四六级写作高分策略

1、四六级写作高分策略1. 1. .尽量避免不应该出现的错误：尽量避免不应该出现的错误： 只有评卷人认可了你语法掌握的水平，他才会抱着宽容甚至欣赏的态度看你的句型设计，用词和例证的援引。 CET作文常见错误作文常见错误在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，是阅卷人员的主要在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点照顾点”，大家可以设想一下，一篇，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢？因此，认清各种各样的语法语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢？因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将阅卷过

2、程中所发现的大量错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家。语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家。1.句子成分残缺不全句子成分残缺不全We always working till late at night before taking exams.(误误)We are always working (We always work) till late at night before taking exams(正正)We should read books which may be useful

3、to us. (正正)We should read books may be useful to us. (误误) 2.句子成分多余句子成分多余This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误误)One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正正)The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误误)The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正正) 3.主谓不一致主

4、谓不一致 Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误误)Some think that reading should be selective. (正正)My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误误)My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正正) 4.动词时态、语态的误用动词时态、语态的误用I was walking along the road, and there are not so man

5、y cars on the street. (误误)I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正正)We have little time to read some books which we interest. (误误)We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正正)I am a student who has studying in the college for two ye

6、ars. (误误)I have been studying in the college for two years(正正) 5.词类混淆词类混淆 It is my point that reading must be selectively. (误误)In my opinion, reading must be selective. (正正)Honest is so important for everyperson. (误误)Honesty is so important for everyone. (正正)The old man was hit by a car when he acro

7、ss the street. (误误)The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正正) 6.名词可数与不可数的误用名词可数与不可数的误用 Too much tests are disadvantage for students study. (误误)Too many tests are disadvantageous to students. (正正)In the presidents office, we have found new equipments of various kinds. (误误)In t

8、he presidents office, we have found new equipment of various kinds. (正正) 7.动词及物与不及物的误用动词及物与不及物的误用 The traffic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways. (误误)The traffic accident took place at the junction of two highways. (正正)Because of his excellent performance, the boss rose his sal

9、ary. (误误)Because of his excellent performance, the boss raised his salary. (正正) 8.介词介词to和不定式符号的混淆和不定式符号的混淆Too many tests will do harm to cultivate our independent thinking. (误误)Too many tests will do harm to the cultivation of our independent thinking. (正正)All these contributed to solve the serious

10、problem. (误误)All these contributed to the solution to the serious problem. (正正) 9.情态动词的误用情态动词的误用 It may not good to our health. (误误)It may be not good to our health. (正正)They should spent much time. (误误)They should spend much time. (正正) 10. There be句型的误用句型的误用 There exists some new problems such as b

11、eing dishonest. (误误)There exist/arise some new problems such as being dishonest. (正正)There are many students think college education is worthwhile. (误误)There are many students who think college education is worthwhile. (正正) 11. 动宾搭配不当动宾搭配不当 We must pay attention to it and make solutions to the probl

12、em. (误误)We must pay attention and find a solution to the problem. (正正)It also may help you to make success. (误误)It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal. (正正) 12. 根据中文逐字硬译根据中文逐字硬译 If someones family situation is not well, he can apply for loan to bank. (误误)If ones family is not well off, he can

13、 apply to the bank for a loan. (正正)Let alone touch the outside world of campus. (误误)Let alone get in touch with the world outside of the campus.(正正)keep a good body health. (误误)keep fit .(正正)2 2. . 句型要有变化性句型要有变化性 考生不可全以简单句拼凑文章，应主动使用复句、倒装、排比、平行结构及动词短语，体现出良好的语言驾驭能力。 以形容词或形容词组开头以形容词或形容词组开头Mary was very

14、 pleased and telephoned her mother Pleased，Mary telephoned her mother The girl，hungry and thirsty，went back home Hungry and thirsty，the girl went back home以副词开头以副词开头The child stayed there quietly Quietly，the child stayed there 以不定式开头以不定式开头 He got up very early to catch the busTo catch the bus，he got

15、 up very early以现在分词或过去分词开头以现在分词或过去分词开头 I was filled with anticipation when I came home from school that dark winters day so long agoComing home from school that dark winters day so long ago，I was filled with anticipationIf you give me enough time，I can do it well Given enough time，I can do it well 以

