(新高考)高考英语二轮专题读后续写精读精炼（十一）（含答案解析）

高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十一）一：原文重现TenminutestogoandIcouldlocktheshop’sdoorbehindme.Therewerestillafewcustomerswhocouldn’tdecidewhattobuy.Oneladytestedallthelipsticksontheshelf.Herfriendwasbusywiththesunglasses.Theymustbetouristswithlotsoftimeontheirhands.IhadafakesmilegluedonmyfaceasIwaitedbehindthecounterforthemtomakeuptheirminds.Theywalkedoutwithoutbuyinganything.Thenitwastenminutespast5:00.Theywastedmytime.SometimesIwonderedifthiswasreallywhatlifewasabout.Workingfrom8:00amto5:00pm,Icaughtjustaglimpseofthesunriseonmywaytoworkeverymorning.IwishedIcouldstandonthathillandwaitforthesuntorise.ItfeltlikelifewasslippingthroughmyfingersandthatIneverenjoyedthelittlethingsinlifethatwouldmakemehappy.21世纪教育网版权所有Goinghomeafteraday’sworkwasn’tmuchrelief.Athome,afamilywaswaitingformyattention.Whilepreparingdinner,Iputthelaundryinthewashingmachineandtookcareofthepets.Afterdinner,itwastimetowashthedisheswhiletherestofthefamilyrelaxedwiththeirownactivities.IwishedIcoulddothat,Mybodywastired.Mysoulwastired.Icouldn’tgoonlikethis.ItwasmyownfaultthatIdidn’tmaketimeformyself.Ihadspoiledmyfamilyovertheyearsbydoingeverythingbymyself.Notimeforawalkwiththedog,notimetojustsitonmyownandstareatnothing.WhyshouldIbelikethis?Ineededserioustimeformyself,timetorechargemybatteriesanddothingsthatwouldmakemeabetterperson.21*cnjy*comAfamilymeetingwasthefirststep.Duringthemeeting,IexplainedwhyIwasbad-temperedandaskedthemwhattheythoughtwouldsolvetheproblem.EveryonegotaturntocomeupwithideasforhowtheycouldhelpmeachievemygoaltohaveatleastonehourperdaytodowhatIliked.注意：1、续写词数应为150左右；2、请按如下格式在相应的位置作答。Thefamilywasopentopracticalsolutions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Amonthhaspassedsincethenewrulesinthehousebegan,andtheplanisworkingperfectly._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二：文本解析【分析】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者厌倦了每天上班下班包办家务的生活，她觉得自己应该成为更好的人。于是她召开了家庭会议，家人们表示会帮助她实现她的目标，让她每天至少有一小时的时间做自己喜欢的事情。一个月以后作者觉得自己变得快乐了，并领悟到学会寻求帮助是最勇敢的事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“家里愿意接受实际的解决办法。”可知，第一段可描写作者和家人们一起制定了具体的计划。②由第二段首句内容“自房子里的新规定实施以来，一个月已经过去了，而且这个计划运行得很完美。”可知，第二段可描写作者在一个月后生活和心理上的积极变化。2.续写线索：制定计划——积极响应——列表——期待——变化——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①建议：suggest/advise②获得：get/obtain③提供：give/offer情绪类①积极：positive/active高分句型1：Ithasgivenusmoretimetospendtogether,chattingandlaughing.(运用了现在分词作状语)2：Itfollowsthataskingforhelpisthebravestmovewecanmake.(运用了动名词作主语)三：续写单句训练这个家庭提出来实际的解决方案。“让每个人都负责打扫自己的房间怎么样？””我建议。“晚饭后轮流做饭、洗衣服和打扫卫生呢？”“他们的反应相当积极。我创建了一张图表，上面有每周的日子、家务以及每天负责任的家庭成员的名字。我已经看到我每天下班后都有一个小时。众议院的新规定开始已经过去一个月了，这个计划进展顺利。这给了我们更多的时间在一起，聊天和大笑。我不再觉得自己陷入了激烈的竞争。一个月以来，我已经和我的狗上山7公里，下班后看日落。现在，我不介意顾客是否在关门的时候在商店里逗留。我的微笑不再是假的了。因此，寻求帮助是我们所能做出的最勇敢的举动。四：佳作展现Thefamilywasopentopracticalsolutions.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Amonthhaspassedsincethenewrulesinthehousebegan,andtheplanisworkingperfectly.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五：课后练笔Boysliketobeconsideredtobebrave,butwhatkindofthingscanbeconsideredtobebrave?Itisnotaquestionthatcanbeansweredbywords,butbytheactualdeed.AboywiththenameHenrygaveusagoodexample.RonnyandHenryweretwofriendsinthesameclass.Theyalwaysplayedtogetherandwenthometogether.OnedayasRonnyandHenryweregoinghomeafterschool,theysawsomepeoplefightinginthestreetcorner.Ronnysaidexcitedly,“Somepeoplearefighting!Let’sgoandhavealook!”ButHenryrefused,“It’snoneofourbusiness.We’dbettergohomeanddon’tgetclosetothem.AlsoourparentsareexpectingtohavedinnerwithustogetherathomeandIdon’twantthemtoworryaboutme.”【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】“Youareacoward,andafraidtogo,”saidRonny,andoffherantothespotwithsomeotherboys.Henryhadtogohomealoneanddidn’tthinkaboutitanymore.www-2-1-cnjy-comButRonnythoughtHenrywasacowardandtoldalltheboysthat.Theylaughedathimagreatdeal.Fromthenon,theylookeddownuponHenryanddidn’twanttoplaywithhim.Henrywassadbuthewasn’tangrywithRonnyforhisrudebehavior,becausehehadlearnedthattruecouragewasshownmostinbearingmisunderstandingwhenitwasnotdeserved,andthatheoughttobeafraidofnothingbutdoingwrong.Thus,hejustignoredtheotherboys’laughterandcontinuedtosticktohisthoughtandgotoschoolandstudyaswell.However,Ronnydidn’tinviteHenrytogohomewithhimanymore.Instead,hehadhisnewfriendswhoalsothoughtHenrywasacoward.Everydayafterschool,theydidn’tgohomedirectlybutwenttotheriverorsomewheretoplaygamesandhadlotsoffun.21*cnjy*comParagraph1:Afewdayslater,somethingterriblehappenedtoRonny.

