写作提分句式

1、写作提分高招一：高级词汇的使用1.2.She wan ted tomake dance availableto others with disabilities.Faraday began to appear on his own as a chemist and scientist of great impo rtance/significance.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.Liste ning to what you have to say really makes a differenceInspi rati on struck/hitIt was a hugehit /success

2、We can find a solution toeve n the toughest p roblems Next time you_ raise an eyebrowat the views of your partner. Sonia hashad a great imp act/influence orwome n'referee ingA workaholic works long hours, at the exp enseof personal relati on shi ps and health.10. More young women become involved

3、 in thegame11. It kind of makes me sad.12. Frank Rlibery is a big fan of hip hop from his motherland.13. Playing gamesitself is not a problembut we need to fnd a balance.14. O.Henry ' s last yearsere shadowed by ill health and financial problems（经济问 题）15. Its popularity has risen ever since.16.

4、It is generally believed that every effort should be made to preserve world p each.17. The manapproacheda farmhouse.18. Over the years, lhave gone through very hard days.19. Charles Darwin didn'settle for （满足于）just thinking he knew something.开阔眼界 widen one ' s horizon/ broaden one' s vis

5、ion重视 attach great importanee to主要理由歹U举如下The main reasons are listed as follows:.可以取代of/that我深信 I am greatly convinced （that）子句=I am greatly assured （that）子"think 的词 believe, claim, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that, be convinced提分高招二：丰富的句式语法结构的使用倒装句1. Only when Lily walked into the

6、office did she realize that she had left the con tract（合同）at home.2. Only after talking to two students did I discover that hav ing strong motivati on is one of the biggest factors in reachi ng goals.3. Only if we know what we do in our daily life and live a low- carb on life _can we make a differen

7、ce.Tom said that in no case would he heat in the exam._Gone was my father's critical air and strict rules.The compu ter was used in teachi ng. As a result, not only was teachers ' energy saved,4.5.6.but stude nts became more in terested in the less ons.4. Hardly had he arrived when it bega n

8、 to snow.强调句型5. It was years later that_ I fin ally un derstood what role modeli ng pl ayed in your life.6. It was when we were returning home that I realize d what a good feeli ng it was to have helped some one in trouble.10. There is no job more important than parenting. This is what I believe in.

9、虚拟语气It1.2.3.4.5.1. But for the hel p of my En glish teacher, I would not have won the first p rize in the En glish writ ing comp etiti on.做形式主语、宾语We feel it our duty to make our country better.I find it increasingly difficult to li ve within my in come.It suddenly occurred to him that he had left hi

10、s keys in the office.It occurred to me that she probably didn t think what she was doing was a big deal.Many peopi ejncluding students,a re finding it hard to spend their free time without the in ter net, which _may be caus ing wides pread on li ne addict ion.6. If it is convenient for you, you shou

11、ld do more outdoor exercise, which can con tribute to you kee ping up a good state of mind.如果你方便的话，应该多进行户外运动，它有助于你保持良好的心态。 分词1. The salary differs dep ending on your exp erie nee.2. Giving up is worse tha n failure because failure can be the mother of success, but giving up means the death of hope.I

12、 have no choice but to acce pteverythi ng.There is a note pin ned to the door saying when the sho p will open agai n.They Ian ded on the san dsexhausted and starvingTired and disa ppoin ted, I went back to cut that piece of grass.Considering that it i s han dmade, the price seems reas on able.Given

13、that （假定）he can get ano ther cha nee, he will surely succeed.On /Upon receiving a phone call from his wife saying she had a fall, Mr. Gordon3.4.5.6.7.&9.immediately r_ ushed home from office.10. There are several thi ngs to kee p in mind r egarding relaxati on duri ng a job in terview.Health p r

14、oblems are closely connected withbad_ eating habits and a lack of exercise. But aga in he missed the seat,causing more sur prised.I discovered them aga in while searching for somethi ng elseBack in the car driving home, every one was excited about Christmas , laughing and11. Hutongs are a type of n

15、arrow streets or alleys most commonly associated with Beijing, China.12.13.14.15.asking each other about what they had bought12. Upon accepting the positionhe could focus on his own research.13. Based in Cleveland, Ohio, Dancing Wheels performs all over the world.14. Caught in a heavy rai n on his w

16、ay home, he fell_ill and c ouldn't but ask f or a leave.由于回家途中遇上大雨，他生病了，只能请假。15. Having worked for t wo days, Steve man aged to finish his report _on schedule/it was three weeks later that the statio n called, announcing.20.16. Looking back as a white-haired grandfather who is still sharing pony