16、介词短语开头以介词短语开头 Chester like many other adventurers had experienced fear and conquered itLike many other adventurers，Chester had experienced fear and conquered it以同位语开头以同位语开头Sue，our monitor，always likes giving suggestions to everybodyOur monitor，Sue，always likes giving suggestions to everybody以从句开头以从句

17、开头Francis had already surprised his friends several times before he sailed round the world single-handedBefore he sailed round the world single-handed，Francis had already surprised his friends several timesYou will greatly improve your finished product if you have a quality control inspectionIf you

18、have a quality control inspection， you will greatly improve your finished product3. 一定要学会换词，形象具体的代替太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出一定要学会换词，形象具体的代替太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等）等等）eg. It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service indust

19、ry like that. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. applicable代替代替proper, approaches代替代替ways, implement代替代替carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge代替代替enhance ones competitiveness（提高某物竞争力）（提高某物竞争力）, Computer and IComputer and I I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my

20、 mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.excee

21、dingly 替换替换 verythrilling 替换替换 excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换替换 sb. be interested in sth.google 替换替换 searchan army of ,a sea of替换替换 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology,

22、computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；述在某个时期发生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替换替换 more and mo

23、re popular Coincident with 非常地道的词汇，表达非常地道的词汇，表达“与与一致一致”的意思，替换的意思，替换 With Advancement 替换替换 development Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换替换 enter into Current ( currently )替换替换 now Appeal to sb. 替换替换 sb. be interested in sth. Growing individuals 替换替换 more and more people It is no exaggeration to

24、 say 经典句型，经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering emai

25、l. For a start 替换替换 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法用了插入语的写作手法 Our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened 用了非常精彩的被动用了非常精彩的被动 Additionally 替换替换 In addition / Besides Deliver 替换替换 send There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the

26、 disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is

27、 no denying that这个句型，还有这个句型，还有however作为插入语，作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换替换 do harm to Emerging 代替代替 appearing ( fading 代替代替 disappearing ) As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds，computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavora

28、ble impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds 替换替换 Every coin has two sides Computers do play ，do 强调强调 Positive 替换替换 important / good 等等 A slice of 替换替换 a part of Unfavorable 替换替换 bad Impacts 替换替换 effects / influences We should,

29、therefore, take advantage of 使用插入语使用插入语 Fruits (而且而且fruits 用的非常形象，用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换替换 advantages ( defects 替换替换 disadvantages ) Facet 替换替换 aspect 最经典的替换词最经典的替换词1.individuals,characters, folks代替代替people ,persons 2. positive, favorable, rosy(美好的美好的)，promising (有希望的有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable

30、, excellent, outstanding代替代替good 3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的有害的), be less impressive代代替替bad eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, th

31、ey find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of , many, if not most)代替代替many. 注：用注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，一定要小心，many后一定要有词。后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that 同理同理 用用most, if not all ,代替代替most. 5: a slice of, quie

32、t a few , several代替代替some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替替think (因为是书面语，所以要加因为是书面语，所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter 代替代替thing 8: shared 代代 common 9.reap huge fruits 代替代替get much benefit ) 10:for m

33、y part ,from my own perspective 代替代替 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 代替代替more and more ( 注意没有注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用修饰形容词，副词用increasingly. Eg. sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.exceedin

34、gly ,extremely替换替换 very13.benefitial, rewarding代替代替helpful14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 代替代替customer15. thrilling 替换替换 exciting16.nevertheless 代代 but17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 代替代替sb be interested in18.capture ones attention代替代替attract ones attention19.fa

35、cet,demension,sphere代代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 代替代替cause22.magnificent ,cute, pretty, gorgeous代替代替 beautiful 23.desire 代替代替want24.pour attention into 代替代替pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 代替代替

36、remember26. enjoy, possess 代替代替have27. interaction代替代替communication28.frown on sth代替代替 be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a few, as an example代替代替 for example30. next to/virtually impossible,代替代替nearly impossible（ 后为精彩替换词）：后为精彩替换词）：31idea/opinion notion/ standpoint/perspective/outlook32.

