广东省高考英语一轮 短文改错书面表达训练

1、)I|广东省2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（15）附参考范文短文改错（全国II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改

2、。George,Itsbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenow76.backhome.Thankyouverymuchforshowingthemaround77.yourcityandprovidingusforthewonderfulmeals.After78.wesaidgoodbyetoyou,wewenttoWashingtonD.C.,79.wherewestayedforthreedays.Mybrotherwassomuchfond80.ofthemuseumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostaying81a

3、nothercoupleofday.However,myfatherhadtoreturnto82.workonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.It83wasreallyaniceexperience.Ifyoudliketomaketripto84.ourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.85.Yours,Mike76.after-since77.them-us78.for-with79.正确80.去掉much81.staying-stay82.daydays83.fly-flew84

4、.trip前a85.bettermoreXT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*XT*表格提示类4.你校同学进行了一场有关高考英语听力测试的讨论。讨论的主题是：高考英语测试中的听力部分该不该取消？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。一些同学认为不应该取消另一些同学认为

5、应该取消听是语言的四项基本技能之一，不能忽视听是获取信息的重要途径之一国际合作日益增多，听说能力应加强考试中各地收听效果好坏不一、不公平英语教师和语音设备城乡差异过大今后并非人人都要与外国人口头交流注意：1文章的起始句已给出。2词数：100左右（不包括已给的起始句）。3.参考词汇：取消一cancel国际合作一internationalcooperationThestudentsofourschoolhadadiscussionaboutwhetherlisteningtestintheNationalMatriculationEnglishTestshouldbekeptorcanceled.

6、Somestudentsthinkthatlisteningtestshouldnotbecanceled.Theyinsistlisteningisamongthefourbasicskills.Wethereforecannotignoreit.Besides,listeningisoneoftheimportantchannelsforustogetinformationfromtheoutsideworld.Soitshouldbestrengthenedtodaywheninternationalcooperationisbecomingmoreandmorefrequent.But

7、othersdontagree.Theythinknoteveryonehastocommunicatewithforeignersinthefuture.Moreover,listeningtestisunfairtothestudentsintheareaswhereradiosignalscannotbepickedupeffectively.Andforcertainreasons,thereisabigdifferenceinteachersandequipmentbetweenthecountrysideandthecity.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修

8、改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。（2012唐山三模）Onlineshoppingisincreasingpopularamongpeopleinrecentyears.Somepeoplelikedtobuygoodsonline.AndIdontlikeit,becauseonlinesho

9、ppingislessreliablethanthetraditionalsale.Firstly,somedishonestmerchantofferconsumerstofalseinformationonline.Secondly,consumerscantfeeltheitemsthatisusuallypresentedbymeansofpictures.Thismeanstheitemsdeliveringmaydifferfromwhichconsumersexpect.Asaresult,theymayriskreturningtheitemsatourownexpense.T

10、hirdly,theitemsmightbedamagedduringdelivery.Inword,onlineshoppingisntreliableatall.答案解析*短文改错Onlineshoppingisincreasingpopularamongpeopleinrecentyears.Someincreasinglypeoplelikedtobuygoodsonline.AndIdontlikeit,becauseonlineshoppingislesslikeButreliablethanthetraditionalsale.Firstly,somedishonestmerch

11、antofferconsumerstomerchantsfalseinformationonline.Secondly,consumerscantfeeltheitemsthatsusuallyarepresentedbymeansofpictures.Thismeanstheitemsdeliveringmaydifferfromdeliveredwhichconsumersexpect.Asaresult,theymayriskreturningtheitemsatourownwhattheirexpense.Thirdly,theitemsmightbedamagedduringdeli

12、very.InAword,onlineshoppingisntreliableatall.a表格提示类5.请以MyfavoriteNewspaper为题用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍21世纪报，短文应包括下面表格中所提供的内容。报纸名称及使用语言21stCentury,英文报纸出版地点及出版周期北京，每周期版面内容每周新闻，今日世界，语言课堂，体育与音乐，学生报导特色图文并茂目的学习英语词汇，提高英语水平，获取各种信息效果广为人知，深受喜爱MyFavoriteNewspaper21stCenturyismyfavoritenewspaper.ItisanEnglishlanguagene

13、wspaperwhichispublishedinBeijingeachweek.Ithassectionsofdifferentkinds,includingNewsoftheweek,theWorldToday,LanguageClass,SportsandMusicandStudentsReport.Thereareplentyofbeautifulpicturesandinterestingarticlesinit.Ienjoyreadingthepaper.IreadittoimprovemyEnglish.Ihavelearntalotofnewwordsandusefulexpr

14、essions.Besides,Icangetinformationaboutdifferentthings,frompoliticstosportsandmusic.21stCenturyisverypopularwiEnglishlearners.Idoloveit.【重庆南开中学高】第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每一行只有一个错误，按下列情况改下。此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也划掉此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号C）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边

