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2、 年英语入学作文Section WritingDirections:Among all the worthy feelings of m/her own understanding of it.ind, love is probably the noblest, but ever yone has hisThere has been a discusr torecently on the ie in a newspr. Write an essay to the newsp1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of thcture

3、 below,2) give a specific example, and3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love.You should write about 200 words on Answer Sheet 2.破题本篇作文在提出文中必须要具备的三点提示前还有一段对揭示很有帮助的引文。学生如果仔细阅读并分析此段引文就会对给出的图画含义有一个正确的理解。虽然引文中第一句话的后半部分不同的人有自己独特的对爱的理解,但这些理解在本篇中都是基于对爱的正面的理解，因为前半部分已经给本篇要的爱定下了一个范围，就是爱是最高尚的。这

4、样一来学生的作文的范围就一下子缩小了。不是泛泛而谈,而是分析爱相对于其他种类的感情而言的价值和重要性。虽然提示引文中提到有基于此的热烈,但是从接下来的三点具体提示来看还是以表明作者本人立场为主。因此在考虑写本篇开头时也可以稍微提及一下不同人群的不同的观念,但应点到即止,因为这只是作为引出自己独特观点的一个,来吸引读者的注意力,通过对比,给读者留下鲜明印象。接下来就要看一下文章的结构了。因为虽然三点提示非常清楚,但这毕竟还是一篇看图作文，因此一切观点要从图的内容与隐含的意义出发。先让来分析一下三点的内在联系：这三点内部是有一个层层递进的关系,必须由一点才能引出下一点而顺理成章。如果要使文章层次更

5、为分明,那roduction, body, and可以将三点安排成三个不同的部分。即。第一点可作为开头引出全文的论点(thesis sement)。突出其象征性的含义,而不是简单地描述画面的表面内容,画的布局只要略微提到即可,重要的是画上的那句话和画中的物品之间的抽象与实物的联系，可作为文中的论点。要突出爱在来的重要性。或有的地方显现出第二点作为正文部分。用现实的例子来论证在什么样的令人感到前路暗淡的情况下爱发挥了巨大的作用。但是因为时间和字数的限制,举例部分不能太过冗长。第三点作为结论部分。虽然向他人显示爱的力量可以无时无刻无处不在,各种各样，但是这篇文章最好是介绍一种或几种向他人伸出之手的

6、方法，即要紧扣图画表现的含义和论点确定的范围来写。因为这毕竟是一篇看图作文,不能离开图画而天马行空。但要注意的是:如果作者在写第二点时，就已举例如何帮助他人,那么切记在写第三点时不要再重复了,几笔带过即可。因为并不是给出的三点提示每一点都要给予同等的篇幅，应该有侧重点。二、19 pos 样卷What a lively and accuratcture it is when describing the meaning of lovehe dark. As isvividly portrayedhcture, love is comparable to an oil lamphat an oil

7、 lamp may seem rather insignificant in a magnificent ese whilehe dark it turns out to be the focus of light. In other words, the darker the place is, the more valuable the light will be. As win oil lamp, it is also true of love, whid of assistance.ay amount to more significance to those in great dif

8、ficulty or in urgent neeTo illustrate this poof view, I will take Tao Xingzhi, one of the greatest educators in China, for example. He was only too willing to impart love to whoever needed it most.he past, an awful lot of students who were eager to go to school could not afford to do so. To reverse

9、this situat ion, Mr.Tao committed himself to establishing a school for the poor. Although most of the students merely studied in his school for a short period, what they learned at school changed their life. Even after Mr.Taos death, they still borefishness.ind his kindness, his generosity and above

10、 all, his unselMr.Tao set up an excellent example of showing our love to those who need help most, which,for my part, iped to be the best way to show love. Love is needed everywhere, some notable, others minor, which is the golden threadt ties the hearts all over the world. When you donateyour old c

11、lothes to the victims in a disaster,ts called love; when you give anyonerouble, thats called love; when you simply pass a glass of water to a thirsty,ts also called love. As long as we keep room for love in our heart, love will be a source of treasure, and the world will b ecome more beautiful. Lets do as a famous saying goes: Ask not what others can do for you; askwhat you can do for others.点评：这篇文章在第一段中清晰明白地写出了对画面的象征意义的准确理解，