37、reasonable rational/ sensible/advisable33. consider ponder/contemplate/deliberate34. use utilize/ take advantage of35. deliver/send convey/ transmit/ transfer36. serious severe/austere/ stern37. obvious apparent/ evident/ transparent/conspicuous38. important significant/crucial/critical/ vital/fatal

38、39. according to in accordance with/ based on40. basic essential/fundamental/ elemental/ elementary41. main/chief principal/ primary/ dominant/ predominant/ cardinal42. partportion/ section/ fraction43. public/common ordinary/extensive/comprehensive44. task/work assignment/ commission45. method/ way

39、 measure/mode/approach/remedy(指补救的办法指补救的办法)46. famous distinguished/ prominent/ eminent/ striking47. catch capture/ grasp/grip/(fig.)digest48. big enormous/immense/tremendous/ massive/ sweeping /colossal/gigantic49. search/look for google/ransack/ rummage50. finally eventually/terminally/ultimately5

40、1. striking astonishing/ amazing/ 52. unbelievable incredible/ inconceivable53. prove/justify confirm/ certify/ substantiate54. various diverse/myriad/ multitudinous/ miscellaneous55. complex elaborated/ sophisticated /complicated/intricate56.unchanging permanent/ constant/ enduring57. instant /mome

41、ntary temporary/ephemeral/ transient58. arbitrary 武断的武断的59top summit/culmination/ acme/zenith/peak60. improve promote/ accelerate/ boost/enhance61. explain interpret/illustrate/illuminate/ elucidate/depict62. change alter/ convert/ transform/diversify/modify63. centre core/kernel/ nucleus64. agree a

42、pprove sb. Of sth./ consent to do /concur with sb. in doing sth.65. dont know be ignorant of sth.66. in order to for the sake of 67.ability qualification/ capacity/ capability/ competence68. buy purchase/procure69. about大约大约 approximate/ estimated70. rule/principle regulation/doctrine/formula71. giv

43、e offer sth. to sb./provide for/supplyfor72. traditional conventional/ conservative73. dangerous perilous/ hazardous/ precarious74. actually substantially/ practically75. careful cautious/discreet/ prudent/ scrupulous76. old/ out-of-date obsolete/ancient/antiquated77. productive pregnant 78good part

44、 advantage/merit/strength79. brave gallant/valiant/intrepid80. excellent/good splendid/glorious/brilliant/magnificent /marvelous 81. natural spontaneous/ instinctive, inherent 82. necessary compulsory /obligatory/mandatory 83. finish accomplish/ consummate 84. carry out implement 85. about关于关于(prep.

45、) regarding/ concerning 86. difference divergence/ inconsistency/discrepasy/incongruity 87.not clear ambiguous /suspicious/ dubious/ implicit 88. decisive crucial/critical 89. cause/ arouse trigger/stimulate/whet 90. reform evolution/innovation 91. city metropolis92. admit acknowledge/concede93.avoi

46、d avert/ dodge/ evade94. start/begin embark on sth./ commence to do sth./initiate sth.95. give up abandon/renounce/relinquish96. destroy devastate/demolish/exterminate97. puzzle bewilder/perplex /mystify98.surface superficial/ostensible99. the campus the Ivory Tower100.the net(internet) the fictitio

47、us world/the electronic world/ the cyber world 101. a lot of a multitude of/ a galaxy of 102. many myriad/ umpteen 103. wethe public/the individuals/the folks 104. as a result consequently 105. popularprevalent4.主题句放开头。主题句放开头。作为应试手段，考生应现实地去争取做到开宗明义，作为应试手段，考生应现实地去争取做到开宗明义，将主题句将主题句 (Topic Sentence) 放在

48、每段开头。将提纲以主题句的形式放在每段放在每段开头。将提纲以主题句的形式放在每段开头表述出来，就可避免跑题开头表述出来，就可避免跑题.5.写好第一句话。写好第一句话。这样容易给阅卷者留下一个好印象，最好能用上一这样容易给阅卷者留下一个好印象，最好能用上一个复句，里面要用上个复句，里面要用上2-3个难的单词或词组个难的单词或词组。 6. 主动使用生动的成语、谚语及有说服力的引语。主动使用生动的成语、谚语及有说服力的引语。每次练习时，每次练习时，把这些成语、谚语、引语划出来，以强化主动使用的意识。例如，在论述求把这些成语、谚语、引语划出来，以强化主动使用的意识。例如，在论述求知的艰难时，可引用知的

