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1、公开课如何写建议信第1页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一 Once upon a time there was a boy who fond of reading. However, he was very poor to buy any books. That was the reason that he had to borrow books from a rich man who owned a lot of books. The boy knew clearly that he has to finish reading the books he had borr
2、owed them and return them to the owner as soon as possible. 第2页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一A rich man, who was ready to lend any of his book to the boy, read few of his own books. With time going on, the boy read a lots but finally became a famous writerin his time. Though the rich man had so many bo
3、oks, he remained a man with little knowledge because of he seldom read his books. 第3页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一 Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. 第4页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一 Some of my classmates are in favor of the mo
4、ve. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.第5页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一 However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 190
5、6, has a history of 100 years, and is wellknown at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. Whats more, if we move the zoo, some animals may die. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.Yours truly,Li Hua第6页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一how to write a l
6、etter of advicewriting第7页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一 Dear Mr. Wang, Knowing that our library is going to buy books, Id like to give some advice. What we need most are popular science books. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries. In addi
7、tion to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.Yours sincerely, Li Yue建议信Ending
8、express your hopeBeginning state your purposeBody give advice & reasons第8页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一1. Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on2. I am writing to express my views concerning3. Knowing that, Id like to give some suggestions. A. state your purpose sentence patterns B. gi
9、ve your advice 1. Its helpful/ important to2. It would be a good idea to3. I would like to suggest that C. express your hope1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.3. Im sure if you take my advice, you will 第9页,共18页,20
10、22年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一表达愿望:5、我相信如果你接受我的建议,你会变得更加苗条和保持健康。The use of sentence patterns表明意图:1. 你给Jane 回信就如何减肥提建议。 提出建议:2、健康饮食3、多锻炼4、喝足够多的水Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, Id like to give some suggestions. It is important to have a healthy diet. It is helpful to do more exercise. It would be
11、 a good idea to drink enough water. I am sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy. 假设你叫李华,你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖,很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信,词数100左右。 1、健康饮食 2、多锻炼 3、喝足够多的水第10页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一 It is helpful to do more exercise. It would be a good idea to dri
12、nk enough water.It is important to have a healthy diet.Dear Jane, Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, Id like to give some suggestions. First, it is important to have a healthy diet.In addition, it would be a good idea to drink enough water.Besides, it is helpful to do more exercise. I a
13、m sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy. In order to lose weight, you can eat more vegetables and fruits.The more exercise you take, the more fat you will burn off, and you will be thinner. Because water can support our body and activities, and help us lose weight.第11页
14、,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一Dear Jane, Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, Id like to give some suggestions. First, it is important to have a healthy diet. In order to lose weight, you can eat more vegetables and fruits. Besides, it also helps if you take more exercise. The more exercise
15、you take, the more fat you will burn off, and you will be thinner. In addition, it should be a good idea to drink enough water, because water can support our body and activities, and help us lose weight. Im sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy. Looking forward to your
16、 early reply. Yours, Li Hua第12页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。 1. 参加中文学习班; 2. 看中文书刊、电视; 3. 学唱中文歌曲; 4. 交中国朋友。第13页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一引出话题,表明写作意图1. 参加中文学习班;2. 看中文书刊、电视;3. 学唱中文歌曲;4. 交中国朋友。提出建议:总结,表达愿望连接词(多个建议+多个理由)Outline第14页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一评分
17、标准1、是否覆盖所有内容要点2、是否恰当使用语法结构 3、是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇4、是否使用连接词5、全文结构是否完整合理第15页,共18页,2022年,5月20日,6点41分,星期一Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the
18、 teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and
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