专题书面表达二经典精讲上课后练习一及详解

1、简单课程课后练习学科：英语专题：表达二经典精讲（上）主讲教师：80 中学高级教师 HYPERLINK http:/w/ http:/w市海淀区上地东路 1 号盈创动力E 座 702B4008-110-818免费总机：题一请根据下面所示内容，用英语写一篇短文，比较高中学生“减负”前后的有关情况。过 去(“减负”前)现 在(“减负”后)小时小时8642课棠时间作业时间睡 眠时间其 它时间短文须包括所有图表内容，可以适当增加细节，使短文连贯；词数为 100 个左右。题二根据下列图示, 以 “The New Grading System in Our School”为题, 为某一中篇短文, 说明你校目

2、前新课改中的这一举措以及你对学校实施这一举措的认识。要求: 词数 120 字左右, 开头已为你写好, 不计人总词数报写一参考词汇: 评分体制 grading system参与 participation（n.） tests notes class participation team work题三下图是你校学生会在全校同学中就查结果。请根据此图写一篇短文，客观描述奥运会给你留下最深刻印象是什么这一问题的调结果个人观点。注意：1、短文必须包括图表的所有内容，可适当发挥；86422、短文开头已为你写好，不记入总词数；3、词数：100 左右。成功的组织工作13.5%中国运动员的出色表现恢弘盛大的开幕

3、式60.4%26.1%题四最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老师”这一话题展开，有些人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，介绍结果以及你的个人观点。要求：1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯。2、词数：100 词左右。3、开头已给出，不计人单词总数。Recently, we have had a discusin our class about whetharents are our best teachers .Some students 题五假期将至，据一份网上提示写一篇英语短文。，显示出了学生、家长对于补课的不同观点。请你根据下列假期补课表观点原因同意不完

4、全同意1如何生活过分溺爱2缺点，指明方向强加、价值观3富有爱心希望值过高要求：1.字数：120 词左右；2.必须谈出自己的看法。参考词汇：extra lessons n.补课relaxv.放松题六同学进行了一场有关英语学习的。的题目是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍的情况自己的感想。参考词汇：为打下坚实基础lay a solid foundation for汉语拼音Chipinyin课后练习详解题一范文：he past, senior middle school students were heavily burdened will kinds of.Bec

5、ause of various examinations, they spent about 6.5 hours in their classroom a day. At home,一些同学认为另一些同学认为应从儿童时期开始学习英语儿童时期力好，可以记住很多单词能为以后的英语学习打下坚实的基础不应从儿童时期开始学习英语儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又要，易会影响和今后的英语学习未取得一致意见学生观点60%不同意40%同意理由疲惫；应给予时间空间放松、调节能多学点东西家长观点同意但过高理由有人安全，补了总比不补好，多少学点about 3.5 hours was spent on theirand the

6、refore most of them got lessn seven hourssleep a night, with only about three hours free time for other things. As a result, their health wasbadly damaged.Now things are getting better. About five hours is spent in class and hours forisshortened to about two sotime to do whatever they like.t they ca

7、n have two more hours sleep and also two more hours free点评：本文根据这两个柱状图把高中学生“减负”前后情况准确地表达了出来；本文使用了一些高级短语、宾语从句、状语从句和过渡词。题二范文：The New grading system in Our SchoolIn order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked theteachers to make some changeshe grading system. T

8、his chart shows how it works.The students final score will be made up of 5 parts. About 30% of it will come from their testresults. The rest of the score is decided by the performanof the studentshe following parts:. If you take20% comes from your notes, and another 20% is decided by how you do your

9、an active part in classroom activities, you can get another 20% of the score. Teamwork in class isalso important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.y opinion, our school has made a good deci. To begin with, this new grading systemhas changed the

10、way the students performanin school only depended upon their test results.Secondly, it will certainly help to improve ourselvesany ways.点评：作者把图表所反映的学校新的评分体系准确地表达出来了自己的看法；作者使用了使用状语从句、定语从句、不定式、语态、高级短语和过渡词。题三 范文：Recently, a survey has been done by our school Students Union to find out what impressed th

11、estudents most about the Beijing Olympic Games. The results are shown below.Moreperformann half of the students, to be exact, 60.4%, are deeply impressed by the excellentof ChiAthletes. On the other hand, 26.1% of the students cant fet the grandand fantastic Opening Ceremony, which almost doubles th

12、e number of those who think thesucsfulanization of the Beijing Olympic has impressed them the most.y opinion, the Beijing Olympic has been a sucsful one in every aspect, including theperformance of the Chiathletes, the Opening Ceremony and theanization.点评：作者把图表中所反映的学生对的看法；作者使用了定语从句、过渡词和奥运会最深的印象准确地表达

13、了出来语。了自己题四 范文：Recently, we have had a discusin our class about whetharents are our best teachers .Some students agree to the pobecause they think parents help to poout their mistakesheirlives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. Whats more, parents love helps to teach them how

14、 to love others, So parents are their most important teachers .However, not all of us hold the views, Some thinkt their parents give them too much love,and they are too eager to pass on their values anderests to them. Moreover , their parents sometimes expect too much of them, whiakes them feel thei

15、r goals too difficult to reach.y opinion , parents are our important teachers, But parents should also try to understandtheir children more and limit teration gap .点评：作者把表中的信息完整地表达了出来宾语从句、状语从句和过渡词。了自己的观点；作者使用了同位语从句、题五 范文：60 percent of the students are against giving extra lessons during vacation. Th

16、ey think theyshould be given enough time and freedom to develop their ownerests and enjoy some outdooractivities to relax and prepare for a better start. However, the others about 40 percent are in favor of it and they want to learn something more during this period of time.Compared with the views o

17、f their children, parents agree to it, though they complain about thehigh price they have to pay. They think having someone take care of their children is betternleaving them about, andt students can get something out of classes, however little it is.点评：作者把表中的信息完整地表达了出来状语从句、使用了非谓语动词和过渡词。了自己的观点；作者使用了

18、名词性从句、题六范文：The students of No. 4 High School had a discus learning English from childhood. Some of them thinkabout whether it is nesary to startt English learning should start fromchildhood. As littoys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English wordsby heart. This will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others donot agree. Young children have to learn Chipinyin at school. If they study Chipi