Module 1 外研版英语九年级上册模块主题写作详解与训练

1、PAGE PAGE 5外研版英语九（上）Module 1模块主题写作详解与训练模块主题写作整体感知 话题分析本模块以“Wonders of the world”为话题，向我们展示了中国的秦始皇兵马俑、三峡大坝、非洲的维多利亚瀑布、美国的科罗拉多大峡谷等世界奇观，它们是人们日常生活中经常谈论的话题。本模块的作文类型以“奇观或景点”为话题的书面表达形式，灵活多变，体裁丰富，可以描述旅游经历，还可以介绍某个奇观或景点。描写旅游时往往涉及具体的行程安排、所做的事情和旅游感想。描写奇观或景点时，主要是是描写该奇观或景点的特点，抓住该奇观或景点的具体位置和特色，对某一奇观或景点进行描述或简单评价。通过本模

2、块的学习，同学们应该学会描写某一奇观或景点。 常用表达1. I had a wonderful visit/trip. 我经历了一次愉快的旅行。2. I have never been to such a beautiful place before. 我以前从未到过如此美丽的地方。3. The beauty of nature keeps me from going home. 大自然的美使我流连忘返。4. A lot of visitors come to visit it every year. 每年有许多游客来参观它。5. I believe it will attract more

3、and more people. 我相信它会吸引越来越多的人。6. I would remember the visit to. 我会记住去的旅行。7. I hope I will come here one day again. 希望有一天我会再次来到这里。实例分析 典型例题世界第一大水利工程三峡大坝，2007年被国家旅游局评为首批国家5A级旅游景区。假设你是导游，根据以下提示，向游客展示三峡大坝“高峡出平湖”的雄姿。提示：1. 位于湖北省宜昌市，距葛洲坝38千米；2. 坝长约2 300米，底部宽115米，顶部宽15米，最大坝高185米；3. 于1994年动工修建，工期17年；4. 建成后，

4、形成了长达600千米的巨型水库，成为世界罕见的新景观；提示词汇： HYPERLINK 葛洲坝Gezhou Dam，最大坝高maximum height，巨型水库giant reservoir，罕见的rare，景观scenery。 思路点拨1. 体裁：说明文；2. 人称：第三人称；3. 时态：一般现在时、一般过去时。写作模板开篇点题The Three Gorges Dam is one of the most fantastic man-made wonders in the world.分层介绍位置lies in Yichang, Hubei Province. .38 kilometres

5、away from Gezhou Dam.事实.began to be built in 1994. .took 17 years规模.a maximum height of 185 metres .2, 300 metres long, 115 metres wide at the bottom and 15 metres wide at the top. .a giant reservoir with a length of 600 kilometres .作用.produces electricity for.作出评价.a new rare scenery in the world 连句

6、成篇Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very glad to be your guide for the one-day tour to the Three Gorges Dam. Welcome to the Three Gorges Dam. The Three Gorges Dam is one of the most fantastic man-made wonders in the world. It lies in Yichang, Hubei Province. Its only 38 kilometres away from Gezhou Dam. T

7、he Three Gorges Dam began to be built in 1994 and it took 17 years to finish the project. The dam with a maximum height of 185 metres is about 2, 300 metres long, 115 metres wide at the bottom and 15 metres wide at the top. As the dam was built, a giant reservoir with a length of 600 kilometres form

8、ed. It produces electricity for millions of people in China. In my opinion, its also a new rare scenery in the world. I know you are looking forward to the visit. Wish you have great fun for the whole day.范文欣赏（一）请你根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。中文提示要点不要逐条 HYPERLINK /html/c168 l #更多英语学习资料尽在英语联盟；欢迎访问：

9、英语联盟-# o 翻译，可适当发捧。要求字数在60个左右，开头部分已给出，不计入字数总数。（桂林市2003中考）中文提示：假设你是Li Lei，作为一名导游，现在向你的游客们介绍一下桂林。要点可包括：1. 位于广西北部；2. 市区人口六十多万；3. 以风景美丽而闻名于世；4. 山青水秀，环境干净、整洁；5. 每年有许多游客；6. 坐船游览漓江风光，免费公共汽车游览市区各景点；7. 在桂林过得愉快。英语提示：population人口；environment环境；tourist游客；scene风景；scenic spot景点；on free buses坐免费公共汽车。Ladies and gent

10、lemen,Welcome to Guilin.Guilin is in the north of Guangxi. The population in the city of Guilin is over (more than) six hundred thousand (600,000). Guilin is famous for its beautiful scenery in the world.The hills are HYPERLINK /html/c257 l #更多英语学习资料尽在英语联盟；欢迎访问：英语联盟-# o green and the water is clear.

11、The environment here is clean and tidy.Every year a lot of tourists come to visit Guilin.You can see the scenes of the Li River by boat.You can visit the scenic spots in the city on free buses.I hope youll enjoy yourselves in Guilin. （二）假如你住在海南岛，请用英语写一篇介绍海南岛的短文。词数：80词左右。内容包括以下要点：1. 位于中国南部，中国第二大岛；2.

12、气侯温暖，空气清新；3. 有海滩和高大的椰子树；4. 可以游泳、钓鱼、划船等；5. 海口市是海南岛的省会，也是海南岛最大的城市；6. 可以品尝各种海鲜。参考词汇：climate气侯；coconut palm tree椰子树。Hainan Island is in the south of China. It is the second largest island of China.The climate is warm. You can enjoy bright sunshine, fresh air and beautiful scenery on Hainan Island. You w

13、ill never forget that.There are many beautiful beaches and tall coconut palm trees here. You can go swimming, go fishing or go boating in the sea. Haikou is the capital of Hainan Province and it is also the biggest city on the island. You can enjoy all kinds of delicious seafood here. Wecome to Hain

14、an Island! Im sure youll have a good time here.（三）你的朋友Peter看到了你国庆期间游览天马山时拍的相片，询问你游天马山的经历。请你根据以下提示，将游览经历写成一篇不少于80词的英语短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。要求语句通顺，可适当发挥，不能逐句翻译。提示：1. 天马山空气清新，以其优美的景色而著称，如：瀑布、绿草、花朵；2. 你和家人一个小时就爬上了山顶, 并在山顶玩游戏、唱歌、野餐；3. 下午五点回到家，感觉累，但很开心。During National Holiday, my family and I went to Mount Tianma. Mount Tianma is a famous place that has many beautiful views, such as waterfalls, green grass and nice flowers. And the air in Mount Tianma is quite clear. It took us an hour to climb up to the top. What