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1、2021/8/9 星期一1读写任务训练2021/8/9 星期一2一、复习归纳2021/8/9 星期一3 The writer tells us that the parents as well as the pupil and the teacher should do something about education. To start with, parents should provide friendly atmosphere for their children by communicating with them. Next, parents should help their

2、children become more independent. In addition, children should become more responsible with the help of their parents as they grow older. Parents Help Is Important2021/8/9 星期一4 I do agree with what the author says. The parents, the pupil and the teacher should be responsible for childrens education.

3、 Parents should provide their children with friendly atmosphere by listening to their children, talking with them and encouraging them to face difficulty. When I was a little child I often asked my parents questions. Instead of paying no attention, my parents always listened carefully to what I was

4、saying and tried to explain everything by giving many examples. 2021/8/9 星期一5 To sum up, parents are responsible for their children. Parents help is important. 2021/8/9 星期一6读写任务型写作模板 标题第一段:第二段:第三段: 请根据以上范文归纳读写任务型写作模板:概括所给短文内容要点约60字过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点-理由 约80字总结句 约10字2021/8/9 星期一7标题标题是段落中心思想的精练表达形式。根据所写短文的

5、内容，概括出中心思想然后加以提炼，拟定标题；Is time more valuable than moneyOn SmokingHow to make friendsHappinessIs watching TV a good thing?My view of money / time / pollutionMy attitude toward building a car factory2021/8/9 星期一8第一段：概括所给短文内容要点注意：利用原文中所给的语言材料，用自己的话来写；概括后的文章意思要通顺，行文要连贯。写作具体方法和要求:第一段概括要做到开门见山: 例如: Accordi

6、ng to the passage, we knowThis article is mainly aboutThe writer states that2. 第一段要做到有层次感: 必要时概括段中运用 firstly,secondly,lastly, 或but, so等来列出原文作者观点或内容。3. 第一段概括要抓住要点,语言精练: 2021/8/9 星期一9 The writer tells us that the parents as well as the pupil and the teacher should do something about education. To star

7、t with, parents should provide friendly atmosphere for their children by communicating with them. Next, parents should help their children become more independent. In addition, children should become more responsible with the help of their parents as they grow older. Parents Help Is Important2021/8/

8、9 星期一10第二段:过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点-理由开头用语：I do agree with the authorIn some way, I agree with , butThis opinion sounds right but is hardly practical.It is definitely not like that. As a matter of fact, From my personal angle aloneIn my opinion,From my personal point of viewAs far as Im concerned 2021/8/9 星期一

9、11第三段最后一段 : 总结句开头用语：In conclusion,In short,To make a long story short,In general,In a word,In belief,On the whole,All in all,2021/8/9 星期一12Examples:1) All in all, the development of children is not only the responsibility of their parents, but also the responsibility of the whole society.2) In a wor

10、d, smoking harms yourselves as well as your neighbors, so it should be strictly forbidden.3) In conclusion, we value money but cant put money above everything else.2021/8/9 星期一13二、读写训练2021/8/9 星期一14读写任务阅读下面的短文， 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文Let children learn to judge their own work. A child learning to talk

11、doesnt learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other peoples. In the same way, children learn to do

12、all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct

13、himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. Let the student do it himself. Let him work out, with t

14、he help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem.写作内容1）概括短文的内容要点， 该部分的字数大约60词左右2）就“学生的学习错误该不该改正”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包括以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约60词左右； a)以英语学习为例，简述你学习过程经常出现的语言错误； b)你是如何看待自己的语言错误； c)你的老师如何对待你的语言错误； d)你对老师的做法持什么看法？为什么？写作要求你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅

15、读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。评分标准 概括的准确性、语言的规范性、内容的合适性以及篇章的连贯性。2021/8/9 星期一15读写任务步骤:（一）审读阅读材料寻找作者的论点,论据和结论（二）概括原文观点转述作者的论点，论据和结论（三）提出自己观点赞成或反对（四）论证自己观点用事例论证自己的观点（五） 得出结论 2021/8/9 星期一16审读阅读材料，整理短文说理思路（找出短文的论点，论据和结论）：1.论点：Let children learn to judge their own work.任务（一）审读阅读材料2021/8/9 星期一172.论据：1). A child lea

