写作(protectourearth)

1、 WritingWhat is a good writing？ Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整内容要完整) Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾好的开头结尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅) Language:* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误没有语法

2、错误)* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)Topic Phase： 世界环境日: World Environment Day (June 5th) 对水质和空气质量的影响: impact on the quality of the water and the air 白色污染: white pollution 垃圾填埋场 :refuse landfill 防止过度利用森林 :protect forests from overexplo

3、itation 水土保持 conservation of water and soil 绿化祖国 turn the country green 全民义务植树日 National Tree-Planting Day 防风林 wind breaks （防沙林 sand breaks） 降低资源消耗率 slow down the rate of resource degradation 开发可再生资源 develop renewable resources 自然保护区 nature reserve 防止沙漠化（治沙、抗沙） desertification 增强环境意识enhance the awar

4、eness of the importance of environmental protection 加强生态建设improve the ecoconstruction 防治污染prevent and control pollution 保持生态平衡keep ecological balance 禁止露天焚烧 prohibit burning out in the open发展太阳能 develop solar energy提高清洁能源比重 increase the supply of clean energy resources减少机动车辆 reduce the number of veh

5、icles使用清洁能源 burn clean fuel实行严格机动车排放标准 implement strict vehicle emission standards关闭化工厂 close chemical plants减少浪费 reduce waste save water / electricity/ forests the source of life protect drinking water, make full use of it recycle useful rubbish, save resources Sentence: 这是我们的责任节约用水 It s our duty t

6、o save water 许多河流和湖泊受到严重污染。 Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. 必须采取某种措施来制止污染。 Something must be done to stop the pollution. 保护我们的环境非常重要 It is very important to take care of our environment 如果人人都为保护环境作出贡世界将变得更加美丽。If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will

7、become much more beautiful. 树是非常有益的，对我们很重要。Trees are very helpful and important for us. 我们应该种更多的树，为了生活得更好，更健康的未来。We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. 这是每个人的责任，爱护和保护环境Its everyones duty to love and protect the environment. Linking words 段落开头常用词语段

8、落开头常用词语 ： As far as. is concerned 就就而言而言 As the proverb goes 有句谚语说道有句谚语说道 What calls for special attention is that. 值值得引起特别注意的是得引起特别注意的是表示举例常用词语表示举例常用词语 for instance 例如 for example 例如 An interesting example is that. 一个有趣的例子是 As is shown by the case of. 正如同的例子说明，表对比和转折表对比和转折 on the contrary 恰恰相反 simi

9、larly 与之相似地， 表因果表因果 Consequently，. 所以结果， Thanks to. 因为多亏 Therefore，. 所以 lead to 导致 lie in 在于 表递进和补充 furthermore 还有 in addition 另外 whats more 另外 表强调 more importantly， 更重要的是 undoubtedly 毫无疑问 表结论 To make (cut) a long story short，. 简而言之 Therefore，we have every reason to believe that. 所以我们有理由相信 To sum up

10、，. 总之 To summarize 总之Enjoy the following paragraph The environmental pollution is worse and worse today . Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories is pouring(排出) dirty air into the sky , the population is i

11、ncreasing faster and faster , resources is getting less and less. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. Peoples healthy has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of disease. In order to live a better life, we ne

12、ed protect our world. We shouldnt throw away rubbish everywhere. We want to recycle(回收), reduce(减少), reuse(再利用) things . Dont waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. We dont use plastic bags . We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them

13、. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful How do cars and factories make our water dirty？ First, they pollute the air. Then, when it rains, the rain comes down and makes our drinking water dirty. Dirty rain , called acid rain, is also bad for plants, animals and buildings.写好英语书面表达，应注意哪些问题？

14、写好英语书面表达，应注意哪些问题？ 1、认真审题，紧扣提示内容认真审题，紧扣提示内容 准确理解题意是成功写好作文的第一步，然后把要点一一写清，不能丢三准确理解题意是成功写好作文的第一步，然后把要点一一写清，不能丢三落四，一般情况下，写清要点后，要适当发挥，但必须紧扣主题，适可而止。落四，一般情况下，写清要点后，要适当发挥，但必须紧扣主题，适可而止。 2、做到语言基本无误。做到语言基本无误。 要点确定了，就可以构思文章的写作框架，先写什么，后写什么，尽量不要点确定了，就可以构思文章的写作框架，先写什么，后写什么，尽量不要出现语法错误。要出现语法错误。eg：名词的复数、所有格、代词的数与格，数词的

15、基数与：名词的复数、所有格、代词的数与格，数词的基数与序数、形容词的等级、动词的各种形式、句子的结构语序、标点等都要准确。序数、形容词的等级、动词的各种形式、句子的结构语序、标点等都要准确。 3、文章要通顺连贯文章要通顺连贯。 条理要清晰，句与句之间联系要紧密，连接词使用要恰当。不能东一笔，条理要清晰，句与句之间联系要紧密，连接词使用要恰当。不能东一笔，西一笔，让人看了不知所云。西一笔，让人看了不知所云。 4、尽可能表达清楚，发挥想象力和创造力。尽可能表达清楚，发挥想象力和创造力。 每个要点、句子都尽可能表达清楚明白，根据提示，选用自己最熟悉、最每个要点、句子都尽可能表达清楚明白，根据提示，选

16、用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词组、句型来写每一句话，最好多用简单句，适当运用并列句、复有把握的词组、句型来写每一句话，最好多用简单句，适当运用并列句、复合句，切记不用自己没把握的、不熟悉的句式，以免写成合句，切记不用自己没把握的、不熟悉的句式，以免写成Chinglish。 5、提笔写文章时，要做到：提笔写文章时，要做到： （1）语言精练，层次、结构分明。语言精练，层次、结构分明。一般有词数限制，句子要言简意赅，语句达意，严禁写出与主题无关的话题。一般有词数限制，句子要言简意赅，语句达意，严禁写出与主题无关的话题。 （2）用词贴切，力求变化用词贴切，力求变化。 选用的词、句式，避免单一，反复出现，善用同义词、同义句表达出来。选用的词、句式，避免单一，反复出现，善用同义词、同义句表达出来。 （3）时态准确，无语法错误。时态准确，无语法错误。 正确使用句子时态也是中考作文的重头戏。一般来说，记叙文是记叙已发正确使用句子时态也是中考作文的重头戏。一般来说，记叙文是记叙已发生的事，以过去时为主，说明文阐明的是事实，以现在时为主，通知表达的生的事，以过去时为主，说明文