如何写书面表达终结PPT教案

1、如何写书面表达终结如何写书面表达终结第1页/共46页成分使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的第2页/共46页使全文结构紧凑,达到了预期的写作目的第3页/共46页整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的第4页/共46页内容缺少连贯性,信息未能清楚地传达给读者第5页/共46页内容不连贯,信息未能传达给读者第6页/共46页词汇词汇, ,句型句型 （高级）和（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语法多样化（较复杂） 1.覆盖了所有的覆盖了所有的要点要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和应用了较多的语法结构和词汇词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑接成分，使全文结构紧凑要要点点

2、全全连连接接词词第7页/共46页 书面表达的评分依据之一就是内容要点书面表达的评分依据之一就是内容要点 应逐个地完整无缺地把内容要点列出来应逐个地完整无缺地把内容要点列出来(一般为一般为58个要点个要点) 建议: 2审题;10左右形成初稿;5左右反复检查;修饰润色，5左右抄写。 明智之举:不把书面表达放在最后Practice第8页/共46页是记叙文、说明文、议论文还是应用文？是写书信、通知、日记、还是便条？提供材料的方式是通过文字描述还是图画或表格 写什么时间发生的事？是写你还是写我？还是我们、他们？例如：假如你是李华，该用什么人称？第9页/共46页v注意句子与句子之间过渡要自然注意句子与句子

3、之间过渡要自然,可加上适当的表示并列、递进、因果、转折等关系的连词可加上适当的表示并列、递进、因果、转折等关系的连词,使语言更加流畅使语言更加流畅 第10页/共46页，just as(正如)， on one hand on the other hand(一方面另一方面)等。第11页/共46页举例for example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely等第12页/共46页大忌生造的句子或词语来开头大忌生造的句子或词语来开头第13页/共46页大忌结尾画蛇添足大忌结尾画蛇添足第14页/共46页1. What do you think, can you tell

4、 me.?2. The discussion didnt get a conclusion. Whats your opinion? 废话废话第15页/共46页书法不好书法不好 怎么办？怎么办？v一笔一划，工工整整的书写一笔一划，工工整整的书写,包括标点符号包括标点符号 都要都要 认真对待！认真对待！第16页/共46页v 要有独到之处，要有独到之处，要想获得高分就要想获得高分就 应在正确表达的应在正确表达的 基础上写出自基础上写出自 己的特色，写出己的特色，写出自己的自己的“亮亮”点。点。第17页/共46页第18页/共46页避免重复第19页/共46页kitchen. In the bedroo

5、m there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. （句型多样化，长短句结合 ）避免重复第20页/共46页也可使用变换句型第21页/共46页变换句型第22页/共46页.A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. (一般陈述句)B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well. (感叹句)变换句型第23页/共46页B: On arriving/his arrival, please give me an e-mai

6、l.(高级)变换句型第24页/共46页10) A: I can achieve my goal in this way.B: Only in this way can I achieve my goal.变换句型第25页/共46页little girl knows so many things.(一般)B: What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(高级)使用从句第26页/共46页使用从句第27页/共46页If Ben hadnt driven too fast on his way to Florida,

7、 he wouldnt have had a traffic accident.使用虚拟语气第28页/共46页第29页/共46页点：易于理解等缺憾：英语氛围不浓等结论：第30页/共46页第31页/共46页第32页/共46页第33页/共46页第34页/共46页第35页/共46页第36页/共46页用适当的词填空用适当的词填空andas wellor elseEitherorNot only but also ; Either or ; and as well ; but ; or else第37页/共46页First of allthenfourthlyfirstly ; thirdly; nex

8、t; finally按顺序进行叙述第38页/共46页1.If anyone against the plan, pleaselet me know.2.The main subjects I studied at school including Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.3.When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting me.4.There are 50% students think concel the 7-day long holiday

9、 is wrong.改正下列句子改正下列句子50% of the students think concelling the 7-day long holiday is wrong.第39页/共46页变换句型变换句型If you go through the gate, youll find the entrance to Bear Country. (一般一般)Go through the gate, and youll find. (高级高级)I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus. (

10、高级高级)I got up late this morning. I didnt catch the early bus. (一般一般)The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高级高级)When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般一般)第40页/共46页I wont believe what he says. (高级高级) No matter what he says, I wont believe. (高级高级)I happened to have met him. (一般一般) It happened that I had met him. (高级高级)Practice第41页/共46页computersAs a childshowed his strong interestaroused his great curiosity.Practice第42页/共46页the front of the school. There are many trees in and around the schoolPractice第43页/共46页Pr