15、横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。DearMrs.Smith,TOC o 1-5 h zIappreciateyourhelpverywell.Onthefirstdayof76thecamp,youcameuptomyselfwhileIwassittingalone.77Afterthat,youalwaysgavemespeciallyattentionand78inspiredmetojoininactivity.Asaresult,Igradually79gottoknowothercampers.Becausethehelpyougaveme80thatsummer,

16、my.lifechanged.Igainsomuchconfidencethat81Iwentbacktoschoolasnewperson.Mygradesimproved.I82becameactivebutmadenewfriends.Yesterday,Igotaletter8384thatwassaidIwasadmittedtoacollege.Iamproudofit.Ijust85wanttothankyouforhelpingmebecomingadifferentperson.YoursBob改错76well改为much77myself改为me78specially改为sp

17、ecial79.activity改为activities/在activity前面力口the80because的后面加of81.gain改为gained82.new前面加abut改为and84.去掉was85.becoming改为become高考英语书面表达讲义：日记2.你的一天活动安排如下，请你据此写一篇日记。时间地点活动安排8：00校门口欢迎美国学生(约50人)到校参加访问8：30-9：30图书馆阅鉴室联欢会(get-together),交换礼品9：30-10：30校园内参观教学楼、实验楼、校办工厂、游泳池10：30-11：30操场友谊篮球赛12：00校门口美国学生离校14：00-17：00

18、几家书店和几名同学选择、购买了书和磁带交换：exchangevt.20XX年11月25日星期六晴Nov.25SaturdayfineAboutfiftyAmericanstudentscametovisitourschooltoday.Wegatheredattheschoolat8oclocktogivethemawarmwelcome.Thenwehadaget-togetherinthereadingroominourlibrary.Ourheadmastertoldthemsomethingaboutourschool.Andthenwetalkedwitheachotherandex

19、changedgifts.Fromninethirtyweshowedthemaroundourschool.Theyvisitedourclassroombuilding,thelabbuilding,thefactoryrunbyourschool,andtheswimmingpool.Afriendlybasketballgamestartedonthesportsgroundatthenthirty.AttwelveoclockallAmericanstudentsleftourschool.IntheafternoonmyclassmatesandIwenttosomeshops.W

20、echoseandboughtsomebooksandtapes.Iwasbusybuthappytoday.表格提示类6.据调查，中国城市居民的电脑拥有率达30%。很多农村居民对电脑也越来越感兴趣，甚至有的家庭也买了电脑。参考下表写一篇题为“ComputersinChina”的短文。词数为100左右。家庭买电脑的目的中学生使用电脑的情况类别比率因别比率孩子学习需要70%学习资料査询30%家长工作需要20%上网、聊天、游戏60%娱乐30%听音乐、看光盘20%ComputersinChinaAccordingtoarecentinvestigation,about30%ofthecityfami

21、lieshavecomputer.Besides,manyvillagepeoplearemoreandmoreinterestedincomputersandsomeofthemevenhaveboughtcomputers.About70%oftheparentsboughtcomputersfortheirchildrentostudy,andsomefortheirwork.Andevensomepeopleboughtthemforentertainment.Thefacthowthemiddleschoolstudentsusethecomputersreallysurprises

22、us.Onlyabout30%ofthemusecomputerstofindoutusefulinformation.About60%usecomputerstoplaygamesand20%usecomputerstowatchVCDsorlistentomusic.Inmyopinion,weshouldmakebetteruseofourbestinventioncomputers.高考英语书面表达讲义：日记针对训练2月4日，星期天上午，你们班同学骑车到学校附近的公园组织了一次环保活动。请根据下表内容，写一篇日记，发表你对此次活动的看法。1组扫除：清理废纸、烟蒂、塑料袋等废弃物2组宣传

23、：树立标牌，告诉游客要爱护花木3组演讲：向游客宣传“白色污染”的害处以及保护环境的重要性你的看法1日记必须包括表内所有的内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯2日记格式及首句已给出，不列入总词数；3词数：100词左右。4.参考词汇：烟蒂cigaretteendFebruary4,SundayFineThismorningourclassorganizedanenvironmentalprotectionactivityinthenearbypark.February4,SundayFineThismorningourclassorganizedanenvironmentalprotectionac

24、tivityinthenearbypark.Onarrivingthere,weweredividedintothreegroups.Thefirstgroupcollectedtherubbish,suchasthewastepaper,cigaretteends,plasticbagsandsoon.Thesecondgroupsetupseveralboardstoremindthevisitorstotakecareoftheflowersandtrees.Thelastgroupgaveaspeechtothevisitorsonthedangerof“whitepollution”

25、andtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Ithinkitisveryimportantforustoprotecttheenvironment.Forthesakeofpeopleshealthandhappiness,measuresshouldbetakentocontrolandpreventpollutionandeveryoneshouldmakeacontributiontoit.*1*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*

