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1、优秀资料欢迎下载阅卷老师的评分标准切题,把段落当中每一个标题都要覆盖用词不重复句式变化多杜绝中国式的英文文章当中的闪光点卷面的整洁,正确的修改形式阅卷老师的评分标准一、切题,把段落当中每一个标题都要覆盖。Whatwouldhappeniftherewerenopower?ItpaystobehonestAletterinreplytoafriendSchedulefortheday二、句式变化多(Expressions)句子的多样性(简单句,复合句,及省略句、倒装句)例:在简单句当中运用几种结构:主语+谓语+宾语主语+谓语+双宾语(直接宾语,间接宾语)主语+谓语+宾补注意运用Therebe的句

2、型Onecarcome,onecargo,twocarbangbang,onecardie.尽量多用一些被动语态,多用名词做主语,用被动代替主动,丰富文章当中的句式变化。例:Heisveryinterestedinpopmusic.Heshowsgreatinterestsinpopmusic.Popmusiciswhatheisinterestedin.Greatinterestshasbeenshownbyhiminpopmusic.六大从句的运用:宾语从句定语从句状语从句主语从句表语从句同位语从句AsfarasIamconcernedIagreewiththepointthat-Itgo

3、eswithoutsayingthat-优秀资料欢迎下载AsfarasIknowIaminfavoroftheopinionthat-三、用词不重复必须要注意写作的具体元素及,用词切记多余重复(redundancy)一个词下一次提到表示相同的意思应该用不同的词来表达。尽量用词组和从句代替一个词的用法:forexample/forinstance/asanillustration./Acaseinpointisthatgood/wonderful/great/fantastic/surprisingnice/incredible/fabulous/incredibleinterviewee/jo

4、bapplicant/jobhunter/jobseeker/thepeoplewhoaregoingtofindajob.用句子和词组来代替一个词inthefirstplace,inthesecondplaceTherearemanypeoplewhohold/argue/maintainthat-Itgoeswithoutsayingthat-AsfarasIknowIaminfavoroftheopinionthat-四、文章当中的闪光点在四级考试作文题目当中适当地运用谚语可以起到画龙点睛的作用,增加文章当中的闪光点。但是谚语引用在文章中最多不能超过三次,引用的谚语也不能太偏。Eachc

5、oinhastwosides.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.Wherethereisawillthereisaway.“Godhelpsthosethathelpthemselves”Alittlelearningisaverydangerousthing.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.五、杜绝中国式的英文Asaproverbsays:“AmericaandChinanotenough.”Isawabreadcarkissawalkmanintheman-line.Leftseesee,rightseesee.Thedriverish

6、orsehorsetigertiger.Onestop,twosee,threeacross.Iwilldoanhonestman.Nomoney,notalk.Dr.KongshusbandMiaoYounoseeme,younogo.Inoseeyou,Inogo.Noseenogo.WritingModelsNowadays/atpresent,withthedevelopmentofhumancivilization,aswellasthesignificantimprovementofthescienceoftechnology,andduetotherapidchangesinou

7、rsociallives,moreandmorepeopleareconcerningaboutwhether文章主题,Asa优秀资料欢迎下载result,thetopicof把主题改写为被动,isincreasinglybecomingthemostpopularcontroversyrecently,whichraisesmanyissuesinthesociety.ThatremindsmeofanoldChinesesayingwhichgoes:“Eachcoinhastwosides.”Differentpeopleholddifferentkindsofopinionstowar

8、dit.Asaresult,theattitudestowardthisissuevaryfrompersontoperson.切题与审题四级考试当中对时间和篇幅都有严格的限制,因为考场上的气氛比较紧张,作文又是考试的第一项,所以考生一定要注意是在是否你的作文里题目的每一个选项都进行了覆盖,不要漏掉了任何一个段落标题。建议考生在读完题目之后,快速确立自己的观点,把他写在草稿上,或在胸中打一个腹稿,由于试题当中一般都给出了中文线索,你所列举的理由和例子一定要与他们相一致,千万不要跑题在图表作文当中,不要怕耽误时间,一定要看清并且吃透图表的意思,不要匆忙动笔,避免跑题。注意看清楚图表当中的提示和说

9、明。考生在修改时的注意事项语法,全篇时态是否一致,主谓是否一致是否把所有的标题都已经覆盖。拼写,词组搭配,大小写。检查一下句中的句式是否有变化,用词是否重复在四级考试当中用词的注意现象必须要注意写作的具体元素既,用词切记不要重复(redundancy)既一个词下一次提到表示相同的意思应该用不同的词来表达。尽量用词组和从句代替一个词的用法:例:forexample/forinstance/asanillustration./Acaseinpointisthatgood/wonderful/great/fantastic/surprising/niceincredible/fabulous/inc

