新目标英语--英语写作专题ppt课件

1、English Writing英语书面表达训练写过去的事主要特点记叙为主稍加议论旁带阐明空间顺序时间顺序才干要求逻辑顺序主要问题要点不全线索不清缘由：步骤不对书面表达六 步 法抄改连扩抓审书面表达书面表达六步法书面表达六步法一、审题确定根本要素:5W1H何 时 何 地 何 人 为何 如 何 做 了 何 事书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为What happened?书面表达六步法三、扩展成句构成根本语义单位Who did what?书面表达六步法四、连句成文时间 空间 细节衔接 呼应书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误书面表达六步法六、誊写卷面不工整扣5分课堂练习请用六步法写一篇短文五个

2、 “W一个 “H第一步 审题仔细读题然后找出把答案写在题中相应的位置书面表达经典例如假设他是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，他目击了一同交通事故。警察局让他写一份资料，报告当时所见情况。根据以下图画写出报告。1、目击者应该准确报告现实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为他写好。_About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua附图1234At 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000, I sa

3、w a woman driving a car hit the man in the street.第二步 抓要点一幅图，一要点时态直达 语态到位介/副词紧随抓要点，配动词第三步 扩展成句把要点变成完好的句子。留意运用介/副词第四步 连句成文添加细节 呼应首尾句与句相连词与词搭配第五步 查错改错主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？时态正确吗？有“半截话吗？第六步 誊写卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！作业选评要改良吗？为什么？精 彩 范 文 赏 析At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the sout

4、h side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. 精 彩 范 文 赏 析He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. 精 彩 范 文 赏 析The car was so fast that the old ma

5、n even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.精 彩 范 文 赏 析I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didnt. Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain. 精 彩 范 文 赏 析Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. After that, I went over to check out the old man.精 彩 范 文 赏 析About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hosp