2021届高考英语复习课件 书面表达之谋篇布局优秀课件

002-2021届高中英语书面表达之谋篇布局002-2021届高中英语书面表达之谋篇布局1记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料有关联的事件，并说出自己从事件中得到的启示或对所描述现象发表自己的看法。1．写作步骤概括原文→衔接过渡→描述事件→发表看法2．过渡语句

①Thisremindsmeofthesimilarexperience.②Thisstorybringsmebacktoaneventmanyyearsago.③Ihadasimilarexperience.记叙文之谋篇布局记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料有关联的事件，并说出自己从23．注意事项(1)时态记述经历类的记叙文，无论写人还是记事，通常以过去时态为主。如果所写的内容不但有过去的人和事，而且还有现在的人和事，那么对过去的人和事应采用过去时态，对现在的人和事应采用现在时态。(2)人称要根据题目的要求选用合适的人称，做到上下文人称一致。(3)篇章结构通常以时间或事件发展的顺序为线索，有时也可采用倒叙手法。详写主要情节，略写次要情节。3．注意事项3(2017·江苏仪征中学月考)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。TheElephantandtheFlyAnelephantwasstandingandpickingleavesfromatree.Asmallflycame,flyingandbuzzingnearhisear.Theelephantwaveditawaywithhislongears.Thentheflycameagain,andtheelephantwaveditawayoncemore.Thiswasrepeatedseveraltimes.Thentheelephantaskedthefly,“Whyareyousorestlessandnoisy?Whycan'tyoustayforawhileinoneplace?”(2017·江苏仪征中学月考)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英4Theflyanswered,“IamattractedtowhateverIsee,hearorsmell.MysensespullmeconstantlyinalldirectionsandIcannotresistthem.Whatisyoursecret?Howcanyoustaysocalmandstill？”Theelephantsaid,“Mysensesdonotrulemyattention.WhateverIdo,Igetinvolvedinit.NowthatIameating,Iamcompletely

absorbedineating.InthiswayIcanenjoymyfoodandchewitbetter.Iruleandcontrolmyattention.Whenyouareinchargeofyoursensesandattention,yourmindwillbecomecalm.”Theflyanswered,“Iamattrac5写作内容1．以约30个单词概括短文的内容；2．然后以约120个单词就“专注”这一主题发表你的看法，包括以下要点：(1)看完故事后的感受及启发；(2)描述一次你或他人因受太多干扰而使学习、生活或工作受到影响的经历；(3)你打算在高三这一年里如何保持专注。写作要求1．可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。写作内容6评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。审题本文为寓言性短文，要概括故事的内容，就要读懂故事的寓意。结合题目要求“就’专注’这一主题发表你的看法”，从而确定文章写作应围绕“专注”这一主题。审题时应做到：(1)定时态：本文在概括内容和描述经历时用过去时，在写打算时用将来时；(2)定人称：描述自己的经历用第一人称，他人的经历用第三人称。评分标准7第一段：概括短文内容,30words第二段：衔接过渡语,引出主题句第三段：描述一次受干扰的经历第四段：保持专注的打算2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件8满分范文

①Anelephantwasconstantlydisturbedbyarestless不安宁的fly,whowonderedaboutthesecretofremainingcalm.②Theelephantrevealed显示thatcalmnesswouldbeobtainedwhenone'ssensesandattentionwerefocused.③Inspiredbywhattheelephantsaid,Irealizedtheabilitytofocusone'sattentionisthekeytosuccess.④Anyperson,ifeasilydistracted,isunabletoachievehissuccess.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件满分范文2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT9⑤Thisremindsmeofwhathappenedinmyprimaryschool.⑥Ioncesignedupfortoomanyvariousafter­classactivities.⑦Asaresult,Ididn'tspendenoughtimeonmystudies.⑧Consequently,Ifellbehindandfailedinexams.⑨SincethenIhaveknownthatoneshouldfocusononethingbeforeitiswelldone.⑩AsaSeniorThreestudent,havingsetacleargoal,Iwillgivepriority优先权toit,tryingtoresistanytemptation诱惑.⑪I'mfullyawarethatonlywithadeterminedmindcanIachievemygoal.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件⑤Thisremindsmeofwhathappe10满分理由1．行文架构(1)概括短文内容(2)通过衔接过渡语(Inspiredbywhattheelephantsaid...)引出主题：专注是成功的关键

