托福写作常见错误汇总 备考需注意

1、 智 课 网 托 福 备 考 资 料 托福写作常见错误汇总 备考需注意托福写作不仅考察词汇量,还考察语法使用,更考验考生的思维逻 辑能力,一直让不少考生挠头。虽说ETS在评判托福作文时采用的是综 合评分的方式,即以作文的整体水平判分,而不纠结于小细节。但有些 同学往往会在语言方面疏漏多多,问题明显到影响了考官整体评断的程 度,那即便你的思路和论证属于一流,最多也只能得个二流分数,岂不 可惜!下面,我们就来谈一谈考生在托福写作中最容易犯的语言错误。大 家可以对号 入座 , 看看自己 是不是也犯 过类似 的错误 呢?1. 用词不 当原:The absence of groupwork is a d

2、isaster for teenagers in modern society.改:The absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.评 :groupwork是 “ 分 组”或者“ 小 组集 体 任务” 的意思。 这位 同 学 原本想 说teamwork “团队 合作 ” , 却 用了一个 看起 来 很像 ,但 实际 完全 不同的词, 表达出 来的意思就 风马牛 不 相及 了。原:You will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view o

3、f the whole picture.改:You will be in danger if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.评 :dangerous 表示所修饰 的对 象 是 “带 来 危险 的,有 危险性 的 ” ,而be in danger才 是 “身处险境” 的意思。到 底谁才 是 威胁呢? 原:Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might eff

4、ect their further development.改:Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might affect their further development.评 :模样长 得 像 ,意思可不同了。 这里想 用 动 词affect 表示“ 影响 ” , 却 误写 为名 词effect “效果” ,一 字千里啊 ! 2. 搭配 错误原:Nowadays, people are crazy pursuing to be exc

5、ellent.改:Nowadays, people are crazy about excellence.评 :这位 同学显 然记 错了be crazy about sth.这 个用法,写 出 来的 句子自然 会 出 问题 啦 。原:Besides, public speech can effectively increase your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.改:Besides, public speech can effectively improve your communication sk

6、ills, which facilitate your salesman career.评 :此处 是一个明显的 动宾搭配 错误。 “提高技巧”应该 是im prove the skills,而不是increase the skills.3.词 性 错 位原:I will forget my sad and pressure from the work and the study.改:I will forget my sadness and pressure from work and study.评 :sad是 形 容词,而 这里 明显需 要 一个 名 词, 应该 是sadness。 原:A

7、lthough making money is a priority for most people, spending time with the family is equal significant.改: , spending time with the family is equally significant.评 :形 容词significant 前 需 要 用 副 词来 修饰 , 所 以equal 应该改成 e qually。4. 时 态混乱原:Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dr

8、eamed about having a job.改:Although I had no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.评 :过去 时的 句子 中 冒出 了 现 在时,同学你 太粗心 了, 要仔 细 检查 哦 原:I would explain my view in the following paragraphs.改:I d like to explain / I will explain评 :可能是 两种 说法 记混 了 吧 ,结 果把 时 态搞 错了 5. 主谓 不一

9、致原:The way we deal with the environmental problems are crucial to the prosperity of human-being.改:The way we deal with the environmental problems is crucial to the prosperity of human-being.评 :谓 语 之前 有 两 个 名 词时, 主谓搭配 的问题就常常 出现 了。 这里 真正 的 主 语 应该 是 单 数 名 词theway, 所 以 与之搭配 的 谓 语也 应该 是 单 数的is。6. 重复累赘原:F

10、rom my point of view, I think this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help learning a foreign country.改:From my point of view, this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help us learn a foreign country.评 :from my point of view和I think重复啦 , 保留 一个就 好 。 当 然这里建议留

11、 下更 “高级” 的from my point of view.原:There are the majority of people who deem that they like to spend money on things which can bring them long memory.改:Majority of the people like to spend money on things that can be memorized for long.评 :中文 句 式说的 “ 有 很 多 人” ,但 别 一 看 到 “ 有 ” 就 非要 用t here be句型 不可 哦 ,直 接摆出主谓宾 就 行 了。“ things that can be memorized forlong ” , 被动 语 态 明显更 地道 7. 中式 英 语原:Thus, one is easier to draw bosses attention and gain app