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1、教学内容：1）作文概述缩进式齐头式2）写作步骤3）常用的语法表达4）第一段写法训练5）第二段写法训练6）第三段写法训练一、 写作概述1） 小作文写作的题型书信类 （公务书信 、 私人书信）通知 （正式通知，留言）摘要英文书信必备三部分1）称呼2）正文3）落款注：此三部份为英文书信格式必需组成部分，。常见称呼Mr.(先生)Dr./ Prof. 博士/教授（用于学术界）Ms.（）已婚，未婚均可Editor(编辑)Dear Sir or Madam,用于不知收信人时To Whom It May Concern,常用于信、证明信、鉴定信一类称呼的使用1）写给机构：Dear Sir or Madam,T

2、o Whom It May Concern,或者：Dear Mr.,Dear Mr. Wang，Dear Bher 屠夫: a man who killed ad sold the pork.2)写给个人：Dear Mr. Wang，(关系不亲密)Dear Michael， (关系亲密)落款（结束语）放在右下角公务信函和私人信函，均可通用：Yours sincerely,Li Ming对亲人或朋友还可用：Yours, Love, Best wishes，2）小作文写作注意事项1）书写整洁：阅卷规定，书写不清可以降低 1 档（3 分左右）如果写错一个单词你要用一道斜线或者横线把它勾掉再重新写一遍

3、2）格式规范：如作文标题，书信的开头及落款3）虎头豹尾：作文的开头、结尾不可出错。前三句即决定成绩。4）避免明错：时态，单复数，主谓不一致3）小作文写作评分标准评分分为五个层次2 4 6 8 10（8-10 分）的标准1）包含所有内容要点2）使用丰富的语法结构和词汇3）语言自然流畅，语法错误极少1-24）有效的采用了多种衔接，文字连贯5）格式和语域恰当贴切How are young ?非正式的信件当中4）小作文写作结构通常分三段首段：写信目的 1 到 2 句话中段：写信详情 4 或 5 句，通常第一句为总述，或者过渡句。尾段：收尾 2 句，S1：感谢看信，S2：期待回信（可以稍稍改变）5）小作

4、文写作时间分配（15 分钟）二、写作步骤1）认真审题2）列提纲：列出每段要写什么3）动笔英语一小作文05 年（辞职信）Directions:Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazineDesigns &fashions. But now you findt the work is not whatyou expected. You decide to quit 辞职. Write a letter to yours, Mr. Wang, 1.ling him your decising 2. yourreason(s),

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9、ce 不方便thusCaused分词作myas后置定语.Please acceptsinceremygratitude,asmuchregretserveforherenotanybeingabletolonger.YourssincerelyLiMing写作第 23 次课建议信Directions：Write a letter to youruniversitylibrary,makingsuggestions forimproving its service.Youaboutshouldwrite100wordsonANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your ownna

10、me atof tMing”letter.Use“Liinstead.Donotwritetheaddress. （10 ps）第一段：自我介绍+写作目的第二段：提出具体的建议措施第三段：希望考虑措施并期待回复Dear Sir or Madam，I,studentasasenior（ 可 以 替 换大。小）department 系学院,academyAcademyofthel theofFinanofManagementuniversity who regularlycome tothelibrarytospendmyve,sparetime,Ibegenerallyservicespeaki

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13、vens symphonies,literaturelike r mastieTwains, which will helpusasbroaden our horizonwellasknowmorean cultures.It will be grateful if you回应couldresponditivelyand helpfully抱怨认真地tothecomplaandtakeseriouslymysuggestionsaccount 考虑. I amlooking forward to yourreplyatyourearstconvenience.Your sincerely,Li

14、 Ming08 年（道歉信）Directions:YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyour luggagetyoufottoreturnlandlordtoBob,yourWritethere.him a letter to1)andmakeanapology,2) suggest a solution.Youaboutshould100writewordsonANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your ownname atofMingletter.UseLiinstead.Donotwritetheaddres

15、s. (10 poDear Bob,s)Isinceamawfullysorry因为Iwassocareless t I fot towhich ireturnyourCD,onlywhenhappenedtofindtheunpackingluggage after my returnfrom Canada. （分词作状语可以保留连接词，前提是逻辑主语和主句主语是一致的） I amwritingtoexpressmydeepregret andrendermy solution.第一段：名词+定语+状语Tomakeup formythoughtleess,Ihavedeemeveryt tr

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17、ity.第二段：1.提出解决方案+附带的弥补措施（ 你内心想多做的事情）致歉信：1. 请吃饭2.3. 参观中国的名胜古迹4. 送一些手工的致歉信的最后一段：再次表示歉意Oncereallyagain,guiltyIforfeelanyinconvenienarisingmyish mycareleyouessandcanacceptapology.from因 为11 年（Directions:信）Writealettertoafriend of yours to1)your and2)mend one offavoritemoviesgivereasonsforyourYour aboutme

18、ndationshouldwrite100wordsonANSWER SHEET 2Do not sign your ownname atof theletter. User “LI MING”instead.Donotwritertheaddress.(10 pos)书最喜欢的人你车啊花啊跟你生活息息相关的东西你都要去积累一些个性化的空间词汇（又臭又长）BeethovensymphoniessChrysanthemum 菊花Chrysanthemum terrace菊花台的救赎正确伊甸湖Antman15Ironman名字和书名都要加引号Cant hold olf fromsth禁不住做某ng

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22、h you later.Yours sincerelyLi MingRobinsonCrusoe 1512 年（信）Directions:Supe you havefound something wrongwith the electronic dictionary t youbought from an onlinestore the other day,Write anto thecustomer service centerto1)and2) demand a prompt 迅速的 立即的solution You should writeabout 100wordsonANSERE SH

23、EET 2Do not sign your ownname atof themake a complaletter, Use Zhang Wei instead .信第一段：自我介绍+写作目的第二段：原因产品的第三段：提出解决措施并期待回复1.屏幕太小2. 耗电快3.运转速度慢4. 黑屏5.6.7.8.9.单词量少色差充电器不合适发音不标准声音出不来信模板Dear Mr. Manager, /ToWhomItMayConcernI am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/不耐摔不方便携带表ment( 不air(达 ) disappo满) regarding/ I venture to write tobeef about the electronic dictionary I bought from youronline store the othercomplainandday.During the five days thedictionary has been inmyses,problems h