初中英语 沪教牛津版 9B U6-4 Writing：An email to a sick classmate 课件

1、9BUnit 6CaringforyourhealthWriting深圳市福田区莲花中学英语科组 范玲玲通过本课学习，你将会为了达到目标，你需要达到这个目标，你能够了解英语中“建议类回信”的写作结构并能够合理组织书信语言认真听讲、仔细思考、仿写一篇作文写出一篇结构合理、语言丰满的”建议类回信”writingWhere is he？What happened to him？He is in hospital.He hurt his leg.An email to a sick classmateStructurethe way that paragraphs are put together o

2、r organizedsave timelogicalcohesiveshow sympathy1. Im （deeply）sorry to hear about.2. We are filled with (deep sorrow).3. Please accept my deepest sympathy4. I couldnt believe that5. Im writing to express my deep care for you.6. Im so upset to hear that .show your sympathyshow sympathylist problems a

3、nd comfort himlist the difficulties1. You may have trouble in doing .2. You may suffer from.3. You may face difficulties such as.4. You may have a hard time.show sympathygive suggestionslist problems and comfort him1. You should/could do.2. You need to/ought to/ had better do.3.You are supposed/expe

4、cted to do.4.You mustnt 5. Remember to do.6. Dont do/Dont forget to do.7.It is good/ wise to do8. Why not do.?9. Why dont you do?10. What/How about doing.?give adviceshow sympathygive suggestionslist problems and comfort himexpress your hopesexpress your hopes 1. I want to send you my best wishes fo

5、r2. Best wishes for3. I hope youll get well soon.4. I am sure you will succeed in5. I wish you all the best for a rapid/ swift/quick/speedy recovery.6. I hope you will get over it soon. comprehend你能够理解建议类回信的结构以及常用句式吗？010203idea你有和老师不一样的想法吗note你做好笔记和记录下你的问题与想法了吗？pausewhile-writing假设你是初三学生李华，进入初三以来，你的

6、同学Andy因压力太大导致频繁生病。最近又因感冒请假在家，他向你表达了他的焦虑和烦闷。请你回复一封email。要点如下：1. 对他生病表达同情和关心2. 给出保持健康的建议（至少3条)，并且表示愿意帮助他学习3. 希望能够释放压力,尽快恢复健康开头结尾已给出，不计入总数 Dear Andy I havent seen you these days. Best wishes LihuaCaring for your healthReadingListeningSpeakinga balanced lifeBe positiveLearn to relaxTake up a hobbyTake c

7、are of your bodyLaughstressMental Healthtaking care of our eyesillnesstake a break and dont spend too much time staring at computer screenrelax and do eye excercisesread when you have enough light but never look into a bright lighteat a lot of green vegetableshave a stomach achehave a headachehave a

8、 cold/coughPhysical HealthPAY ATTENTION to the following pointsTASK ACHIEVEMENTbe relevant to the topicCOHERENCE and COHESIONbe based on the structureconjunctions(for,and, nor, but ,or ,yet, so.)transition words (in addition/however/because/such as/in conclusion.)LEXCICAL RESOURCEenough vocabularyco

9、llocationGRAMMATICAL RANGE and ACCURACYerror-free sentences (grammar)No simple sentences all the time (simple/complex/compond sentence)NEAT HANDWRITING1. 听到.消息我太难过了 2. 你可能会在.（方面）遇到困难 3. 你应该. 4. 我希望你早日康复Im so upset to hear that.You may have trouble in doing sth.You should/ought to/are supposed to do.

10、I wish you all the best for a quick recoverySentence patterns15mins to finish the writing show sympathygive suggestionslist problems and comfort himexpress your hopes Dear Andy I havent seen you these days. You catch a cold. Stress brings trouble to you. You must be worried about your health and sch

11、ool work. Most of us suffer from stress . Theres still some ways to overcome it. You should be positive and believable. Your life is always full of hope. You should learn to relax. You should take a break from your studies. You can run or play basketball. You should also get enough sleep and have a

12、balanced diet. As for your studies, I can lend my notebook to you when you return. In a word, dont put too much pressure on yourself. Hope you return school quickly. caughtIm so upset to hear that But you dont have to，becausebelieve thatFor example，Its important toby running or playing basketball.If

13、 you want to have a strong body, remember toam willing toI wish you all the best for a quick recovery.are Dear Andy I havent seen you these days. Stress brings trouble to you. Im so upset to hear that you caught a cold.You must be worried about your health and school work. But you dont have to becau

14、se most of us suffer from stress. There are still some ways to overcome it. Firstly, You should be positive and believe that your live is always full of hope. It is important to learn to relax. For example, you should take a break from your studies by running or playing basketball. Besides, if you w

15、ant to have a strong body, remember to get enough sleep and have a balanced diet. As for your studies, I am willing to lend my notebook to you when you return. In a word, dont put too much pressure on yourself. I wish you all the best for a quick recovery. Best wishes LihuaSummaryshow sympathylist p

16、roblems and comfort himgive suggestionsexpress your hopesstructuresentence patternshow to polish your writingkey phrases of healthphysical+mentaltask achievementcoherence and cohesionlexcical resource grammatical range and accuracyneat handwritingAssignmentMary is a 15-year-old girl. She is going to take the senior high school entrance examination. But recently, she found that she could not sleep well at night and often felt nervous in the daytime. She