【高考英语专题】二轮复习英语通用版课件：7步成文第（5）步 靓词佳句升级完衔接顺畅“修一番”

1、“冤屈的”四档作文(得分11分)Dear Sir/Madam， Ive learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to receive foreign students visiting our school. Im writing to apply to join it, thinking that Im well qualified for the job. I have developed fluency in spoken English. I have no

2、 difficulty communicating with them. I have accumulated related experience by working parttime in a travel agency, accompanying some foreign tourists. I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective as well as improve my spoken English. Looking forward to your reply at your convenience.Yo

3、urs，Li Hua升格后的五档作文(得分14分)Dear Sir/Madam， Ive learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to receive foreign students visiting our school. Im writing to apply to join it, thinking that Im well qualified for the job. For one thing, I have developed fluency in s

4、poken English. As a result, I have no difficulty communicating with them. For another, I have accumulated related experience by working parttime in a travel agency, accompanying some foreign tourists. More importantly, I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective as well as improve my spoken English. Looking forward to your reply at your convenience.Yours，Li Hua名师点评左栏的文章运用了现在分词作状语、宾语从句、非谓语动词等；in need of, be well qualified for, develop fluency in, accumulated, broaden my perspective, as well as等的应用也恰到好处；文章采用了三段式，分段合理，总体来说是一篇不错的作文。但美中不足的是缺少了语句间的连接成分，感觉好像只是一些句子的简单堆