在语言欣赏和运用中提升学生写作能力

1、关于在语言欣赏与运用中提升学生写作能力第1页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四 高考书面表达新评分标准的要求 提高学生写作自信心的要求 实现英语写作水平提高的要求 新课程理念对写作教学的要求 语言欣赏与运用的必要性第2页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四 新 教 材 语 言 美 的 体 现一、词语美生动形象性 丰富性过渡衔接功能二、句子美句子的句法结构美 句子所描绘的意境美 句子的内涵美 句子的功能美 分步理解 综合运用重点欣赏个别操练/高档性第3页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四 教 材 语 言 的 综 合 运 用2模仿教材例句，

2、进行造句组段3. 激活语言积累，进行一句多译1. 整理文章信息，运用语言复述4. 利用单元话题，完成写作任务5综合所学语言，润色修饰短文 第4页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四Thank you !第5页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四高考书面表达新的评分标准的第5档要求：覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言应用能力。有效使用了语言的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第6页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四 教育部2003年颁布的普通高中英语课程标

3、准（实验稿）倡导体验、实践、参与、合作与交流的学习方式和任务型的教学途径，培养学生的综合语言运用能力。 第7页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四 Willis1996总结了语言学习的4个基本条件：要有语言环境，有大量的、真实的语言输入。有使用语言的机会，要能使用语言做事情，交换信息。要有使用语言的动机。理想的状态，应该有教学的条件，也就是有机会注意语言的形式。 第8页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四 心理学家认为，学习者的自我感觉对学习会产生重要的影响。如果学习者对自己有自信心，他们就会确定乐观的目标，而这种自信心是建立在他们能逐步地用所学的语言知识做

4、成一些事情、完成一些任务的基础上(龚亚夫：2003）。 第9页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四例1: Our legs were so heavy and cold that they felt like blocks of ice. ( B1 Unit 3)例2: A huge crack that was eight kilometers long and thirty meters wide cut across houses, roads and canals. ( B1 Unit 4)词语的生动形象性 例3: Slowly, the city began to

5、breathe again. ( B1 Unit 4)第10页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四例2: But I was happy to help because I knew it would help us achieve our dream of making black and white people equal. ( B1 Unit 5)例1: I am fond of my sister but she has one serious short- coming. She can be really stubborn. ( B1 Unit 3)(deter

6、mined, not change ones mind, make up ones mind, insist, not give in.) 词语的丰富性(reach ones goal/realize ones dream/live ones dream/make ones dream come true) 第11页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四 词语的过渡衔接功能例2: At first the river is small and the water is clear and cold. Then it begins to move quickly. It beco

7、mes rapids as it passes through deep valleys, traveling across western Yunnan Province. Sometimes the river becomes a waterfall and enters wide valleys. After it enters Southeast Asia, its pace slows. It makes wide bends or meanders through valleys to the plains where rice grows. At last, the river

8、delta enters the South China Sea. ( B1 Unit 3)例1: Anyhow, my goal is to provide humans with a life of high quality As a result I totally changed my shape.( B2 Unit 3)第12页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四例: (B1 Unit 3) However, the lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and looked wonderful. In the vall

9、eys colorful butterflies flew around us and we saw yaks and sheep eating green grass. At midnight the sky became clearer and the stars grew brighter. It was so quiet. There was almost no wind-only the flames of our fire for company.句子所描绘的意境美 第13页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四 句子的内涵美例1: As a matter of f

10、act, every country wants the opportunity. Its a great responsibility but also a great honor to be chosen.(B2 Unit 2)例2: “You should pay more attention to the rainforest where I live and appreciate how the animals live together. No rain-forest, no animals, no drugs. ” ( B2 Unit 4)第14页，共30页，2022年，5月20

11、日，5点34分，星期四例1: Who Am I ? (B2 Unit 3)Para1: Over time I have been changed quite a lot.Para2: Theses changes only became possible as my memory improved.Para3: Since the 1970s many applications have been found for me.句子的功能美例2: In Search of the Amber Room ( B2 Unit 1) Frederick William I, the King of P

12、russia, could never have imagined that his greatest gift to the Russian people would have such an amazing history.第15页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四Using languageHelp my son describe his journey to XinjiangWhat/do: climb mountains / make camp / sing & dance / take photos /What/see: lakes / butterflies

13、/ sheep / clear sky / glacier / grasslands /rapids/How/feel: surprised/ tired / excited/ Last autumn I took a trip with my parents to Xinjiang, the place I had always dreamt of. 第16页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四例：呆在户内太久之后，我对自然变得狂热起来。1. Having stayed indoors for a long time, I became /got interested in

