单元写作Unit I used to be afraid of the dark课件

Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.SectionB3a-3bUnit4SectionBObjectivesTotalkabouthowapersonhaschanged.Towriteacompositionabouthowapersonhaschanged.ObjectivesTotalkabouthowaBefore-writingBefore-writingMariousedtobe_____.Heusedtowear______.2.Amyusedtobe____.Sheusedtohave

__________.3.Tinausedtohave____and______hair.glassestallshorthairredcurlyshortWhatdidtheyusetolooklike?Looking-backMariousedtobe_____.HeusInthepastNow1.Paulausedtobereally______.Shewasalwayssilentinclass.Shewasn’tvery________.Shewasneverbraveenoughtoaskquestions.1.Nowshe’smoreinterestedin_________.Sheplays______almosteveryday.She’salsoona________team.quietoutgoingsportssoccerswimHowPaulahaschangedInthepastNow1.PaulausedInthepastNow2.Shegotgoodgradesin________.Shewasalsogoodin______________.Sheusedtoplaythe______.2.Shestillplaysthe________fromtimetotime.sciencemusicclasspianopianoInthepastNow2.ShegotgooWhatwasBillylikeinthepast?WhatisBillylikenow?shyandquietturnedredtalkedtogirls3.thinwearglasses4.readinthelibraryeveryday5.studiedhardandgotgoodscores1.popular2.bigandstrong3.girlsaroundhimBillyhaschangedsomuchWhatwasBillylikeinthepasAfterCandybecomessuccessful,shehasalotofdifferencesinherlife.Sheusedtobe_______________________,butnow_______________________.1.Candyusedtobe_________,butnowshe’snotshy____________.2.Shedidn’tusetobe___________inschool,butnowshegets___________________.3.Sheusedto_____________withfriends,butitisalmost____________now.4.Shedidn’tuseto____________howsheappearstoothers,butnowshedoes.5.Sheusedtosingto___________hershyness,butnowshelovessinging___________________.6.Shedidn’tuseto_______________aboutwhatshesaysordoes,butsheisnow.shyanymorepopulartonsofattentionhangoutimpossibleworryaboutdealwithinfrontofcrowdsbecarefulAfterCandybecomessuccessfulPastNowHefelt________and________.Hewas____________now,becauseheknewhisparents__________________.He__________________classesand_______hisexaminations.Heworked___________thanheusedto.Hewas_____andwasnotbeableto____________quicklyinschool.Hebecame___________and________________________inschool.lonelyunhappymuchhappierwereproudofhimwasabsentfromfailedevenhardershymakefriendsmoreoutgoingmadesomegoodfriendsLiWen’sChangesPastNowHefelt________and__ChangesDailylifeStudyHobbiesAppearancepersonalityBehaviors(行为习惯)…Mind-mapChangesDailylifeStudyHobbiesAAppearance:beam-wasis-wasare-weretall/shortofmediumheightofmediumbuildstrong/fat/good-lookinghandsomeheavy/thinyoung/oldKeywords﹠phrasesAppearance:betall/shortKeywostraight/curlyhairlong/shorthairblack/brown/blond/redhairtwobigeyesabignosealongneckasmallmouthglassesjeansahataT-shirtaschooluniformhave/has/hadwear/wears/worestraight/curlyhairglasseshavePersonality:outgoingfunnylovelycutekindfriendlyshyquietseriousactivesmartsilent(沉默的)confident(自信的)brave(勇敢的)humorous(幽默的)beam-wasis-wasare-werePersonality:outgoingfunnyHobbies:readbooks/sing/dance/run/playbasketball/playcomputergames/watchTV/listentomusic/…Dailylife:getup/gotobed/dohomework/gotoafter-schoolclasses/chatwithfriends/hangoutwithfriends/…Hobbies:readbooks/sing/dance/Study:begoodat/dowellin/beinterestedin/getgoodgrades/getgoodscores/getintohighschool/…failtheexaminationsBehaviors:beabsentfrom/havemuchprivatetime/fightwithothers/saysomethingbadtoothers/…Study:begoodat/dowellin/1.Iusedtobe…,butnowIam….Ididn’tusetobe…,2.Iusedtohave…,butnowIhave…Ididn’tusetohave…,3.Iusedtowear…,butnowI…Ididn’tusetowear…,4.Iusedtolike…,butnow…Ididn’tusetolike…,5.Iusedtoplay…,butnow…Ididn’tusetoplay…,Keysentencepatterns1.Iusedtobe…,butnowIaWhile-writingWhile-writing写作六大步骤：1.审：人称时态文体2.列：列要点3.扩:4.连：5.改:6.誊:Who?what?when?where?why?how?Goodpoints,badpoints…过渡词拼写，大小写，标点，格式排版写作六大步骤：1.审：人称2.列：列要点3.扩:4.连：5.Writeabouthowyouhavechanged.Whatdidyouusetobelike?Whichchangeisthemostimportantone,andwhy?3bHowI’vechanged!

