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题型分类大全搞定这一步，稳稳上6.5分！Two

Questions=Report原因分析+解决方案原因分析+有何影响原因分析+随机(鬼才知道会问什么)造成的问题+解决方案---特别注意你有可能遇到其中任何一种组合往年很多人不认识自己的邻居。(原因+解决)全世界的城市越来越相似。(原因+影响)爸妈在家扮演的角色有很大不同。(原因+会不会有改变)人类

越来越长。(导致的问题+解决)Two

Questions=Report注意区分这两个问题What

do

you

think

are

the

causes?What

problems

does

it

cause?report类型的段(原因+解决方案版本)1.直接改写原题，不需要背景引出(扩充或者缩减原题)+承上启下(提前总结原因/空话过渡)2.第一个原因分析。(idea--support)3.In

addition,第二个原因分析。(idea--support)4.~~~(强调问题很严重/强调做某事很重要)~~~~so

measures

should

betaken

to…….解决方案1+结果解决方案2+结果5.

总结(重复原因/解决方案)用来写原因的topic

sentences1.

The reason

for

the

shortage

of

younger

teachers

is

that

a

teachingjob

pays

poorly.2.

The reason

why

bicycle

riding

is

no

longer

popular

is

that

peopletoday

have

mu ore

choices

for

transportation.3.

In

addition,

the

increase

in

the

amount

of

rubbish

is

also

a

result

ofpeople

using

more

disposable

products.4.

It

is

true

that

poor

health

oft eral

population

is

associatedwithpeople’s

bad

eating

habits.写原因段的逻辑事实+过程+结果(这是最应该学会也是最自然的解释原因方式)这里的事实很有可能是某方面的年代变化；这里的过程是根据前面的事实来展开，包括：对比，影响，解释，举例；这里的结果是回应题目中

现象；写原因段的逻辑1).人们收入普遍增加—所以食物变得简单容易--每顿饭会准备超过自己真实需求的食物，为了满足

的口味和营养--很多吃不完的食物被当做

处理2).城市人口不断增加–选择建造高楼来满足对空间的需求–传统的建筑逐渐减少，城市外

起来越来越相似3).城市不断扩张–目的地之间的距离增加–骑车累死你写原因段的逻辑4).

环保的过程比较麻烦

–

比如学习

分类和为了减少碳排放而不开车–

面对选择的时候，人们自然偏向更便利的而不是环保的生活方式5).现在养孩子成本极高–高质量的食物和玩具，医疗，教育，旅行–年轻人无法负担这样的高质量生活–决定等到经济能力提高之后再生孩子孩子学校表现糟糕的原因Thereason

for

students’

poor

behavior

is

that

the

birthrate

is

decreasing

sothat

families

are ing

smaller

withfewer

children.

These

children

are

often

spoilt.

Theyareallowed

to

have

whatever

they

wantregardless

of

price

andto

behave

as

they

please.

This

means

that

the

children

growup

without

consideration

for

others.

When

they

begin

to

goto

school,

theyhavenot

learnt

to

respect

others

and

obeyrules.不认识邻居的原因In

addition,

people

knowing

little

about

their

neighbours

isbecause

technology

has

greatly

changed

the

way

theyentertain

and

socialize.

Before

the

Internet,

people

activelyparticipated

in

community

activities

to

havefun

or

build

theirsocial

networks.

Today,

however,

neighbours

barely

meet

andtalk

with

each

other,

as

they

aremore

addicted

to

onlinesharing

of

gossips

and

pictures.不去一些地方旅游的原因The

danger

and

wilderness

of

some

places

set

up

a

barrier

forordinary

people,

which

is

the

reason

why

TV

programs

likeMan

vs

Wild

enjoy

a

great

popularity.

There

aresome

destinations

where

tourists

may

be

kidnapped

or

robbed.There

are

also

places

where

trekkers

are

highly

vulnerable

todiseases,

like

malaria

or

bird

flu.分析原因的原则1.不能只局限；2.通过年代对比找到原因(至关重要)；3.必须从事实出发去写原因；到底都有哪些年代变化？1.

现代人-忙/钱多/懒/不动2.

现代

(

关注negative

reports);3.现代工作(变得越来越knowledge-based)；4.现代家庭(孩子减少，溺爱孩子);5.现代教育(更专注孩子的all-round

development);6.现代城市(越来越multicultural/ethnically-mixed/racially-mixed)；解决方案--切实可行1.

---至关重要(收税/花钱/颁布法律)；1).

The ernment

could

impose

higher

taxes

on

……so

that

…….2).

What

the ernment

should s

to

invest

in…../financiallysupport…../spend

money

ng……….3).

The ernment

ought

to

require

…..to

…...2.个人3.家长4.学校5.公司6.

authorities范文-11.第一段超简单；2.原因只写了一个，大量的support解释；3.解决方案先粗略，然后很仔细；范文-21.第一段后半部分太繁琐；2.原因分析给了两个idea，非常标准；3.解决方案非常精确；4.结尾段清晰；5.整个结构非常标准；范文-31.