14、 nature.2. I had stayed indoors for so long that I became crazy about nature.3. After I stayed indoors for a long time , nature began to keep me spellbound.4. Staying inside for so long made me excited about nature.5. I was dreaming about experiencing nature after being inside for so long.6. After b

15、eing inside for long, I found it so exciting to learn about nature. 第17页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四 随着社会的发展，英语在中国人的生活中起着越来越重要的作用, 学习英语的人也随之增多，但仍有部分学生认为学英语用途不大且很难学。中学生英文报就此内容开展征文活动，请写一篇短文陈述你的观点，内容须包括以下要点：1陈述存在的现象；2阐述学习英语的理由；3提出提高 (improve) 英语的建议。注意：词数100个左右，文章的开头已给出，不计词数。第18页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星

16、期四 With the development of society, English becomes more important in our life. More and more people are learning English now. But there are a part of students still think learning English is difficult and not useful. I think learning English is very important. English is used all over the world. We

17、 can talk with foreigners. We can get much information and make our life interested. There are many ways to learn English, such as listening to the tape, keeping an English diary, speaking English with a foreigner and reading English novels.第19页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四 With the development of soc

18、iety, English is playing a more important role in our life than ever before. The number of English learners is increasing rapidly. However, some students havent realized the importance of English and have some trouble learning it. Actually English is the most widely used language in the world. With

19、its help we can communicate with people from different places easily. We can learn about cultures in English-speaking countries and enrich our life. So its necessary to learn English well. Here Id like to share some ways of learning English with you. First, we should listen to the tape frequently. S

20、econdly, Wed better keep an English diary and set down what we go through and how we feel. Besides, we can make friends with a foreigner to practice speaking English. In a word, little and often is the way to learn English. If you put your heart into it, youll find its fun to learn and use English.第

21、20页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四 _（破坏）An earthquake _ (袭击）the city.shook/ hit/ struckdestroyed/ ruined/ damaged第21页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四What will happen in an earthquake ?Many buildings will fall down.Huge cracks will cut across roads, houses and canals.A large number of people will be hurt and

22、will even be killed.Water, food and electricity will be hard to get.The whole city may lie in ruins.injured第22页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四 At 3:42 am on July 28, 1976, the greatest earthquake of the 20th century shook Tangshan in Hebei Province.Tangshan earthquake第23页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四What

23、happened before the earthquake? For three days the water in the village wells _ and _. The well walls had deep _ in them, out of which a smelly gas came. In the farmyards, the chickens and pigs were _ nervous _ eat. Mice ran out of the fields _ places to hide. Fish jumped put of their bowls and pond

24、s. At 3:00am on July 28, 1976, bright lights appeared in the sky. The sounds of planes could be heard even when no planes were in the sky. Some water pipes _ and _. rosefellcrackstoo tolooking forcrackedburst第24页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四A huge crack _ houses, roads and canals. Steam _ from holes i

25、n the ground. Hard hills of rock became rivers of _. A large city lay _ in 15 seconds. The number of people killed or _ reached 400,000. Everything was _. Most hospitals, factories and buildings _. Bricks _ the ground like red autumn leaves. Two dams and most bridges _. The railway tracks were now _

26、 pieces of steel . _ cows would never give milk again. Half a million pigs millions of chickens were dead. Sand filled the wells _ water. Some rescue people were _ under the ruins. Water, food and electricity were_. cut across burst dirt in ruins injured destroyed were gone fell down uselessWhat dam

27、age did Tangshan earthquake cause? coveredTens of thousands ofinstead oftrapped hard to get It seemed as if the world was at an end.were trapped: were kept in a place from which one couldnt escape. All the people were very surprised. shocked.第25页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四Slowly, the city began to _

28、again. All hope was not lost. The army _ teams to _ _ those who were trapped and to _ the dead. They built _ for survivors whose homes had been destroyed. Fresh water was taken to the city, too. _ _ _ people were helped and most of the miners were saved from the coal mines. dig out burybreatheorgani

29、zedsheltersHundreds of thousands ofrescued Not all hope was lost. What did the soldiers do to help the rescue workers? 第26页，共30页，2022年，5月20日，5点34分，星期四What words and expressions do you appreciate most? Why ?What words and expressions do I appreciate most? Why?1. But the one million people of the city, who thought little of these events, were asleep as usual that night.4. A huge crack that