./Thepassagediscussestheimpactofsth.Onthepositiveside...,butitmayalso...3.研究结论类:Thestudyrevealsthat.../Theresultshowsthat.../Itisconcludedthat...4.研究目的类:Thispaperisaimedat/covers/mainlydealswith.../Thearticlefocusesonthetopicof...5.推荐建议类:Theauthorsuggests/considersthat.../Suggestionsaremadefor...微技能二说明文概要写作模板1.现象解释类:Thisart微技能三议论文概要写作模板1.Thearticlegivestheviewthat...should/shouldn’t...(主题)...(补充论据)2.Thepassagehighlightstheimportanceofsth...3.Theauthorarguesthat...微技能三议论文概要写作模板1.Thearticlegi微技能四常用的改变原句的小技巧1.同义替换法Ididn’tcatchanyfishowingtothefactthatIwasnotpatient.→Ididn’tcatchanyfishbecauseIwasnotpatient.2.正反法Youwillfail.→Youwillnot

succeed.3.词性转换法Patienceisveryimportant.→Patienceisof

great

importance.微技能四常用的改变原句的小技巧Ididn’tcatch4.句式变换法(1)语态变换Parentsshouldgivechildrenmorepraise.→Childrenshouldbe

givenmorepraise.(2)简单句变复合句Childrenshouldbeencouragedmore.Thiswillhelpthemlearnfaster.→Childrenshouldbeencouragedmore,which

will

help

them

learn

faster.Childrenaregivenmorepraise.Theywillachievemoresuccess.→When

given

more

praise,childrenwillachievemoresuccess.4.句式变换法(1)语态变换5.连词衔接法注意使用一些短而精的连词,如but,and,so,while,however,then,thus,yet,for,therefore,including,insteadof等。Weshouldencouragestudents.Weshouldnotscoldthem.→Weshouldencouragestudentsinstead

