非谓语动词在写作中的运用李萍市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件

1、Non- finite Verbs in writing非谓语动词在写作中应用第1页Teaching goal: Master the use of non-finite verbs in writing.Teaching important point: Three forms of non-finite verbs.Teaching important difficult point: How to use non-finite verbs to make sentences.第2页Forms of non-finite verbs V-ingV-edto VEg. workworking

2、workedto work第3页Revision.Do 1-15 on 22. 总复习目标第4页Revion.1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I am given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies harder. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.Given another chance, I wil

3、l succeed.To improve his English, he studies harder.Join the sentences with non-finitive verbs.第5页 On National Day, I had very bad luck. When I woke up , I found it was too late for school. And I found the alarm clock was turned off. I hurried downstairs and found my bike which was broken was stolen

4、. I felt exhausted when I arrived at school. After the school guard told me, I knew it was holiday for National Day. Then when I came back home, I realized I had left my keys in the door and I found my house was broken into.Read the passage aloud.第6页On National Day , I had very bad luck. _ (wake) up

5、, I found it was too late for school and the alarm clock _ (turn) off. I hurried downstairs and found my _ (break) bike _(lose).So I had to run to school. _ (exhaust), I arrived at school. _ (tell) by the school guard, I knew it was holiday for National Day. Then when _ (come) back home, I realized

6、I had made my keys _ (leave) in the door and I found my house _ (break into).WakingturnedbrokenlostExhaustedToldcomingleftbroken intoRead again and compare.第7页用非谓语结构改写和美化句子1.因为在这国家没有朋友，她以为要想找到工作是不可能。用连词becauseBecause she had no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.用非谓语结构Havin

7、g no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.第8页2.这本用简易英语写成书很轻易读懂用定语从句 The book, is easy to understand.用非谓语结构 The book , is easy to understand用非谓语结构改写和美化句子which was written in simple English, written in simple English,第9页3. 他们是来自于几个国家游客。用定语从句 They are visitors who come from seve

8、ral countries.用非谓语结构They are visitors coming from several countries.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子第10页4.发觉他好朋友沮丧，他竭尽所能让他朋友开心。用并列句He found his best friend frustrated and he did everything he could to make him happy.用非谓语结构Finding his best friend frustrated, he did everything he could to make him happy.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子第11

9、页 It is high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more healthy. It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.4. 用非谓语结构合并以下句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子第12页Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont w

10、ork hard at their lessons. They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.用非谓语结构美化文章第13页Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is po

11、pular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.用非谓语结构美化文章第14页They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. They cheat to get highe

12、r marks so that they can be praised or even admired. 用非谓语结构美化文章第15页Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.用非谓语结构美化文章第16页

13、Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.用非谓语结构美化后文章第17页提

14、议有足够睡眠是必要。原因1.它能有效改进我们课堂学习。2.保持健康身体是深入学习及工作基础。要求：1. 用2- 3句话表示表格内容 2. 2- 3句话要有连贯性necessary an effective way to improve our learning in the class.the basis for our further study and work. 高考临近，保持良好心态有利于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难勇气 。Having a try第18页翻译: 高考临近，保持良好心态有利于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难勇气 。高考临近。 (National College Entrance

15、 Examination) 保持良好心态很主要。 (have a right attitude)它有利于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难。Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句National College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Having a tryStep1：拆分成几个简单句(汉字)第19页Step3：合并句子 With National College

16、 Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. National College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence1:Having a try第20页Step3：合并句子 Wi

17、th College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence2:Tip: Try to us

18、e differentways to express.Having a try第21页提议有足够睡眠是必要。原因1.它能有效改进我们课堂学习。2.保持健康身体是深入学习及工作基础。要求：1. 用2- 3句话表示表格内容 2. 2- 3句话要有连贯性（高考模拟）Having a trynecessary an effective way to improve our learning in the class.the basis for our further study and work.第22页提议有足够睡眠是必要。原因1.它能有效改进我们课堂学习。2.保持健康身体是深入学习及工作基础。Ha

19、ving a tryIt is necessary to have enough sleep .Having enough sleep is necessary.It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Keeping healthy is the basis for our further study and work.To Keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work.第23页 Passage： Having enough sleep

20、 is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work.Tip: Never ignore the conjunction.Having a try第24页 With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which h

21、elps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work. Besides, doing exercise regularly is of great benefit to our health.

22、Last but not least, it is very important to keep a balanced diet.第25页二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简练高档三. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力四. 尝试多 样化表示方式一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力强调句With短语复合结构定语从句名词性从句(主宾表同从句)各种状语从句被动语态第26页书面表示评分档次情景作文共分6档给分 第1档 1820 分 第2档 1517 分 第3档 1214 分 第4档 6 11 分 第5档 1 5 分 第6档 0 分第27页08北京高考：假设你是红星中学高三一班学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为 “Our

23、Spring Outing” 英文稿件。请依据以下四幅图先后次序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束完整过程。 注意：词数不少于60。 提醒词：游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin 讨论爬山捡拾他人垃圾投放垃圾第28页惯用语：1.Last Friday left me a deep impression, which I will never forget. Last week, I / my brother had an unforgettable experience.2. In order to improve our abilities of facing danger

24、, our school organized an activity. 按时间次序描写3. Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went toby bus. One Sunday morning, my classmates and I went to the park for an picnic. 4 After doing, we went to do. 5.Having done,we. 6. And then, we.第29页结尾语： I was tired, but I was happy that I did a

