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1、图表式作文的几种形式图表式作文的几种形式:一是以一是以表格表格形式形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。即统计表。Warming upStatistics table【例析】请你根据下表提供的信息【例析】请你根据下表提供的信息描述近描述近5年人们饮食的变化年人们饮食的变化,并说明并说明变化的原因变化的原因.20012002200320042005grain43%42%41%41%40%milk13%14%14.5%14.5%15%meat25%25%26%26.5%27.5%Fruit&vegetable19%

2、19%18.5%18%17.5%total100%100%100%100%100%二是以二是以图形图形形式形式 A 表示数据变化的表示数据变化的曲线图曲线图; B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异 的的柱状图柱状图; C 表示总体内部结构变化的表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图扇形图。 Diagram of curvesBar chart Pie chart根据所给图表根据所给图表,用用5句话描写近年来看句话描写近年来看电影与看电视的人数变化的短文。电影与看电视的人数变化的短文。 (a): Number of TV watchers (b): Number of film

3、 goers0 0101020203030404050506060707080809090100100199519951997199719991999200120012003200320052005Number of People (in thousands)AB APercentage of Average Family Expense in 2000 BPercentage of Average Family Expense in2005Housing 25%other57%Housing32%other46%Fooddrink22%Fooddrink18% 观察下列图表观察下列图表,根据

4、图示描述该市住房产权的根据图示描述该市住房产权的变化变化;并说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的并说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响影响; %20406080100199520002005State-ownedprivatel 【技巧点拨技巧点拨】l 1.读懂柱状图坐标刻线及图例说明与文字,比较读懂柱状图坐标刻线及图例说明与文字,比较柱状高低和颜色表示内容及数据。柱状高低和颜色表示内容及数据。l 2.学会看趋势、找规律,从整体看图表有何发展学会看趋势、找规律,从整体看图表有何发展变化,找出特点、规律。变化,找出特点、规律。l 3.引用图表包含信息,使你的文章引用图表包含信息,使你的文章“由图而发由图

5、而发”,言之有据。言之有据。观察下列图表观察下列图表, 1.根据图示描述该市住房产权的变化。根据图示描述该市住房产权的变化。 2 .分析产生这些变化的原因。分析产生这些变化的原因。 3.说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响。说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响。%20406080100199520002005State-ownedprivatel Ownership of Houses in a Big City in Chinal As can be seen from the chart,ownership of houses in a big city in China changed a

6、lot in the past ten years. In 1995,75 percent of the houses were state-owned. Five years later,the rate of state-owned houses to private ones was 3 to 2. But from then on,the ownership of houses changed rapidly and so far 80 percent of houses have been private.l What caused the changes?There might h

7、ave been two main reasons. First,from 1995 up to now,the peoples living standards have been improving. Most of them can afford to buy the houses. Second,most people do not save a lot of money in the bank for their children as their parents did in the past. They want to have their own home and enjoy

8、life.l Such changes have had a great effect on the development of society. It does good to both the citizens and the government.Good pointsl1.structurel第一段:描述图表,得出结论。l第二段:紧扣主题,根据图表比较分析原因,论证结论。l第三段:发表议论,提出自己的看法。l2.link words图表式作文写作分三步图表式作文写作分三步:第一、开门见山地点明本图表所反映的第一、开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题主题经常使用的词汇有经常使用的词汇有:t

9、able, chart, figure, graph, describe, tell, show, represent等等。等等。 技巧指导技巧指导l 【常用句式【常用句式】l 1. As can be seen from the chart,.As is shown in the chart,.l 2. The chart shows that about 60 percent of students want to go to college.l 3. From the graph/data/results/information above, l 4. The graph shows t

10、he changes in the number of.over the period from.to.l 5. Compared with.,the number of the students of.第二、第二、 分析数据间的主要差异及趋势分析数据间的主要差异及趋势,然后描写然后描写rise, drop, reduce, increase, decrease, fall, while, but, on the contrary, however, compare. to/ with., in contrast to, as.as, the same as, similar to, diff

11、erent from, difference between, among, more than, less than等等。等等。第三、第三、 归纳总结或发表评论。归纳总结或发表评论。有时第三步可省略有时第三步可省略 in a word, in short, generally speaking, Its clear from the chart that., We can draw the conclusion that., We can learn/know.等等。等等。 【例析】请你根据下表提供的信息【例析】请你根据下表提供的信息描述近描述近5年人们饮食的变化年人们饮食的变化,并说明并说

