高考英语作文范例及评分标准

1、普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准评分总则：1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线（15分），然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档次的要求来衡量，最后给分。其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5、若缺少要点，分数降一档处理。6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。7、书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。

2、评分细则：优秀（22-25）:紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。良好（18-21）:紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，行文较流畅，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。一般（15-17）:紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确；基本达到预期写作目的。较差（11-14）:要点不全，内容不完整，行文不够连贯；语言错误较多，半数句子基本正确。差（6-10）:内容混乱，或主要内容偏离主题，尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。极差（0-5）:只能写出与内容相关的词语，

3、没有有效信息；抄写其他文章，或只是写出与作文无关的内容。高考命题组提供的参考范文：DearPeter,IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.The“ForeignCulturessectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.Wouldyoupleasewritesomethingabouttheculture

4、inyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongr articleasitsinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyoubeforeJune28?Imlookingforwardtohearingfromy

5、ou.(95words)Yours,LiHua【点评】该参考范文语言简练，表达准确，但从高考考场作文考虑应提示学生词数再增加一些，句式可再丰富一些，这样才更有利于得高分。各档次打分参考范文示例：1 .阅卷组确定的24分作文范例DearPeter,IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.RecentlyarefreshingprogramhasbeenestablishedinourschoolsEnglishnewspaperwhichisnamed“TheForeignCulture”.Iminclinedtoi

6、nviteyoutowriteanarticle.Theimportanceconcerningthisissueislistedasfollows.ThisprogramisaimingtointroducethefestivalsandhabitsinAmerica,especiallyincludingthelifeofstudentsinhighschool.Consequently,Iintendtoinquestyoutowritesomematters.Suchaswhattheindividualstendtodowhensignificanteventsareforthcom

7、ing.Additionally,itsuniversallyacknowledgedthatAmericanstudentshaveextremelyactivethoughts.Consideringthathowtheystudyinschooliswhatweindeedintendtoattain.Whatsmore,itmustbebearedinmindthatthearticlesaresupposedtobearound400words.Meanwhile,Ianticipateyoucanfinishitbefore28th,June.Imlookingforwardtoy

8、ourconclusivereply.(140words)2 .阅卷组确定的22分作文范例DearPeter,IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.ItwillbeputonthepartofForeignCulture,whichaimstointroducemanyothercountriesculture.ThisarticleneedstobeconcernedwithAmericafestivalcustomandmiddleschoolstudentslife.AsyouareAmericanstud

9、ent,itscertainthatyoucanteachusalargeamountofknowledgeaboutit.Asisknowntoall,onlyifwelearnAmericanCulturewell,canwetrulyunderstandthecountry.Therefore,Idappreciateitifyouwritearticle.Therearesomerequirementsbelow.Theessayisaround400words.Besides,ithastobesentbeforeJune,the28th.Ifyouhaveotherquestion

10、s,pleasewritetomeassoonaspossible.(112words)3 .阅卷组确定的18分作文范例DearPeter,IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.Wehaveanareanamed“ForeignCulture”.ItsusedtointroduceAmericascustomsandstudentsdailylife.Couldyouwriteanessayforme.Initiallypleasewritesometraditionalfestivalstoenlargeour

11、horizons.Someinterestingthingsinyourschoollifeisalsofine.Moreover,pleasewritemorethan400words.Sowecanedidateisbetter.Eventually,thedeadlineis6,28becauseourworkmustbefinishedinthesedays.Dontbelateplease?Herearemywords.Thanksforattention.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.(92words)4 .阅

12、卷组确定的15分作文范例DearPeter,IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.TheEnglishnewspaperhavea“foreignculture“program.Ifyourarticleiswrittenwell,itwillbeselectinnewspaper.ThearticleisaboutAmericanfestivalsandcustoms,besidesincloudedmediaschoolstudentslife.Thereisnodoubtthatyoucanmakeit.B

13、ecauseyouisfamiliarwiththem.Inopinion,youcanalsoincreasestudentshowtostudy.Mostimportantly,yourarticlecanhelpusbroadenhorizonandletusknowmoreAmericanculture.Youneedtowriteabout400words.Lastbutnotleast,youmusthandinitbeforeJune,28th.Imlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.(101words)5.阅卷组确定的12分作文范例DearPeter,

14、IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.TheEnglishnewspaperhasashowwhichismadedescribesforAmericanTraditionalDayCultureandmiddleschoolstudentsschoollife.Ithinkyouhadmuchknowledgeaboutthem.Therefore,Iwanttothatyoucouldwriteaparagraphforthem.Youcanwriteabout400words.Inaddition,thep

