高考英语全国卷江苏新题型读后续写公开课课件(53张)

1、Continuation Writing 读后续写二1. to review, learn and apply the writing skills;2. to appreciate good writings and avoid some common mistakes;3. to rewrite the composition .Learning objectives本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分第五档(21-25)与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确， 可能有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使

2、用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 评分原则 读后续写: 提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）ReadWriteRead for key elements Read for main plot Read for writing style WritingRead for what?How to write it? what we have read 5(10) _ words beginning sentences of the two paragraphsclueBased on:Plot Devel

3、opmentPara 1-2: My dad took me to a special vacation on a farm in the _ West. Para 3: I experienced a lot of interesting things but what I most wanted to do was to take a _ ride. Para 4:Para 4: Although Uncle Paul was a bit _, I was so happy to take a horse ride with my dad towards the mountains.Wil

4、dhorseworriedContinue and complete the storyBeginningDevelopment My dad took me to a special vacation on a farm in the wild west.? I experienced a lot but what I most wanted to do was to take a horse ride. Although Uncle Paul was a little worried, I was so happy to take a horse ride with my dad towa

5、rds the mountains.Turning ?EndingKinds Underlined key words and phrasesCharacterActionPlaceConcrete ThingsAbstractdad / Uncle Paul farm house / river feed / get lost sheep/ track late/ sight P 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.P1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of m

6、y horse. Beginning sentences:Look back on tips on continuation writing in the story of Mac, Paul and the wolf Positive thinkingTo describe the characters actions in detail to express their thoughts and feelingsTo be logical and reasonableTo use some conjunctions and non-predicate verbs to make the t

7、ext coherent.(copy the language） To make use of the given information to echo the previous part.(呼应前文）Tips on continuation writingWriting tip 1: In the concluding paragraph, youd better communicate thoughts and attitudes to readers by creating a positive ending.positiveQ: What kind of persons are Fa

8、ther and Uncle Paul?Father : Brave, courageous , optimistic , wittyUncle Paul : experienced, helpful, considerate , diligent, hospitable (好客的). Writing purpose:1. To praise the spirit of being courageous and optimistic to think ways out even in difficult situations2. When others are in need ,we shou

9、ld never hesitate to give a hand.Tips on continuation writingWriting tip 2:To make a vivid story, you may as well describe the characters to express characters thoughts feelings in detail instead of telling the readers .actionsdirectly Fill in the blanks with proper words: So,my dad and I _ our new

10、cowboy hats,_ our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains.Dont belatefor supper,Uncle Paul_,and keep to thetrackso that you dontget lost! OK! mydad_.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out ofsight.-detailed description of _puton got on criedcried backthe action/motion Think and s

11、hare:What would the author do when suddenly a little rabbit jumped out ?stopfollow catchprotectcontrolfall offThink and share:What would the horse do ?frightenrun (wildly)disappear Think and share:What would Dad do ?protectfollowcomfortinstructcalm downThink and share:What would Uncle do ?rescuehelp

12、/aidshouthugprepare a dinnerUncle Paul Tips on continuation writingWriting tip 3:Creative plotting requires a careful analysis of the close link between the given information. Being creative doesnt mean you can write whatever you like. Continuation writing should be designed in a and way. logical re

13、asonableLogical and reasonable Fly your imagination but keep to the track of the story! not a fairy talenot a fiction no GPSa narrative(叙事) storyDevelop the plot based on the contextWhats in the previous story, especially the last plot?Whats in the two given first sentences? Although Uncle Paul was

14、a little worried, my dad and I took a horse ride towards the mountains.Para1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Para2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.We got lost because of the rabbit.It was so peacefulandquietand the colors of the brownrocks, the deep gr

15、een pinetrees, and the late afternoonsun mixed to create a_ scene. It looked like a_woven blanketspread out uponthe groundjust for us. magicbeautifulTips on continuation writing 4： copy the languageTips on continuation writingWriting tip 4:Use scenery description to imply ones _. scenery description

16、 with metaphor（暗喻） creates a strong and vivid picture in readers mind.feelingsEg：The home Made BallThe two friends kicked and ran until the sun turned the sky pale orange.Tips on continuation writingWriting tip 5:Make use of the given information to echo the previous part.(呼应前文）In the afternoon, I a

17、sked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Dont be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “a

18、nd keep to the track so that you dont get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like

19、 a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. People come into your life for a reason. When someone comes into your life for a reason, they may come to assist you through a difficulty, to provide you with guidance and support. They are there for the reason you need them to

20、be. Tips on continuation writing.Positive thinkingTo describe the characters actions in detail to express their thoughts and feelingsTo be logical and reasonableTo use some conjunctions and non-predicate verbs to make the text coherent.(copy the language） To make use of the given information to echo

21、 the previous part.(呼应前文）6.Use scenery description to imply ones feelingsParagraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.1.Then what happened? 2.What caused us to get lost? 3.What were our emotions? 4.How to descri

22、be our emotions directly or indirectly? 1)words (dialogues) and actions(see,hear,do); 2)descriptions of the environment; 3)use adj. and adv. What was it like in the dark? What could we see, hear and do? How could we find the way back? What were our emotions then? How to describe our emotions? How di

23、d I feel about the whole experience?Which five words will be used? Rewrite the storyProblem 1 :Wrong tenseProblem 2 :Wrong genre（体裁） Problem 3 :Grammar mistakesProblem 4 :Ignoring given informationProblem 4 :Ignoring given informationProblem 5 :Not logical nor reasonable Problem 5 :Not logical nor r

24、easonable Problem 6 :Awful writingProblem 6 :Awful writingGood writing 1 :Good writing 2 :Good writing 3 :Good writing 4 :Good writing 5 :Good writing 6 :Appreciation Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. I

25、 tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I . As that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved. But

26、it was clear that we got lost. 1 We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We didnt know where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really difficult for us to see in the dark. Just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint

27、 voice from the distance. “It must be Uncle Paul ,” I said. We cried back with joy and relief. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride! Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to run after it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees. “We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper.” I thought to myself. After a serie