高三英语作文：漫画作文

1、宜兴市高中英语书面表达写作指导之漫画作文主讲人 陈良模Tasks:1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writingLead-in The characteristics of cartoon writing:幽默嘲讽(humorous, satirical)生动夸张(vivid , overstated)寓意深刻(thought-pr

2、ovoking)Task1. Difficulties in writing about cartoon: 1. 读图 2. 解意 3. 谋篇Step1 读图 Describe the picture -Lets practice! Picture1 Picture2Step2 解意 Theme-to the point 注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues), 切记要认真阅读！Example1 Example 2Picture1Lets have a practice: JPicture2Picture3Picture4Step 3 谋篇 Three parts:1) descr

3、ibe the picture2) interpret its meaning3) give your opinions about the phenomenonPart 1 Describe the pictureThe picture is talking about/showsThe picture shows a common phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.In the picture, there are/is (are) doingThe picture above is about Lets

4、 look at the picture above/first.Part 2 Interpret the pictureThe picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection ofThe picture indicates that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon thatThis is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon amongPart 3 Give your opinions I

5、think/believe that As far as Im concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view,It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./Immediate measures should be taken toThe government should make laws toThe media should appeal for We should raise peoples awareness ofEveryone shou

6、ld make great efforts toOnly in this way can.Enjoy this excellent personal point of view!In my view, this phenomenon is no good to us, nor to our society. Its time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same zone can be organized to have some activities together. We should ca

7、ll on people to be friendly to each other. As a popular song says, “ If everybody gives a little love to each other, the world will become the sea of love.” (step1 读图 picture1)From my point of view, reducing the childrens heavy burden requires efforts from the schools, the society as well as the par

8、ents. Education that breaks the rules of childrens development in body and mind is bound to fail. Thus, parents together with teachers should become active supporters of all-around character education and work closely with each other in guiding the students towards a balanced development. (step1 读图

9、picture2)Task2: Lets have a go at a whole essay! 上图反映的是网络时代父母子女间所出现的一种问题，你根据这幅漫画的理解写一篇150字左右短文，描述一下他们的做法并发表你的看法。Part1 描述图片Part2 找准寓意 Why do sb do sth? _ _Point out reasons: _ _Make comments: _ _Part 3 表达观点或对策： “情”方面的对策 _ “理”方面的对策 _“趣”方面的对策 _Task 3: Writing an essayStep1. When writing an essay, pleas

10、e remember 1.To use linking words if necessary表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not onlybut also.表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, though, otherwise, while表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand.表示因果关系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, th

11、anks to. 表示时间、顺序关系 first, second , then, next, finally, for one thing . for another, in the end,表示递进、强调关系besides, whats more, in addition, worse still, above all表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in

12、 conclusion2. To use complicated structures if possible (一) 使用非谓语动词(to do, doing, done)1.面对能源短缺，我们有必要合理有效使用能源。 _the lack of energy, we need to make use of energy properly and effectively. 2.一旦沉溺于网络世界,人们就很难专注于现实生活.Once _ to the Internet, people will find it hard to focus on the reality.3. 学生参加社会实践是为了

13、了解社会，获取经验 _society and gain experience, students tend to take part in social practice.(二) 使用从句，包括定语从句，名词性从句， 状语从句1. Some boys learn to smoke. It does harm to their health. （改写为定语从句）_2. 我们应重视食品安全和自我保护意识。 （使用名词性从句）_3. He is crazy about computer games and fails in his study. (改写为结果状语)_（三） 使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句

14、1. The teachers words encouraged me greatly. (改写强调句)_2. 只有尽快采取措施，我们才能不让情况恶化。_3. We are glad to see the big difference we have made. (改为感叹句）_（四）介词短语的使用1. Many tourists go to the campus. Safety problems may appear there. (with)_2. When he arrived home , he found his house freshly painted. (on)_（五） 使用并

15、列句1. If you go through the gate, youll find the entrance to Bear Country. _2. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. _Step 2 The Design of an essayStep1. As is vividly portrayed in the picture, . It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere.Step2.Why ? Ther

