高考地理 技法点拨——气候 1 (383)(1)

1、写作技法点拨系列五、完美衔接过渡, 巧妙起承转合【核心点拨】【核心点拨】高考书面表达最高档次的评分标准要求高考书面表达最高档次的评分标准要求“有效地有效地使用了语句间的连接成分使用了语句间的连接成分, 使全文结构紧凑使全文结构紧凑”。要想在。要想在高考有限的时间里写出能获得较高分数的书面表达高考有限的时间里写出能获得较高分数的书面表达, 就就必须应用恰当的衔接过渡词汇来使句子、段落之间的必须应用恰当的衔接过渡词汇来使句子、段落之间的衔接通顺自然衔接通顺自然, 达到内容连贯达到内容连贯, 文章结构紧凑的目的。文章结构紧凑的目的。一、语句间常用的衔接过渡词汇一、语句间常用的衔接过渡词汇表起始表起始

2、first of all; according to; in my opinion; as far as I am concerned; as far as I know; as for me表递进表递进besides; whats more; whats worse; furthermore; in addition to; additionally表并列表并列also; as well(as); or; either. . . or. . . ; neither. . . nor. . . ; not only. . . but also; both. . . and表因果表因果there

3、fore; thanks to; as a result of. . . ; because of; due to; owing to表强调表强调above all; indeed; surely; certainly; of course; at least; obviously表解释表解释that is to say; in other words; believe it or not; to tell you the truth; namely; actually表比较表比较 just as; just like; in the same way; similarly表空间表空间on t

4、he left/right; to the left/right; on one side of. . . on the other side of. . . ; at the foot/top/end of; in the middle/center of. . . 表时间表时间at first; in the beginning; next; then; later; about two months later; after a while; soon; soon after that; after that; afterwards; since then; meanwhile; in

5、the end; at last; finally; for the first time; the next moment; up to now; before long; from then on; sooner or later表转折表转折或对比或对比however; on the other hand; on the contrary; in spite of; after all; in fact; as a matte of fact表列举表列举for one thing. . . and for another(thing); first; firstly; second(ly)

6、; third(ly); last but not least表举例表举例for example; for instance; take. . . for example; such as; as follows; and so on表总结表总结in short; in a word; in conclusion; in brief; generally speaking; to sum up; all in all二、段落间常用的衔接过渡词汇二、段落间常用的衔接过渡词汇文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成, 在在修辞中称为起、承、转、合。修辞中称为

7、起、承、转、合。“起起”就是开头就是开头, “承承”是承接是承接, “转转”是转折是转折, “合合”是综合或总结。是综合或总结。用于用于“起起”的的过渡词汇过渡词汇(用在用在段落或文章的段落或文章的开头开头)first; first of all; at first; in the first place; firstly; to begin with; to start with; recently; now; at present; in recent years; in general; lately; currently用于用于“承承”的的过渡词汇过渡词汇(用在用在段落中的第一段落中的

8、第一个扩展句中个扩展句中)second; similarly; in addition; besides; then; furthermore; moreover; what is more; what is worse; for example; for instance; certainly; surely; obviously; in other words; especially; particularly; in particular; indeed; still; third; truly; in fact; at the same time; no doubt用于用于“转转”的过

9、的过渡词汇渡词汇(用在段落用在段落中的第二个扩展中的第二个扩展句中句中)but; however; on the other hand; on the contrary; in contrast; in any case; nevertheless(虽然如此虽然如此); otherwise; or; or else; while; whereas; but; in spite of. . . ; yet; instead用于用于“合合”的过的过渡词汇渡词汇(用在段落用在段落的结论句或文章的结论句或文章的结论段中的结论段中)in a word; in general; in short; abo

10、ve all; after all; generally speaking; to sum up; finally; in conclusion; at last; in summary; therefore; as a result; thus; eventually; hence; on the whole【即时应用】【即时应用】下面是一篇题为下面是一篇题为“Haste makes waste(欲速则不达欲速则不达)”的的文章文章, 请根据提示填写出恰当的过渡词以确保语篇连贯。请根据提示填写出恰当的过渡词以确保语篇连贯。Haste makes wasteThere is an old sa

11、ying, “Haste makes waste. ”Its the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct and of great importance in many cases even today. _(表顺序表顺序)it teaches us that we shouldnt be overanxious about quick results. _(表转表转折折)we will fail. _(表递进表递进)if we emphasize too much upon speed, we will suffer s

12、ooner or later. _(表举例表举例)if we are too hasty in tests, it is very possible that we may make some mistakes or even fail. _(表递进表递进)we may FirstlyOtherwiseIn additionFor example/For instanceWhats moreleave a bad impression on both the teachers and classmates that we are careless. _(再次举例再次举例)if a sportsman is hasty in an important game, he may lose a very precious opportunity to win the championship. _(表结果表结果)he will lose the confidence to pick the pieces up. For anotherexampleAs a resultHaste has many side effects. On the one hand, haste may result in wrong decision or more mist