12、明变化的原因变化的原因.分析分析:本本统计表描述统计表描述中国人民从中国人民从2001年至年至2005年饮年饮食结构的变食结构的变化。化。 20012002200320042005grain43%42%41%41%40%milk13%14%14.5%14.5%15%meat25%25%26%26.5%27.5%Fruit&vegetable19%19%18.5%18%17.5%total100%100%100%100%100%Practice第一步第一步:点明此表格所表明的主题点明此表格所表明的主题 AsAs can be seen can be seen from the table

13、, from the table, there are a lot of changes in the there are a lot of changes in the peoples diet in the past five years.peoples diet in the past five years. 第二步第二步:观察图表中数据的增减总趋势观察图表中数据的增减总趋势, 阐明原因阐明原因2 Grain, the main food of the most people in China, is now playing a less important role and the a

14、mount of fruit and vegetables in the average peoples diet has also dropped by 1.5 percent from 2001 to 2005. 3 The amount of milk and meat has increased. 4 The changes are the signs of the improvement in peoples lives. 第二步第二步:观察图表中数据的增减总趋势观察图表中数据的增减总趋势, 阐明原因阐明原因Grain, the main food of the most peopl

15、e in China for thousands of years, is now playing a less important role and the amount of fruit and vegetables in the average peoples diet has also dropped by 1.5 percent from 2001 to 2005. In contrast to them,the amount of milk and meat has increased by 2 percent and 2.5percent.It is clear from the

16、 table that great improvement in peoples lives has been made in these years. 第三步第三步:归纳总结并得出结论。归纳总结并得出结论。 5.In a word ,there is no doubt that there will be great changes in peoples diet in the future.第三步第三步:归纳总结并得出结论。归纳总结并得出结论。lIn a word ,there is no doubt that people will enjoy a more scientific and

17、 balanced diet in the future and much happier life.下表是某校关于中学生双休日活动现状的一份调查。请结下表是某校关于中学生双休日活动现状的一份调查。请结合表格内容,就中学生如何过双休日发表你的看法。合表格内容,就中学生如何过双休日发表你的看法。学习情况娱乐活动去图书馆 兴趣小组几乎都在学16体育活动20经常5经常10半天学习半天活动24游玩和购40偶尔23偶尔20几乎都在做其他事60上网看电视40几乎不72不参加70PracticeA possible version This table displays the result of a su

18、rvey on how students spend their two-day weekend. It says that few students are glued to their schoolwork any more. Instead ,they prefer to surf on the internet, watch TV, go shopping rather than involve in sports games .Library and interest groups are available but not favorable. Personally I think

19、, students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged .They are expected to spend more time on what they learn instead of hanging out. More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally .Besides, m

20、ore interest groups should be established for students to broaden their horizons and sharpen their brains so that they can become more creative eventually .All these will contribute a lot to a well-informed and highly qualified teenager In conclusion,students should be more scheduled with colorful a

21、nd fruitful activities.图表作文注意事项图表作文注意事项l1.图表和数据内容不必全部描述l2.善于抓住总的规律、趋势,归纳增减率;l3.时态:特定时间用过去时,经常出现的情况和自己的评论用一般现在时。l4.要适当运用一些高级词汇并灵活使用图标类写作常用的经典好句型飞飞让让文文采采扬扬达达表表面面书书语意要合情合理,过渡自然语意要合情合理,过渡自然 语句要有简有繁,随语句要有简有繁,随“意意”而安而安语法要结构正确,无懈可击语法要结构正确,无懈可击语言要地道流畅,书写规范语言要地道流畅,书写规范根据所给图表根据所给图表,用用5句话写一篇题为句话写一篇题为“电影与电视电影与电视”的短文。的短文。 短文须包括以下要求短文须包括以下要求:A. 电影观众人数呈逐年下降趋势电影观众人数呈逐年下降趋势;B. 电视观众人数越来越多电视观众人数越来越多(原因原因:方便、经济、选择范围方便、经济、选择范围);C. 然而还是有人喜欢看电影然而还是有人喜欢看电影(原因原因:气氛、娱乐气氛、娱乐)。参考词汇参考词汇: decrease v. 下降下降 atmosphere n. 氛围氛围 entertainment n. 娱乐娱乐 film goer/TV watcher电影电影/电视观众电视观众(a): Number of TV watchers

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