of

scolding

them.6.词序改变法Thesecretofsuccesswaspatience.→Patiencewasthesecretofsuccess.5.连词衔接法注意使用一些短而精的连词,如but,and,s7.细节省略法Don’talwaysscoldandgivelotsofpraiseinstead.→Don’tscoldandgivepraiseinstead.8.句意理解法ShoppingontheInternetisbecomingincreasinglypopular.→MoreandmorepeoplepreferInternetshopping.7.细节省略法Don’talwaysscoldand微技能五灵活使用连词,文章更连贯1.顺接、递进:firstly/secondly/thirdly,besides,inaddition,what’smore,what’sworse,what’smoreimportant,moreover,also,finally,lastbutnotleast2.转折:but,however,nevertheless,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,although,while3.原因:because,becauseof,since,as,for,nowthat,thanksto,dueto4.结果:so,therefore,asaresult,sothat,then,so...that,such...that5.总结:tosumup,toconclude,inconclusion,insummary,inaword,ingeneral,inshort,aboveall,afterall,generallyspeaking微技能五灵活使用连词,文章更连贯1.顺接、递进:first微技能六概要写作常用词语1.提出问题(1)现象:moreandmore(anincreasingnumberof)people,someargue(believe)that,thereexist,phenomenon(issue,appearance),occur(happen),besetup(beestablished,befounded),consistof(2)影响:playanimportantrolein,haveapositiveeffecton,domuchgoodto,doharm/damageto(harmfuleffects),atrisk(indangerof),influence,havetrouble(difficulty)doing(3)变化:start,setup,develop,change,grow(become),vary,different,substitute...for,improve(4)作用:bemeant(used,intended)to,function(work)well,isapplied(application)(5)举例:forexample,suchas,andsoon,some...,some...微技能六概要写作常用词语(1)现象:moreandmo2.分析问题(1)原因:as,becauseof(dueto),theproblemsarecausedby,reasonswhy,accountfor,resultfrom,beconnected(associated)with(2)结果:asaresult,leadto(resultin,contributeto),islikelytocause,therefore,consequence2.分析问题(1)原因:as,becauseof(due3.解决问题(1)提倡:makesomesuggestions,should(aresupposedto),itisvital/important/necessaryto,control,focuson,callonthepublicto...,advocatedoing,dealwith(2)避免:donot,however,itisnotagoodidea(notadvisable)to,paymuchattentionto,shouldbebanned(3)目的:tobebetterrecognized,todrawone’sattention,toreducetheproblemscausedby,toproducemoregoods(4)想法:believethat,pointoutthat,involve,stillinsistthat,beawareoftheimportance3.解决问题(1)提倡:makesomesuggesti微技能七概要写作增分的同义词语替换概要写作不排斥用原文的某些词句,但不要照搬原文的句子,如果不能完全用自己的话语表达,至少对原文句子做一些同义词替换。1.认为,断言:think,believe,argue,hold,state,claim,suppose,assume,personally,asforme,asfarasIamconcerned,formypart2.许多:alargenumberof,alargeamountof,aconsiderablenumberof,ahostof,dozensof,scoresof,amajorityof(大部分的),aminorityof(小部分的)3.如今,目前:nowadays,atpresent,recently,currently,inrecentdecades4.越来越:increasing,growing微技能七概要写作增分的同义词语替换概要写作不排斥用原文的某5.重要,必要,关键,根本,意义重大:important,necessary,essential,vital,influential,principal,fundamental,elementary,significant,key,leading,major6.关注、重视、强调、优先考虑、把……放首要位置:highlight,payattentionto,attract,raise...concern,callfor...concern,attachimportanceto,givepriorityto,layemphasis/stresson7.不予重视、忽视、低估:overlook,ignore,neglect,underestimate,secondaryinimportance8.赞成、支持:applaud,favor,advocate,infavorof,besidewith,inagreementwith,gofor5.重要,必要,关键,根本,意义重大:important,n9.反对:oppose,protest,frown(皱眉),objectto,goagainst,disagreewith,opponent(反对者)10.常常:often,frequently,always11.热点问题、关注的问题:aheatedtopic,aburningproblem,amatterofconcern,asubjectoffiercedebate12.归因于,源自:attributeto,resultfrom,beassociatedwith,arisefrom,derivefrom,growfrom,asourceof13.因为,由于:dueto,thanksto,owingto,becauseof,beresponsiblefor14.导致,造成:contributeto,leadto,resultin,bringabout,create,giveriseto,cause,generate,promote9.反对:oppose,protest,frown(皱眉),15.往往,表趋势:tendto,beinclinedto,haveatendencyto16.可能:may,perhaps,belikelyto,possibly,itisverylikelythat...,itispredictedthat...(预测)17.发生,出现,产生:takeplace,occur,arise,bringabout,create,cause,emerge,turnout,workout18.证明,证实:confirm,prove,justify,verify19.偶尔:occasionally,sometimes,onceinawhile,onsomeoccasions20.有……影响:affect,haveaneffect/impact/influenceon21.不管,尽管:nomatter...,regardlessof,despite,inspiteof22.塑造,培养:cultivate,develop,foster,shape,build15.往往,表趋势:tendto,beinclined23.增强:promote,strengthen,enhance,intensify,amplify24.接触到:expose...to,have/getaccessto25.明显,突出:striking,noticeable,remarkable,obvious,apparent,evident,significant26.优点,优势:strength,advantage,benefit,positive27.缺点,弱势:fault,flaw,weakness,downside,drawback,disadvantage,negative28.如果,假设:if,imaginethat,providedthat,supposethat,onconditionthat29.破坏,损害,有害:destroy,damage,spoil,ruin,undermine,endanger,doharmto23.增强:promote,strengthen,enhan30.阻碍,妨碍:block,keep...from,obstacleto,barrierto31.合理的,可行的,恰当的:reasonable,sensible,appropriate,proper,sound32.有益的,有帮助的:beneficial,helpful,favorable33.伴随:alongwith,togetherwith,beaccompaniedby34.关于:about,intermsof,withregardsto,asto35.呈现,展现,描述:show,display,illustrate,exhibit,describe,demonstrate,pointtothefactthat...36.很大地,非常地(表示程度):significantly,considerably,surprisingly,greatly,highly,hugely,largely,entirely,badly30.阻碍,妨碍:block,keep...from,ob专题七-概要写作课件专题七概要写作专题七概要写作概要写作实质上是对所给文章的简要概括。要求考生在阅读过程中,准确地把握文章大意,弄清不同体裁的文章内部之间的逻辑关系,提取文章要点和关键词语。英语概要写作的写作过程是建立在阅读原材料基础之上的,其写作过程要根据阅读时列出的提纲,清晰、准确、简洁地呈现原文的主旨。因此,概要写作的关键是:

