2015年英语中考作文预测

1、2015年英语中考作文预测评分原则： 1.本题总分为15分，按五个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章写作要点、应用词汇、语法结构 的准确性及上下文的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后根据拼写、书写和词数等情况调整 档次，最后给分。单词拼写英、美用法均可，书写要规范，严重影响交际的，将分数降低一个档次。词数少于80的，从总分中减去2分。第一档:（1513分）能写出全部要点，表达清楚，内容完整丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通 顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许有个别语言错误。第二档:（1210分）能写出全部要点，表达基本清楚，内容较完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语 言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有

2、少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。第三档：（97分）能写出大部分要点，语法结构和词汇错误较多，但尚能达意。第四档：（64分)与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达出基本要点。只是简单拼凑，未达到写作要求。 第五档：（30分）只写出一、二个句子，语言错误多。 0分只字未写。J (2013 内蒙古包头) 初中阶段的学习和生活即将结束，你的老师陪伴你度过了三年的校园生活。回顾其中的许多点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请你用英文给你的某一位教师写一封信，和他（她）说说感激的心里话。要点提示： 教师表现1. 工作努力，认真；2.教学耐心，待人友好。留存记忆1.严格要求也关爱学生；2.师生相处和睦；3.给予学习上和生活上的

3、帮助；4.学生学业取得了进步。要求：1.内容包括所有提示的要点，意思完整，语言规范。 2.可适当发挥，增加细节，使语句连贯通畅。 3.文中不要出现你的真实姓名及校名。 4.80100词左右，信的首尾已写好，不计入总词数。Dear my teacher. Leaving youlovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say. Thank you again for what youve done for us! All the best to you!Yours,参考答案：Dear my teacher.

4、Leaving youlovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say. Since you became my English teacher three years ago, youve always been working hard. I wont forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. Youre strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly

5、. All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had-trouble in life, you told me to be brave.Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and ma

6、ke much progress, too. You have given me so much.Thank you again for what youve done for us! All the best to you!一、书面表达（本题满分15分）假设某中学生英文报开展关于高中生活的征文活动，请你根据下表所提示的要点，以My ideal senior high school 为题，用英语为该报写一篇短文，简述理想中的高中生活情形，以及你对高中学习生活的展望。理想高中校园环境优美老师耐心教导同学乐于分享学习轻松有趣课外活动丰富我的展望（请考生结合自身实际，自拟至少两点内容）注意：1. 表

7、达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数90左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。My ideal senior high schoolWe will be senior high school students soon. In my ideal senior high school, 参考答案My ideal senior high schoolWe will be senior high school students soon. In my ideal senior high school, there are many green

8、trees and beautiful flowers. The teachers there are patient enough to explain difficult problems to us, while the students are willing to share their joy and worries with each other. We have fewer subjects and less homework. After school we can take part in all kinds of activities. In this way, our

9、new school life will be full of fun.I hope to make any friends and enjoy my school life in senior high school. I also hope I can make great progress in my study.E (2013 安徽) 今天是父亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下： 表达你与父亲间的情感； 为父亲制作一张卡片；帮助父亲做点事； 陪父亲散步等。注意： 1. 词数80-100； 2. 请不要逐句翻译，

10、可适当发挥； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear John, Its Fathers Day today. Its a special day, isnt it？_ Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forward to hear from you. Yours, Dear John,Its Fathers day today. Its a special day, isnt it?I think we should do something to show our love for our father on thi

11、s special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook this favorite food in the evening. Bes

12、ides, Ill take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. Im sure hell be very happy.Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,Li Hua二 ,书面表达（共1题，计15分）父爱如山！假设父亲节即将来临，请你借此机会给你父亲写封信，和他谈谈心里话。 写作要点： 1.父亲辛勤工作，让我受到更好的教育，过上更好的生活

13、； 2.父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试失利时，他鼓励我不放弃；遇到困难时，父亲鼓励我笑对生活；表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。温馨提示：1. 短文内容应包含所提示的要点，语言流畅，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；2. 短文字数不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数；3. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。Dear father,Fathers Day is coming, Id like to say something to you. _Yours Li Hua参考答案：Dear father,Fathers Day is coming. I，d like to say s

14、omething to you.You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave

15、and smile at life.You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!Happy Fathers Day!Yours, Li Hua三.书面表达 （15分） 在我们的生活中，每个人都有很多难忘的经历，请你以“A/ An Unforg