49、艰难时，可引用There is no royal road to learning. (做学问无捷径可做学问无捷径可走走)7. 学会回避。学会回避。譬如，想表示某人过着豪华的生活，可以说譬如，想表示某人过着豪华的生活，可以说 He lived a kind of luxurious life. 但考生如不但考生如不会写会写 luxurious 这个词，不妨回避，切勿生拼硬造。考生可以说这个词，不妨回避，切勿生拼硬造。考生可以说 He had a car, a big house and a large company.bread car - microbus/van“Mr Kong”,“tea

50、cher Kong” - Confucius， a great educator in the history of China孟子是孟子是Menciusthe boy putting sheep，the boy sending sheep, the boy MU sheep, -shepherd, the little boy，8. 主动使用过渡词。主动使用过渡词。例如使用例如使用firstly, secondly, to make long short, moreover, however, furthermore 等等，这样，会使文章层次清晰，也使自己思路清楚。等等，这样，会使文章层次清

51、晰，也使自己思路清楚。9. 注意避免逻辑错误。注意避免逻辑错误。例例: 1997年年1月六级考试作文题目为月六级考试作文题目为 Haste Makes Waste，一考生的第一段第，一考生的第一段第一句为一句为 The faster the better， because they can save time in this way.这样写这样写显然不妥，因为这样写，就等于认定快并可以省时显然不妥，因为这样写，就等于认定快并可以省时.10.适当用被动代替主动适当用被动代替主动，句子开头不要总是用，句子开头不要总是用we / I （比如写结尾时不用（比如写结尾时不用we should pay a

52、ttention to而用而用Attention should be paid to. ）经典结尾：经典结尾：It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 1.善于使用插入语善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助

53、动词后，两边分别加上逗号。在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说：比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 2字数要足够字数要足够。但不要写得太长但不要写得太长(四级在四级在120-180之间；六级在之间；六级在150-200之间之间)，否则容易引起阅卷者的反感。否则容易引起阅卷者的反感。3. 卷面要整

54、洁卷面要整洁。卷面潦草字迹不清的文章，常常还没有看到内容就会使人产生卷面潦草字迹不清的文章，常常还没有看到内容就会使人产生厌恶厌恶 。14.择语的准确性择语的准确性Do not write so that your words may be understood, but write so that your words must be understood. The difference between the right word and the almost-right word is as great as that between lighting and the lighting

55、bug. (Mark Twain)15.多余的或转弯抹角的词语都不利于明白地表达思想多余的或转弯抹角的词语都不利于明白地表达思想 莎士比亚的名言莎士比亚的名言“Brevity is the soul of wit”,相当于汉语的相当于汉语的“言贵简洁言贵简洁”。 mutual aid (to each other) (mutual) aid to each other， (an entirely) complete confidence， repeat the question (again)， Return (back) from abroad，etc.Task1: Replace the

56、underlined parts Task1: Replace the underlined parts 1.In my opinion, those who are against the Internet think that it has a lot of advantages.From my perspective, the opponents of the Internet hold the view that it has a number of advantages.Task1: Replace the underlined parts Task1: Replace the un

57、derlined parts 2.In general, we can safely draw the conclusion that moving to suburb is good to a citys growth.In a word, we can safely come to / arrive at the conclusion that moving to suburb benefits a citys development. Task1: Replace the underlined parts Task1: Replace the underlined parts 3.On

58、the one hand, the teacher should punish the lazy students; on the other hand, such phenomena should be reported.For one thing, the teacher should impose punishment on the lazy students. For another, such phenomena should be reported.Task1: Replace the underlined parts Task1: Replace the underlined p

59、arts 4.In the current society, some people dream of making much money overnight and take risks to produce pirated products. In the present society, some people dream of making a fortune overnight and take risks to produce pirated products. Task1: Replace the underlined parts Task1: Replace the under

60、lined parts 5.Nowadays, every one of us has been faced with many instances of dishonesty. Nowadays, every one of us has been confronted with many cases of dishonesty.Task 1: Replace the underlined parts Task 1: Replace the underlined parts 6.But in some cases, talking is the right choice.Nevertheles