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1、大概率下，概要写作或读后续写会成为21 届高考（今年高二学生）的题型。即使不从应试的要求下去练习，从新课标的要求下也应该重视概要写作。先了解一下概要写作的考试说明要求：理解准确,涵盖全部要点。能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。完全使用自己的语言初看起来，概要写作比较容易，但实际上其中也是暗含玄机。我们的误区是：概要写作无非就是把文章的要点句子拼凑一起，加几个衔接词。但实际是：第一、如何高效把握准确不同文体的语篇结构，并且得出其中的要点；第二、如何对要点进行去粗取精；第三、如何把不同要 点的句 子 进行整 合 ，完全使用自己 的句子，那就是pa

2、raphrase 了。这种 paraphrase 会涉及到以下技巧：1 .句子层面上：句子的语法结构转换（介词短语、定从、非谓语、名从最多）；句意的转换；上义词和下义词的概括转换2 .词语层面上：词和短语的同义转换模拟示例Writing 1（2019 浙江宁波二模）阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Nowadays, it is most probable that you have an electronic device loaded with hundreds or even thousands of your favourite songs. At any momen

3、t, you can fill your headphoneswith the sounds of a particular song that suits your mood at that exact time.Music is so common. But have you realized the power of it? Are you getting ready for a big soccer match or do you need to get excited? Maybe some hip hop with a strong beat will do the trick!

4、Besides, you might be ready to study for a big exam the next day. To help you study better,a little bit of Mozart might make you remember things better.We may all have been moved by particular songs that spoke to us in some situations. But is there any scientific evidence showing that music really h

5、as such an effect on people? Of course,thereis! Scientists have long recognized the power of music. Over the years, many studies have been done to examine in greater depth of the nature and extent of the effects music has on people.Scientists at the University of Missouri have found that listening t

6、o music can have positive effects on your mood. Their research gives scientific credibility（可靠性） to the behavior that many people have already experienced on their own: listening to upbeat music can brighten your day and boost your mood.Other studies have shown that upbeat music isnt the only type o

7、f music that can be helpful,however. When people are sad or have suffered a sense of loss, sad music can be helpful because the tone and lyrics of the music can resonate 起共鸣）with the listeners. Likewise,people under a lot of stress or experiencing upsetting situations can benefit from listening to a

8、ngry music. Although angry music might not help you if you re in a normal mood, its tone can benefit you when you are dealing with stressful and upsetting situations.答案 写作提示 本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了音乐对人们的益处。文章段落清楚,要点明确。概要写作时以自然段为基础概括。One possible version:Nowadays, with modern devices, music to your taste is e

9、asily accessible.要点 1） With its power, music might benefit you in many ways.（要,点 2） Scientists have researched into the nature and extent of musi's effects on humans.要点 3） Scientists at the University of Missouri have proven upbeat music can cheer you up.（要点 4） Besides, sad music and angry music

10、 have also been found to be helpfif（点 5）Writing 2（2019 浙江温州二模）阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。For many high school students, giving an in-class presentation is an approach to their growth. Teachers will call up students, one by one, to present their work in front of the class, and, though it is often tens

11、e, many people say it has helped turn them into more confident public speakers. Some educators also credit it with building leadership skills and increasing students confidence and understanding of materials.But in the past few years, students have started calling for an end to in-class presentation

12、s as they show discrimination against those with anxiety. This week, a tweet posted by a 15-year-odl high school student declaring“ Stop forcing students topresent in front of the class and give them a choice not to ” received more than 130,000 retweets and nearly half a million likes. In fact, bein

13、g a high schooler nowadays is more stressful than ever. Students are burdened with extra hours of homework. They stay up every night till 1:00 a.m. finishing homework on their third Red Bull. Anxiety is increasing at a faster rate than depression （抑郁） as the leadingmental-health issue affecting teen

14、agers, a recent study in the Journal of Developmental and Behavioral Pediatrics found.These students want more options. They say that every student has unique strengths and that they should be allowed to present their work in ways that are different to those strengths. This might mean presenting alo

15、ne in front of the teacher, or choosing between several alternatives like producing a piece of art or an essay for private judgment instead of presenting their work orally.Educators have begun to take it seriously. They agree teachers should listen to students and hear their voices and respond. If s

16、tudents feelings are ignored, they might just walk away. However, not everyone is convinced. Some hold the view that pushing students out of comfort zones is a big part of what they should do as some students are deathly afraid to do it.答案 写作提示 本文为议论文。文章讨论了课堂展示是否有益的问题。概要以自然段为基础,注意摄取重点信息。One possible

17、 version:Giving an in-class presentation is generally considered an approach beneficial to students' development.便点 1）However, in the past few years, students have started calling for an end to it due to the possible discrimination against those with anxiety, which puts great pressure on the stu

18、dents.傻点 2）They say that every student has unique strengths and that they should be allowed to present their work in their ways.（要,点 3）Their idea has drawn educators serious attention.倭,点 4）Writing 3（2019 浙江绍兴柯桥联考）阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。As is known, if we are united no one can defeat us. But if w

19、e constantly have conflicts or misunderstandings, we may attract outsiders to have an advantage over us, which may ultimately result in our failure. Unity is the source of strength and people who are united have the capability to tackle any kind of situation as they share each other s burdens and ha

20、rdships.In olden days, man lived alone. He travelled and hunted all by himself, which sometimes gave opportunities to fierce animals to attack and kill him. Then he realized that if he joined hands with other hunters, he would be able to face some common danger and challenges. This is how villages g

21、ot formed, which later got developed into towns and cities.In the sports ground, be it cricket, football, baseball, basketball or any other kinds of sport, a united team and an appropriate strategy may result in the success of the team; but if there is a conflict or an unhealthy competition or unnec

22、essary misunderstanding among the team members, they may invite the opponents to take advantage of their shortcomings and win the game. Likewise, if the members of a family stay together and support each other in every phase of life, no outsider can harm the family.There was once an old man who live

23、d in a village with his three sons. The sons always fought with each other and would not pay any attention to their father. The man fell sick and assumed that he would die soon; he was very worried about the idea that once he died, people would take advantage of his son sconflicts. He called all his sons and asked them to break a bundle of sticks, one by one. None of them could do it. He then untied the bundle and gave each stick to each one of them asking them to brea