(3)描述经历：自己参加多种课外活动导致考试不及格(4)打算：在高三阶段如何保持专注2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件满分理由2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT112．亮点词汇constantly不断地，obtain获得,focusone'sattention注意,distract分心,signup报名,consequently因此,givepriorityto给予优先权,setacleargoal,achieveone'sgoal3．亮点句式句①含有who引导的非限制性定语从句；句②、句⑤、句⑨11.含有宾语从句；句③、句⑩使用了过去分词和现在分词作状语；句④含有状语从句的省略。2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2．亮点词汇2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局P122018江苏卷81.请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。写作内容1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名（ratings）进行消费的现象；2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1.

写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2018江苏卷2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局13LiJiang6July,SunnyOurfamilywillgoonatripnextmonthandneedasuitcase.Twodaysago,Momaskedmetofindrelevantinformationontheinternet.ButtheinformationIgotwasrichandvaried,orevencontradictory.Confused,Isimplybasedmydecisionontheratings.Withinfiveminutes,weorderedtheoneweweresatisfiedwith.Thisafternoon,Momreceivedthecaseandtoldmeshelikeditverymuch.SuHua6July,SunnyThismorning,ourfamilywentout,hangingroundinthedowntownarea.WefoundaratingoftheTopTenRestaurants,andwentintooneofthem.Wespentquitealotofmoney,butwerenothappy.Momcomplainedalot,andsaidthatdespiteitshighratings,thefoodwasnottoourtaste.Iwaspuzzled.ShouldIbelieveintheseratings,orshouldInot?2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件LiJiang14Asamajorchannelofconsumptioninformation,theratingisanefficientsourceofinformationforshoppinginourownconsumption.Interestingly,thesameratingmayhavedifferentinfluencesondifferentconsumers.范文2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件Asamajorchannelofconsumpt15ItendtoconsultconsumptionratingswhateverIpurchase.Firstly,thehigherratingmeansthehigherqualityoftheproduct,orbetterservice.Basedontheratings,Iboughtmybelovedbackpack,sawinterestingfilmsandtasteddeliciousfoods.Secondly,ratingscansavetimetomakedecisionsinshopping.Forexample,therearehugeamountsofreferencebookswhichIamoftenconfusedtochoosefrom.Inthatcase,itisbothconvenientandeconomicaltobuybooksaccordingtotheratings.Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependcompletelyontheratingsinconsumption.Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofratingsareoftencloselyrelated.Itisnecessarytoholdanobjectiveattitudetowardsratings.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件Itendtoconsultconsumption16句式改写1．用only倒装句改写句②中的宾语从句

Theelephantrevealed显示thatcalmnesswouldbeobtained

whenone'ssensesandattentionwerefocused.Theelephantrevealedthat

onlywhenone'ssensesandattentionwerefocusedwouldcalmnessbeobtained.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件句式改写Theelephantrevealedthat172．用强调句改写句③Inspiredbywhattheelephantsaid,Irealizedtheabilitytofocusone'sattentionisthekeytosuccess.Inspiredbywhattheelephantsaid,Irealizeditistheabilitytofocusone'sattentionthatisthekeytosuccess.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2．用强调句改写句③Inspiredbywhatth18(2017·江苏省镇江市高三期末考试)阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。It'salwaysemotionalwhenasportssuperstarannounceshisorherretirement.AndwhenKobeBryant,37,wroteapoemcalledDearBasketballtosaygoodbyetooneofthegreatest,mostfascinatingcareersinNBAhistory,thesadnesswasoverwhelming势不可挡.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件(2017·江苏省镇江市高三期末考试)阅读下面短文，并按照要19WhethercompetingintheFinalsormakingjumpshotsaftermidnightinanemptygym,hehasanunconditionalloveforthegame.WhenTeamUSAwastraininginLasVegasmonthsbeforeitheadedtoLondonforthe2012OlympicGames,Bryantstartedhisworkoutat5：30everymorninginthegymuntilteampracticebeganat11：00am.DuringeachpracticeBryantcountedeverysingleshothehit,andhewouldn'tleavethegymuntilhehadhitatleast400.Thiskindofhardworkcertainlypaidoff.HewonanNBAMVPaward,fiveNBAchampionshipswiththeLakersandtwoOlympicgoldmedals,makinghimoneofthegreatestplayersinNBAhistory.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件WhethercompetingintheFinal20写作内容1．用约30个词写出上文概要2．用约120个词发表你的观点，内容包括你对“成功源于坚持不懈的努力”的看法用事例说明你或你朋友是怎么努力的写作要求1．阐述观点或提供论据时，不得直接引用原文语句2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件写作内容2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT21参考范文：ThepassageabovetellsusthatpeoplegenerallyfeelsadatKobeBryant'sretirementandthathissuccessresultsfromhisloveforbasketballandyearsofhardwork.Kobe'sexampleremindsmethatone'ssuccessisbasedonbothpassionandhardwork.BesidesKobe,otherpeoplesuchasThomasEdison,SteveJobsandsoonhaveallproventhatperfectly.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件参考范文：2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PP22

