广东高考读写任务-摘要写作summary练习

1、Task writing-Summary Task writingContent 1.2. Summary (about 30 words) Your opinion, argument and conclusion (about 120 words)summaryunderstandingtopic sentenceskey wordsset sentence patternssummarize/rewritethe writing stylethe 3rd personStyles of passageargumentation 1narration2exposition3narratio

2、n the six elements of a narrative passage whowhenwhere What (event)How (process)why Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everythi

3、ng for me. But at the college I need to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick. Once that first semester was over and I

4、 got used to the college life, I love itgood facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The students Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs. One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in

5、 things. I was on dance team in college and met a ton of people that wayit was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground. the six elements of a narrative passage who When/where /What How (process)At first: Then: At last: why MikeHis first year of collegetoughestadjustmentgot used t

6、o itlove the college lifeGet himself active in things套用语句1.摘要的开头语(第一段开头语)(1)记叙文的摘要开头语:The story/passage is aboutThe writer/author tells us about.The story mainly tells us that. _his first year of college life. At first he _, but aftergetting active in things for one semester,he _ and_ .didnt adjust

7、himself welladapted to itenjoyed himselfcongratulations!Try it!本题为本题为2008年广东高考读写任务年广东高考读写任务2.摘要后过渡语:在写完摘要之后,要有过渡词或过渡句,才使上下文自然衔接记叙文的过渡语(引出类似的经历引出类似的经历)This story reminds me of another story that happened toThis story reminds me of a similar experience ofI also went through such an experience.I have a

8、 similar experience.have/has a similar experience as.要想在考场写作的紧张时刻用30个词概括短文的内容要点，我们需要谨记下面的六种技巧 skill1: 省略细节省略细节 Skill2:省略重复了的内容省略重复了的内容 Skill3: 省略例子省略例子 Skill4: 用概括性的语言而不是精确的语言用概括性的语言而不是精确的语言 Skill5:使用短而精的连词，如使用短而精的连词，如but, and, besides. Skill6:用间接引语表达对话内容。用间接引语表达对话内容。误区警示：考生往往犯以下的错误：主题大意概误区警示：考生往往犯以

9、下的错误：主题大意概括不清，抄袭原文或表达了自己的意见括不清，抄袭原文或表达了自己的意见 这都这都会大大音响得分。会大大音响得分。The elements of an argumentation1.a strong statement of opinion. (the topic sentences)2.support for the opinion. (supporting sentences)3. conclusion/suggestions.(the purpose of the passage)Argumentation Methods:1. Find out the topic se

10、ntences/ key phrases2. Find out the supporting evidences or facts.3. Find out the words or phrases that appear most frequently.How to summarize an argumentation well? Getting up early has been regard as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and

11、 get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some thin

12、gs more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we

13、get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it.1. A strong statement of opinion. (the k

14、ey idea):Getting up early /a good habit /of great importance 2. Support for the opinion (supporting sentences) a better memorya better memory a healthier body a healthier body a better preparation for the day a better preparation for the day3. Conclusion/suggestions.a good habit / benefit a lot/ ben

15、efit a lot The passage says getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot. It enables us to have a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day.some set sentence patterns.The passage says/This passage states thatIn the writers opinion,The writer think

16、s thatHow to write a good summary of an article 1.An argumentation : The topic sentences the supporting sentences the writers conclusion summarize them.2.A narrative passage : Get the information of six elements combine them smoothly form a summary.如何提高作文档次如何提高作文档次(1)表达精练简洁:表达不要罗嗦,若能用非谓语动词做定语或状语就不要用

17、定语从句或状语从句.(2)避免低级错误:避免语法和拼写的低级错误,避免被扣印象分.(3)保证赏心悦目:注重字体的美化,保持卷面整洁,提高印象分.(4)句子错落有致:根据表达需要,交叉使用长句与短句,简单句与复合句.(5)句式多种多样:多样化句式,方能显示较强的语言功底,大大提高作文档次.多样化句式多样化句式(1)用it is/was that强调句强调句式.(2)用作状语的介词短语开头的完全倒装完全倒装句或用以only in this way 等开头的部分倒装部分倒装句.(3)用with的复合结构的复合结构(with+宾语+宾补)作状语.(4)用非谓语动词非谓语动词简化状语从句或并列结构.(5

18、)用what引导的名词性从句引导的名词性从句.(6)用独立主格独立主格结构.(7)恰当运用感叹句感叹句,被动句被动句等.(8)适当使用插入语插入语,如to be honest, I guess, I think,personally等.(9)尽量用短语短语代替单词来表达同样的意思.(10)恰当使用关联词语, 除使用复合句的连词外,写作中经常用到的关联词关联词:高考大纲中常用的高考大纲中常用的连接词连接词1. 表示递进表示递进 另外，还有另外，还有, 而且而且：what is more; besides; moreover; in addition, furthermore2. 表示转折关系表示

19、转折关系但是，但是， 然而，然而， 相反：相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary. in contrast（相反）（相反）whereas(然而）然而）, while,对比对比:in the same way(同样地),just as(正如),compared with(与相比),on the one handand on the other hand一方面,另一方面.等.3. 表示因果关系表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以因为，因此，所以: since; now that; as; because (of

20、); so; thus; therefore; as a result; owing to, due to ,on account of, thanks to4. 表示条件关系表示条件关系如果，只要如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that );as long as 除非除非: unless=if not 否则否则: or else,otherwise 5. 表示时间关系表示时间关系当当 的时候的时候 : when ; while 在在之后之后: after, 在在之前之前: before 直到直到: until一一就就 : as soon as 后来，后来， 然后然后: l

21、ater; afterwards 不久不久: soon 近来近来: lately; recently 自从自从 :since 从那时起从那时起: from then on6.表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系 首先， 最主要的: above all 首先，开始 for a start, to begin with, 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the en; last but not the least7. 换一种方法表述换一种方法表述 换句话说: in other words; that is to say; 8. 进行举例说明进

22、行举例说明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as, namely列举列举:for one thingand for another一来,二来等.9. 用于陈述事实用于陈述事实 实际上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth10. 对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word， in brief(总之),in c

23、onclusion(最后)等.11. 表让步的连、介词表让步的连、介词; although， while ; 介词- in spite of ,despite, 12.陈述自己观点 Personally (speaking);as far as I am concerned, in my opinion 备考策略:1.打好词汇语法基础词汇语法基础2.阅读注意概括要点注意概括要点(名家指路第六题)3.关注社会现象现象和社会热点热点,学会用英语表达想法4.每天一篇一篇作文训练(25分钟)5.积累积累 “万能”句型,写作常用到的正确句型.6.建立词句 “错题集错题集”7.保证卷面整洁美观整洁美观丰富

24、的句式：丰富的句式：( (常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。 e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was ! 感叹句感叹句强调句强调句e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible. e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly

25、 had they got to the station when they met the young man.e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.倒装句倒装句省略句省略句with短语短语 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find m

26、uch useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.定语从句定语从句e.g. Thats what I should do.We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.各种名词性从句各种名词性从句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got

27、 down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later.各种状语从句各种状语从句1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句)3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he