人教新教材必修一Unit2Travelling-around-Reading-for-Writing公开课优质获奖课件

ReadingforWritingUnit2TravellingAroundReadingforWritingUnit2Trav1LeadinHowtowritetoyourfriendanimpressivetravelplan?Whatkindsofaspectsshouldbeincluded?LeadinHowtowritetoyourfr2Paragraph1:mainpurposeforthetrip________________________________________________Paragraph2:otherplansforthetrip________________________________________________

___________________________________________ReadtodiscoverdetailsReadRichard’semailtohisfriendandthebrochurethathefoundsilentlyandsolvethetaskbelow.gotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmygototheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,theXi'anCityWall,andafewotherfamoussightsParagraph1:mainpurposefor3Paragraph3:transport ________________________________________________ ___________________________________________Paragraph4:finalthoughts ________________________________ReadtodiscoverdetailsReadRichard’semailtohisfriendandthebrochurethathefoundsilentlyandsolvethetaskbelow.takethetrain,leaventhedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybeginsandarriveat9:30a.m.writeagainsoonandsendphotos.Paragraph3:transportReadto4Readtounderlinethewordsandphrasesusedtoexpressemotionintheemail.Thencompletethesentencesbelow.Itisamazingsight.Itis________.Iamamazed.It’salmostunbelievable.Ican’t_________.It’shard__________.It’san___________story.amazingbelieveittobelieveunbelievableReadtounderlinethewordsan5WriteatravelplanPretendyouareXiaoLiandreplytoRichard’semail.WriteatravelplanPretendyou6范文：DearRichard，Iamprettythrilledtohavereceivedyourletter,knowingthatyouaretouringXian,whichisanamazingchoice.I'mwritingtoyouaboutmytravellingplanforthecomingvacation.范文：7I,togetherwithmyparentsintendtogotoShandongProvincebecauseItherearelotsofstrikingscenicspotstoexplorethere.Ifwego,wewillhaveanactiveholidayclimbingMountTai.Besides,wecanexplorefamouslakesandspringsinJi’nan.Moreover,wecanalsovisitQufu,whereConfuciuswasburied.Ithinkwewillenjoyourstaythere.weplantotravel5daysand4nights.Itcostsonly1300yuanperperson.Itsoundsgreat,doesn’tit?Lookingforwardtoyourcomingandreceivingyourpictures.Love,XiaoLiI,togetherwithmyparentsin8旅游计划是一种常见的应用文写作。旅游可分为观光游、文化游、美食游及探险游等不同类型，因此旅游计划也要根据不同的旅游目的进行设计。常规的旅游计划需要明确以下几个方面的问题:写法指导旅游计划是一种常见的应用文写作。旅游可分为观9TravelplanWhenwillyouleavefor？Whereisyourdestination?Howwillyougetthere?Whatwillyoudothere?Howlongwillyouthere?Isthereaclearpurposeforthetrip?Travelplan10为了提升旅行计划的层级，还需注意以下几个方面的问题:每段是否有明确清晰的主题;用一般现在时代替一般将来时:用更高级的形容词词汇。例如:表达“好”时，不要总用“nice”,我们还可以用“smart,clean,excellent,exciting,beautiful,wonderful,clever,famous,grand”等表达更具有指向性的同汇:用更高级的动词词汇。比如:我们可以用“seemstand,lie,get,stay,remain,look,sound,become,keep,grow“等代替“be”;所有“专有名词”要大写:文章最后要有适当的总结性语言。为了提升旅行计划的层级，还需注意以下几个方面的问题:11[常用短语]placeofinterest名胜古迹touristattractions旅游景点historicsites历史遗迹must-seeattractions必看景点goonaholiday/takeavacation去度假checkin登记人住checkout结账退房学[常用短语]学12[常用短语]enjoythesceneryofnature欣赏自然美景gosightseeing观光feellikedoingsth.想要做某事bepreparedtodosth,准备做某事mean/intend/plantodosth.打算/计划做某事decide/bedeterminedtodosth.决定做某事lookforwardtodoingsth,盼望做某事long/hope/wish/wanttodosth,渴望/希望/想做某事wishsb.apleasantjourney祝某人旅途愉快学[常用短语]学13[常用句式]Whenwearetiredfromwork,whynotstopandgoouttoenjoy…当我们因工作而感到疲惫时，为什么不走出……AsfarasI’mconcerned,thetripisverymeaningful.据我所知，该旅行十分有意义。Ontheonehand,wecan...Ontheotherhand,itwillhelpus…一方面，我们可以……另一方面，它可以帮助我们……Theplacewherewe’ll...is…我们……地方超……[常用句式]14巩固提升假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike想在暑假到中国旅游，请你为他做一个旅行计划,内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.活动内容。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。巩固提升假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike想在暑假到中国旅游15DearMike,I’mdelightedtoreceiveyourletter,askingforhelptotravelinLookingforwardtoyourcoming!Yours,LiHua