WhenIwasachild,IwasfacedwithgreatdifficultyinlearningEnglish,especiallyinvocabulary.Nevertheless,withmyEnglishteacher'spatientinstructionandhelp,Ikeptonpracticing.Intheend,myperseveranceanddeterminationpaidoff.“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”，astheoldsayinggoes.Ifwearedeterminedtodosomething,wewillfindawayofdoingitandachievesuccess.Withoutperseverance,itisimpossibleforustokeeptryinguntilourdreamscometrue.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件WhenIwasachild,Iwasfa23议论文读写任务型作文指的是根据阅读材料所描述的某一事件、现象、观点或话题发表个人观点、意见和建议的一类读写任务，其实质就是要求考生根据题目要求写议论文。英语议论文有其独特的框架结构，能让读者迅速捕捉作者的观点和思路，值得考生模仿。其写作思路如下：议论文谋篇布局2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件议论文读写任务型作文指的是根据阅读材料所描述的某一事件、现象24过渡/引出话题Thereisnodoubtthat...Itcannotbedeniedthat...Noonecanignorethefactthat...Fromwhatismentionedabove,weknow...提出观点Frommypointofview...AsfarasIamconcerned...Iholdtheview/beliefthat...Personally,Ibelievethat...表达立场Actually,Iaminfavouroftheideathat...Insomeway,Iamagainstthethoughtthat...一、开门见山引出论点在文章开头，通过主题句鲜明地提出观点或引出将要论述的内容，防止在论述的过程中跑题。常用的句式有：