1.读懂原文是关键在写概要之前,一定要对文章认真阅读,确保理解文章的主旨、文章的结构、各段的段意。在阅读文章的时候,要善于发现核心词和高频词。这些词汇是概要写作的基础和核心。概要写作实质上是对所给文章的简要概括。要求考生在阅读过程中,2.以自然段为概括的基础以自然段为基础概括会帮助我们不遗漏信息,也能帮助判断主要信息。当然,以自然段为基础概括并不是说一个自然段一定是一个要点。有时几个自然段说明一个要点。有时也有一个自然段包含数个要点。3.细节信息不需要过于详细细节性的信息如列举数字,举例,过渡句等信息不必一一列出。4.核心词不必替换核心词是文章的心脏,一般不宜换成其他词。2.以自然段为概括的基础以自然段为基础概括会帮助我们不遗漏信5.写作时句式多样化概要写作书面化程度比较高,因此可以酌情选择使用从句、非谓语等结构,但句子结构不可过长,也不要使用太过复杂的句子结构。6.使用多种句式转换如:主动被动的互换,反向转换(主语和宾语互换),从句和非谓语动词的转换等。5.写作时句式多样化概要写作书面化程度比较高,因此可以酌情选原题呈现(2018年11月·浙江高考)It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.原题呈现(2018年11月·浙江高考)There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon’tbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudon’tlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldn’tknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.There’snoexcusenottovisitNow,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.It’sachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecounselors(顾问),anditwon’tcostyouapenny!Youcanregisterforitsonlinecollegefairat.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircan’ttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyou’dliketoattend.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremaki写作指导►第一步审题1.审体裁:说明文2.审人称:第二人称3.审时态:一般现在时和一般将来时为主写作指导1.审体裁:说明文►第二步查找段落主题句和关键词,了解段落大意第一段:主题句为第一句:It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapply...关键词:visitcollegesbeforeyouapply,接下来的内容就是列举你要参观所申请的大学的各种理由。第二段:主题句为第一句:There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.关键词:visittheschoolsinyourlocalarea,接下来的内容就是解释你为什么要近水楼台先得月。►第二步查找段落主题句和关键词,了解段落大意第一段:主题句第三段:主题句为第一句:Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.关键词:findsometimetovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.接下来就是解释,如果不未雨绸缪,到真正报考的时候就会麻烦不断。第四段:主题句为第一句:Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.关键词:checkouttheonlinecollegefairs。本段主要讲述的是网上大学博览会也是一种了解大学从而帮你做出明智选择的有效工具。第三段:主题句为第一句:Ifcampusvisitsa►第三步草拟要点并连接紧紧围绕段落主题句和关键词进行要点提炼,然后把提炼后的要点进行汇总,最后再用适当的连接词加以连接,这样文章概要就完成了。►第四步检查誊写【名师点津】概要写作四项基本原则1.概要写作时,一定不要使用第一人称。2.概要写作时,一定不可加入自己的观点。3.概要写作时,一定不可对原文内容加以评论。4.概要写作时,一定不要引入与原文内容无关的信息。►第三步草拟要点并连接紧紧围绕段落主题句和关键词进行要点提【考场范文1】Itcanhelpyoumakearightdecisiontovisitthecollegethatyouaregoingtoattendbeforeyouapply.(要点1)Ifyouliveneartothecollege,youshouldfindachancetovisitittoreducemuchtroubleafterwards.(要点2)Ifyouhavenoenoughmoneyortimetogo,atleastyoushouldcommunicateonlinewiththosepeoplewhoarefamiliarwiththecollege.(要点3)【考场范文1】本概要写作对原文的内容进行了高度概括,并运用了三个复合句将文章浓缩成三个要点表达出来,从而形成了要点突出、中心明确、忠实原文的好文章