DearMike,16【参考范文】DearMike,I’mdelightedtoreceiveyourletter,askingforhelptotravelinBeijing.Inmyopinion,theGreatWallisthefirstchoiceforyou,whichisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheWorld.IfyoucometoBeijingwithoutclimbingtheGreatWall,it’sjustlikegoingtoPariswithoutvisitingtheEiffelTower.【参考范文】DearMike,17Besidesthis,you'dbetterenjoyChineseoperaandChinesefolkmusic,whichwillsurelyhelpyouunderstandChineseculturemoredeeply.Theseactivitiestakeabouttwodays.Ifyouneedmorehelp,Icanshowyouaroundotherplacesofinterest.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming!Yours,LiHua【参考范文】Besidesthis,you'dbetterenj18【名师点评】本文格式准确、要点齐全、结构完整、层次清晰。尤其是关联词语的运用恰到好处，使整个语篇结构紧凑。叙述具体、语言得当，逻辑通顺，具有很强的感染力。【名师点评】19高级词汇delightedchoiceenjoysurelydeeply.精彩短语和关联词I’mdelightedInmyopinionthefirstchoiceforyouBesidesthishelpyouunderstandChineseculturemoredeeplyshowyouaroundotherplacesofinterestlookingforwardto增分句型I’mdelightedtoreceiveyourletter,askingforhelptotravelinBeijing.Inmyopinion,theGreatWallisthefirstchoiceforyou,whichisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheWorld.【词句品鉴】高级词汇delightedchoice20Thankyou!Thankyou!21ReadingforWritingUnit2TravellingAroundReadingforWritingUnit2Trav22LeadinHowtowritetoyourfriendanimpressivetravelplan?Whatkindsofaspectsshouldbeincluded?LeadinHowtowritetoyourfr23Paragraph1:mainpurposeforthetrip________________________________________________Paragraph2:otherplansforthetrip________________________________________________

___________________________________________ReadtodiscoverdetailsReadRichard’semailtohisfriendandthebrochurethathefoundsilentlyandsolvethetaskbelow.gotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmygototheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,theXi'anCityWall,andafewotherfamoussightsParagraph1:mainpurposefor24Paragraph3:transport ________________________________________________ ___________________________________________Paragraph4:finalthoughts ________________________________ReadtodiscoverdetailsReadRichard’semailtohisfriendandthebrochurethathefoundsilentlyandsolvethetaskbelow.takethetrain,leaventhedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybeginsandarriveat9:30a.m.writeagainsoonandsendphotos.Paragraph3:transportReadto25Readtounderlinethewordsandphrasesusedtoexpressemotionintheemail.Thencompletethesentencesbelow.Itisamazingsight.Itis________.Iamamazed.It’salmostunbelievable.Ican’t_________.It’shard__________.It’san___________story.amazingbelieveittobelieveunbelievableReadtounderlinethewordsan26WriteatravelplanPretendyouareXiaoLiandreplytoRichard’semail.WriteatravelplanPretendyou27范文：DearRichard，Iamprettythrilledtohavereceivedyourletter,knowingthatyouaretouringXian,whichisanamazingchoice.I'mwritingtoyouaboutmytravellingplanforthecomingvacation.范文：28I,togetherwithmyparentsintendtogotoShandongProvincebecauseItherearelotsofstrikingscenicspotstoexplorethere.Ifwego,wewillhaveanactiveholidayclimbingMountTai.Besides,wecanexplorefamouslakesandspringsinJi’nan.Moreover,wecanalsovisitQufu,whereConfuciuswasburied.Ithinkwewillenjoyourstaythere.weplantotravel5daysand4nights.Itcostsonly1300yuanperperson.Itsoundsgreat,doesn’tit?Lookingforwardtoyourcomingandreceivingyourpictures.Love,XiaoLiI,togetherwithmyparentsin29旅游计划是一种常见的应用文写作。旅游可分为观光游、文化游、美食游及探险游等不同类型，因此旅游计划也要根据不同的旅游目的进行设计。常规的旅游计划需要明确以下几个方面的问题:写法指导旅游计划是一种常见的应用文写作。旅游可分为观30TravelplanWhenwillyouleavefor？Whereisyourdestination?Howwillyougetthere?Whatwillyoudothere?Howlongwillyouthere?Isthereaclearpurposeforthetrip?Travelplan31为了提升旅行计划的层级，还需注意以下几个方面的问题:每段是否有明确清晰的主题;用一般现在时代替一般将来时:用更高级的形容词词汇。例如:表达“好”时，不要总用“nice”,我们还可以用“smart,clean,excellent,exciting,beautiful,wonderful,clever,famous,grand”等表达更具有指向性的同汇:用更高级的动词词汇。比如:我们可以用“seemstand,lie,get,stay,remain,look,sound,become,keep,grow“等代替“be”;所有“专有名词”要大写:文章最后要有适当的总结性语言。为了提升旅行计划的层级，还需注意以下几个方面的问题:32[常用短语]placeofinterest名胜古迹touristattractions旅游景点historicsites历史遗迹must-seeattractions必看景点goonaholiday/takeavacation去度假checkin登记人住checkout结账退房学[常用短语]学33[常用短语]enjoythesceneryofnature欣赏自然美景gosightseeing观光feellikedoingsth.想要做某事bepreparedtodosth,准备做某事mean/intend/plantodosth.打算/计划做某事decide/bedeterminedtodosth.决定做某事lookforwardtodoingsth,盼望做某事long/hope/wish/wanttodosth,渴望/希望/想做某事wishsb.apleasantjourney祝某人旅途愉快学[常用短语]学34[常用句式]Whenwearetiredfromwork,whynotstopandgoouttoenjoy…当我们因工作而感到疲惫时，为什么不走出……AsfarasI’mconcerned,thetripisverymeaningful.据我所知，该旅行十分有意义。Ontheonehand,wecan...Ontheotherhand,itwillhelpus…一方面，我们可以……另一方面，它可以帮助我们……Theplacewherewe’ll...is…我们……地方超……[常用句式]35巩固提升假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike想在暑假到中国旅游，请你为他做一个旅行计划,内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.活动内容。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。巩固提升假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike想在暑假到中国旅游36DearMike,I’mdelightedtoreceiveyourletter,askingforhelptotravelinLookingforwardtoyourcoming!Yours,LiHua

DearMike,37【参考范文】DearMike,I’mdelightedtoreceiveyourletter,askingforhelptotravelinBeijing.Inmyopinion,theGreatWallisthefirstchoiceforyou,whichisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheWor