《夏洛的网》读后续写学案-高三英语写作专项

CharlottefsWM?夏洛的网？【作者】：E・B.怀特〔1899—1985),美国当代著名散文家、评论家，以散文名世，“其文风冷峻清丽，辛辣幽默，自成一格〃。生于纽约蒙特弗农，毕业于康奈尔大学。作为?纽约客?主要撰稿人的怀特一手奠定了影响深远的"?纽约客?文风〃。怀特对这个世界上的一切都充满关爱，他的道德与他的文章一样山高水长。除了他终生挚爱的随笔之外，他还为孩子们写了三本书：？斯图尔特鼠小弟？〔又译?精灵鼠小弟？〕、？夏洛的网?与?吹小号的天鹅？〔又译?天鹅的喇叭？)，同样成为儿童与成人共同喜爱的文学经典。其中最受欢送的就是?夏洛的网？，至今已经发行5000万册以上，拥有20多种文字的译本。在美国1976年?出版周刊?搞的一次读者调查中，这本童话位居“美国十佳儿童文学名著〃中的首位，可见它受欢送的程度。【主要内容】：在朱克曼家的谷仓里，快乐的生活着一群动物。小猪威尔伯和蜘蛛夏洛建立了真挚的友谊。然而一个最丑恶的消息拓破了谷仓里的平静：威尔伯在圣诞节将会被人杀死，做成熏肉火腿！作为一只猪，悲哀欲绝的威尔伯似乎只能接受任人宰割的命运了。然而看似渺小的小蜘蛛夏洛却说：“我救你。〃于是，夏洛在猪栏上织出了被人类视为奇迹的网上文字，这些赞美威尔伯的文字彻底改变了威尔伯的命运，终于让威尔伯在集市的大赛上赢得特别奖，和一个安享天年的未来。但,在这时，蜘蛛夏洛的生命也走到了尽头……辅助素材?夏洛的网?佳句集锦1：原文+摘记+检测+内容理解私家英语小阔教学方法参考：〔内容理解学案在小程序〕可以先原文阅读赏析，然后摘记，再检测；也可以先试试检测，再给出答案，让学生领悟，然后回到原文?夏洛的网?佳句集锦1检测版Chapter1.情绪描写：1）伤心：Tears沿着脸颊流下来andshe紧抓住theaxandtriedtopullitoutofherfather'shand.-2）愤怒："Butit'sunfair/*criedFern.nThepigcouldn'thelpbeingbornsmall,couldit?IfIverysmallatbirth,youme?”如果我出生时也那些弱小，你们也会把我杀了吗？■■.动作描写：Fernachairand・弗恩一把推开椅子，跑到户外。Mr.Arablesmiled.^Certainlynot/7hesaid,hisdaughter低头宠溺地看着他的女儿…Assheapproachedherchair,thecarton（晃动），andtherewasa当她走近她的椅子时，盒子摇晃了一下，然后传来了刮擦/抓挠的声音。.贴在4〕Thensheopenedthelidagain,liftedthepigout,and她的脸上5〕Aminutelater,Fernwasseatedonthefloorinthecornerofthekitchen,，把小婴儿（小猪）放在两腿之间，.贴在—从吮吸thebottle.6)“Run!”cMrs.Arable,takingthepigfromFernands塞adoughnutintoherhand.“跑!阿拉布尔太太命令到，把小猪从芬手里抱过来，又把一个油煎圈饼塞到她手里。■■■3.环境描写：Thegrasswaswetandtheearth•草是湿的，大地散发着春天的气息。Thekitchentablewas,andtheroomcoffee,bacon,dampplaster,andwoodsmokefromthestove.P3厨房的桌子上已经摆好了早餐，房间里弥漫着咖啡、熏肉、潮湿的灰泥以及从炉子里冒出来的荻丽味道。4神态(外貌)描写：AqueerlookJohnArable'sface.约翰•阿拉布尔的脸上掠过一种奇怪的表情。-came/flashedoverTheitsears,them.早晨的阳光洒在它的耳朵上，把它们映得粉红。Hewas—anairrifle,andawoodendagger•他全副武装--一只手里拿着一把气枪，另一只手攥着一把木制匕首。…heavilyarmed/inonehand/intheother5.众“说”纷纭：1〕“Outtothehoghouse（猪圈），"rMrs.Arable.答复“Idon'tseewhyheneedsanax,"c/aFern.接着说nDoawaywithit?”（要弄死它）sFern.尖叫-害怕地尖叫“Pleasedon"killit!"shes•抽泣着说/恳求-5〕"Controlmyself?,z大声叫道Fern.“Thisisamatteroflifeanddeath,anyoutalkaboutcontrollingmyself.6）Ferncouldn,ttakehereyesoffthetinypig."Oh,"shew轻声赞美到.“Oh,lookathim!He火absolutelyperfect,z不错眼珠地看着这头小小猪，，“哦，快看呀，他漂亮极了！”其他：.There,inside,lookingupather,wasthewhitenewbornpig.倒装句P4.Theschoolbushonkedfromtheroad.路边传来校车的喇秘l声。P7honkn.v.（按）汽车喇叭声Charlotte'sWebCharlotte'sWebCharlotte'sWeb佳句集锦Charlotte'sWeb佳句集锦1摘记版Chapter1U1.