2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件过渡/引Thereisnodoubtthat...25总述原因Thereareseveralreasonsthatcontributeto...Myviewsarebasedonthefollowingreasons.分层论述Tobeginwith/Firstofall...Besides/Furthermore/Finally/Lastbutnot(the)leastOn(the)onehand...OntheotherhandForonething...Foranother...二、多种形式展示论据议论文在写作手法上以议论为主，如通过对比观点、阐述原因、列举例子等进行议论，但有时也要运用说明、叙述、描写等手法。议论中的说明常为议论的开展创造条件或是对议论的补充；叙述和描写应是为论点提供依据，因此，叙述应该是概括的，描写应该是简要的。议论文常用的句式有：2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件总述Thereareseveralreasonsth26列举例子Take...forexample.Forexample/instance...引出经历Itremindsmeofthetimewhen...Whatimpressesmemostisthat...分析因果Thanksto/Owingto/Becauseof...Consequently/Therefore/Thus/Asaresult...讨论后果Justimaginewhatwouldbelikeiftherewereno...2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件列举Take...forexample.引出Itrem27三、总结升华，重申观点在文中或文末，考生可以用不同的语言重申主题或提出解决问题的建议，从而使文章结构严谨、主题鲜明。常用的句式有：Tosumup/Inshort/Inconclusion/Onthewhole/Allinall...Takingallthefactorsintoaccount,wecandrawaconclusionthat...Fromthediscussionabove,itcanbesafelyconcludedthat...Therefore,itisnecessaryforusto...Tobebrief,weshouldbeawareoftheimportanceof...Onlywhenwe/Onlyby...,canwe...2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件三、总结升华，重申观点2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之28(2017·盐城高三模拟)请阅读下面的短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Whatcanyoudowhenyouareunhappy?Ifyouwanttoletoutyourangerorpressurebybreakingthings,youjustdo.NowaschoolinNanjinghasbuilta“stresswall”tohelpstudentswhofeelunhappyduetoheavyschoolworkorforotherreasons.Theleaderoftheschoolsaidtheideaofastresswallstartedwhenfootprintswerefoundonsomenewlypaintedwallsandsomeschoolwindowswerebroken.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件(2017·盐城高三模拟)请阅读下面的短文，并按照要求用英语29“Thesethingshappenbecausesomestudentsfeellotsofpressurefromtheirstudiesorbecausetheydon'tgetalongwellwithotherstudents.Whenunderstress,thebodygetsreadytoeitherrunorfightandbecomesverynervous.Hittingthewallcanhelprelaxthebodyandtakeawaystress，”hesaid.“Testsandhomeworkmakemesad，”saidajuniorgirl,“Ican'twaittohitthewall.Itwillhelpmealotwithmyproblems.”However,anothergirlstudentwhowouldn'tgivehernamesaid，“Thewallwon'thelpbecauseitcan’ttalk，”andsheadded，“IneedtotalktosomeonewhenI'msad.”2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件“Thesethingshappenbecauses30内容1．以约30个单词概括短文内容；2．以约120个单词就“Shouldthestresswallbebuilt”这一主题发表你的看法，包括以下要点：(1)学生的压力来源；(2)是否该建此墙并说明理由；(3)如认为不该建请提供一些其他有效的减压方式。要求1．可以参照阅读材料但不得直接引用原文的句子；2．作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件内容2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀31评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当审题定时态：一般现在时定人称：第一和第三人称谋篇第一段：概括短文内容第二段：压力来源第三段：我的观点第四段：减压方法2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件评分标准2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT32满分范文①Thepassageconveystousthattohelpstudentswithstress,aschoolbuilta“stresswall”forstudentstorelax,towardswhichstudentsholddifferentopinions.②Nowadays,studentsareundergreatpressure,mainlycomingfromtheirschoolworkaswellaspeerrelationship.③AsfarasIamconcerned,buildingastresswallisnotappropriate.④Foronething,evenifstudentspunchthewallheavily,thetruestressinthebottomoftheirheartscannotbeletout.⑤Foranother,thismayleadtotheresultofsolvingaproblemwithviolenceoffixingabadtemper,whichhasbadeffectsontheirhealthgrowth.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件满分范文2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT33⑥Inordertodecreaseourstress,herearemysuggestions.⑦Tobeginwith,wecandesignmoreoutdooractivitiesforstudentstogetridofthestress.⑧What’smore,itisstronglysuggestedthatweshouldtakepartinsomesportsevents,whichcansurelyhelpstudentsoutofstressandimprovetheirhealthatthesametime.⑨Allinall,onlywhenweletoutthestressproperlycanweliveahappyschoollife.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件⑥Inordertodecreaseourstre34满分理由1．行文架构(1)概括短文内容(2)压力来源：学习和同学关系(3)我的观点：不赞成建压力墙；两个方面去阐述(4)减压建议：参加课外活动；体育锻炼

2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件满分理由2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT352．亮点词汇holddifferentopinions,asfarasIamconcerned,foronething,inthebottomofone'sheart,foranother,tobeginwith,what'smore,getrideof,allinall3．亮点句式句①含有宾语从句和定语从句句②comingfrom...为现在分词作非限制性定语句③building...为动名词作主语句⑤中含有which引导的定语从句句⑧中使用了句式itissuggestedthat...和which引导的定语从句句⑨中使用了倒装句2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2．亮点词汇2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局P36句式改写1．用定语从句改写句②Nowadays,studentsareundergreatpressure,whichmainlycomesfromtheirschoolworkaswellaspeerrelationship.2．用chancesarethat...和bydoing...改写句⑦

Tobeginwith,chancesarethatstudentscangetridofthestressbydesigningmoreoutdooractivities.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件句式改写2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT37(2017·江苏名校联考)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Theriseofselfie(自拍)photographyinsomeoftheworld'smostbeautiful,anddangerousplacesiscausingarangeofinterventions(干预措施)aimedatfightingrisk­takingthathasresultedinastringofshockingdeathsworldwide.Theactoftakingapictureofoneselfwithamobilephone,placingthesubjectcentre­stage,hasexplodedinpopularityinrecentyears,witheveryonefromBritain'sQueenElizabethⅡtoU．S.PresidentBarackObamajoiningin.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件(2017·江苏名校联考)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写38