。语言上的最大特色就是高级词汇和句型的恰当使用,如高级语块communicatewith,befamiliarwith等;高级句型如要点1(it为形式主语,tovisit...为真正主语;that引导定语从句;before引导时间状语从句)。美中不足之处是两个if条件句略显表达单一,如果第二个if条件句用非谓语Havingno...来表达,语言会更优美。本概要写作对原文的内容进行了高度概括,并运用了三个复合句将文【考场范文2】Asasenioryearstudent,it’snecessarytovisitwould­-becollegeswhereyouareclosetobeforeattendingthemforseeingisbelieving.(要点1)Youshouldfindachanceforapersonalvisitevenatyourwaitingincaseyoufeeldisappointedafterwards.(要点2)Iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,youareadvisedtochatonlinewiththosepeoplewhoarefamiliarwiththecampusindetailforyourrightdecision.(要点3)【考场范文2】Asasenioryearstuden这篇概要写作的作者很好地理解了文章大意,将文章第一、二段整合并概括成一个要点、第三段概括成一个要点、第四段概括成一个要点,从而使得文章要点齐全、中心突出。在遣词造句方面,该范文也可圈可点,如:where引导定语从句、for引导并列复合句、incase引导目的状语从句、if引导条件状语从句,以及一些高级语块seeingisbelieving,apersonalvisit,indetail等的运用,不仅增强了文章的可读性,而且突显了作者高超的语言表达能力。美中不足之处是Iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible为原文原句,有照抄原文之嫌,如果转换成Withouttimeandmoney...,效果会更佳。这篇概要写作的作者很好地理解了文章大意,将文章第一、二段整合在概要写作中,哪些技能的运用可以为文章增色,从而成为文章亮点呢?下面收集整理了部分提高概要写作档次的各种微技能,请细细体会,熟记于心,多加运用,定会让你的文章脱颖而出。在概要写作中,哪些技能的运用可以为文章增色,从而成为文章亮点微技能一记叙文概要写作模板1.点明写作目的类:Thewritertellsus...(主题)byshowingusanexampleof...,who/which...(故事情节)2.作者经历类:Inthepassage,thewritermainlytellsushisexperienceofdoingsth,which...3.他人经历类:Thispassageismainlyaboutsb’sexperienceofdoingsth...微技能一记叙文概要写作模板1.点明写作目的类:Thewr微技能二说明文概要写作模板1.现象解释类:Thisarticlepointsoutthecommonphenomenon...(主题),which...(补充解释)2.利弊对比类:Thearticlecomparesthedisadvantages/benefitsofAandB./Thepassagediscussestheimpactofsth.Onthepositiveside...,butitmayalso...3.研究结论类:Thestudyrevealsthat.../Theresultshowsthat.../Itisconcludedthat...4.研究目的类:Thispaperisaimedat/covers/mainlydealswith.../Thearticlefocusesonthetopicof...5.推荐建议类:Theauthorsuggests/considersthat.../Suggestionsaremadefor...微技能二说明文概要写作模板1.现象解释类:Thisart微技能三议论文概要写作模板1.Thearticlegivestheviewthat...should/shouldn’t...(主题)...(补充论据)2.Thepassagehighlightstheimportanceofsth...3.Theauthorarguesthat...微技能三议论文概要写作模板1.Thearticlegi微技能四常用的改变原句的小技巧1.同义替换法Ididn’tcatchanyfishowingtothefactthatIwasnotpatient.→Ididn’tcatchanyfishbecauseIwasnotpatient.2.正反法Youwillfail.→Youwillnot

succeed.3.词性转换法Patienceisveryimportant.→Patienceisof

great

importance.微技能四常用的改变原句的小技巧Ididn’tcatch4.句式变换法(1)语态变换Parentsshouldgivechildrenmorepraise.→Childrenshouldbe

