2021届高考英语二轮复习书面表达我们如何推敲写作用词？以校园欺凌为话题学案

1、2021届高考英语二轮复习书面表达我们如何推敲写作用词？以校园欺凌为话题学案2021届高考英语二轮复习书面表达我们如何推敲写作用词？以校园欺凌为话题学案PAGE PAGE 82021届高考英语二轮复习书面表达我们如何推敲写作用词？以校园欺凌为话题学案我们如何推敲写作用词？（以校园欺凌为话题)下面我们就说这篇文章的用词：School BullyingVarious school bullyings are now coming under the spotlight。 Despite considerable efforts to tackle the issue， the effect is

2、far from satisfactory。Quite a few factors give rise to the bullying issue. First, many convenient media online and offline have provided fertile soil for negative information， especially concerning violence， which will be rooted in childrens heart and lead them astray. Inadequate parental education

3、should also be held responsible for their childrens ignorance of laws and indifference to others feelings. They will end up appealing to more simple but rude ways， like violent abuse, to serve their purposes.In fact， there is no simple solution to school bullying. Most important of all is proper gui

4、dance and monitoring from both schools and parents. Particularly， it is more emphasis on childrens ethical development and mental health that can secure a harmonious school， instead of prioritizing their academic performance。 After all, students self-discipline and moral sense count for anything。推敲花

5、絮节选：Various convenient media online and off-line make children exposed to negative information修改：Various convenient media online and offline have provided fertile soil for negative information。理由：fertile soil字面意思是“肥沃的土地，但是这个soil可以进一步灵活运用，下面有具体解释.expose这个词这里用得其实挺好的，但我们认为，最好用expose children to。这就涉及到ma

6、ke的消除规则,参看:详解版：School BullyingVarious school bullyings are now coming under the spotlight。 Despite considerable efforts to tackle the issue， the effect is far from satisfactory.注解：1. spotlight n。 聚光灯 the spotlight U attention from newspapers, television and the public 媒体和公众的注意,写作时我们经常会写道：某事引起了广泛关注，成

7、为了焦点，会写成sth has aroused public attention/ discussion等，这里就可以使用come under the spotlight来替换使用。除此之外，limelight也表示“公众注意的中心”，和spotlight同义.拓展:表达“某事引起了广泛关注，成为了焦点”,还有很多表达，你能想出哪些呢？Keys： sth become the talk of the town， sth is on everyones lips等。1. considerable adj。 great in amount， size， importance, etc. 相当多(或

8、大、重要等)的，可以在某些场合替换使用过多的万能词great.2。 far from adv。 used for saying that the real situation is the opposite of what you mention 根本不,并不，远不及，其意义就是not，并加强了语气。比如far from good, far from perfect就是“不好”的意思，写作时我们可以经常用到，用来修饰一些形容词.Quite a few factors give rise to the bullying issue. First, many convenient media on

9、line and off-line have provided fertile soil for negative information， especially concerning violence, which will be rooted in childrens heart and lead them astray。 Inadequate parental education should also be held responsible for their childrens ignorance of laws and indifference to others feelings

10、。 They will end up appealing to more simple but rude ways， like violent abuse, to serve their purposes。注解:1。 这一句是我写作经常用的一种句式，可以说是万能句型了，大家在写作时只需要把violence和别的可以换话题的词替换就可以使用了。本句中，fertile的意思是“肥沃的”,那么fertile soil字面意思是“肥沃的土地”但在这里我们取它的引申义“（可供某事发展的)沃土”。例如：Eastern Europe provided fertile soil for political a

11、ctivists。 东欧是政治活跃分子的温床。2。 inadequate parental education 缺少父母教育3。 be held responsible for 是。的成因，作为原因；成为起因拓展:表达这个意思的短语还有哪些?Keys: be to blame。, be a contributory factor等4。 serve ones purpose 达到某人的目的.除此之外,短语serve no useful purpose表示没有用处,可以用来替换useless，serve the original purpose意思是“达到初衷，达到初始的目的”。这些短语大家都可以

12、积累一下，以便使用。In fact, there is no simple solution to school bullying。 Most important of all is proper guidance and monitoring from both schools and parents。 Particularly， it is more emphasis on childrens ethical development and mental health that can secure a harmonious school， instead of prioritizing

13、their academic performance. After all， students self-discipline and moral sense count for anything.注解:1. there is no simple solution to 。.没有直接简单的解决方法，在总结时，用在一些重大的困难问题比较合适。2. secure v. （formal） to obtain or achieve sth, especially when this means using a lot of effort （尤指经过努力)获得，取得，实现,在这里是熟词生意，或者我们也可

14、以理解成“使.。.安全”，都可以。3. prioritize v。 to treat sth as being more important than other things 优先处理,和短语give priority to在意思上没有区别，但是单独使用动词更有力度,这个以后大家学习深入了就会了解到。4. count for anything v.重要。相当于count for much。作文用词注意事项！评价：1。无词块，不成句。我们发现，几乎每个句子都有很地道的词块，词块然后结合句型使用,如非谓语动词、形式主语等.2。词块特点：小而活。我们发现，每个词块都是非常常见的占绝大多少.还有一些词块如a hard nut to crack, facilitate daily communication, on the right track虽然平时很少用，但是确实日常对话中很普遍的.这对我们的启发：1.不要一味追求生僻词块。有些同学好用四六级中的词汇，却不考虑语境和风格的统一,虽然看起来很高大上，但是一眼就感觉有说不出理由的别扭，原因就一个:用词太生硬。我建议同学们把教材中的词块熟记是非常根本的。2。高度重视常见动词和名词的鲜活用法。虽然nut大家都知道是核仁，但高考范文却用的a hard