16、ettable Experience为题，写一篇80字左右的短文。Unforgettable: 难忘的An Unforgettable Experience 四.书面表达（满分15分）假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Bill来信询问你的暑假计划。请你根据以下内容给他回一封信，介绍你的暑假活动安排。内容：1.去看望乡下的爷爷奶奶，帮他们做点事； 2.去旅游，开阔视野； 3.学习，为高中做准备； 4. 要求：1语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2必须包含所有内容，并做适当拓展； 3词数70左右。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）参考词汇：visit, countryside, travel,

17、 open up ones eyes, get ready for参考答案：Dear Bill,Thanks for your letter. Im very glad that youll have much fun in your vacation.In my summer holidays, I want to visit my country s grandparents, I have not met them for three years, I miss them so much. And I want to do some housework for them.I also w

18、ant to go to some place to travel, to see growth. I want to go to Shanghai, understand the metropolitan life and the appearance of the cit，I want to go to Beijing to see the Great Wall and the Imperial Palace。I have to review for the high school knowledge, to lay a good foundationIwouldliketoimprove

19、myEnglishpronunciation. IwanttoimprovemyEnglish. Id like to see more of the astronomical books。 Because I think in a formation of Amateur Astronomers Association. Looking for your reply.Please write soon.Yours, Li Ming五.书面表达（满分15分）假如你们学校正在开展研究性学习(exploring learning strategies)，请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文，让更多的

20、学生了解你校开展研究性学习的一些情况。注意：1. 短文应包括表格提示的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2. 词数：100词左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。过去现在课堂老师讲解知识点，学生听讲，记笔记，没有足够的时间独立思考问题。老师提出问题，学生相互讨论，并学会与他人合作,从而找出解决问题的方法。课后做大量的作业。丰富多彩的课外活动，如：读自己喜欢的书，去图书馆或上网查资料等。个人感受Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategie

21、s. _参考答案：Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didnt have enough time to think about problems by ourse

22、lves /independently. We had to do much homework after class. But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which weve learnt how to work/ study/ cooperate with others. After class, we can

23、have different activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to the library or surf the Internet for useful information and so on.In a word, now we are the owners of our study and were happy. 六、书面表达(15分)母爱情深，母爱无价；学会感恩，学会回报。某英语网站举办以“My mother”为题的英语征文活动。请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事。提

24、示：1.短文应包括导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明;2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。3.词数不少于80，开头已给出:不计人总词数。 My motherWe need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother._参考答案：My motherWe need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 yea

25、rs old. She is of medium build with long black hair. Shi is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didnt have much money. She sent me from p

26、iano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. Ill save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. Ill take her to wo

27、nderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. Thats what she wants most, I think.评分意见：（一）内容要点 1. Introduction = 1 * GB3 age = 2 * GB3 job = 3 * GB3 look = 4 * GB3 ability = 5 * GB3 hobby 2. What she did for you 3. What you will do for her（二）建议： 3个内容要点，每个要

28、点各5分。第一个内容的要点的5点信息不必按所给次序表达，每点信息各1分。七、书面表达(共1题，满分15分)假设你是李明，本周班会上， 请将代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次敬老院的公益活动。 要点如下： 星期天早上8：30在校门口集合，乘公共汽车前往；给老人们赠送班级礼物；打扫卫生，整理房间；唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天，给老人们带去快乐；活动很有意放，希望积极参与；注意：词数80， 书面表达的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：1. chat v. 聊天 2. meaningful adj. 有意义的 3. cheer up 使高兴Fellow students,We will pay a vis

29、it to the old peoples home this Sunday. Well have to meet at the school gate at 8:30 on Sunday morning and then go there by bus. There we will do some cleaning and tidy the rooms. After that we will have many activities, such as singing, dancing, telling stories and chatting to cheer up the old. Bef

30、ore we leave, well give our presents to them.I hope all of us can take an active part. Through the meaningful activity, we can learn to care for the old.七. 书面表达(共15分)假如你是Li Ping，请根据下面的表格中提供的信息，给你的新朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，介绍你的业余爱好（flying and collecting kites）。注意：表达必须体现所提供的全部细节信息，并可在此基础上适当发挥：字数为80个词左右。HobbiesIt

31、emsDetailsFlying kitesBeginning timeten years agoFlying placeparkCollecting kitesBeginning timefive years agoThe amountnearly 50Sizesbig, smallShapesanimalsStoring placemy own bedroom, my parents bedroomF (2013 吉林)健康是生活的基石。尤其是青少年的健康，更加受到家庭、学校乃至全社会的关注。假如你是你们学校的健康达人，应校英语俱乐部的邀请，你将给全体成员做一个“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”的报告。请参考下面的提示，完成报告。(10分)要求：1. 80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数内。2. 所给提示仅供参考，需适当发挥。 3. 文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名。提示：