25、good deed. I have learned a great deal through the activity. It is an unforgettable day / experience 评论语/感叹I think the activity is both necessary and meaningful. It not only makes us aware of the importance of self- protection/helping others/protecting our environment but also develop our abilities

26、of dealing with things /communicating with others.2.The activity can develop /promote our sense of social responsibility.第30页.心情语 We were in high spirit. With excitement filling our heart, we said thanks/goodbye to sb. With our hearts filled with excitement, we. To our joy/delight, we saw. 景色： 1. Th

27、e view was beautiful. 2. The sun was shining. 3. Gently came the soft wind. 4. The weather was clear , the wind calm and the sun shining 第31页时间次序：关键点：细节：适当添加：时间次序：关键点：细节：适当添加：时间次序：关键点：细节：适当添加：时间次序：关键点：细节：适当添加：Early in the morningset off climb爬山、天气心情，景色When we got to the top of处处垃圾情绪诧异心情Finally或few h

28、ours later,或After.投放垃圾可回收, 不可回收感受Before the Spring outing讨论不一样想法心情第32页 好作文要素：详细生动We started our spring outing on a fine day. In high spirits, we started our spring outing on a fine day. In high spirits, we started our spring outing early in the morning on a fine day. Flowers greeted us with their sw

29、eetest smiles and we were soaked up in the warm sunshine. 第33页上周我们班组织了一次春游。我们先召开了班会讨论春游去哪儿。我们提出了很多不一样想法,比如去游乐园,去划出和去爬山。Last week our class organized a spring outing.We first held a class meeting, discussing where to go for our spring outing.We came up with several choices, such as going to an amusem

30、ent park, going boating and going mountain climbing. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.1.第二天，我们一大早儿就出发了。2.当我们爬山时候,我们享受着温暖阳光和观赏着漂亮景色。3.没过多久我们便来到了山顶。The next day, we set off early in the morning.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.It didnt take us l

31、ong to arrive at the top of the mountain.4. 最终我们决定去爬山。第34页然而，当我们抵达山顶那一刻我们诧异地发觉这里处处都是游客留下垃圾。我们毫不迟疑地开始捡垃圾。However, we were shocked to see litter here and there left by tourists the moment we reached there.Without any hesitation, we set out to pick up the litter at once.捡完全部垃圾后，我们把垃圾分别扔到附近可回收和不可回收垃圾桶里。

32、即使很累，但我们很有成就感。因为我们为保护环境尽了我们绵薄之力。Having collected all the rubbish, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.Tired as we were, we had a sense of achievement because we did our small part to protect the environment.第35页最基本范文 Last Thursday, we_ a class meeting

33、_where to go for our spring outing. We _up with several choices, such as_ boating, _a mountain, and _to an amusement park. Finally we decided_ mountain climbing. The next day, we set off early in the morning, while _the mountain, we _ the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we _the top

34、, we _to see litter here and there, such as bottles and bananas peels. Then we started _the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby _bin and_ bin respectively. We _tired but happy.hadto discusscamegoingclimbinggoingto goclimbingenjoyedreachedwere shockedto pick uprecyclingnon-recyclin

35、gwere第36页37 Last week, our class organized a spring outing. To make this memorable activity more wonderful, we discussed the destination carefully and finally decided to go mountain climbing instead of other choices like playing in an amusement park and going boating.With high spirits, we started ou

36、r spring outing on a fine day. Flowers presented us with their sweetest smiles and were soaked up in the warm sunshine. However, we were shocked when we reached the top of the mountain. Waste bottles and used packages were thrown everywhere which totally ruined the beauty of the nature. Feeling a gr

37、eat pity for the tourists, we picked up the rubbish and carefully divided them into two groups: the recycle ones and the non-recycle ones. After that, we put the rubbish第37页38into the bin differently. We call on awareness on protecting our environment which is of great importance. Though cleaning up

38、 the rubbish was a tough task, our hearts were filled with joy and we will remember this outing for ever.19第38页 Gently comes the Spring. As the wind softly blows, it brings back the vitality to the great outdoor. Students in our class were excited, too, and eager to have a spring outing in the weeke

39、nd last week. A heated discussion was held: Some students suggested we go boating, some insisted that going hiking was the best idea, while some thought the amusement park was of more fun. Finally, we decided to go hiking in the mountains on a sunny day. The flowers were blooming happily and sent th

40、eir welcome to us. With excitement in our heart, we climbed the mountain easily and reached the peak soon.优异作文观赏第39页 To our surprise, what we found on the peak was not only beautiful scenery, but also rubbish here and there. Feeling so bad for the environment spot, we changed our plan and began pick

41、ing up the rubbish. Afterwards, we brought the rubbish down the mountain and sorted them into “can be recycled” and “cant be recycled”. We finally dropped them into different bins set at the foot of the mountain. Fun as we had during the trip, we still felt so sorry for the ruined nature. I think it

42、 is everyones duty to take care of the environment so that we can contribute to a better living and relaxing space for others.得分：18分 内容关键点齐全，连贯，恰当使用了连接成份，所用句式和词汇较丰富；表达了较强语言利用能力。第40页假设你是红星中学高三一班学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Social Practice Activity”英语稿件。请依据以下四幅图先后次序，叙述上周你们班从准备参观首都博物馆到参观结束完整过程。注意：次数不少于60第41页 Our class visited the Capital Museum last week, and it is one of the most impressive social practice activit