Buttheselfiehasalsoinspiredalotofrisk­takingandoffensivepublicbehavior,pushingtheboundariesofsafetyandbehavior,whetherbyhangingfromaskyscraperorposingwithliveexplosives.Severalgovernmentsandregulatorybodieshavenowbeguntreatingtheselfieasaseriousthreattopublicsafety,leadingthemtolaunchpubliceducationcampaignsremindingpeopleofthoseagainstsmokingandexcessivedrinking.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件Buttheselfiehasalsoinsp39内容

1．用约30个单词写出上文概要2．你对此现象所持的观点

3．用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的观点要求

1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称3．不必写标题评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件内容

1．用约30个单词写出上文概要2021届高考英语复习课40参考范文Today,moreandmorepeople,includingsomecelebritiescannotresistthetemptationtotakephotosofthemselvesinplaceswithbreathtakingscenery,regardlessofthedangersinvolved.Thetrendhasraisedmuchpublicconcern.Personally,Iamagainstthebehavior.Firstly,acoolselfiecouldcostyouyourlife,andtherehavebeenseveralreportsaboutpeoplelosingtheirliveswhiletakingselfies.Istronglyholdthebeliefthatnothingismoreimportantthanlifeitself.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件参考范文2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT41

Secondly,peoplewhoareaddictedtoselfiesaremorelikelytoviolatethestandardsofsocialbehavior,whichmaypresentagreatdangertootherpeopleortheenvironment.Theydon'tcareaboutannoyingpeopleintheirsocialmediaorcareaboutthetouristattractiontheyaredestroying.Inshort,Idon'tthinkitworthwhiletakingselfiesattheriskoflife.Selfiesasactsofself­focusmayalsobringannoyancetotheworldaroundus.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件Secondly,peoplewhoa42

从近年高考来看，图画作文是经常考查的一种形式。图画作文的特点是形象、直观、内容具体，一般还有文字说明，题材以贴近实际生活为主，因此考生在写作时一般都有话可说。图画作文之谋篇布局2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件从近年高考来看，图画作文是经常考查的一种形式。图画作文的43这幅图画描绘了中学生交往过程中的一种现象。

请根据你对这幅图画的理解用英语写一篇短文，给某英语报社投稿。你的短文应包括以下内容：1．描述图画内容，如情景、人物、动作等等；2．结合图画，谈谈你的友谊观；3．结合自身实际，举例谈谈你自己的做法。2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件这幅图画描绘了中学生交往过程中的一种现象。

请根据你对这幅图44注意1．可参照图画中的文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的想象。2．词数150左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Sometimeshowtomakefriendsisnotaneasytaskforstudents.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件注意2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀45审题1.仔细观察，品味图画和文字2.挖掘深刻内涵吗，适度联想发挥3.描写虚实结合，阐明自己观点三定定时态：叙述和议论文勇一般现在时定人称：第一和第三人称定体裁：夹叙夹议文谋篇图画类作文以图画形式给出信息，本文结合文字要求和图画，文章应如此布局：第一段：叙述图画内容第二段：结合图画，论述自己的友谊观第三段：自己的做法2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件审题2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀46满分范文①Sometimeshowtomakefriendsisnotaneasytaskforstudents.②Fromthepicturewecanseeaboyisofferingagirlonehundredyuaninanattempttomakefriendswithher.③Apparentlyinhiseyes,moneycanbuyfriendship.④Contrarytowhatthepictureconveys,Ifirmlybelievepowerfulasmoneyseems,itcanneverbuyfriendship.⑤Undoubtedly,friendshipissupposedtobebasedonsharedinterestsandactivities.⑥FriendshipmeanshavingsomeoneIcanrelyon,withwhomIcansharemyhappinessandsorrow.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件满分范文2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT47⑦Friendshipalsomeansbeingdevotedtoothers,whichinvolvesmesupportingmyfriendswhenevertheyareintrouble.⑧Judgingfrommyownexperience,therolethatfriendshipplaysinmylifecanneverbeignored,soIdotreasuremyfriendship.⑨Forexample,howeveroccupiedwithmystudiesIam,Ineverfailtokeepintouchwithmyfriends.⑩Mostimportantly,whenevermyfriendsarestuckinacertaindifficultsituation,Iwillsurelybethefirstonetogivehimorhermyhelpinghand.⑪Inaword,solongasyoucantreatyourfriendswithrespectandcare,youwillenjoyaharmoniousrelationshipwithyourfriendsevenifyouarethepoorestpersonintheworld.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件⑦Friendshipalsomeansbeingd48满分理由1．行文架构(1)简要描述图画内容

