高考英语 书面表达讲评课件 新人教版

1、书面表达讲评 有的放矢？1. 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。2. 评分时注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇、语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。3. 拼写与标点是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。4. 如书写较差以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。评分标准写作基本功一书写要规范，字体大方、饱满二. 句子要有准确性三. 语言要有闪光点四.文章要有流畅性1.At last ,we should be calm , waiting the rescue teammates to help us .2.Dont ta

2、ke a elevator or jump from high building.3.You must use a wet towel to cover you nose and mouth.4.There are some accidents happen everyday.5.You should keep clam . 6.It is wrong that to take a lift./foranyourwhichcalm/Correct the following sentences7.When you are caught in fire .8.You had better to

3、call 119 at once.9.When facing with the fire ,you should keep calm.10.This action enable us to get out of the fires easily./facedenables,1.We should do whatever we can to make ourselves safe . （钱倩）2.It is unwise to take an elevator or jump from the high build.（俏璐）3. There is no doubt that you must m

4、ake every effort to tell others you are in danger.（巧琴）4.Dangerous as you are ,you must keep calm.（叶晨）5.Here are some points that may help you when you are in danger of fire.（舒颖）6.Dont use the elevator ,or you will get into a worse situation .（笑航）Some wonderful sentences from our homework:7.The key t

5、o escaping from the fires is to keep calm.（慧君）8.It is your safety that is the most important.（淑萍）9.We should make every effort to get away from the fire quickly, for our life is more important than anything else.（莹婷）10.Jumping from the high building is not a good idea .So dangerous is it that it wil

6、l make you die.（美娟）11.Whats the most important is that we should call 119 immediately. Only in this way can we deal with the fire as soon as possible.（倪丽丽）步骤1 审题（时态，人称，分段）步骤2罗列要点（化繁为简）步骤3组句成文 (连贯性-关联词)步骤4步骤5 抄写检查具体怎样写文章书面表达 为了普及“急救知识”，你所在的班级最近举办了一次急救知识大讨论。现请你根据以下要点以“First Aid in Fires” 为题写一篇文章，说明发生火

7、灾时要注意的几点事项，放在学校网站的英文专区里。 1.室内有浓烟时，身体尽量低一些，用湿毛巾捂住鼻和口逃出； 2.不要乘坐电梯或从高层跳下； 3.你自己还有什么好的建议。 注意： 1.词数100120； 2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。了解火灾中急救知识的重要性1.室内有浓烟时，身体尽量低一些，用湿毛巾捂住鼻和口逃出；2.不要乘坐电梯或从高层跳下；3.你自己还有什么好的建议。Paragraph 1Paragraph 2 As we all know , first aid in fires is of importance, so we should have a great knowledg

8、e of it, which may help us escape from fires . When caught in a fire ,we shouldnt panic . Firstly ,we should call 119 and report the fire at once . When the room is full of thick smoke,we should keep close to the ground, using a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose. Secondly , it is unwise to take

9、a lift or jump from the high building. We can fasten ropes to something thats fixed inside the building and then slide down the ropes. Thirdly ,dont take anything with us .We should make every effort to get away from the fire as quickly as we can .After all ,our life is more important . 1.书写 好 一般 有待于提高2.审题 时态 人称 分段 3.要点 齐 漏（指出具体哪一点）4.病句 几处5.闪光点 几处6.文章流畅性 好 一般 差7. 总分 Homework25 假如你是李明，你的朋友Tom在学习和生活中遇到一些令人烦心的事。请你根据下面的信息给他写一封信，阐述你对此事的看法。注意：1. 对所给要点不要