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39、ntstartsat7pm具体时间I would love for you to attend, so please let me know your deci.Iamlookingforwardto hearing from you soon.BestSincerely2 申请信（求职信DearSirorI, the undersigned, am an undergraduate from the Department of English Language Literatureof Peking University. I amwriting this letter today to y

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42、 undergraduate from the Department of English Language and Literature of Peking University. I am writing this letter today to you to inquire about 15 / Tobeginwith, （1）Whatsmoretoputitinamoreaccurateway, （Words fail me when I wish to express my sincere gratitude to you. I am looking forward to heari

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