(2)阐述自己的友谊观：不能用金钱购买，以共同的兴趣为基础，同甘共苦，忠诚(3)如何维持友谊：多联系，急人所急2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件满分理由2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT492．亮点词汇apparently,undoubtedly,besupposedto,relyon,involve,beoccupiedwith,bestuckin,harmonious3．亮点句式句④believe后为省略that的宾语从句，其中powerfulasmoneyseems为as引导的状语从句的前置句式；句⑥含有两个定语从句：(that)Icanrelyon,withwhom...；句⑦含which引导的定语从句，其中whenever引导让步状语从句；2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2．亮点词汇2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局P50句⑧中judging...为现在分词作状语，that引导同位语从句，另外，本句中还用了do表强调；句⑨、句⑩中分别含有however和whenever引导的让步状语从句；句⑪中solongas引导条件状语从句，evenif引导让步状语从句。句式改写1．用it作形式主语改写句③Itisapparentthatmoneycanbuyfriendshipinhiseyes.2．用thereisnodoubtthat...改写句⑤Thereisnodoubtthatfriendshipissupposedtobebasedonsharedinterestsandactivities.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件句⑧中judging...为现在分词作状语，that引导同51(2017·南通市高三第二次调研测试)

请根据你对以下图画的理解，以

“DeedsShouldMatchWords”

为题，用英语写一篇作文。你的作文应包括以下内容：1．简要描述该图的内容；2．概述你对该图中言行不一的现象

的理解；3．举例说明该图对你的启示。注意：1．可参照图画适当发挥；2．作文词数150左右；3．作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件(2017·南通市高三第二次调研测试)

请根据你对以下图画的52参考范文：Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,atruckcarryingaslogan“PROTECTTHEENVIRONMENT”isusedtocallonpeopletotakeactionimmediately,butmeanwhileitisgivingoffhugeamountsofwastegases,whichmakesthetreesalongtheroadsufferalot.Whatthepictureconveystousisthatsomepeopleclaimtoprotecttheenvironment,butactuallytheyarepollutingit.It'sobviousthattheirdeedscontradicttheirwords.Whetherconsciousorunconscious,thesepeoplewillsurelyfailtoseeagoodenvironment.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件参考范文：2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PP53

Unfortunately,thephenomenonisnotaloneinoursociety.Forexample,whenwerequireotherstoobservetrafficrules,weourselvestendtoviolatethem,inwhichcasewecanhardlyseeafast­flowingtrafficandwillfrequentlygettrappedinthetraffic.Inmyopinion,weshouldmatchdeedswithwords.Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoals.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件Unfortunately,the542021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件55善良、淳朴、真诚。三婶买了老宅并把钥匙交给了我们，体现了她的善良;三婶一直保存着自己老宅家的钥匙，写出了她的淳朴。三婶对母亲一直真诚相待，体现了她的真诚。2．文章详细描写了林海音对台湾本土作家钟理和的着意栽培和慷慨相助，不仅能够表现传主的精神品质，而且有力证明了传主是台湾文学的一道阳光。3．文章中引用了传主自己的一些语言，为作者的观点和看法提供有力的论据，增强了说服力，具有画龙点睛之效，能够升华主题，增强作品语言感染力。4．抽象的内容能加以阐发。所谓“抽象”，是与“具体”相对而言，抽象的也就是概括的。所谓“阐发”就是化抽象、概括为具体。阐发常见的有两种形式：一是举出实例，一是分析因果。5．含蓄的内容能加以解说。语句的含蓄，一是作者为了表达的需要或某种目的，故意不直接表达想表达的内容，而把它隐含在字里行间；一是运用了象征、双关等修辞格，采用婉曲的手法来表达自己的思想、观点、看法。对此类材料，不仅要理解它字面的含意，而且要深入挖掘其所隐含的信息，即能用简洁明白的语言解说材料深层的内涵。6.对于那些认为现实走在小说家想象力前面的作家而言，困难在于如何把握生活的复杂结构和本质内容。7.对艺术家而言，日新月异的变革时代，既意味着巨大挑战，也能激发创作热情，促使他们投身沸腾的生活。8.博物馆是一个城市的历史见证。在博物馆里，处处是珍品，步步是文化，那些流逝着历史智慧的文物，让人惊叹不已。9.家风是一个家族代代沿袭能够体现家族成员精神风貌、道德品质、审美格调的家族文化。美好家风的形成是漫长的，不可能一气呵成。10.劳动可以促进学生形成基本的生活生产劳动技能、初步的职业意识、创新创业意识和动手实践的能力。劳动技育婴在增长青少年的知识见识上下功夫，引导青少年在做中学，学中做，在社会劳动实践中增长见识，丰富学识、求真理、悟道理，明事理感谢观看，欢迎指导！2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件善良、淳朴、真诚。三婶买了老宅并把钥匙交给了我们，体现了她的56002-2021届高中英语书面表达之谋篇布局002-2021届高中英语书面表达之谋篇布局57记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料有关联的事件，并说出自己从事件中得到的启示或对所描述现象发表自己的看法。1．写作步骤概括原文→衔接过渡→描述事件→发表看法2．过渡语句