15、aragraphshouldfinishedandputonbeforeJune,28th.Ibelieveyouareabletodowell.Imlookingforwardtoyourinformation.Thanksaboutyourfavour.（77words）6 .阅卷组确定的9分作文范例DearPeter,IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.ThenewspapersForeignCulture“partplanaddanarticleofproducttheUSAsfestivalandst

16、udentslife.Then,Itellsomeaboutit.Firstofall,thearticlemustabouttheUSAsFestivalandstudentslife,youcanwritethestudentsstudybehaviour.AndwritetheUSAsfestivalbehaviour.Inaddition,thearticleyouneedtake400words.Dontwriteaverylargeartist.Youcanmakeasimpleproduction.Atlastthearticlesdeadlineisbefore28th,Jun

17、e.Ibelieveyoucanfinishbetter.Bestwishes.（87words）7 .阅卷组确定的4分作文范例DearPeter,IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.MynameisLiHua.Ineedyouhelp.thankyou.IhopeyouwritetheUSAstyleandstudentlive.Ineedyouhelp.Ineedyouletter.letterneedto400,in6,28.needtoyourletter.thankyou.（41words）1 .感谢

18、信假设你是李华，梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造，现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取，请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。【优秀满分范文】DearProfessorLiang,IamwritingtoextendmygratitudetoyoubecausewithyourhelpIamnowastudentofChemistryDepartmentofSydneyUniversity.LastJune,whenIappliedtobecomeagraduatestudentofSydneyUniversity,youreallygavemealotofvaluablehelp.Younotonlywr

19、otearecommendation（推荐）formetoProfessorWellswhoworksintheSydneyUniversitybutalsogavemecarefulandpatientinstructionsonhowtofilltheapplicationformsandwritetheapplicationletters.Itisyourunreserved（无保留的）helpthatenablesmetoobtainthissplendid（极好的）opportunityoffurthereducation.ForthefollowingtwoyearsIwillst

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22、ouroldfriends.Ihavechosenasmallgiftforyouandwillsendittoyoutomorrowtoshowmybestwishes.Besides,pleasegivemyregardstoourfriendswhenyoumeetthemattheparty.Cordially,（sincerely）LiHua3.申请信假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣，要写一封求职信，包括下列要点：1年龄：1822.学习情况：班级前5，英语口语好3兴趣和特长：打字快，喜欢阅读，听音乐4性格特点：积极向

23、上【优秀满分范文】DearSir/Madam,IlearnedfromthenewspaperthatyourcompanyneedsanEnglishsecretary.ImreallyinterestedinthispositionsoIamwritingtoapplyforit.Im18yearsoldandwillgraduatefromXinxingForeignLanguagesSchoolthisJuly.Imanexcellentstudent,amongthetop5inmyclassof50students.ImgoodatEnglish,especiallyspokenE

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25、amlookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerely/Yours,LiHua4.通知假如你是校学生会主席。新年即将到来，为了帮助你校的外国留学生更好地了解中国文化，学生会将为他们举办一个新年晚会。请你根据以下提示，用英语向他们发出口头通知。时间：下周五6：008：00地点：教学楼101室内容：1唱中国歌2比赛用筷子3学习包饺子注意：1词数不少于50；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【优秀满分范文】Goodafternoon,everyone.MayIhaveyourattention,please?ImthechairmanoftheSt

26、udentsUnion.AstheNewYearisaroundthecorner（即将到来）,wearegoingtoholdaNewYearpartyforyou,whichisintendedtoenableyoutohaveabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.Duringtheparty,notonlycanyousingaChinesesong,butyouwillalsocompetewitheachothertoseehowskilledyouareatusingchopsticks.Whatsmore,youlllearnatthepart

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28、hris，ImwritingtotellyouthatweintendtoclimbtheFragrantHillthisSaturdayandIsincerelyinviteyoutogowithusonbehalfofourclass.Wearesupposedtogatherattheschoolgateandsetoutat8:00amsharp.Thebuswillserveasourtransportation.Wewillclimbtothetopofthehillandenjoyourpicniclunchthere,sopleasetakesomefoodwithyouasl

29、unch.Atabout2:00pm.Wewillgodownthehillalonganotherpathandreturntoourschoolatabout5.00pm.Youmayequipyourselfwithacameratorecordthebeautifulsceneryandanumbrellaoraraincoatisalsonecessaryincaseyouarecaughtinarain.Pleasesparesometimetojoinus.Yourparticipationcansurelyaddcolortoourtripandwearealllookingf

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35、ythepronunciationandintonation(语调).Ofcourse,asanativeEnglishspeaker,youcangivemesomesuggestions.Inaddition,Imgoingtovisityouafterthecontest.ImsurewewillhaveawonderfultimetogetherinBeijing!Icanhardlywaittoseeyou!Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.LiHua8. 投诉信你是李华，两周前你从网上一套书虫系列读物(BookwormSeries)昨天才到货，且包

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