考生范文，分数是6.5；2.语法错误很多，但是大部分时候表达清晰；3.原因分析太偏向不健康的饮食，对缺乏锻炼解释太少；4.解决方案很细致，考官会喜欢；5.这个范文是给大家增加信心用的；report类型的段(原因+有何影响版本)1.直接改写原题，不需要背景引出(扩充或者缩减原题)+承上启下(提前总结原因/空话过渡)2.One

of

the

reasons

is

that第一个原因分析。(idea--support)3.

In

addition,第二个原因分析。(idea--support)4.过渡句---To

my

knowledge,there

are

完全取决于你自己(好/坏/虽然….但是…..)5.

总结(重复原因/影响)Some

employers

think

that

formal

academic

qualificationsare

more

important

than

life

experiences

and

alqualities

when

they

look

for

an

employee.

Why

is

it

thecase?

Is

it

apositive

or

negative

development?•Nowadays

,

more

importance

is

attached

to

formal

educational

qualifications

than

life

experience

andal

qualities

when

a

company

is

recruitingnew

employees.

The

reasons

behind

this

phenomenonaremultiple,

and

I

believe

it

is

a

positivedevelopment

in

the

long-run.••of

all,

university

qualifications

provide

direct

proofs

of

candidates’

competencies.

Employers

can

havea

clear

picture

of

what

universities

and

course

the

candidates

have

attended,and

what

scores

theyhaveachieved

.

Unlike

life

experiences

and alities,

qualifications

are fiable

data

that

can

bemeasured

easily

and

quickly.In

addition,

people

holding

qualifications

coul pt

to

the

new

job

muore

smoothly.

They

normallyneed

less

on-job

trainingwhen

starting

ajob,

and

unlike

those

without

higher

education,they

have

betterability

in

terms

of

critical

thinking,

problem-solving

and

expertise

acquired

in

university

education.•To

my

knowledge,

giving

priority

to

higher

qualifications

results

in

more

advantages

than

disadvantages.The

most

obvious

benefit

is

that

it

encourages

young

people

to

pursue

higheracademic

education,

whichbroadens

their

career

prospects.

From

a

social ,

it

will

create

a

highly

educated

and

developedsociety

if

everyone

chooses

to

receive

higher

education.•In

conclusion,

university

qualifications

are

needed

in

this

knowledge-based

society

and

I

believe

this

trendbrings

more

benefits

than

drawbacks.If ernments

allocate

more

money

to

tertiary

education,

it

willsurely

bring

about

long-term

benefits

to

both

individuals

and

the

society

as

a

whole

.Report类型的第一段一般不需要背景句，题目中的现象本身就是背景，所以只需要直接开始改写的工作就可以了。report类型的介绍段(从原文里找到新的主语)1)

In

many

countries

schools

have

severe

problemswith

students’

behavior.

What

do

you

think

are

thecauses?

What

solutions

do

you

suggest?Poor

student

behavior

seems

to

be

an

increasingly

widespread

problem

in

many

countries.

I

think

thatmodern

lifestyles

are

probably

responsible

for

this.（提前总结型过渡）report类型的介绍段(从原文里找到新的主语)2).

Children

and

teenagers

are

committing

morecrimes

than

before.

What

do

you

think

are

thecauses?

How

should

they

be

punished?The

number

of

crimes

committed

by

children

andteenagers

has

been

increasing.

I

think

that

therecould

be

several

reasons

that

can

explain

this.（空话型过渡）report类型的介绍段(从原文里找到新的主语)3).

Some

employers

think

that

formal

academic

qualificationsare

more

important

than

lifeexperiences

and

alqualities

when

they

look

for

anemployee.

Why

is

it

the

case?Is

it

a

positive

or

negative

development?Formal

educational

qualifications

are

believed

to

bemoreimportant

than

life

experiences

and ality

traits

when

acompany

is

recruiting

new

staffs.From

my

point

of

view,thiscriterion

of

choosing

employees

can

beexplained

by

thefollowing

reasons.（空话型过渡）report类型的介绍段(基本句型的切换)4).

The

average

weight

of

citizens

has

beenincreasing

in

many

countries.

What

do

you

think

arethe

causes?

What

solutions

do

you

suggest?Many

countries

across

the

world

are

faced

with

theproblem

of

obesity.I

think

that

unhealthy

lifestylesof

today’s

people

are

the

causes

of

thisproblem.（提前总结型过渡）report类型的介绍段(基本句型的切换)5).

Children

and

teenagers

are

committing

more

crimes

thanbefore.

What

do

you

think

are

the

causes?

How

should

theybepunished?There

has

been

an

increasein

the

number

of

crimescommitted

by

children

and

teenagers.I

think

that

the

causesof

teenagers

committing

more

crimes

arepoor

parenting

andmedia

influence.

（提前总结型过渡）report类型的介绍段(词性的切换)6).

International

travel

sometimes

makes

people

prejudicedrather

than

broad-minded.

What

doyou

think

arethereasons?

What

canbe

done

to

increase

understandings

oftourists

about

the

country

they

visit.参考答案：Sometimes,people

whotravel

internationallyhave

prejudice

against

the

country

they

visit.

I