①Thisremindsmeofthesimilarexperience.②Thisstorybringsmebacktoaneventmanyyearsago.③Ihadasimilarexperience.记叙文之谋篇布局记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料有关联的事件，并说出自己从583．注意事项(1)时态记述经历类的记叙文，无论写人还是记事，通常以过去时态为主。如果所写的内容不但有过去的人和事，而且还有现在的人和事，那么对过去的人和事应采用过去时态，对现在的人和事应采用现在时态。(2)人称要根据题目的要求选用合适的人称，做到上下文人称一致。(3)篇章结构通常以时间或事件发展的顺序为线索，有时也可采用倒叙手法。详写主要情节，略写次要情节。3．注意事项59(2017·江苏仪征中学月考)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。TheElephantandtheFlyAnelephantwasstandingandpickingleavesfromatree.Asmallflycame,flyingandbuzzingnearhisear.Theelephantwaveditawaywithhislongears.Thentheflycameagain,andtheelephantwaveditawayoncemore.Thiswasrepeatedseveraltimes.Thentheelephantaskedthefly,“Whyareyousorestlessandnoisy?Whycan'tyoustayforawhileinoneplace?”(2017·江苏仪征中学月考)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英60Theflyanswered,“IamattractedtowhateverIsee,hearorsmell.MysensespullmeconstantlyinalldirectionsandIcannotresistthem.Whatisyoursecret?Howcanyoustaysocalmandstill？”Theelephantsaid,“Mysensesdonotrulemyattention.WhateverIdo,Igetinvolvedinit.NowthatIameating,Iamcompletely

absorbedineating.InthiswayIcanenjoymyfoodandchewitbetter.Iruleandcontrolmyattention.Whenyouareinchargeofyoursensesandattention,yourmindwillbecomecalm.”Theflyanswered,“Iamattrac61写作内容1．以约30个单词概括短文的内容；2．然后以约120个单词就“专注”这一主题发表你的看法，包括以下要点：(1)看完故事后的感受及启发；(2)描述一次你或他人因受太多干扰而使学习、生活或工作受到影响的经历；(3)你打算在高三这一年里如何保持专注。写作要求1．可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。写作内容62评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。审题本文为寓言性短文，要概括故事的内容，就要读懂故事的寓意。结合题目要求“就’专注’这一主题发表你的看法”，从而确定文章写作应围绕“专注”这一主题。审题时应做到：(1)定时态：本文在概括内容和描述经历时用过去时，在写打算时用将来时；(2)定人称：描述自己的经历用第一人称，他人的经历用第三人称。评分标准63第一段：概括短文内容,30words第二段：衔接过渡语,引出主题句第三段：描述一次受干扰的经历第四段：保持专注的打算2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件64满分范文

①Anelephantwasconstantlydisturbedbyarestless不安宁的fly,whowonderedaboutthesecretofremainingcalm.②Theelephantrevealed显示thatcalmnesswouldbeobtainedwhenone'ssensesandattentionwerefocused.③Inspiredbywhattheelephantsaid,Irealizedtheabilitytofocusone'sattentionisthekeytosuccess.④Anyperson,ifeasilydistracted,isunabletoachievehissuccess.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件满分范文2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT65⑤Thisremindsmeofwh