26、X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X*X/Tir1It*T-1_,y|，表格提示类7.如今，外出旅游已成为时尚。下面的部分物品可能是你旅游时必备的。请你选择至少最重要的五种物品，并说出理由。字数100字左右。DocumentsIDcard,passportClothessweater,coat,walking,shoesArticlesmedicine,umbrella,vacuumbottle（热水瓶）Equipmentmobilephone,compassBooksguidebook,map,magazineOtherthingscamera,CDplayer,Mp3Whiletraveli

27、ng,Ialwaystakethefollowingthingswithme,whicharemyIDcard,acamera,acompass,aCDplayerandsomeclothes.IthinktheIDcardisabasicandnecessarydocument,anditisamustfortouristswherevertheygo.Thecameraisusedtotakepicturesorrecordwhatwehavedoneduringthetrip,anditcanbringusalotoffun.Thecompassisveryessentialforust

28、otravelintheforests.Withoutit,wemaygetlost.AndthentheCDplayer,Ithink,isalsoveryimportantformetokillthetimewhenonthetrainortheplane.Whatsmore,Ihavetobringoneortwocoatswhentravelingtoadifferentplace.Inaword,amongalltheabove,IthinktheIDcardisthemostimportant.*结束表格提示类8.目前，重庆的街头出现了越来越多的猫与狗，对此“中学生英语报”组织了一

29、场讨论：城市内是否可以饲养宠物。根据下表所提供的信息，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。支持饲养宠物反对饲养宠物你的观点安慰孤寡老人人与动物和谐相处，增添生活情趣造成环境污染吵闹声，甚至伤人注意：1词数100左右。2可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯。3开头语已为你写好。Onepossibleversion:Recentlywehavehadaheateddiscussiononwhetherpeopleshouldkeeppetsathomeincities.Somestudentsthinkitsagoodideatokeeppetsbecauseoldpeoplewholivealone

30、athomecangetsomecomfortfrompets.Besides,gettingalongwellwithanimalswillmakeourlifeinteresting.Onthecontrary,theotherstudentsareagainsttheidea.Intheiropinion,iftoomanypeoplekeeppetsathome,itisbadfortheenvironment.Whatisworse,petsmaymaketoomuchnoiseandevenattackpeople.Ilikeanimals,soIdontthinkitisbadt

31、okeeppetsathome.Butwemusttakesomemeasurestopreventthemfrompollutingourenvironmentorcausingothertroubles.*结束短文改错【重庆市外国语学校】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号C）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。AtaFridaynight,

32、apooryoungartiststoodatthegateofthe76.subwaystationandplayedhisviolinwithlargepieceofpaperon77.thegroundBeforelong,hewassurroundingwithpeople,who78.wereallattractedbythewordonthatpaper.Itsaid,“lastnight,79agentlemanputanimportantthingintomyhatbymistaken.Petoclaimitsoon.”Seeingthis,peoplewonderedwhyi

33、tcould81.be.Afterabouthalfanhour,amancameandbrought82backhislottery（彩票）whichwonarewardof500,000.Latersomeoneaskedtheviolinist:83.Whydontyoutakethelotteryticketforyourself?”Hesaid,“WhileIdonthavemuchmoney,Ilivehappily.However,Ilosehonesty,Iwontbehappyforever.”短文改错：76.第一个at改为on77.with后加a78.surrouning改

34、为surrounded79.word改为words80.mistaken改为mistake81.why改为what82.brought改为took83.reward改为prize84.dont改为didnt85.if后加I1.伴随着社会的发展，人的“个性”也越来越强。新时期的青少年都愿意追求个性，这种行为对他们的人生发展是利是弊？请结合下表中所给内容，写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法正方观点反方观点你的观点疋发展个性是开放时代的必然趋势；追求个性若把握得好，对青少年成人后的工作很有好处。个性不等于任性或是放纵；个性的释放要适时适度。注意：1.词数：130-1702.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

35、1.Withthedevelopmentofsociety,therearemoreandmoreteenagerstendingtoshowtheirownindividuality.Thereisnodenyingthatitsanaturaltrendforteenagerstodeveloptheirindividualityinmodernsociety.Weshouldnoticethateducationtodaypaysmoreandmoreattentiontotheindividualitydevelopmentofthestudents.Also,developingin

36、dividualityproperlyisgoodforteenagerstostandoutintheirworkinthefuture.However,individualitydoesntmeanbeingcompletelyfree.Therearestilllawsandrulesregulatingourbehavior,whichwarnsusnottocrossthelimit.Therefore,individualityshouldbecontrolledtoaproperextent.Inmyopinion,teenagelifeisanimportantstagewhenwedevelopandimproveourselves.Weshouldspendmoretimeandenergysothatwecanmeetthechallengesininlearningratherthanpursuingindividualitythefuture.Afterall,itisnotwhatyoulookcountslikebutwhatyoureallymasterthat*1*