情绪描写：]]伤心：Tearstrickleddownhercheeksandshetookholdoftheaxandtriedtopullitoutofherfather!shand.P32）愤怒："Butit'sunfair,"cried/yelledFern."Thepigcouldn,thelpbeingbornsmall,couldit?IfIhadbeenverysmallatbirth,wouldyouhavekilledme?”（虚拟语气）P3u2.动作描写：1〕Fernpushedachairoutofthewayandrushedoutdoors.弗恩——才巴推开椅子，跑到户外。P1Mr.Arablesmiled."Certainlynot/hesaid,lookingdownathisdaughterwithlove/affection.一低头宠溺地看着他的女儿P3Assheapproachedherchair,thecartonwobbled（晃动）,andtherewasascratching（抓挠的）noise.当她走近她的椅子时，盒子摇晃了一下，然后传来了刮擦的声音。P4Thensheopenedthelidagain,liftedthepigout,andhelditagainsthercheek.贴在她的脸上P45〕Shepouredthewarmmilkintothebottle,fittedthenipple（奶嘴）overthetop,andhandedittoFern.P56〕Aminutelater,Fernwasseatedonthefloorinthecornerofthekitchenwithhe】infantbetweenhe】knees,teachingittosuckfromthebottle.P6“Run!"commandedMrs.Arable,takingthepigfromFernandslippingadoughnutintoherhand.“跑!阿拉布尔太太命令着，把小猪从芬手里抱过来，又把一个油煎圈饼塞到她手里。P7Shejustsatandstaredoutofthewindow,thinkingwhatablissfulworlditwasandhowluckyshewastohaveentirechargerofapig.P7她只是坐在那里，盯着窗外，想着这是一个多么幸福的世界，她是多么幸运，能拥有一头小猪。u3.环境描写：Thegrasswaswetandtheearthsmelledofspringtime.草是湿的，大地散发着春天的气息。P1Thekitchentabicwassetforbreakfast,andtheroomsmelledofcoffee,bacon,dampplaster,andwoodsmokefromthestove.P3厨房的桌子上已经摆好了早餐，房间里弥漫着咖啡、熏肉、潮湿的灰泥以及从炉子里冒出来的柴火烟的味道。u4神态(外貌)描写：Aqueerlookcame/flashedoverJohnArable'sface.约翰・阿拉布尔的脸上掠过一种奇怪的表情。P3Themorninglightshonethroughitsears,turningthempink.早晨的阳光洒在它的耳朵上，把它们映得粉红色。P4Hewasheavilyarmed---anairrifleinonehand,andawoodendaggerintheother.他全副武装-----一只手里拿着一把气枪，另一只手攥着一把木制匕首。P4u5.众“说"纷纭：1〕“Outtothehoghouse(猪圈),"repliedMrs.Arable.Pl“Idon'tseewhyheneedsanax,“continuedFern.Pl3〕"Doawaywithit?”〔要弄死它)shriekedFern.尖叫Plshriekwithterror害怕地尖叫“Pleasedon'tkillit!〃shesobbed.P25〕"Controlmyself?"yelledFern."Thisisamatteroflifeanddeath,anyoutalkaboutcontrollingmyself.〃P2Ferncouldn'ttakehereyesoffthetinypig."Oh,"shewhispered.“Oh,lookathim!He9sabsolutelyperfect/不错眼珠地看着这头小小猪，轻声赞美到，“哦，快看呀，他漂亮极了！〃P4“What'sthat?"hedemanded."What'sFerngot?”他问道P4u6淇他：.There,inside,lookingupather,wasthewhitenewbornpig.倒装句P4.Theschoolbushonkedfromtheroad.路边传来校车的喇叭声。P7honkn.v.〔按)汽车喇叭声原文呈现中英文版Chapter1BeforeBreakfastHWhere'sPapagoingwiththeax?"saidFerntohermotherastheyweresettingthetableforbreakfast."Outtothehoghouse,HrepliedMrs.Arable."Somepigswerebornlastnight.nnIdon'tseewhyheneedsanaxJcontinuedFern,whowasonlyeight.