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedto____________________________________.NowI'm____________________________________.Thebiggestchangeinmylifewas____________.Thisisthemostimportantchangebecause_____________________________________________________________________________________________.Para.1Generalintroductionaboutthechangesinyourlife.Para.2ThemostimportantchangeandhowithappenedWriteabouthowyouhavechangWritenotesabouthowyouhavechangedinyourappearance,personality,hobbiesandotheraspects(方面).Thentalkwithapartneraboutyourchanges.TakingnotesWritenotesabouthowyouhaveInthepastNow

appearance

personalityhobbiesshortandthintalllongcurlyhairshortstraighthairshyoutgoingquietactivemusicdanceInthepastNowappearanceInthepastNowdailylifestudybehaviorsgetupat6:30getupat6:00gotobedat10:00gotobedat12:00lazystudyhardgetbadgradesgetgoodgradestalkloudly/sleepinclasskeepquiet/listentotheteachercarefullyInthepastNowdailylifePost-writingPost-writing

评分档次和标准：第一档：17—20分。要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。第二档：13—16分。要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少数语言错误。第三档：9—12分。要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚、连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。第四档：5—8分。要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少量正确句子，但整体表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多。第五档：0—4分。只能写出一些单词，不成句子，缺乏逻辑性，错误很多．内容要点遗漏、句子语法结构错误、时态、语态误用，均为大错。其它错误（如冠词、介词、拼写等方面的错误）均为小错。3个小错相当于1处大错。相同的错误，只扣1次评分档次和标准：HowI’veChangedMylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.WhenIwasalittlechild,Iusedtoplaywithmyfriendsalldaylong.Wefoundthatalmostanythingcouldbringfuntous.Butnow,Iamgrowingup,thingsseemto

changegraduallythatIdon'trealize.OnepossibleversionHowI’veChangedOnepossibleIhadalotoftimetoplaybefore,butnownearlyallmytimeisspentonstudyandhomework.

Iusedtowatchcartoons,

butnowIprefer

newsandEnglishprograms.Generallyspeaking,thingsturnbetter.Now,Iaminterestedinreadingandwriting.IthinkthatthemoregoodbooksIread,themoreknowledgeIget.

Ihadalotoftimetoplaybe

ThebiggestchangeinmylifewasthatIbegantolovesportsattheageoften.Thisisthemostimportantchange.BecauseIdidn’tusetoplaysportsafterschool.WhenIwastenyearsold,Ioftenfellill.Somyparentsencouragedmetoplaysportsafterschool.NowI’mreallyinterestedinsportsandI’mmuchhealthier.

ThebiggestchangeinmyUnit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.SectionB3a-3bUnit4SectionBObjectivesTotalkabouthowapersonhaschanged.Towriteacompositionabouthowapersonhaschanged.ObjectivesTotalkabouthowaBefore-writingBefore-writingMariousedtobe_____.Heusedtowear______.2.Amyusedtobe____.Sheusedtohave

