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1、李润生快速7分作文5 雅思图表作文5分集中在语法问题5.5集中在句型的单调上面6分集中在名词的细化问 题，去CHINGLISH 思维6.5 集中在观点的展开7.0 集中在中心句与拓展句型之间的逻辑与搭配 雅思议论文思维提升方案以不变应万变的审题思路先总后分先一般后特殊1最精准和科学的提分方案 从4.5到5.5，从5.5到6.5，从6.5 到7.52十月写作如何过6.5小作文： 线图，柱图，饼图，流程图大作文： 教育类，科技类，社会生活类，政府政策类35.5 与6.5分作文的5点根本区别1，小作文的对比思路2，图表作文中描述数据的句型多样性问题3，议论文的观点表达的批判性句型4，主体段内容的细化

2、思维（话题词伙）5，“具有细化思维和批判性性思维的有逻辑推进是得七分的关键”4十月份热点话题1小时教你过6.5 “ 李润生十大必背段落结构” 1，教育类2，科技类3，社会生活类4，政府政策类5雅思议论文的四大题型1，讨论题（discuss the both views) 优先四段式结构2，辩论题 (to what extent to you agree or disagree) （五段式先抑后扬（可写2段自己支持观点）3，报告型(what are the causes and effects) （可四段也可五段）4，组合型( do you agree or disagree? How can

3、you explain it ?)（五段式）6“ 李润生十大必背段落结构”四大类结构：1，让步式2，罗列式3，直接式4，批判式7李润生十大必背段落结构教育类话题（1）：Nowadays, in many countries, universities accept more students. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?8李润生十大必备段落（1）批判式：(论点）Although this practice does bring about some benefits in terms of the develop

4、ment, the drawbacks it exerts on the educational level, the employment of the college leavers and the society are more obvious. 9十大必背段落结构（1）让步式Admittedly, accepting more students offers some advantages, because the more educated people there are, the faster the development of a nations economy will

5、be. It is especially the case in many developed countries, such as Japan and Germany.10十大必背段落结构罗列式(1)However, reaching the above-mentioned conclusion does not mean the same as assuming that we should turn a blind eye to its drawbacks. Indeed, with more students being accepted, a nations educational

6、quality will be negatively affected for there will be the insufficiency in teachers and teaching facilities. It has already happened in many developing countries. 11In addition, it is this practice that results in the high unemployment of the college graduates. A recent survey conducted in china con

7、vincingly shows that about 40 percent college graduates remain unemployed. Nobody ,I am sure, would like to see this. What is the most serious lies in the fact that some universities accept more students just for the sake of money. Not only is it detrimental to the individuals but is disastrous to t

8、he well-being of the society as a whole. 12十大必背段落结构批判式(1)结尾In conclusion, despite the importance of enrolling an increasing number of the students, the disadvantages are absolutely more apparent. How to reverse the trend should be an urgent task for the government and the people concerned. 13十大必背段落结

9、构教育类话题（2）At present, it is difficult for college graduates to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. Do you agree or disagree? 14批判式开篇 Nowadays ,there was ind

10、eed a popular wisdom that college teachers should focus on practical subjects such as computer science and business instead of some traditional ones like history and geography. This view, however, sounds more questionable. 15让步式段落Admittedly, practical subjects play a vital role in todays world, beca

11、use we are living in the so-called technology and commerce-based society ,which means those who are excellent in practical studies are more likely to have an edge in job-hunting. For example, if a person has a good command of computer skills, it is relatively easy for him to find a job.16十大必背段落结构罗列式

12、反驳段However, reaching the above mentioned conclusion does not mean the same as assuming that we should attach less importance to traditional subjects like history and geography. By learning history and geography, people will have a better understanding of their country, thus evoking the patriotic emo

13、tion. This is especially valuable and priceless in such times when many people, especially young ones, have alienated from their traditions.17十大必背段落结构递进式Besides, it must be realized that the unemployment of the college graduates is not due to a single cause, but due to a combination of factors, such

14、 as the economic recession, lack of experience. Therefore, prioritizing practical subjects is not the fundamental solution.18十大必背段落结构批判式结尾In conclusion, despite the importance of practical subjects, traditional ones such as history and geography are still irreplaceable because of their intrinsic val