“Well,"saidhermother,noneofthepigsisarunt.It'sverysmallandweak,anditwillneveramounttoanything.Soyourfatherhasdecidedtodoawaywithit."“Doawaywithit?”shriekedFern.nYoumeankillit?Justbecauseit'ssmallerthantheothers?nMrs.Arableputapitcherofcreamonthetable.nDon*tyell,Fern!Hshesaid.nYourfatherisright.Thepigwouldprobablydieanyway."Fernpushedachairoutofthewayandranoutdoors.Thegrasswaswetandtheearthsmelledofspringtime.Fern'ssneakersweresoppingbythetimeshecaughtupwithherfather."Pleasedon'tkillit!"shesobbed.,,It,sunfair.HMr.Arablestoppedwalking.“Fern,"hesaidgently,"youwillhavetolearntocontrolyourself.nnControlmyself?11yelledFem."Thisisamatteroflifeanddeath,andyoutalkaboutcontrollingmyself.HTearsrandownhercheeksandshetookholdoftheaxandtriedtopullitoutofherfather'shand.“Fern,”saidMr.Arable,nIknowmoreaboutraisingalitterofpigsthanyoudo.Aweaklingmakestrouble.Nowrunalong!nnButit'sunfair/criedFern."Thepigcouldn'thelpbeingbomsmall,couldit?IfIhadbeenverysmallatbirth,wouldyouhavekilledme?nMr.Arablesmiled.HCertainlynot,“hesaid,lookingdownathisdaughterwithlove.nButthisisdifferent.Alittlegirlisonething,alittleruntypigisanother."”seenodifference/repliedFern,stillhangingontotheax."ThisisthemostterriblecaseofinjusticeIeverheardof.HAqueerlookcameoverJohnArable'sface.Heseemedalmostreadytocryhimself."Allright/hesaid."YougobacktothehouseandIwillbringruntwhenIcomein.Tilletyoustartitonabottle,likeababy.Thenyou'llseewhattroubleapigcanbe."WhenMr.Arablereturnedtothehousehalfanhourlater,hecarriedacartonunderhisarm.Fernwasupstairschanginghersneakers.Thekitchentablewassetforbreakfast,andtheroomsmelledofcoffee,bacon,dampplaster,andwoodsmokefromthestove.nPutitonherchair!nsaidMrs.Arable.Mr.ArablesetthecartondownatFern'splace.Thenhewalkedtothesinkandwashedhishandsanddriedthemontherollertowel.Femcameslowlydownthestairs.Hereyeswereredfromcrying.Assheapproachedherchair,thecartonwobbled,andtherewasascratchingnoise..Fernlookedatherfather.Thensheliftedthelidofthecarton.There,inside,lookingupather,wasthenew-bornpig.Itwasawhiteone.Themorninglightshonethroughitsears,turningthempink.