重在流畅切忌硬译

1、重在流畅，切忌硬译一篇好的书面表达应该表意清晰，语言流畅，没有翻译的痕迹。难点磁场假如你是某报社记者，请根据下表提供的信息写一篇英文稿，简要地报道中国开发西部的有关情况。主要情况范围：9个省、自治区（autonomous regions），一直辖市（municipality）面积：540万平方公里人口：2.85亿实施要点交通（transportation）建设：修建多条公路，铁路环境保护：退耕还林，防治污染资源利用：开发利用其丰富的天然资源人才引用：广纳各类专家，技术人员注意：（1）短文须包括所有提示要点；适当增加细节，使内容连贯；（2）短文的开头已经给出；（3）词数100左右。New Dev

2、elopment for Central and Western ChinaThe Chinese government has recently decided to develop central and Western China.案例探究请根据下面文字及表格中的内容写一篇短文。你于2001年暑期参加了第21届大运会（the 21st Universiade）的志愿者工作（voluntary work）。你为此感到骄傲并希望2008年北京举办奥运会时能再次充当志愿者。工作时间八月下旬，每天七个小时工作地点运动员村（the Villages）的后勤部（the supply office）工

3、作内容配送（prepare and deliver）毛巾（towel）、香皂、铅笔、纸张等日常用品到客房服务对象来自世界各地的运动员及官员感受、感想工作辛苦且琐碎（trifling），但很重要注意：短文必须以第一人称写。应包括全部要点。词数100左右。命题意图：考查学生对表格的理解，以及依据表格提供的内容表情达意的能力。错解分析：学生做此类题时的最大毛病是不会重新组织所给材料，仅仅逐条翻译。解题方法与技巧：（1）审题，确定人称、时态、主要内容；（2）依据常理，将以上内容的顺序做适当调整；（3）写出提纲，拓展成文；（4）检查要点有无遗漏，上下是否衔接，所用动词时态、语态、变形是否准确。参考答案：

4、In the late August this year,I took part in the voluntary work for the 21st Universiade.Every day I was working in the supply office in the Villages for 7 hours.My job was to prepare and deliver daily supplies,such as towels,soap,toothbrushes,paper,pencils and so on,to the rooms of the officials and

5、 athletes from all over the world.The job was hard and trifling.None the less,it was very important.When the 21st Universiade closed,I completed my job successfully.Now I feel very proud of it and decide to work as a volunteer again when Beijing holds the 2008 Olympic Games.锦囊妙计1.重新组织指示语，不可逐条翻译；2.适当

6、使用连词，使句子连贯，eg:when,after,and,but,till,etc.3.避免重复使用同一种句型，尽量使句子多样化。4.使用学过的好句式，避免中国式英语。歼灭难点训练1.()请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文。你在2001年暑假到一家肯德基（KFC）快餐店做保洁员（cleaner）工作。你每天工作七个小时，为期三周。 这项工作辛苦且枯燥，并使你感到非常疲劳。这几乎使你半途放弃。每天你都要起早贪黑地工作。在新学期开始之前，你终于坚持完成了这项工作，并且由此认识到了劳动（labour）的意味。你认为这是一次成功的体验。注意：（1）必须使用第一人称。（2）词数100左右。2.()假如你是英文

7、报刊MORNING POST的通讯员，请根据下列表格以A Big Fire为题，写一篇简单的报道。注意：（1）报道必须包括所列的全部内容。（2）词数100左右。起火地点广东省广州市东南部森林起火时间2001年12月3日下午起火原因一位农场工人吸烟持续时间3天多参加救火人员数千名消防队员、农场工人及当地居民伤亡人数2人死亡、约20人受伤经济损失至少500万元影响震惊全省，并提醒人们注意防火，尤其是秋冬天气干燥时3.(）云雾山是一处游览胜地，每日有大量游客。几年前不注意保护环境，现在大有改观。请根据下列内容写一篇英语报道。几年前少数游客的行为现在游客的表现乱扔废纸、塑料袋、罐头盒带走垃圾杀害动物，

8、捕捉飞鸟不再打猎破坏花草、树木爱护植物在林中生火烧饭自带午餐，以防森林火灾注意：（1）词数100左右。（2）开头已为你写好。生词：环境environmentThe Yunwu Mountain is a place of interest重在流畅，切忌硬译难点磁场New Development for Central and Western ChinaThe Chinese government has recently decided to develop central and Western China.This part of China includes 9 provinces an

9、d autonomous regions and one mumicipality,covering an area of 5.4 million square kilometers with a population of 285 million.The government will pay special attention to its transportation.Some highways and railways will be built.To protect the nature,farmers will return farmland to forest.Also,meas

10、ures should be taken to prevent pollution.Western China is rich in natural resources,which can be exploited and made full use of.To meet the need of the development,all kinds of experts and skilled workers are to be brought in.We have every reason to believe that the government will be a great succe

11、ss.As a result of the great project,central and western regions of China will surely achieve better and faster development in the new century.The people will have a better life and China will surely be richer and stronger.歼灭难点训练1.During the summer holiday,2001,I thought I should do something meaning

12、ful instead of touring.So I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner.I worked 7 hours a day for three weeks.The job was hard and boring and seemed endless,which made me so tired that I nearly stopped it half way.After all,I stuck to it with determination.Every day I star

13、ted off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening.Finally,I finished the job before the new school term began.Now,I understand what labour means.I think it is really a successful experience.2.A Big FireA big fire broke out in the forest in the southeast of Guangzhou city,Guangdo

14、ng Province on the afternoon of December 3,2001.The fire was caused by a young farm worker smoking carelessly in the forest while he was working there.To the peoples astonishment,the fire lasted more than three days.Thousands of firemen,farm workers and local people took part in the fight against th

15、e fire.Unfortunately,two people lost their lives and about twenty were injured in fighting against the fire.It caused a damage of at least five million yuan.People all over the province were shocked at the news and they have also been warned to be careful of fires,especially in dry autumn and winter

16、,for everything is easy to catch fire.3.The Yunwu Mountain is a place of interest,there are lots of tourists seeing sights every day.Years ago,some of them paid no attention to environment protection.They threw about waste paper,plastic bags and tins.Besides,they killed animals,caught birds,destroyed trees and flowers.Worse still,they often made a fire to cook in the forest.That was da