15、ue. There are high hopes that government and the people concerned should exercise their wisdom to alleviate the pressure of the joblessness of the college graduates. 19十大必背段落结构教育类话题（3）Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to work hard when they are youn

16、g. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?20十大必背段落结构批判式开篇Although this tendency brings about some benefits, the drawbacks in terms of students physical and psychological development are more obvious.21十大必背段落结构让步段Some people might argue on the grounds that hard work can benefit people,

17、 especially young people, by molding them into the strong-willed. It is especially valuable in such times when more and more young people are spoiled.22十大必背段落结构罗列式（驳斥段）It is understandable for these people to think so. However, I tend to think that working hard under certain age can pose more potent

18、ial threats to the development of young people. Physically speaking, young people are immature in terms of growth. Excessive work may give rise to a series of undesirable outcomes, such as the deterioration of physical condition.23十大必背段落结构罗列式驳斥It has already happened in many countries including chin

19、a. What is more serious lies in the psychological aspect. It is not a rarity to read the reports that many young youngsters have developed some kinds of mental disorder ranging from depression, anxiety to even committing suicide. I think too much stress from work is culprit. Furthermore, they might

20、feel more desperate if they can not get what they hope for although they work very hard, thereby triggering a vicious circle. 24十大必背段落结构批判性结尾Considering the seriousness of the negative effects, I think certain ,measures should be taken. The most effective of it is an environment should be created wh

21、ere young people can feel less stressful. In a word, hard work should be highly, but not excessively valued.25十大经典段落背诵社会生活类(一）：Nowadays, many people are only taking temporary jobs. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.26十大必背段落结构批判式开篇Temporary jobs, like many things in our life, are

22、 the product of the development of society. With more and more people being engaged in temporary jobs, there seems to be less and less youngsters hoping to working in one company and even working only in one occupation for a whole life.27段落翻译训练（一）请翻译一下段落：”随着越来越多的科目可以通过计算机进行教学，老师的作用似乎越来越不需要了，因为自学和主动学

23、习可以通过网络进行辅助学习”28答案As more and more subjects can be taught via the computer ,there would seem to be less and less need for teachers to be present ,as self-study and autonomous learning are encouraged with the assistance of a computer.29十大必背段落结构对比式首段Although this tendency poses potential threats to th

24、is kind of job takers in terms of income, the benefits it brings to the alleviation of stresses and the enhancement of the family cohesion can not be denied. 30十大必背段落结构对比式主体段Compared with the past, the social competition is becoming ever fierce, which is the breeding ground for many psychological pr

25、oblems, such as depression, frustration and anxiety. China might be a good case in point where an increasing number of people are being riddled with various mental problems. Doing part-time jobs, however, offers people an opportunity to get relaxed, a luxury that many people value highly but find di

26、fficult to obtain.31十大必背段落结构直接式More importantly, people can spend more time with their families by spending less time working, thereby greatly enhancing the family cohesion in bringing happiness and maintaining the social stability, especially in such times when families are not as close as before.3

27、2十大必背段落结构直接式段落Just because of the above-mentioned conclusion, however, it does not follow that we should not turn a blind eye to its drawbacks, one of the most serious of which might be that people can not get enough income by simply doing temporary jobs. In china, for example, people have to unders

28、tand more than three temporary jobs to support the family ,a disadvantage in such a world where everything is priced.33十大必背段落结构批判式结尾段In a word, despite the disadvantages the temporary jobs bring, the benefits are more obvious. Whether a person chooses to do this kind of job, however, depends on whet

29、her he considers it the best option.34社会生活类（1）It is generally acknowledged that the numbers of the families are not close as they used to be. Discuss the possible reasons and offer your recommendations.35十大必背段落结构细化思维的首段There is much discussion about whether the relationship between family members is

30、 as close as before. Diverse contributing factors can identified, such as the changes in the fabric of the family, the severe competition and the popularity of entertaining facilities. 36Great changes have taken place in family life along with the development of society, one of which is that the old extended family tends to become smaller and smaller