“He'syours/saidMr.Arable.nSavedfromanuntimelydeath.AndmaythegoodLordforgivemeforthisfoolishness.nFerncouldn'ttakehereyesoffthetinypig."Oh,"shewhispered.nOh,lookathim!He'sabsolutelyperfect/'Sheclosedthecartoncarefully.Firstshekissedherfather,thenshekissedhermother.Thensheopenedthelidagain,liftedthepigout,andhelditagainsthercheek.AtthismomentherbrotherAverycameintotheroom.Averywasten.Hewasheavilyarmed—anairrifleinonehand,awoodendaggerintheother."What'sthat?nhedemanded."What'sFerngot?nnShe,sgotaguestforbreakfast/saidMrs.Arable."Washyourhandsandface,Avery!nnLet,sseeit!”saidAvery,settinghisgundown.HYoucallthatmiserablethingapig?Thatsafinespecimenofapig—itsnobiggerthanawhiterat.nnWashupandeatyourbreakfast,Avery!1'saidhismother.nThcschoolbuswillbealonginhalfanhour.”"CanIhaveapig,too,Pop?”askedAvery."No,Ionlydistributepigstoearlyrisers/1saidMr.Arable.HFernwasupatdaylight,tryingtoridworldofinjustice.Asaresult,shenowhasapig.Asmallone,tobesure,butneverthelessapig.Itjustshowswhatcanhappenifapersongetsoutofbedpromptly.Let'seat!nButFerncouldn'teatuntilherpighadhadadrinkofmilk.Mrs.Arablefoundababy'snursingbottleandarubbernipple.Shepouredwarmmilkintothebottle,fittedthenippleoverthetop,andhandedittoFern."Givehimhisbreakfast!nshesaid.Aminutelater,Fernwasseatedonthefloorinthecornerofthekitchenwithherinfantbetweenherknees,teachingittosuckfromthebottle.Thepig,althoughtiny,hadagoodappetiteandcaughtonquickly.Theschoolbushonkedfromtheroad."Run!"commandedMrs.Arable,takingthepigfromFernandslippingadoughnutintoherhand.Averygrabbedhisgunandanotherdoughnut.Thechildrenranouttotheroadandclimbedintothebus.Ferntooknonoticeoftheothersinthebus.Shejustsatandstaredoutofthewindow,thinkingwhatablissfulworlditwasandhowluckyshewastohaveentirechargeofapig.Bythetimethebusreachedschool,Fernhadnamedherpet,selectingthemostbeautifulnameshecouldthinkof.“ItsnameisWilbur/'shewhisperedtoherself.Shewasstillthinkingaboutthepigwhentheteachersaid:"Fern,whatisthecapitalofPennsylvania?""Wilbur/*repliedFern,dreamily.Thepupilsgiggled.Fernblushed.“爸爸拿着斧子去哪儿了？〃在他们收拾桌子准备吃早饭时，芬问她的母亲。“去猪圈了，〃阿拉贝尔太太答复。“昨晚生了几只小猪。〃“我不明白他为什么需要一把斧子，〃只有八岁的芬继续说。“哦，〃她的母亲说，“其中的一头是个小个子。它长得又小又弱，没有任何可留下来的价值了。所以你爸爸决定去消灭它。〃“消灭它？〃芬尖叫。“你是说杀死它？就因为他比别人的个子小？〃阿拉贝尔太太把一罐乳酪放到桌上。“别嚷，芬！〃她说。“你爸做的对。那头猪不管如何都会死的。〃芬推开挡在面前的椅子就往门外跑。草地湿漉漉的，泥土里散发着春天的气息。等芬赶上她的爸爸时，她的运动胶鞋全都湿透了。“请别杀它！〃她呜咽道。“这不公平！〃阿拉贝尔先生止住了脚。“芬，〃他温柔的说，“你该学会自我控制。〃“自我控制？〃芬哭叫道，”这可是一件生死大事！你却对我说什么自我控制！〃泪水流到芬的面颊上。她抓住了斧头柄，想把它从父亲手中抢下来。“芬，〃阿拉贝尔先生说，“养小猪的事我比你知道的多。一个体质差的小猪很难养活的。现在你该放我走了！〃“可是这不公平，〃芬哭叫着。“这头猪愿意让自己生下来就小吗，它愿意吗？如果我生下来时也很瘦小，你就会杀死我吗？〃阿拉贝尔先生微笑了「当然不会了，〃他说着，低下头慈祥地望着女儿「但这是不一样的。一个小女孩是一码事儿，一个小瘦猪是另一码事儿。〃“我看没什么不一样，〃芬答复着，仍死抓着斧柄不放，“这是我曾经听到过的最恐怖的案件！〃约翰•阿拉贝尔先生的脸上出现了某种奇特的表情。他好似也要哭了。“好吧，〃他说。“你先回家吧。等我回家，我会把那头小猪带回来。我将让你用奶