givenmorepraise.(2)简单句变复合句Childrenshouldbeencouragedmore.Thiswillhelpthemlearnfaster.→Childrenshouldbeencouragedmore,which

will

help

them

learn

faster.Childrenaregivenmorepraise.Theywillachievemoresuccess.→When

given

more

praise,childrenwillachievemoresuccess.4.句式变换法(1)语态变换5.连词衔接法注意使用一些短而精的连词,如but,and,so,while,however,then,thus,yet,for,therefore,including,insteadof等。Weshouldencouragestudents.Weshouldnotscoldthem.→Weshouldencouragestudentsinstead

of

scolding

them.6.词序改变法Thesecretofsuccesswaspatience.→Patiencewasthesecretofsuccess.5.连词衔接法注意使用一些短而精的连词,如but,and,s7.细节省略法Don’talwaysscoldandgivelotsofpraiseinstead.→Don’tscoldandgivepraiseinstead.8.句意理解法ShoppingontheInternetisbecomingincreasinglypopular.→MoreandmorepeoplepreferInternetshopping.7.细节省略法Don’talwaysscoldand微技能五灵活使用连词,文章更连贯1.顺接、递进:firstly/secondly/thirdly,besides,inaddition,what’smore,what’sworse,what’smoreimportant,moreover,also,finally,lastbutnotleast2.转折:but,however,nevertheless,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,although,while3.原因:because,becauseof,since,as,for,nowthat,thanksto,dueto4.结果:so,therefore,asaresult,sothat,then,so...that,such...that5.总结:tosumup,toconclude,inconclusion,insummary,inaword,ingeneral,inshort,aboveall,afterall,generallyspeaking微技能五灵活使用连词,文章更连贯1.顺接、递进:first微技能六概要写作常用词语1.提出问题(1)现象:moreandmore(anincreasingnumberof)people,someargue(believe)that,thereexist,phenomenon(issue,appearance),occur(happen),besetup(beestablished,befounded),consistof(2)影响:playanimportantrolein,haveapositiveeffecton,domuchgoodto,doharm/damageto(harmfuleffects),atrisk(indangerof),influence,havetrouble(difficulty)doing(3)变化:start,setup,develop,change,grow(become),vary,different,substitute...for,improve(4)作用:bemeant(used,intended)to,function(work)well,isapplied(application)(5)举例:forexample,suchas,andsoon,some...,some...微技能六概要写作常用词语(1)现象:moreandmo2.分析问题(1)原因:as,becauseof(dueto),theproblemsarecausedby,reasonswhy,accountfor,resultfrom,beconnected(associated)with(2)结果:asaresult,leadto(resultin,contributeto),islikelytocause,therefore,consequence2.分析问题(1)原因:as,becauseof(due3.解决问题(1)提倡:makesomesuggestions,should(aresupposedto),itisvital/important/necessaryto,control,focuson,callonthepublicto...,advocatedoing,dealwith(2)避免:donot,however,itisnotagoodidea(notadvisable)to,paymuchattentionto,shouldbebanned(3)目的:tobebetterrecognized,todrawone’sattention,toreducetheproblemscausedby,toproducemoregoods(4)想法:believethat,pointoutthat,involve,stillinsistthat,beawareoftheimportance3.解决问题(1)提倡:makesomesuggesti微技能七概要写作增分的同义词语替换概要写作不排斥用原文的某些词句,但不要照搬原文的句子,如果不能完全用自己的话语表达,至少对原文句子做一些同义词替换。1.认为,断言:think,believe,argue,hold,state,claim,suppose,assume,personally,asforme,asfarasIamconcerned,formypart2.许多:alargenumberof,alargeamountof,aconsiderablenumberof,ahostof,dozensof,scoresof,amajorityof(大部分的),aminorityof(小部分的)3.如今,目前:nowadays,atpresent,recently,currently,inrecentdecades4.越来越:increasing,growing微技能七概要写作增分的同义词语替换概要写作不排斥用原文的某5.重要,必要,关键,根本,意义重大:important,necessary,essential,vital,influential,principal,fundamental,elementary,

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