16、rning to talk doesnt learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other peoples. 正面论据2). In the same way,

17、 children learn to do all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their won behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. 正面论据3). But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even few

18、er chances for him to correct himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. 反面论据2021/8/9 星期一183. 结论：L

19、et the student do it himself. Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem.2021/8/9 星期一19任务（二）概括原文观点-客观简要地转述作者的论点，论据和结论：论点 Let children learn to judge their own work.Let children learn to decide if they have any learnin

20、g mistakes in their work.Childrens learning mistakes should not be corrected by their teachers.The writer says that childrens learning mistakes should not be corrected by their teachers.2021/8/9 星期一20论据1).+2). A child learning to talk doesnt learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too mu

21、ch, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other peoples. In the same way, children learn to do all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicy

22、cle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. Children learn by comparing their behaviors, including speech, with those of more skilled people. 2021/8/9 星期一21论据3). But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistake

23、s for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. Bu

24、t in school teachers point out and correct their students mistakes for them too often, making the students dependent on them.2021/8/9 星期一22结论Let the student do it himself. Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem.So

25、 children should learn by correcting their own mistakes and helping each other instead of having their mistakes corrected by their teachers.2021/8/9 星期一23任务（三）提出自己观点 -过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点(赞成或反对)-理由This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical. In real school learning situations, especially in learning

26、 a foreign language like English, without teachers correction all the way, beginners will repeat their mistakes without realizing it.2021/8/9 星期一24任务（四）论证自己观点-用事例论证自己的观点： a)以英语学习为例，简述你学习过程经常出现的语言错误； b)你是如何看待自己的语言错误； c)你的老师如何对待你的语言错误； d)你对老师的做法持什么看法？为什么？I, for example, liked to use words (that are) t

27、oo formal for a students composition. But.Now,2021/8/9 星期一25任务（五） 得出结论So teachers should be encouraged to correct their students mistakes as soon as possible.2021/8/9 星期一26Students Mistakes Should Be Corrected By Their Teachers From the passage we know that childrens learning mistakes should be corr

28、ected by themselves. Children learn by comparing their behaviors, including their speech, with more skilled people . But in school teachers always point out and correct their students mistakes, making the students dependent on them. So children should learn by correcting their own mistakes and helpi

29、ng each other instead of having their mistakes corrected by their teachers. ( 65 words) 2021/8/9 星期一27 This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical. As far as Im concerned, in real school learning situations, especially in learning a foreign language like English, without teachers correction al

30、l the way, beginners will repeat their mistakes without realizing it. I, for example, liked to use words ( that are ) too formal for a students composition. But I never realized it until my teachers repeatedly replaced them with simple words. Now, I can write naturally in simple English. In conclusi

31、on, teachers should be encouraged to correct their students mistakes as soon as possible. 2021/8/9 星期一28We Need Teachers Help The author says that childrens learning mistakes should not be corrected by their teachers . He takes a child learning to talk as an example . And he believes that children w

32、ould become dependent on the teacher if they were made to correct their mistakes with the teachers help. So children should be allowed to work out their problems all by themselves. It is definitely not like that. As a matter of fact , without the teachers help we cant make rapid progress. For exampl

33、e, my pronunciation was poor. I used to pronounce the word “ work” as “ worker”. I was worried about it very much. My teacher gave me a lot of drills and I made the right change at last. So you see, what it would be like for us to learn English without teachers !2021/8/9 星期一29Should We Judge by Ours

34、elves? The author argues that children should be allowed to learn to judge their own work. Children learn to do all the things by comparing themselves with others, and make some adjustment slowly. However, once corrected to much, they will lose independence. So students should be encouraged to solve

35、 the problems on their own.2021/8/9 星期一30 In my opinion, in a way, the author is right. As far as Im concerned, making language mistakes is inevitable in school. Some of the mistakes, such as forgetting “s” or “ed”, can be easily found and corrected by students. But others, like grammar mistakes, can be c