17、 stories with my childre n and there childre n, i am happy to remind every one that the best way to realize your dreams is to trust your inner wisdom.17. Fueled by ten years ' longing, it only took me a couple ou hdo finish my design and race to the mailbox.18. During a mid-autumn holiday with m

18、y family at a fishing spot,i witnessed a fish being caught hopping out of the water ' s surfloaking every effort to survive.19. Located in H ubei province, the ancient city of Jingzhou, with a history of over 3000 years,is one exa mple.25.With结构1. Mom parked the car in the shade of a pear treewi

19、th the window on the driver ' s side rolled down.2. With my daughter ' s words ringing in my eairsdecided to keep my nice nails.3. The little boy walked out of the store with the gift decorated nicely and a smile of total satisfaction on his face.4. With the teacher instructing them, the stu

20、de nts have made great p rogress in En glish.否定表肯定或肯定表否定1. Nothing is more important than to start your day in a good mood.2. As i see it, nothing could be further from the truth.3. Ours was far form a typical vacation.4. Whether you are 7 or 70, it' s never too late or too earty start sharing f

21、amily stories.5. There is nothing quite as satisfying to the brain and the heart as opening a new book for a few hours of en terta inment.6. No scientist is as great as Albert Einstein during this century.7. There is nothing so impressive as bookshops.He didn t catch the early bias a result of which

22、 he was late for work today.As the old saying goes, Kno wiedge is po wer.”As a new graduate, he does n' W haP wt takes to start a buss in ess here.What p eople wear does not in dicate any thi ng about their p ers on alitiesI heIped that girl through what was a frightening experieneeWork hard whe

23、n young, or you'll regret.But the reason why he readso obssessively（着迷地）was that he was so curious. What i believed .was that there was a pony w aiting for me to find her.连词从句11.12.13.14.15.16.17.18.19. The soone: you get comfortable talking about it, the better.20. . It was not long beforethe F

24、irst World War broke out.21. No matter how dark or bright i t may seem ,it is up to us to look after our planet and try to make it a better p lace22. It ' s no wonder theits of millions of teachers and learners around the world have chose n Cambridge to help them achieve their goals.23. What mak

25、es things even harder is the fact thathe English they do come across is ofte n in correct, or, while grammatically correct, is not at all n ative-so unding.提分高招三：生动的表情心理等的细节描述24. My throat all of a sudden felt very dry 紧张25. My mind raced26. There were butterfulies in my stomachas i walked into my c

26、lassroom.27. A forced smile and faking（假装的）happinesssimply led to people feeling gloomier.28. Wearing a fake smile could worsen one' s mood.29. As young as I was,that statement kept ringing in my ears.30.1 set out to live my life filled with hope, seeing endlesspossibilitiesfor personal and pro

27、fessi onal achieveme nts.31. Encouraged by your statement, l_have forged ahead （毅然前行）with my life ' s journless afraid to make mistakes, and eagerly meeting each challenge.32. Several times a day, whenever a train had passed,the couple would see the p asse ngerswaving excitedly,es pecially the c

28、hildren-for them, such a ride was a high adve nture 冒险）.33. Nyota turned and caught sight of Mrs Ogaz, who had a huge smile on her face.34. Her com pl exion（面 色） seemed greyer and her eyes were tired and unfocused.35. Mrs Ogaz ' s commfenfted Nyota irits.sp36. Just then, sheheard a friendly voic

29、e behind her saying Hello,Nyota! ”37. Her eyes shone brightly with joy a nd she could n ' t sto p smili ng as she told me about the p laces she had see n and the people she had help ed.38. With a burst of energy she crossed the linewinning a bronze medal.39. People arebecoming increasingly worri

30、ed about plution.40. When we visited my old family home, memory came flooding back.41. Her heart was pounding with excitement.42. l lifted my head suddeniy andmy eyes opened wider than saucers.茶托）43. Life is Just like a box. lnside it are happiness and sorrow, failure and success, hope and des pair.

31、提分高招四：使用恰当的过渡词beg in /start with , with the总起 above all, to begin/start with, today, now, nowadays, at present currently, rece ntly,gen erally sp eak ing,accordi ng to, toin the end,sudde niy,the n, later, immediately,devel opment of .等。日寸I、可now, at present, recentlyfirstly first of all ,fin ally , at last, after that , afterwards, since then, mean whilet, in the