__________.3.Tinausedtohave____and______hair.glassestallshorthairredcurlyshortWhatdidtheyusetolooklike?Looking-backMariousedtobe_____.HeusInthepastNow1.Paulausedtobereally______.Shewasalwayssilentinclass.Shewasn’tvery________.Shewasneverbraveenoughtoaskquestions.1.Nowshe’smoreinterestedin_________.Sheplays______almosteveryday.She’salsoona________team.quietoutgoingsportssoccerswimHowPaulahaschangedInthepastNow1.PaulausedInthepastNow2.Shegotgoodgradesin________.Shewasalsogoodin______________.Sheusedtoplaythe______.2.Shestillplaysthe________fromtimetotime.sciencemusicclasspianopianoInthepastNow2.ShegotgooWhatwasBillylikeinthepast?WhatisBillylikenow?shyandquietturnedredtalkedtogirls3.thinwearglasses4.readinthelibraryeveryday5.studiedhardandgotgoodscores1.popular2.bigandstrong3.girlsaroundhimBillyhaschangedsomuchWhatwasBillylikeinthepasAfterCandybecomessuccessful,shehasalotofdifferencesinherlife.Sheusedtobe_______________________,butnow_______________________.1.Candyusedtobe_________,butnowshe’snotshy____________.2.Shedidn’tusetobe___________inschool,butnowshegets___________________.3.Sheusedto_____________withfriends,butitisalmost____________now.4.Shedidn’tuseto____________howsheappearstoothers,butnowshedoes.5.Sheusedtosingto___________hershyness,butnowshelovessinging___________________.6.Shedidn’tuseto_______________aboutwhatshesaysordoes,butsheisnow.shyanymorepopulartonsofattentionhangoutimpossibleworryaboutdealwithinfrontofcrowdsbecarefulAfterCandybecomessuccessfulPastNowHefelt________and________.Hewas____________now,becauseheknewhisparents__________________.He__________________classesand_______hisexaminations.Heworked___________thanheusedto.Hewas_____andwasnotbeableto____________quicklyinschool.Hebecame___________and________________________inschool.lonelyunhappymuchhappierwereproudofhimwasabsentfromfailedevenhardershymakefriendsmoreoutgoingmadesomegoodfriendsLiWen’sChangesPastNowHefelt________and__ChangesDailylifeStudyHobbiesAppearancepersonalityBehaviors(行为习惯)…Mind-mapChangesDailylifeStudyHobbiesAAppearance:beam-wasis-wasare-weretall/shortofmediumheightofmediumbuildstrong/fat/good-lookinghandsomeheavy/thinyoung/oldKeywords﹠phrasesAppearance:betall/shortKeywostraight/curlyhairlong/shorthairblack/brown/blond/redhairtwobigeyesabignosealongneckasmallmouthglassesjeansahataT-shirtaschooluniformhave/has/hadwear/wears/worestraight/curlyhairglasseshavePersonality:outgoingfunnylovelycutekindfriendlyshyquietseriousactivesmartsilent(沉默的)confident(自信的)brave(勇敢的)humorous(幽默的)beam-wasis-wasare-werePersonality:outgoingfunnyHobbies:readbooks/sing/dance/run/playbasketball/playcomputergames/watchTV/listentomusic/…Dailylife:getup/gotobed/dohomework/gotoafter-schoolclasses/chatwithfriends/hangoutwithfriends/…Hobbies:readbooks/sing/dance/Study:begoodat/dowellin/beinterestedin/getgoodgrades/getgoodscores/getintohighschool/…failtheexaminationsBehaviors:beabsentfrom/havemuchprivatetime/fightwithothers/saysomethingbadtoothers/…Study:begoodat/dowellin/1.Iusedtobe…,butnowIam….Ididn’tusetobe…,2.Iusedtohave…,butnowIhave…Ididn’tusetohave…,3.Iusedtowear…,butnowI…Ididn’tusetowear…,4.Iusedtolike…,butnow…Ididn’tusetolike…,5.Iusedtoplay…,butnow…Ididn’tusetoplay…,Keysentencepatterns1.Iusedtobe…,butnowIaWhile-writingWhile-writing写作六大步骤：1.审：人称时态文体2.列：列要点3.扩:4.连：5.改:6.誊:Who?what?when?where?why?how?Goodpoints,badpoints…过渡词拼写，大小写，标点，格式排版写作六大步骤：1.审：人称2.列：列要点3.扩:4.连：5.Writeabouthowyouhavechanged.Whatdidyouusetobelike?Whichchangeisthemostimportantone,andwhy?3bHowI’vechanged!

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedto____________________________________.NowI'm____________________________________.Thebiggestchangeinmylifewas____________.Thisisthemostimportantchangebecause_____________________________________________________________________________________________.Para.1Generalintroductionaboutthechangesinyourlife.Para.2ThemostimportantchangeandhowithappenedWriteabouthowyouhavechangWritenotesabouthowyouhavechangedinyourappearance,personality,hobbiesandotheraspects(方面).Thentalkwithapartneraboutyourchanges.TakingnotesWritenotesabouthowyouhaveInthepastNow

appearance

personalityhobbiesshortandthintalllongcurlyhairshortstraighthairshyoutgoingquietactivemusicdanceInthepastNowappearanceInthepastNowdailylifestudybehaviorsgetupat6:30getupat6:00gotobedat10:00gotobedat12:00lazystudyhardgetbadgradesgetgoodgradestalkloudly/sleepinclasskeepquiet/listentotheteachercarefullyInthepastNowdailylifePost-writingPost-writing