16、e may be several possible reasons responsible for it. Firstly,.Secondly,First,Second,.In the first place,Next,Then,.To begin with,Also,In addition,Step3. From my point of view, We should take some effective measures to . Firstly,.Secondly,. For one thing for anotherOnly in this way can.Step3 Practis

17、e 随着生活的不断现代化，很多年轻人逐渐失去了动手实践的能力。仔细观察下图，结合自己的生活实际，写一篇150字左右的英语短文，描述漫画内容，分析原因，并发表自己的看法。 参考词汇：动手能力hands-on ability 粽子zongzi 请仔细观察漫画，了解漫画所反映的社会现象并分析这一现象出现的原因，并发表自己的看法. As is shown in the picture,_.Task 4：Conclusion: 漫画作文1. 读图 -描述漫画 2. 解意 -引出暗含主题，列举原因 3. 谋策 -表达观点，列举对策。一篇好的英语漫画作文 仔细审题 准确立义 规范行文 整洁书写Task5 H

18、omework:下图描绘的是目前很多孩子们的苦恼。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象的原因并发表你的看法。Key Task 1 Step1Describe picture1The picture is talking about a story about neighborhood. Two ladies living in the opposite apartments say “hello” when they happen to meet each other in the corridor. One of them says, “I moved here

19、 5 years ago, but I never met you before. Could I ask your name please?” The other says,” I have been here for 6 years. How should I call you?Describe picture 2We can see in the picture that a child is burdened with heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pressure. When he was a kid, he was expected

20、 to be able to go to a key elementary school, and later a key high school. And now he is expected to be admitted to a key university.Step2 解意Example1 角度: comparison主旨: The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.Example2 角度: criticize主旨: The students as well as th

21、eir parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.Lets have a practice:Picture1: People lack communication.Picture2: Protect animals. No buying, no killing.Picture3: People cant afford heavy medical fees. Picture4: One false move may lose the

22、 game. Look before you leap.Picture5: Money cant buy everything. Health is the best wealth.Task2: Lets have a go at a whole essay!Part1 描述图片1. A teenage boy is busy chatting online. 2. He enjoys it so much as to ignore his mum, who is just standing nearby. 3. Her unhappy expression suggests tha

23、t she hopes for a chance to have a chat with her son.Part2 找准寓意Why do sb do sth? Why do many teenagers choose to communicate with net friends rather than people in real life, even their own parents？Point out reasons: Thats mainly because chatting online is much fun and kids can make new friends

24、 with people across the world. Make comments: Nothing can replace face-to-face communication no matter how interesting it is.Part 3 表达观点或对策： “情”方面的对策As teenagers, we should spend more time talking with parents, and keep them informed of whats happening to us.“理”方面的对策Especially when in trouble, we sh

25、ould turn to our parents for advice.“趣”方面的对策Interesting topics are recommended so that both parents and teenagers love to talk about. Task3 Step1 -2. To use complicated structures if possible (一) 1. Facing, 2. addicted, 3. To understand(二) 1. Some boys learn to smoke, which does harm to their health

26、.2. What we should attach importance to is food safety and the awareness of self-protection. 3. He is so crazy about computer games that he fails in his study. (三) 1. It was the teachers words that encouraged me greatly.2. Only in this way can we prevent the situation getting worse.3. How glad we ar

27、e to see the big difference we have made! (四) 1. With many tourists going to the campus, safety problems may appear.2. On arriving home , he found his house freshly painted. (五) 1. Go through the gate, and youll find the entrance 2. The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. Task3 Step 3One possib

28、le version: As is shown in the picture, a boy is sitting before a plate of zongzi, not knowing how to unwrap them and eventually has to turn to a book for instructions! The picture convinces us of a fact that many of the young are losing their basic hands-on ability in everyday life. Many factors co

29、ntribute to this phenomenon. Firstly, kids are forced to focus on their school work so that they have little time to experience things in real life. Secondly, parents are over-protective. They do nearly everything for their kids on condition that they can study well. Thirdly, the Internet and certai

30、n books actually provide everything people need. It is not surprising for kids to be dependent on their parents or other things. Personally, skills of “ do it yourself” should be taught to kids for the sake of future life. On one hand, its natural that one should learn to master some basic skills of living. On the othe