2·1·c·n·j·y___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Atthatmoment,Henryhappenedtopassby.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六：单句训练几天后，Ronny发生了一件可怕的事情。那天下午放学后，Ronny和他的一些新朋友在河里快乐地洗澡。突然，他被困在泥里，无法出来。他努力挣扎着，但他仍然被困住了。他尖叫着呼救，但都没有成功。那些叫亨利是懦夫的孩子们尽快下水了。他们很害怕，甚至没有试图帮助他。就在这时，亨利碰巧经过了。他听到了尖叫声，尽快跑到河里去。看到Ronny差点淹死，亨利立即脱下衣服，毫不犹豫地跳进了水里。他到达Ronny时，就在他上次正在下沉的时候。他费了很大的劲，对自己也很危险，及时把Ronny带到了岸上。亨利很乐意帮助他的朋友，尽管他非常累。参考答案三：单句训练Thefamilywasopentopracticalsolutions.“Whatabouthavingeveryoneberesponsibleforcleaningtheirownroom?”Isuggested.“Andwhatabouttakingturnstocook,dolaundryandcleanupafterdinner?”Theirreactionwasquitepositive.21教育网Icreatedachartwiththedaysoftheweekandthechoresandwiththenameoftheresponsiblefamilymembereachday.21·世纪*教育网IwasalreadytoseethatIwouldgetanhourformyselfeverydayafterwork.Amonthhaspassedsincethenewrulesinthehousebegan,andtheplanisworkingperfectly.Ithasgivenusmoretimetospendtogether,chattingandlaughing.【出处：21教育名师】InolongerfeellikeI’mcaughtintheratrace.Foramonthnow,I’vebeenabletowalksevenkilometersupthehillwithmydogandwatchthesunsetafterwork.21·cn·jy·comNow,Idon’tmindifcustomersarelingeringintheshopwhenit’stimetolockthedoor.Mysmileisnolongerfake.Itfollowsthataskingforhelpisthebravestmovewecanmake.六：单句训练Afewdayslater,somethingterriblehappenedtoRonny.21教育名师原创作品Thatafternoonafterschool,Ronnywasbathingwithsomeofhisnewfriendsintheriverhappily.Suddenly,hewasstuckinthemudandcouldn’tgetout.2-1-c-n-j-yHestruggledhardbuthewasstilltrapped.Hescreamedforhelp,butallinvain.TheboyswhohadcalledHenryacowardgotoutofthewaterasfastastheycould.TheyweresoscaredanddidnoteventrytohelpAtthatmoment,Henryhappenedtopassby.Heheardthescreamsandrantotheriverassoonaspossible.【版权所有：21教育】SeeingRonnywasalmostdrowned,Henrytookoffhisclothesimmediatelyandjumpedintothewaterwithoutanyhesitation.HereachedRonnyjustashewassinkingthelasttime.Withgreateffort,andwithmuchdangertohimself,hebroughtRonnytotheshoreintime.Henrywashappytohelphisfriend,thoughhewasextremelytired.四：佳作展现（一）Thefamilywasopentopracticalsolutions.“Whatabouthavingeveryoneberesponsibleforcleaningtheirownroom?”Isuggested.“Andwhatabouttakingturnstocook,dolaundryandcleanupafterdinner?”Theirreactionwasquitepositive.Icreatedachartwiththedaysoftheweekandthechoresandwiththenameoftheresponsiblefamilymembereachday.IwasalreadytoseethatIwouldgetanhourformyselfeverydayafterwork.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】Amonthhaspassedsincethenewrulesinthehousebegan,andtheplanisw