10、redibleinterviewee/jobhunter/jobseeker/thepeoplewhoaregoingtofindajob.Jobapplicant用句子和词组来代替一个词用法inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,Therearemanypeoplewhohold/argue/maintain/that-AsfarasIamconcernedIagreewiththeopinionthat-Iaminfavoroftheopinionthat-Itgoeswithoutsayingthat-AsfarasIknowIaminfavoroftheopi

11、nionthat-frommypointofview,Intheopinionofmine,在四级考试当中句式的运用(Expressions)注意句子的多样性:(简单句,并列句,复合句,省略,六大从句,非谓语结构)优秀资料欢迎下载例:在简单句当中运用五种结构:主语+谓语MrSongisreading主语+谓语+宾语MrSongisreadinganEnglishbook.主语+谓语+双宾语(直接宾语,间接宾语)MrLiisteachingusEnglish.主语+谓语+宾补MrLiisteachingustopassCet-4.注意运用Therebe的句型高分作文的表达作文用词当中即不能太浅,

12、太口语化,也不能用怪词偏词,即太多的专有名词。例:Heisveryinterestedinpopmusic.HeshowsgreatinterestsinpopmusicHeexpressesthegreatenthusiasminpopmusic.尽量在多用一些被动语态,多用名词做主语,用被动代替主动。丰富文章当中的句式变化。Popmusiciswhatheisinterestedin.Greatinterestshasbeenshownbyhiminpopmusic.例1:JohnisgoodatwritinginEnglish.WritinginEnglishiswhatJohnisgo

13、odat.例2:ItisveryimportanttolearnEnglish.TolearnEnglishisveryimportantEnglishisofgreatimportance.GreatimportanceshouldbeattachedtoEnglish.LearningEnglishisveryessential.LearningEnglishshouldbepaidmuchattention.Moreandmorehighschoolstudentshavethechancetogotouniversity.Moreandmorehighschoolstudentshav

14、etheopportunitytoattendtheuniversity.Moreandmorehighschoolgraduateshavetheopportunitytoreceive/participatehighereducationMoreandmorehighschoolgraduateshaveaccesstohighereducation.Highereducationbecomesaccessibletohighschoolgraduates.四级作文当中谚语的运用Asapopularsayinggoesthat.Asisknowntoall,“.”Asaproverbsay

15、s,“.”Asapopularsayinggoes,“.”Thereisafamousoldsayingwhichgoes“”Thatremindsmeofanoldfamoussayingwhichgoes,“.”Asapopularsayinggoes,“.”eachcoinhastwosides.一个事情有两个方面Agoodbeginningishalfdone好的开始是成功的一半。优秀资料欢迎下载Knowledgeispower知识就是力量wherethereisawillthereisaway。有志者事竟成。Asaproverbsays:opportunityknocksatthed

16、ooronlyonce机不可失,失不再来。Asapopularsayinggoes,“Amanisknownbythecompanyhekeeps.”物以类聚,人以群分Asapopularsayinggoes,“Godhelpsthosethathelpthemselves”上帝帮助那些自救的人。Earlytobed,andearlytorise,makesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.实际的意思是我们应该发奋图强,只争朝夕。Whatcanbedonetodayneverputoffuntiltomorrow.今天做的事情应该今天完成,我们必须只争朝夕。Asisknow

17、ntoall,“nopains,nogains”没有耕耘,就没有收获Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。Itsnevertoooldtolearn.活到老,学到老。Toopenabookisalwaysbeneficial意思是我们应该不断的看书、学习/开卷有益。Timeandtidewaitfornoman时不待我或时不我待Alittlelearningisadangerousthing一知半解是非常危险的事(常常用于图表作文当中)。Morehaste,lessspeed欲速而不达。说明我们做什么事情都应该循序渐进。Seeingisbelieving.眼见

18、为实。Well-begunishalfdone.好的开始是成功的一半。Agoodbeginningishalfdone.好的开始是成功的一半。Honestyisthebestpolicy.诚实是最好的准则。Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事实胜于雄辩。Theshortestanswerisdoing.最好的回答就是去做。Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart心之所愿,无事不成。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者,事尽成。Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量。Nopainsnogains,painpa

19、stispleasure不经风雨,不见彩虹。WheninRome,doasRomans入乡随俗。作文当中的常用的一些套话Broadenmyvision/expandmyvision扩展我的视野Enlargemyscopeofknowledge扩充我的知识Purifymysoul净化我的心灵优秀资料欢迎下载图表作文的命题形式图表作文的常考题目类型有:用正确的语言分析描述图表的变化分析变化的原因你的观点,以及应该采取的措施图表作文的注意事项:图表作文一定要审清图表的对象,看清楚对象是什么。图表常见表示变化的线段表示图表变化的句型有表示上升的句型:一般现在时态Itrises/slightly/ste

20、adily/rapidly/significantly/dramatically.Itincreases/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/sharply.Itgoesupslowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/sharply.Thereisaslightsteady/rapid/significant/dramatical/rise.Thereisaslow/steady/rapid/significant/increase/.在描述图表当中(过去时)的运用Itrose/slightly/steadily/rapi

21、dly/significantly.Itincreased/slowly/steadily/rapidly/dramatically.Therewasaslightsteady/rapid/significant/dramatical/rise.Therewasaslow/steady/rapid/significant/increase.表示下降的描述(一般现在时态)Itdrops/slightly/dramaticallysignificantly/rapidly/Itgoesdown/slightly/rapidly/significantly/dramaticallyItfalls/s

22、lightly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/dramaticallyItdecreases/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/Itdeclines/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/Thereisaslight/slow/rapid/significant/dropThereisaslight/slow/rapid/significant/fallThereisaslight/slow/rapid/significant/decreaseThereisaslight/slow/

23、rapid/decline表示下降的描述(一般过去时态)Itdropped/slightly/dramaticallyItfell/slightlysteadily/rapidly/significantlyItdecreased/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/Itdeclined/slowly/steadily/rapidly/significantly/Therewasaslightsteady/rapid/dramatical/dropTherewasaslow/steady/rapid/significant/decreaseTherewa

24、saslow/steady/rapid/significant/decline图表当中表示不变和波动的描述优秀资料欢迎下载ItstaysatthesameplaceItremainsstable/unchangedItfluctuatesslowlyThereisaslow/slight/dramatical/fluctuationTherewasaslowfluctuation(过)inthenumberof-Itfluctuatedslightly/slowly/sharply/unexpectedlyThesameisthecasewiththeformerinJuneandJulyas

25、teadyrisefollowedaslowfluctuationfollowedasignificantrisefollowedarapiddecreasecomeafteraslightincreasefollowedadramaticalrisecame表示图表当中时间的表达从-到哪一年:from-tobetween-and-intheperiodof-and-intermsof-inthecaseof-FromJunetoJulybetweenJuneand/toJulyIntheperiodofJuneandJulyIntermsofJuneandJulyInthecaseofJun

26、eandJuly表示“大约、差不多”的习语justabout/overapproximately/probablynearly/almost/hardly/scarcelyThesameastheformer/latterItdoesnotmakeanydifferencefromto-Therearenotmuchdifferencebetween-and-注意描述当中插入语的运用Itgoeswithoutsayingthat-Itisobviousthat-Tooursurprise,Toourrelief,Itissostrangethat-Itisveryinterestingtono

27、tedownthat-Weareveryhappytoseethat-Itisworthnoticingthat-优秀资料欢迎下载图表作文的一些模式开头的一些模式:Ascanbeseenfromthegraph/figures/chart/statistics/givenabove/below,Itisagraphof把题目抄上去,抄的恰倒好处注意进行适当改写。图表作文当中的一些模式Thatremindsmeofanoldfamoussayingwhichgoes“alittlelearningisadangerousthing.”Itwouldbeimperativeforustoinves

28、tigateitintensively.Frommypointofview,Istronglyarguethatthemoreweunderstandthefigures/graph,thebetterwecanmanagetoimproveourselvestosolvetherelatedproblems.Withthedevelopmentofhumancivilizationandscienceandtechnology,Aslongaswetrytobepersistent,Iamconfidentofthefactthatabrightfutureisawaitingus.wear

29、eworkingonittogetourselveswell-preparedtofaceuptoallkindsofchallengesinthesociety.(108words)Iamfirmlyinfavoroftheopinionthattheinformationdoesnotgiveusreasonsforthismovingtrend,therefore,Itwouldbenotinterestingbutworthwhileforustogointoitintensively.Frommypointofview,Istronglyarguethatthesignificant

30、growth/changeintermsof图表主题canbeattributedtothefollowingfactors,including:-或者用suchas,或acaseinpointisthat-如何开头:Ascanbeseenfromthegraphgivenbelow,ItisthegraphoftheprofitofAnAutomobileCointhecarsalesindustryintheUnitedStatesfromtheyearbetweenJanandJune1999.Itcanbeclearlyseenthat对图表的变化进行描述注意语言不要重复,动词+副词和

31、therebe结构的互换。2002.6Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:StudentUseofComputer.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositiononthechartandtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.上图所示为1990年、1995年、2000年某大学生使用计算机的情况,请描述其变化:请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明):你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。

32、范文:Ascanbeseenfromthegraph/table/chartgivenabove.ItisthechartofAveragenumberofhoursastudentspendingonthecomputereveryweekfrom1990to2000,theaveragehourastudentspentoncomputerwasabouttwohoursperweekin1990,itiseasytoseethatcomparedwiththeformer,thenumberofhoursrosesteadilytonearlyfourhourseveryweekin1995.However,Itisworthnoticingthattherewasasignificantincreaseinthenumberofhou

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